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谓概括描述是指对一个事件的总体描述,而细节描述则是对事件的具体描述,来对之前的总
体描述进一步解释说明,这样能够使得描述更加生动,有画面感。
举例:
如表达一个人的疲累时,可用概括描述:
shefeltexhausted.同时辅以细节描述Shefelt
exhaustedandsatbythestream,restingherachingfeet.
如果大家注意这些细节的描述,一定会为你的记叙文续写增色!
“感到害怕”的细节描述
当看到那只凶恶的狼时,我感到很害怕。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述,先将意思表达清楚。
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2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
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参考答案:
1.Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltveryscared.
2.1)Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmyknees
feltweak.(嗓子发紧,膝盖发软)
2)Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.(吓呆了,
不敢动弹)
3)Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalms
weresweating.(被深深地恐惧感所控制,手心出汗)
表感到兴奋thrilled
当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋极了。
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3.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltthrilled.
4.1)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.(激
动得两眼放光)
2)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,herheartwasthumpingwith
excitement.(激动得心砰砰跳)
3)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awideexcitementtookholdofher.(兴奋
不能自已)
感到悲伤”的细节描述
一听到那个坏消息,她悲伤不已。
1.Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltextremelysad.
2.1)Uponhearingthebadnews,herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.(心痛,
眼泪直流)
2)Uponhearingthebadnews,she,numbwithgrief,hadtroublespeaking.(悲伤到失去知觉,
不能开口说话)
3)Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcrying
bitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制,忍不住哭泣)
“感到开心”的细节描述
当妈妈亲吻他时,小baby开心极了。
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5.Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywashappy/delighted/fullofjoy.
3.)Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebabywereontopofthe
world.(非常开心)
2)Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelit
uptheroom.(眉开眼笑;
笑容照亮房间)
3)Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hiseyesdancedwithjoyand
sweetness.(欢欣雀跃)
"
感到羞愧"
的细节描述
她感到非常羞愧。
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(答案见底部Key1)
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(答案见底部Key2)
Key1:
Shefeltashamed.
Key2:
1)Shefeltsoashamedthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.(脸上滚烫)
2)Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.(血液涌上脸
颊)
3)Soashameddidshefeelthatshewasclosetotears.(快哭了)
“感到生气”的细节描述
Sheldon感到非常生气。
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Sheldonfeltveryangry.
1)Sheldonfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehind
him.(冲出房间;
狠狠摔门)
2)Boilingwithrage,Sheldonshookhisfistatme.(怒火中烧;
挥舞拳头)
3)Filledwithfury,Sheldonwasunabletoutterasingleword.(充满愤怒;
说不出话)
“感到绝望”的细节描述
Tony感到很绝望。
Tonyfelthopeless/desperate.
1)Astheresultofanaccident,Tonywassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsank
intohopelessness.(被投入黑暗之中;
陷入绝望)
2)Tonyfeltleftoutandwasgettingdesperatewithloneliness.(感觉被遗忘、忽视)
3)Tony'
sbeliefsinlookingforwardandseeingthepositiveineverythingdesertedhi