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1、Content: unity, coherence， full development1. Sentence Correctness （句子的准确性）I like reading novels, they tell interesting and moving stories, moreover, some stories are instructive. They describe good and evil people, they describe the bright side and the dark side of life. They help me distinguishing

2、 between right and wrong, they help me understanding people and life. So I seem to become wiser.More Examples:1） I will try to come true my dreams. 2） My hometown has taken place many changes since our countrys open policy. 3） A room often lives 6-8 students.4） Because he hadnt finished his assignme

3、nt, so he continued working in the classroom.5） He cost much money for the new mobile phone. 6） The prices of fruit are cheap in this area. 7） With peoples life standards raise, more and more families can afford a private car.8） Looking from the top of the mountain, the city seems small.9） Surrounde

4、d by beautiful flowers and tall trees, they find the house a wonderful place to spend the holiday.10） I like English, however, I can not learn it well.11） Our earth is facing a lot of problems. Such as pollution, traffic jams, etc.12） I am strongly against this opinion. Because printed dictionaries

5、have some special qualities that electrical dictionaries dont.2. Sentence Variety （句式的多样化）I like reading novels because they tell interesting and moving stories. Moreover, some stories are instructive. By describing good and evil people, and the bright side and the dark side of life, such stories he

6、lp me to distinguish between right and wrong, and understand people and life. As a result, reading them has perhaps made me wiser.More examples:a. I have won the first prize in English contest, thanks to your help.b. Ive won the first prize in English contest and my achievements are attributed to yo

7、ur help greatly.c. It is with your help that I have won the first prize in English contest. d. Without your help I would not have won the first prize in English contest. 3. Paragraph Unity （段落一致性）With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. Husband

8、and wife are now equal in the family. They cope with problems of daily life together and share the responsibility of doing household chores and taking care of children. But in some families, you can still find that wives are being busy with dinners, while husbands are comfortably sitting in armchair

9、s reading newspapers or watching football games on TV.With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. Husband and wife are now equal in the family. They cope with problems of daily life together and share the responsibility of doing household chores an

10、d taking care of children. Today, you can hardly find wives are being busy with dinners, while husbands are comfortably sitting in armchairs reading newspapers or watching football games on TV.Television has many harms. Since the television was invented, it has played an important part in peoples li

11、fe. It has turned the big world to a small one. People can see the same program at the same time around the world. But, as soon as television comes into common families, it also has many harms, especially for the children. For example, children spend too much time watching television. As a result, t

12、hey cannot concentrate on their studies. What is worse, their eyesight becomes poorer. And they are often exposed to violence, which is harmful to their mental growth.4. Paragraph coherence（段落连贯性）I like reading novels. They tell interesting and moving stories. Some stories are instructive. They desc

13、ribe good and evil people. They describe the bright side and the dark side of life. They help me distinguish between right and wrong. They help me understand people and life. I seem to become wiser.I sit here at the keyboard. I try to think of things to say. The words are not coming very freely. I t

14、hink that is probably because it is the end of a long day. It may be that I am tired. I can not continue my writing. Free writing may help me break through the writers block.I sit here at the keyboard, trying to think of things to say, but the words are not coming very freely. Probably, they arent coming because it is the end of a long day, and Im tired. Whatever the reason, I can not continue my writing. Perhaps free writing will help me break through the writers block.5. Full development（内容的丰富性）Positive and Negative Aspects of SportsTaking part in sports can a