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Content:
unity,coherence,
fulldevelopment
1.SentenceCorrectness(句子的准确性)
Ilikereadingnovels,theytellinterestingandmovingstories,moreover,somestoriesareinstructive.Theydescribegoodandevilpeople,theydescribethebrightsideandthedarksideoflife.Theyhelpmedistinguishingbetweenrightandwrong,theyhelpmeunderstandingpeopleandlife.SoIseemtobecomewiser.
MoreExamples:
1)Iwilltrytocometruemydreams.
2)Myhometownhastakenplacemanychangessinceourcountry’sopenpolicy.
3)Aroomoftenlives6-8students.
4)Becausehehadn’tfinishedhisassignment,sohecontinuedworkingintheclassroom.
5)Hecostmuchmoneyforthenewmobilephone.
6)Thepricesoffruitarecheapinthisarea.
7)Withpeople’slifestandardsraise,moreandmorefamiliescanaffordaprivatecar.
8)Lookingfromthetopofthemountain,thecityseemssmall.
9)Surroundedbybeautifulflowersandtalltrees,theyfindthehouseawonderfulplacetospendtheholiday.
10)IlikeEnglish,however,Icannotlearnitwell.
11)Ourearthisfacingalotofproblems.Suchaspollution,trafficjams,etc.
12)Iamstronglyagainstthisopinion.Becauseprinteddictionarieshavesomespecialqualitiesthatelectricaldictionariesdon’t.
2.SentenceVariety(句式的多样化)
Ilikereadingnovelsbecausetheytellinterestingandmovingstories.Moreover,somestoriesareinstructive.Bydescribinggoodandevilpeople,andthebrightsideandthedarksideoflife,suchstorieshelpmetodistinguishbetweenrightandwrong,andunderstandpeopleandlife.Asaresult,readingthemhasperhapsmademewiser.
Moreexamples:
a.IhavewonthefirstprizeinEnglishcontest,thankstoyourhelp.
b.I’vewonthefirstprizeinEnglishcontestandmyachievementsareattributedtoyourhelpgreatly.
c.ItiswithyourhelpthatIhavewonthefirstprizeinEnglishcontest.
d.WithoutyourhelpIwouldnothavewonthefirstprizeinEnglishcontest.
3.ParagraphUnity(段落一致性)
Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandandwifearenowequalinthefamily.Theycopewithproblemsofdailylifetogetherandsharetheresponsibilityofdoinghouseholdchoresandtakingcareofchildren.Butinsomefamilies,youcanstillfindthatwivesarebeingbusywithdinners,whilehusbandsarecomfortablysittinginarmchairsreadingnewspapersorwatchingfootballgamesonTV.
Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandandwifearenowequalinthefamily.Theycopewithproblemsofdailylifetogetherandsharetheresponsibilityofdoinghouseholdchoresandtakingcareofchildren.Today,youcanhardlyfindwivesarebeingbusywithdinners,whilehusbandsarecomfortablysittinginarmchairsreadingnewspapersorwatchingfootballgamesonTV.
Televisionhasmanyharms.Sincethetelevisionwasinvented,ithasplayedanimportantpartinpeople’slife.Ithasturnedthebigworldtoasmallone.Peoplecanseethesameprogramatthesametimearoundtheworld.But,assoonastelevisioncomesintocommonfamilies,italsohasmanyharms,especiallyforthechildren.Forexample,childrenspendtoomuchtimewatchingtelevision.Asaresult,theycannotconcentrateontheirstudies.Whatisworse,theireyesightbecomespoorer.Andtheyareoftenexposedtoviolence,whichisharmfultotheirmentalgrowth.
4.Paragraphcoherence(段落连贯性)
Ilikereadingnovels.Theytellinterestingandmovingstories.Somestoriesareinstructive.Theydescribegoodandevilpeople.Theydescribethebrightsideandthedarksideoflife.Theyhelpmedistinguishbetweenrightandwrong.Theyhelpmeunderstandpeopleandlife.Iseemtobecomewiser.
Isithereatthekeyboard.Itrytothinkofthingstosay.Thewordsarenotcomingveryfreely.Ithinkthatisprobablybecauseitistheendofalongday.ItmaybethatIamtired.Icannotcontinuemywriting.Freewritingmayhelpmebreakthroughthewriter’sblock.
Isithereatthekeyboard,tryingtothinkofthingstosay,butthewordsarenotcomingveryfreely.Probably,theyaren’tcomingbecauseitistheendofalongday,andI’mtired.Whateverthereason,Icannotcontinuemywriting.Perhapsfreewritingwillhelpmebreakthroughthewriter’sblock.
5.Fulldevelopment(内容的丰富性)
PositiveandNegativeAspectsofSports
Takingpartinsportscana