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第一次课0118
一些人认为高中生应该将国际新闻作为一门学科学习,另一些人觉得对于宝贵的学校时间是一种浪费。
讨论双方给出自己观点。
Somepeoplethinksecondaryschoolstudentsshouldstudynternationalnewsasoneoftheirsubjects.Otherpeoplesaythisisawasteofvaluableschooltime.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.
审题
【论述类】正-反-自己的观点
【对象】针对中学生
A看新闻B知道实时C有谈资,对社会生活有好处
一般写五段段落数字好处理开头段一般40字主题60字结尾30字
开头段
替换词
Üinternationalnews
Globalnews
internationalissuescoveredbynewsreports
Üawasteofvaluableschooltime
Takevaluabletimefromcoresubjects
✓人们争论国际新闻应该被包括在中学教育,但是我认为这个课程会占有一些核心课程的宝贵时间。
Itisarguedthatinternationalnewsshouldbeincludedinsecondaryeducation,butIbelievethatthissubjectcantakeprecioustimefromcoresubjects.(c)
★教育类的百搭观点
打游戏和看电视(B学理论知识C学习难的科目D做义工E打工F学习不同的科目G学习国际新闻)对学习兴趣和成绩的影响
没有精力学习主科,成绩下降,失去信心,影响大学和以后就业
口语描述一个不喜欢的课程
★主体段落写法
一确定怎么写中心句
1改写C主体段变成AC+B+C 需要写两遍C 所以要改写
2第二种AB+C
二确定怎么扩展
1背景化位置:
中心句后第一句话
2解释位置:
解释一个事情怎么发生,放在解释对象的前面作为原因。
解释一个名词位于名词之后。
3特定化、结果、对比位置:
一般放在句子的末尾
主体段一:
A+C背景化B解释(解释为什么B导致C)C
A+C背景化BC解释(C什么样的机会)
【A】学习新闻
【B】开阔视野(broadenone’smind/keepabreastofthelatestdevelopment)
【C】能够更好的把握机会(seizeopportunities)对处理问题(problemsolving)和做决定(decisionmaking)都有好处
【背景化】当今的年轻人生活在全球化的社会里,国际事物对他们的学习和职业前景有直接的影响。
【解释】举例子金融信息工程或者国际贸易等职业前景很理想的专业
中心句A+C:
学习国际新闻使学生在未来可以更明智的做决定。
Learninginternationalnewsenablesstudentstomakewisedecisionsinfuture.
careerprospect=joboutlook
背景化:
当今的年轻人生活在全球化的社会里,国际事物对他们的学习和职业前景有直接的影响。
Theyouthoftodayliveinaglobalisedworldandinternationalaffiarshaveadirectimpactontheirstudiesandcareerprospect(背景化)
B+C用连接词链接
国际新闻可以使学生们从小的时候就开阔眼界。
他们可以抓住机会并且成年后可以更有效地解决问题。
Internationalnewsmakesitpossibleforstudentstobroadentheirmindsfromayoungage,sotheyareabletoseizeopportunitiesandsolveproblems
effectivelyinadulthood.(B+C)
解释C(举例子)
他们可能会选择学习金融,信息工程或者国际贸易等专业,因为新闻显示这些工作的职业前景很理想。
Theymaychoosetostudyfinance,informationengineeringorinternationaltradebecausenewsindicatesthatthejoboutlookintheseoccupationsisbright.
✓整个段落:
Learninginternationalnewsenablesstudentstomakewisedecisionsinfuture.Theyouthoftodayliveinaglobalisedworldandinternationalaffiarshaveadirectimpactontheirstudiesandcareerprospect.Internationalnewsmakesitpossibleforstudentstobroadentheirmindsfromayoungage,sotheyareabletoseizeopportunitiesandsolveproblemseffectivelyinadulthood.Theymaychoosetostudyfinance,informationengineeringorinternationaltradebecausenewsindicatesthatthejoboutlookintheseoccupationsisbright.
主题段落2——反对学习国际新闻
A+C背景BC+拓展
【A】学习新闻
【B】对小孩的世界观(world-view)有影响加大他们的偏见(reinforcenegativestereotypes)
【C】对他们以后的行为有影响
【背景化】新闻有时候一偏概全(giveanunbalanced/unfairaccountofevents)
★注意:
背景化一般只能用在A+C情况下永远放在B前面
如果有A+B背景化无法插入
【拓展】如何导致行为的影响有偏见无法正确看到实物
★媒体类容易用到exposureto
中心句(A+C)
Ontheotherhand,opponentsarguethattheexposuretointernationalnewscanhaveanegativeeffectontheyoungergeneration'sbehaviour.(A+C)
背景化+B
ethnicgroups民族群体
Newsreportsaresometimeslikelytogiveanunbalancedaccountofsomenewevents,therebyreinforcingtheirnegativestereotypesofsomecultures,ethnicgroupsandcountries.
C+拓展
Thiscanaffectthewaysinwhichtheyinteractwithothersanddevelopsocialrelationshipsinamulticulturalsociety.
✓整个段落:
Ontheotherhand,opponentsarguethattheexposuretointernationalnewscanhaveanegativeeffectontheyoungergeneration'sbehaviour.Newsreportsaresometimeslikelytogiveanunbalancedaccountofsomenewevents,therebyreinforcingtheirnegativestereotypesofsomecultures,ethnicgroupsandcountries.Thiscanaffectthewaysinwhichtheyinteractwithothersanddevelopsocialrelationshipsinamulticulturalsociety.
主题段落3
A+C背景化BC+拓展
【A】学习新闻
【B】没有精力学更多的课程
【C】学习不喜欢的课程会没兴趣(maintaintheinterestin),分数下降(educationalunderachievement)
【背景化】学生没时间,课表太满了(timetableisovercrowded)
Ø中心句【A+C】
Ø学会句型的变化【A+C】
定语从句放在句首作为主语
Inmyopinion,studentswhostudyinternationalnewsmaynotbeabletosustaintheiracadmicperformance.(A+C)
ØOr状语从句
inmyopinion,ifstudentsarerequiredtostudyinternationalnews,theymaynotbeabletosustaintheiracadmicperformance.(A+C)
背景化B
Theyfinditdifficulttomaintaintheinterestintheirstudiesanddevoteenergiestoothersubjects.(B)
C+拓展
Thisproblemcanleadtotheireducationalunderachievementandpresentachallengetotheircareers.(C+拓展)
✓整个段落:
Inmyopinion,studentswhostudyinternationalnewsmaynotbeabletosustaintheiracademicperformance.Itistruethatthetimetableisovercrowdedformanystudents.Theyfinditdifficulttomaintaintheinterestintheirstudiesanddevoteenergiestoothersubjects.Thisproblemcanleadtotheireducationalunderachievementandpresentachallengetotheircareers.(c)
✓结尾段:
Tosummarise,itismypersonalviewthatsecondaryschoolsshouldnotteachinternationalnewsasasubject,althoughithasapositiveimpactonstudents'employmentprospect.(c)
Lectureshavelongbeenusedasawayofteachinglargenumbersofstudent,butnowwiththedevelopmentoftechnologyforeducation,manypeoplethinkthereisnojustificationforattendinglectures.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
观点类
Ø审题
AC确定法确定了A
Lectureshavelongbeenusedasawayofteachinglargenumbersofstudent,针对的是大学学生大学生才会lecture【A】
butnowwiththedevelopmentoftechnologyforeducation背景句
manypeoplethinkthereisnojustificationforattendinglectures【C】
替换
Üdevelopmentoftechnologyforeducation
Technologicaladvances
evolutionofthedigitaltechnology
Üattendinglectures
Attendingcoursesinperson
Ülargenumbersofstudent,
Abroadaudience
✓开头段:
Thankstotechnologicaladvances,manylearnerstodaycompleteadegreewithouthavingtoattendcoursesinperson,andIbelievethattraditionallectureswillfacesomechallengesinthedigitalage.(c)
主体段1
A+B解释掌握进度C特定化
【A】不上lecture,依靠电脑和网络
【B】自己掌握进度(thepaceoflearning)
【C】学习效果更好(improvelearningoutcomes)
【特定化】对于那些有工作的人(workcommitments)
中心句A+B
★可以用原因状语从句强调结果用完成时态
Onlinelectureshaveastrongimpactonthelearningprocessbecausetheweb-basedtechnologyenablesmanypeopletoadjustthepaceoflearning.
解释B如何掌握进度
Itiseasyforthemtoreviewcoursematerialswhenevertheylike.
Ü运用掌握Exert——controlover
ØOr对比写lecture可能会错过很多内容消化不了影响学习效果
C结果+特定化
Theflexibilitycanhaveabeneficialeffectontheirlearningoutcomes.(C)
Thisisparticularlyimportantforthosewhocannotattendlecturesontimeduetotheirworkcommitments.(特定化)
✓整个段落:
Onlinelectureshaveastrongimpactonthelearningprocessbecausetheweb-basedtechnologyenablesmanypeopletoadjustthepaceoflearning.Itiseasyforthemtoreviewcoursematerialswhenevertheylike.Theflexibilitycanhaveabeneficialeffectontheirlearningoutcomes.Thisisparticularlyimportantforthosewhocannotattendlecturesontimeduetotheirworkcommitments.(c)
主体段2
A+C解释为什么节省学费BC特定化
【A】不上lecture
【B】节省学费(educationalexpenses)
【C】人们更愿意接受教育(pursueauniversitydegree)
【特定化】:
特别是那些贫穷的人(thosefromdisadvantagedbackgrounds)
★解释名词放名词后面
★解释一件事情放事情前面作为原因
中心句A+C
anotherbenefitisthatmorepeoplearewillingtopursueauniversitydegree.
解释(举例子:
天天去学校、学校附近租房子)
Itisunnecessaryforstudentstotraveltotheuniversityonadailybasisorrentanapartmentclosetotheuniversity.(c)
B+C特定化
Thismeansthattheyareabletoreduceeducationalexpensesandreceiveauniversityeducationatanaffordablecost.(B+C)
特定化
Thisopportunityisespeciallyvaluableforthosefromdisadvantagedbackgrounds.(c)
✓整个段落:
Anotherbenefitisthatmorepeoplearewillingtopursueauniversitydegree.Itisunnecessaryforstudentstotraveltotheuniversityorrentanapartmentclosetotheuniversity.Thismeansthattheyareabletoreduceeducationalexpensesandreceiveauniversityeducationatanaffordablecost.Thisopportunityisespeciallyvaluableforthosefromdisadvantagedbackgrounds.(c)
主体段3
A+C解释B C对比
【A】去上lecture
【B】学生间互动,提高社会技能(communicationskills)和团队工作的能力(abilitytoworkwellingroups)
【C】为以后的工作准备(preparedfortheworkinglife)
中心句A+C
Ontheotherhand,thecampus-basedcoursescanprovidestudentswithopportunitiestopreparefortheworkinglife.(A+C)
解释+B
Teamassignmentsandseminarsmakeitpossibleforthemtoimprovecommunicationskillsandtheabilitytoworkwellingroups.(解释+B)
C+对比
Theseskillsholdthekeytotheircareeradvancement.(c)
Incontrast,thosewhoattendonlinecoursesmaynotunderstandhowtocooperatewithothersintheworkplace.(对比)
✓整个段落:
Ontheotherhand,thecampus-basedcoursesmayprovidestudentswithopportunitiestopreparefortheworkinglife.Teamassignmentsandseminarsmakeitpossibleforthemtoimprovecommunicationskillsandtheabilitytoworkwellingroups.Theseskillsholdthekeytotheircareeradvancement.Incontrast,thosewhoattendonlinecoursesmaynotunderstandhowtocooperatewithothersintheworkplace.(c)
✓结尾:
Tosummarise,Ibelievethatonlineeducationwillgaininpopularitybecauseitisflexibleandappreciatedby workingpeopleandthosefromlesswell-offbackgrounds.
第二次课0119
Nowadays,filmsandcomputergamescontainingviolencearepopular.Somepeoplethinkthosefilmsandgameshavenegativeeffectsonsocietyandshouldbebanned,whileothersthinktheyarejustharmlessrelaxation.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.媒体
审题:
Nowadays,filmsandcomputergamescontainingviolencearepopular.(背景句,不重要)
Somepeoplethinkthosefilmsandgameshavenegativeeffectsonsocietyandshouldbebanned【A】
whileothersthink