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教育资料短文改错提高篇无答案学习专用
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Lastmonth,I,togetherwithmyparents,wereinvitedbymyuncleintheUSA.Myuncle,whichmovedtoAmericawhenIwasfive,hasbeenlivingintherefornearlytenyears.Hemeetsusattheairport.IwasexcitingwhenIsetfootonthelandofAmerica.Inthefollowingdays,wevisitedsomeplacesofinterestsandtookphotosinfrontoftheStatueofLiberty.WeallenjoyedvisittheMuseumof
NaturalHistorybecauseitgreatenrichedourknowledge.Forme,thisisoneofthemostrewardingtripIhaveevermadeinourlife.
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MrTurnerturnedoverinbedfromtimetotimelastnight,forhewasveryexcitedthathecouldnotfallasleepYesterday,shewenttoabiggardeningcompany,knownasGreenFingers,fortheinterview.MrTurner,thatlikedtohelphisgrandfathergrowflowersinthegarden,lookedforwardthejobofferedbythecompany.Whenhegottothecompany,hefoundthereweremanypeoplewaitingthereandhehadnoideaswhetherhecouldgetthejob.Whilewaited,hehelpedtheworkerstheretoremovethefallentreesandcleartheroad.Unluckily,hewastheonlyonewhofinallygotthejob,becausethemanagerdecidedtogivethejobtowhoeverhebelievedwashelp.
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Afewdaysagowhentakingthewalkwithmymotherinthepark,Icameacrossaforeigner.Judgedbyhispuzzledexpression,Ithoughthemightinneedofhelp.SoIwentupandaskedthatIcouldhelphiminEnglish.Hetoldmehehadgotlost.Hehadturnedtoseveralpasserbyforhelp,buttheycouldn’tspeakEnglish.Thenhetoldmemydestination.Fortunately,IwasquitefamiliarwiththeplaceInordertomakemyselfunderstand,Itoldhimhowtogothereasclearaspossible.AlthoughitwasthefirsttimethatIhavetalkedtoaforeignerfacetoface,hetotallyunderstoodwhatIsaidandthankedforme.
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AFrenchmanisoncevisitingLondon.Hewishedtotakingawalktoseeacity.ButhewasafraidhemightgetlosingbecauseheknewnowordsofEnglish.Soafterheleftthishotel,hestoppedatthefirstcornerandcarefulcopiedinhisnotebookthenameofthestreetwherehewasstaying.Thenhewalkedon.Atlast,hegotlost.Afterseveralhourhefoundapoliceman.TheFrenchmantriedhisbesttoexplainthepolicemanthathedidn'tknowthenameofhishotel,andheknewthenameofthestreet.Hethenshowedthepolicemanthathecopiedinhisnotebook.Itwasread;“One-waystreet”.
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Iamwritingthislettertothankyoufortheguidanceyougiveme.Iwasaperfectlystrangerwhenreachingthiscity.OnceIlostmyselffornotknowthewayinadowntownstreet,althoughIstoppedtoasksomepeopleforhelp.Asyouknow,thisisthefirsttimeformetocomeuptothisbigcity.Iboughtaguidebook,andtherewerestilldifficultiesingoingroundthecity.ThestreetsandshopspuzzledmyselfsomuchthatIwouldratherstayindoors.Itisyourvaluableguidancewhichhasenabledmegoaboutthecitywithoutlosingmyself.NowIbegintoknowhowtotaketheproperbus.YesterdayIwentdowntownwithsomeofmyschoolmatesforshopping.Lessonswillbeginafterafewdays.Iwillcomeovertoseeyousomedaythenextweekandtellyoueverythingthathashappenedtome.
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Asthecollegeentranceexaminationisapproaching,itwon’ttakelongafterIgraduate.Now,Ihavemuchtisharewithmyfellowstudent.Firstly,I'dliketoshowmyappreciationtothosestandingbymealltheway,teachers,parentsand
friendsincluding.Withouttheirhelpandadvice,mylifewillbedifferent.Secondly,it'shightimeforItosaysorrytotheclassmateswhoIhurtormisunderstand.Ifirmbelievethatcommunicationandsmilesactbridgestofriendship.Thirdly,I'vemadeupmymindtomakeeveryefforttostudy,ashardworkisthekeytoasuccess.Finally,Iwanttoexpressmyhopewhichalltheyoungerfellowscanmakefulluseoftime,becausetimeandtidewaitfornoman.易错点整理:
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LiYuewasawardingthetitleof“StarStudentoftheWeek”becausewhatshedidforourclass.OnthehotafternoonoflastSaturday,LiYuewenttodowntownandwalkedfromonestoretoother,lookingfortheclotheswewouldwearinthesingingcontest.Whentherestofuswereenjoyingourleisuretimesincoolrooms,shespentthewholeafternoonsearchingfortherightclothes.Deepmovedbyher,wetriedourbestandwonthefirstprizeinthecontest.LiYueisalwayswarm-heartedandcarealotabouttheclass.Beside,sheoftendevoteshersparetimetohelpothers.Shehassetthegoodexampletous.
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DickisAustralianman,aged25,whoselifeisfullofhardship.Hewasbornwithoutarmsandlegs.Heusedtobeingmadefunofbyothers.Everythingseemedimpossibletothem.However,Dicknevergaveup.Aftermanyfailures,hefinallylearnedtoswim,fishandevensurf.Thatsurprisedusmostisthathe
completeduniversityeducationandgettwodegrees.AndnowheistheCEOoftwocompany.Whenaskingboutthesecretofhissuccess,hethinksapositiveattitudeisthekeytosuccess.Dick'sstorygreatinspiredme.Comparedwithhim,andwearehealthy.However,wearealwaysfrustratedwhenwefacedifficulties.IthinkDickhassetagoodexampleforus.Weshouldlearnfromhimandnevergiveup.
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Our mother accompanied ustoschoolinthefirstday.Soonateachercameandledustoaclassroom.Therewewereput into four separate class. Somechildrenbegin to cry as the parents were not allowing intothe classrooms.I did not crybecauseI had been to kindergarten ago.Actuallymymotherwentto homesoon after for she knew Iwould be all right.Itwasenjoyabletimefor me as Igot to know my newclassmates.The teacher was verybusywrite down our information so they had plenty of time.In themeantimesomechildrencontinuedtosobwhentheirparentslookedinanxiousthroughthewindows.
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Ilike eating fruit andvegetableswhatareofgreat benefittoourhealthy.Notonlydotheypreventusfromfallingintoill,buttheyalsohelpusloseweight.Iused tohate vegetables,but followed the doctor’sadvice,Igraduallykickedabad habit.Just as the oldsaying goes,“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”Therefore,there are still many children who don't like fruit oravegetables.On thecontrary,influenced by this or that kind of advertisement,many children
were crazy about junk food.Consequently,we become weakerandweakerinstead of getting strong.In my opinion we must take action changeit "
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Onedaylastmonth,agroupofChinesestudentarrivedinBrisbane.Iwasoneofthem.AftersaygoodbyetomydearparentsatBeijingAirport,Istartedmylongjourney.Thatwasmyfirstjourneyabroad.HowexcitingIfeltwhenIgotonabroad.WeleftShanghaitoHongKongtochangetoanotherplanetoMerbourne,secondlargestcityinAustralia.FromthereweflewtoBrisbane,thatisthecapitalcityofQueensland,Australia.WewereexchangestudentsandsendtothecountrybytheirgovernmenttolearnEnglishinBrisbanefortwelvemonths.Fromthefirstfewlessons,wefoundtheteacherstherereallyworkedhardly,andIamsureofthateverythingwillgowellinthenextmonths.
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Ihad anunusualexperiencetoday. Inthemorning,IwaswalkingalongastreetwhileIsawaladyknockeddownbytruck.But the driver just drove away.Without hesitations,Irushed acrossthestreettohelpher.Iputheronmyback
andcarry her to a hospital nearby.On reaching the hospital,however,shestarted
to accuse me of knocking her down and demand