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2.跑步路线:
从校门口到南山脚下:
3.活动反响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
ACross-CountryRunningRace
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【答案】ACross-CountryRunningRace
LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.
Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessarilyhelpaswellasencouragement.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.
Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。
本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】体裁:
应用文
时态:
根据提示,时态应以一般过去时为主
结构:
总分总
要求:
1.参加人员
2.跑步路线
3.活动反响
第二步:
列提纲(重点词组)
attend/witness/drawone’sattention/managetodosth./measure/speakhighlyof/providesth.forsb.
第三步:
连词成句
1.LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.
2.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.
3.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.
4.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessaryhelpaswellasencouragement.
5.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.
6.Theactivityishighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydoesitprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomakesusmorecohesive.
第四步:
连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:
and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:
because/if/though/although…
定语从句连词:
which/that/when/where…
第五步:
修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。
作者在范文中使用了一些高分举行,例如:
LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.中which引导非限制性定语从句;
Theactivityishighlythoughtof,becausenotonlydoesitprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomakesusmorecohesive.中使用了部分倒装。
第二节(满分25分)
47.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.
Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.
Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy-hisnamewasBernard-hadinterestedherverymuch.
“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon'
tseewhathecando.”
Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”
“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”
Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!
Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成).”
Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.“Itellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?
Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”
1.续写词数应为150左右:
WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'
sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.
Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.
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