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每个单句句子都要符合简单句的五种基本类型之一：
主系表；
主语谓语；
主谓宾；
主谓宾宾；
主谓宾宾补；
注意主谓一致；
注意避免标点符号、大小写、拼写错误等低级失误；
字数要足；
打草稿是个拿卷面分的好办法，也避免低级失误。
将草稿上的作文抄到试卷上
之后，再对照一下，不要漏掉字或出现书写单词不完整的现象。
二、中考作文评分标准：
1）本大题共10分。
2）卷面书写潦草不工整，可酌情从总得分中扣1分。
3）拼写错误每两个扣0.5分。
同样错误不重复计算。
4）书面表达可分为四个等级：
（1）9-10分语句通顺，内容完整，书写工整，无语法错误，字数符合要求。
（2）7-8分内容较完整，书写较工整，语法错误较少（1-2处），字数基本符合要求。
（3）5-6分语句尚通顺，书写较工整，3-4处语法错误，字数在60词左右。
（4）5分以下作文内容不完整语句不够通顺，语法错误较多，书写一般，字数在50词
以下。
三、类型举例：
1.做好事
Tomisagoodboywholikeshelpingothers/whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Oneday,on
hiswaytoschool/onhiswaybackhome,hefoundanoldmanwholookedworried.Hewentup
tohimandaskedhimwhatwaswrong./ifhecouldhelphim.Theoldmansaidthathedidn’tknow
howtogetbackhome.Tomhelpedhimtoaskthepolicemanforhelp.ThenTomtookhimtohis
homebybus.Hetookgoodcareoftheoldman.Atlast/Intheend,theoldmangotbackhome
andmethisfamily.TheythankedTomverymuch.Tomgottoshoollate/gothomelatebuthewas
veryhappy.Whatagood/kindboy!
Weshouldlearnfromhim./Helpingothersistohelp
ourselves.
2.节日：
Children’sDay儿童节；
Teachers’Day教师节；
AprilFool’sDay愚人节National
Day国庆节；
NewYear’sDay元旦；
SpringFestival春节；
Mid-AutumDay中秋节；
MayDay五四青年节ChristmasDay圣诞节；
ThanksgivingDay感恩节；
Mother’sDay
母亲节；
Father’sDay父亲节
Tomisagoodboywholoveshisparents.YesterdaywasWomen’sDay.Hewantedtodo
somethingforhismother.Hetoldhisfatherwhathethoughtandhisfatheragreedwithhim.They
begantowork.Tomsweptthefloorandhisfatherdidsomewashing/washedtheclothes.While
hisfatherwascooking,heputthedishesontothetable.Whenhismothercamebackhome,he
foundsomedeliciousfoodonthetable.Howhappyshewas!
ShehadawonderfulWomen’s
Day.
类似一篇：
IhaveagoodfriendnamedJim.Heisafifteen-year-oldboy.YesterdaywasWomen’s
Day,andhismotherwasbusyoutside.Hemadeuphismindtodosomethingforher.
Sohecleanedoutthehouseinordertomakehismotherhappy.Atfirst,hecleaned
thefloorandmadeitascleanaspossible.Helistenedtothemusicthatwaswritten
byXuLang,oneofthemostpopularsingersinChina.Thenhedidthedishesafter
listening.Ittookhimalittletimetodoit.Atlast,hecookedsomethingnice.
Afterfifteenminutes,hismothercamebackhome.Hesaid“HappyWomen’sDay!
”His
motherwasveryhappytoseesomefoodonthetable.Jimdidn'
tfeeltiredinthe
slightest.Whatagoodboy!
3.做错事
Oneday，XiaoMingandhisfatherwenttoZhongShanPark.XiaoMingwas
veryhappy.Whiletheywerewalking,XiaoMing’sfatherfoundafenceanddecided
tojumpoverthefencesothattheycouldgettothezooquickly.XiaoMingdidn’t
agreewithhisfather,buthisfatherjumpedoverthefence.XiaoMingwasvery
worried.Thenapolicemancametohisfatherandtoldhimthathebrokethetraffic
law.XiaoMing’sfatherfeltveryembarrassedandbowedtothepoliceman,“Sorry,
Iwon’tdoitagain.”
It’sdangeroustobreakthetrafficlaw./rules.
另一篇：
LastSunday,myfatherandmothertookmetothezoo.Itwasaveryinteresting
zoo.Wetookawalkandenjoyedthebeautifulsights/flowersinthezoothewhole
morning.Atnoon,wehadapiiconthegrass.Finally,Icouldn’tfinishthecake
withcream.Iwantedtothrowitaway.Butmymothertoldmenottodoit.Then,I
wantedtogiveittothemonkeys.Mymothersaiditwasagoodidea.Atthattimea
workeratthezoocameuptousandtoldusnottodoit.Thenwerealizedour
mistakes.Weshouldobeytherulesandtrytoprotecttheanimals.
4.活动
Tomisagoodboywholikesplayingsoer.LastTuesday,hewasverybusy.Inthemorning,
hegotupatsixthirtyandthenhadbreakfast.Hewenttoschoolonfootbecausehishousewas
veryneartotheschool.Afterhehadfourclassesinthemorningandthreeintheafternoon,hewas
verytired.Afterschool,heplayedsoerwithhisfriends.Theyhadagoodtime.After
supper/dinner,hehadtodohishomework.Ittookhimtwohourstofinishit.HewatchedTVand
readnewspapers.Hedidn’tgotobeduntilteno’clock.Hewastiredbuthappy.Whatabusyday!
（如果是周末或假期活动，只需要改变时间和活动内容即可）
XiaoMing’sBusyDay
Lastweekend,XiaoMinghadaverybusyday.Inthemorning,hisfather
toldhimtogetuptoreadEnglish.Afterthat,hehadtopractiseplaying
thepiano.Hismotherstoodbehindhimandmadehimplayagainandagain.
Intheafternoon,hisfathertookhimtoanartschool.Helearnedhow
topaintthere.Thewholeday,XiaoMinghadnotimetohavearest.He
wassotiredthathefellillintheevening.Hewastakentohospital
byhisparents.Whatapoorboy！
Inmyopinion,Chineseparentsaretoostrictwiththeirchildren.They
expecttheirchildrentobeesuessfulinthefuture.Thechildren
aretoobusylearningallkindsofthingsallday.Ithinkit’sbadfor
them.
四、更多举例：
Lastweekend,weplannedtovisitmygrandmotherwithouther,sowegetupearlytobuyabigcakeforher.Aboutanhourlater,thebustookustothebeautifulcountryside.OuringmadehersurprisedandshesaIdshefeltlonelyrecently.
Whileweweretallkingtoeachother,myunclewascookingadeliciousmealforus,weweresoexcitedtomeeteachotherthatwedidn’tstoptalkingoreatinguntil4:
00pm.Whenweleft,shesaidthemoretimeswecame,thehappiershewouldbe.
Wethinkit’sourdutytomakeoldpeoplefeelhappy.
t
Tomisagoodboywholikeshelpingotherswhentheyareintrouble.
Oneday,whenTomwokeup,hesawJack’shousewasonfire,hehurriedtogetupandcalled119,herushedtoJack’shouseandhelpedJackputoutthefire.Severalminuteslater,Somefiremencameandtriedtheirbesttofightwiththefire,atlast,withmanypeople’shelp,thefirewasputout.ThefiremenandJackwerethankfultoTom.Tomwasveryhappy.
Inmyopinion,Ifeveryonegivesahand,ourworldwillbewarm.
三）通知
1．口头通知
写作指导
①口头通知一般是由一方向另一方口头传达的
通知，叙述表达尽可能口语化，简洁明了，说清意思就行。
②口头通知不用写通知时间和发通知的单位。
③口头通知一开头可有称呼语，具体因通知对象
而异。
常用的称呼语有“Comradesandfriends”、“Boysandgirls”、“Teachersandfellowstudents”、“Ladiesandgentlemen”，也有的不用开头语，直接开始。
④口头通知的一些常用的开头语和结束语。
开头语
结束语
Anyquestions?
Doeseveryoneunderstand?
That'
sall.Thankyou.
精选范文
①Pleasebequiet,everyone.There'
ssomethingyouneedtoknow.Asourteacherisill,we'
retohavereadingclasstogetherwiththestudentsofClassThreetoday.Pleasetakeyourbencheswithyoutotheirclassroom.Theoralclasswillbeputoffuntiltomorrow.That'
②Attentionplease,rades.ThereisgoingtobeatalkonAmericanFamilyintheLectureHallthisafternoon.It'
llbegivenbyanAmericanprofessor_____Mr.Smith.Thosewhowanttoattendpleasebethereat2∶30Anyquestion?
Ifno,that'
③Listen,please,Ihavesomethingimportanttotellyou.We'
regoingtoholdaget-togetherwithsomeforeignstudentsat7∶00p.m.onFridayintheForeignStudent'
sDiningHall.Anyonewhowantstotakepartinit,pleasebethereontime.Thankyou.
④Ladiesandgentlemen,Listen,please.Thisafternoonwe'
regoingtovisittheGreatWall,thebuswillstopatthefootoftheGreatWall.Threehourslat
er,we'
llgettogetherhereandbacktothehotel.WhenyougotovisittheGreatWall,pleasetakeyourvaluablethingswithyou.Andremembertoebacktothebusatfiveo'
clock.Dobethereontime.
Sinceeveryoneunderstandsverywell.
Thankyou.
练习
①假如你是班长，利用课余时间告诉你的同班
同学，本星期六下午4∶00在本班教室召开班会，主题是：
如何保持教室干净、整洁。
请同学们准备好发言。
（字数：
60～80左右）
参考词语
将?
?
四处扔tothrow?
about
对?
危害todoharmto
吐痰tospit
保持?
干净gokeep?
clean
准备好togetreadyfor
②假如你是学生会主席，通知各班团支部书记今天下午4∶30在会议室开会，讨论本学期打算开展哪些活动等事宜。
60左右）
讨论?
活动todiscusse?
activities
团支书thesecretariesofLeagueBranch
出席tobepresent
③假如你是班上的体育委员，你班下星期一准备和（6）班进行一场篮球赛。
请非队员的同学到时到学校篮球场观看，为本班球队喝彩助威。
参加比赛totakepartinthematch
应邀tobeinvitedto
喝彩助威tocheerup
篮球场basketballcourt
④假如你是语文课代表，通知全班同学，因语文老师生病，请假2天，这两天的语文课改上自习，完成练习册第52页上的练习，另外预习好第16课课文。
60～80左右）参考词语
请两天假toaskfortwodaysleave
自学tostudybyourselves
⑤假如你是生活委员，通知学生今天下午第七节课进行大扫除。
分工情况：
男同学桌凳，打扫墙壁，女同学擦门窗、桌凳等。
同学们按照自己的分工情况带好工具。
进行大扫除tohaveageneralclean-up
分成tobedividedinto
扫把broom
抹布mop
⑥假如你是英语课代表，通知你班同学今天上午第三节课到学校语音室上英语口语课，请同学们带好口语课本，另外在语言实验室要遵守规则，不得损坏设备，否则是要被罚款的。
语言实验室languagelab
遵守规则tokeeptherulesof?
损坏设备todamagetheequipment
罚款tofine
⑦假如你是班长，请通知学生听一个访美报告，时间是12月20日下午3点，地点为205会议室，主讲人是刚访美归国的李明华教授。
内容：
美国中学教育。
每个同学各带一至二名外校学生参加，要求不要迟到，本年级同学会后留下来讨论。
美国中学教育Americanhighschooleducation
允许tobeallowedtodosomething
期望beexpectedto
进行讨论toha
升级会员 