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1、每个单句句子都要符合简单句的五种基本类型之一：主系表；主语谓语；主谓宾； 主谓宾宾；主谓宾宾补；注意主谓一致；注意避免标点符号、大小写、拼写错误等低级失误； 字数要足；打草稿是个拿卷面分的好办法，也避免低级失误。将草稿上的作文抄到试卷上 之后，再对照一下，不要漏掉字或出现书写单词不完整的现象。 二、中考作文评分标准： 1） 本大题共10分。 2）卷面书写潦草不工整，可酌情从总得分中扣1分。 3）拼写错误每两个扣0.5分。同样错误不重复计算。 4）书面表达可分为四个等级： （1）9-10分语句通顺，内容完整，书写工整，无语法错误， 字数符合要求。 （2）7-8分 内容较完整，书写较工整，语法错误

2、较少（1-2处），字数基本符合要求。 （3）5-6分语句尚通顺，书写较工整，3-4处语法错误，字数在60词左右。 （4）5分以下 作文内容不完整语句不够通顺，语法错误较多，书写一般，字数在50词 以下。 三、类型举例： 1. 做好事 Tom is a good boy who likes helping others/who is always ready to help others. One day , on his way to school/ on his way back home, he found an old man who looked worried. He went up

3、 to him and asked him what was wrong./if he could help him. The old man said that he didnt know how to get back home. Tom helped him to ask the policeman for help. Then Tom took him to his home by bus. He took good care of the old man . At last/In the end, the old man got back home and met his famil

4、y. They thanked Tom very much. Tom got to shool late/got home late but he was very happy. What a good /kind boy! We should learn from him./ Helping others is to help ourselves. 2. 节日：Childrens Day 儿童节；Teachers Day 教师节；April Fools Day 愚人节 National Day 国庆节 ；New Years Day 元旦；Spring Festival 春节；Mid-Autu

5、m Day 中秋节； May Day 五四青年节Christmas Day 圣诞节；Thanksgiving Day 感恩节；Mothers Day 母亲节；Fathers Day 父亲节 Tom is a good boy who loves his parents. Yesterday was Womens Day. He wanted to do something for his mother. He told his father what he thought and his father agreed with him. They began to work. Tom swept

6、 the floor and his father did some washing/ washed the clothes. While his father was cooking, he put the dishes onto the table. When his mother came back home, he found some delicious food on the table. How happy she was! She had a wonderful Womens Day. 类似一篇： I have a good friend named Jim. He is a

7、fifteen-year-old boy. Yesterday was Womens Day, and his mother was busy outside. He made up his mind to do something for her. So he cleaned out the house in order to make his mother happy. At first, he cleaned the floor and made it as clean as possible. He listened to the music that was written by X

8、u Lang , one of the most popular singers in China. Then he did the dishes after listening. It took him a little time to do it. At last, he cooked something nice. After fifteen minutes, his mother came back home .He said “Happy Womens Day!” His mother was very happy to see some food on the table. Jim

9、 didnt feel tired in the slightest. What a good boy! 3.做错事 One day，Xiao Ming and his father went to Zhong Shan Park. Xiao Ming was very happy. While they were walking, Xiao Mings father found a fence and decided to jump over the fence so that they could get to the zoo quickly . Xiao Ming didnt agree

10、 with his father, but his father jumped over the fence. Xiao Ming was very worried. Then a policeman came to his father and told him that he broke the traffic law. Xiao Mings father felt very embarrassed and bowed to the policeman,“Sorry, I wont do it again.” Its dangerous to break the traffic law./

11、rules. 另一篇： Last Sunday, my father and mother took me to the zoo. It was a very interesting zoo. We took a walk and enjoyed the beautiful sights /flowers in the zoo the whole morning. At noon, we had a piic on the grass. Finally, I couldnt finish the cake with cream. I wanted to throw it away. But m

12、y mother told me not to do it. Then, I wanted to give it to the monkeys. My mother said it was a good idea. At that time a worker at the zoo came up to us and told us not to do it .Then we realized our mistakes. We should obey the rules and try to protect the animals. 4.活动 Tom is a good boy who like

13、s playing soer. Last Tuesday, he was very busy. In the morning , he got up at six thirty and then had breakfast. He went to school on foot because his house was very near to the school. After he had four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon, he was very tired. After school , he played s

14、oer with his friends. They had a good time. After supper/dinner, he had to do his homework. It took him two hours to finish it. He watched TV and read newspapers. He didnt go to bed until ten oclock. He was tired but happy. What a busy day! （如果是周末或假期活动，只需要改变时间和活动内容即可） Xiao Mings Busy Day Last weeken

15、d, Xiao Ming had a very busy day. In the morning, his father told him to get up to read English. After that, he had to practise playing the piano. His mother stood behind him and made him play again and again. In the afternoon, his father took him to an art school. He learned how to paint there. The

16、 whole day, Xiao Ming had no time to have a rest. He was so tired that he fell ill in the evening. He was taken to hospital by his parents. What a poor boy！ In my opinion, Chinese parents are too strict with their children. They expect their children to bee suessful in the future. The children are t

17、oo busy learning all kinds of things all day. I think its bad for them. 四、更多举例： Last weekend, we planned to visit my grandmother without her ,so we get up early to buy a big cake for her .About an hour later,the bus took us to the beautiful country side . Our ing made her surprised and she saId she

18、felt lonely recently . While we were tallking to each other,my uncle was cooking a delicious meal for us ,we were so excited to meet each other that we didnt stop talking or eating until 4:00 pm .When we left, she said the more times we came ,the happier she would be . Wethink its our duty to make o

19、ld people feel happy . t Tom is a good boy who likes helping others when they are in trouble . One day , when Tom woke up ,he saw Jacks house was on fire ,he hurried to get up and called 119, he rushed to Jacks house and helped Jack put out the fire .Several minutes later, Some firemen came and trie

20、d their best to fight with the fire, at last , with many peoples help,the fire was put out .The firemen and Jack were thankful to Tom .Tom was very happy . In my opinion , If everyone gives a hand , our world will be warm . 三）通知 1口头通知 写作指导 口头通知一般是由一方向另一方口头传达的 通知，叙述表达尽可能口语化，简洁明了，说清意思就行。 口头通知不用写通知时间和发

21、通知的单位。 口头通知一开头可有称呼语，具体因通知对象 而异。常用的称呼语有“Comrades and friends”、“Boys and girls”、“Teachers and fellow students”、“Ladies and gentlemen”，也有的不用开头语，直接开始。 口头通知的一些常用的开头语和结束语。 开头语 结束语 Any questions? Does everyone understand? Thats all. Thank you. 精选范文 Please be quiet, everyone. Theres something you need to kn

22、ow. As our teacher is ill, were to have reading class together with the students of Class Three today. Please take your benches with you to their classroom. The oral class will be put off until tomorrow. That Attention please, rades. There is going to be a talk on American Family in the Lecture Hall

23、 this afternoon. Itll be given by an American professor _ Mr. Smith. Those who want to attend please be there at 230 Any question? If no, that Listen, please, I have something important to tell you. Were going to hold a get-together with some foreign students at 700 p. m. on Friday in the Foreign St

24、udents Dining Hall. Any one who wants to take part in it, please be there on time. Thank you. Ladies and gentlemen, Listen, please. This afternoon were going to visit the Great Wall, the bus will stop at the foot of the Great Wall. Three hours lat er, well get together here and back to the hotel. Wh

25、en you go to visit the Great Wall, please take your valuable things with you. And remember to e back to the bus at five oclock. Do be there on time. Since everyone understands very well. Thank you. 练习 假如你是班长，利用课余时间告诉你的同班 同学，本星期六下午400在本班教室召开班会，主题是：如何保持教室干净、整洁。请同学们准备好发言。（字数：6080左右） 参考词语 将?四处扔to throw?

26、about 对?危害to do harm to 吐痰to spit 保持?干净go keep?clean 准备好to get ready for 假如你是学生会主席，通知各班团支部书记今天下午430在会议室开会，讨论本学期打算开展哪些活动等事宜。60左右） 讨论?活动 to discusse ? activities 团支书the secretaries of League Branch 出席to be present 假如你是班上的体育委员，你班下星期一准备和（6）班进行一场篮球赛。请非队员的同学到时到学校篮球场观看，为本班球队喝彩助威。 参加比赛to take part in the ma

27、tch 应邀to be invited to 喝彩助威to cheer up 篮球场basketball court 假如你是语文课代表，通知全班同学，因语 文老师生病，请假2天，这两天的语文课改上自习，完成练习册第52页上的练习，另外预习好第16课课文。6080左右） 参考词语 请两天假to ask for two days leave 自学to study by ourselves 假如你是生活委员，通知学生今天下午第七节课进行大扫除。分工情况：男同学桌凳，打扫墙壁，女同学擦门窗、桌凳等。同学们按照自己的分工情况带好工具。 进行大扫除to have a general clean-up 分

28、成to be divided into 扫把broom 抹布mop 假如你是英语课代表，通知你班同学今天上午第三节课到学校语音室上英语口语课，请同学们带好口语课本，另外在语言实验室要遵守规则，不得损坏设备，否则是要被罚款的。 语言实验室language lab 遵守规则to keep the rules of? 损坏设备to damage the equipment 罚款to fine 假如你是班长，请通知学生听一个访美报告，时间是12月20日下午3点，地点为205会议室，主讲人是刚访美归国的李明华教授。内容：美国中学教育。每个同学各带一至二名外校学生参加，要求不要迟到，本年级同学会后留下来讨论。 美国中学教育American high school education 允许to be allowed to do something 期望be expected to 进行讨论to ha