教育资料短文改错提高篇无答案学习专用.docx

1、教育资料短文改错提高篇无答案学习专用模拟21得分：_Last month, I, together with my parents, were invited by my uncle in the USA. My uncle, which moved to America when I was five, has been living in there for nearly ten years. He meets us at the airport. I was exciting when I set foot on the land of America. In the following

2、 days, we visited some places of interests and took photos in front of the Statue of Liberty. We all enjoyed visit the Museum ofNatural History because it great enriched our knowledge. For me, this is one of the most rewarding trip I have ever made in our life. 易错点整理：_模拟22得分：_Mr Turner turned over i

3、n bed from time to time last night, for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep Yesterday, she went to a big gardening company, known as Green Fingers, for the interview. Mr Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, looked forward the job offered by the company

4、. When he got to the company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he was the only one who finally got the job, because the manager decided t

5、o give the job to whoever he believed was help.易错点整理：_模拟23得分：_A few days ago when taking the walk with my mother in the park, I came across a foreigner. Judged by his puzzled expression, I thought he might in need of help. So I went up and asked that I could help him in English. He told me he had go

6、t lost. He had turned to several passerby for help, but they couldnt speak English. Then he told me my destination. Fortunately, I was quite familiar with the place In order to make myself understand, I told him how to go there as clear as possible. Although it was the first time that I have talked

7、to a foreigner face to face, he totally understood what I said and thanked for me.易错点整理：_模拟24得分：_A Frenchman is once visiting London. He wished to taking a walk to see a city. But he was afraid he might get losing because he knew no words of English. So after he left this hotel, he stopped at the fi

8、rst corner and careful copied in his notebook the name of the street where he was staying. Then he walked on. At last, he got lost. After several hour he found a policeman.The Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didnt know the name of his hotel，and he knew the name of the stree

9、t.He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook. It was read; “One-way street”.易错点整理：_模拟25得分：_I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you give me. I was a perfectly stranger when reaching this city. Once I lost myself for not know the way in a downtown street, although I

10、 stopped to ask some people for help. As you know, this is the first time for me to come up to this big city. I bought a guidebook, and there were still difficulties in going round the city. The streets and shops puzzled myself so much that I would rather stay indoors. It is your valuable guidance w

11、hich has enabled me go about the city without losing myself. Now I begin to know how to take the proper bus. Yesterday I went downtown with some of my schoolmates for shopping. Lessons will begin after a few days. I will come over to see you some day the next week and tell you everything that has ha

12、ppened to me.易错点整理：_模拟26得分：_As the college entrance examination is approaching, it wont take long after I graduate. Now, I have much ti share with my fellow student. Firstly, Id like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers，parents andfriends including. Without their hel

13、p and advice, my life will be different. Secondly, its high time for I to say sorry to the classmates who I hurt or misunderstand. I firm believe that communication and smiles act bridges to friendship. Thirdly, Ive made up my mind to make every effort to study, as hard work is the key to a success.

14、 Finally，I want to express my hope which all the younger fellows can make full use of time,because time and tide wait for no man. 易错点整理：_模拟27得分：_Li Yue was awarding the title of “Star Student of the Week” because what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went to downt

15、own and walked from one store to other, looking for the clothes we would wear in the singing contest. When the rest of us were enjoying our leisure times in cool rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching for the right clothes. Deep moved by her, we tried our best and won the first prize in the

16、contest. Li Yue is always warm-hearted and care a lot about the class. Beside, she often devotes her spare time to help others. She has set the good example to us. 易错点整理：_模拟28得分：_Dick is Australian man, aged 25, whose life is full of hardship. He was born without arms and legs. He used to being made

17、 fun of by others. Everything seemed impossible to them. However, Dick never gave up. After many failures, he finally learned to swim, fish and even surf. That surprised us most is that hecompleted university education and get two degrees. And now he is the CEO of two company.When asking bout the se

18、cret of his success, he thinks a positive attitude is the key to success. Dicks story great inspired me. Compared with him, and we are healthy. However, we are always frustrated when we face difficulties. I think Dick has set a good example for us. We should learn from him and never give up.易错点整理：_模

19、拟29得分：_Ourmotheraccompaniedus to school in the first day. Soon a teacher came and led us to a classroom. There we were putintofourseparateclass.Some children begintocryastheparentswerenotallowinginto theclassrooms. Ididnotcry because Ihadbeentokindergartenago. Actually my mother went tohome soonafte

20、rforsheknewI wouldbeallright. It was enjoyable time formeasI gottoknowmynew classmates. Theteacherwasvery busy writedownourinformationsotheyhadplentyoftime. Inthe meantime some children continued to sob when their parents looked in anxious through the windows.易错点整理：_模拟30得分：_I likeeatingfruitand vege

21、tables what are of greatbenefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they also help us lose weight. I usedto hatevegetables, butfollowedthedoctors advice, I gradually kicked a badhabit. Justastheold sayinggoes, “Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.” Therefore, therearesti

22、llmanychildrenwhodontlikefruitor a vegetables. Onthe contrary, influencedbythisorthatkindofadvertisement, manychildren werecrazyaboutjunkfood. Consequently, webecomeweaker and weaker insteadofgettingstrong. Inmyopinionwemusttakeactionchange it易错点整理：_模拟31得分：_One day last month, a group of Chinese stu

23、dent arrived in Brisbane. I was one of them. After say goodbye to my dear parents at Beijing Airport, I started my long journey. That was my first journey abroad. How exciting I felt when I got on abroad. We left Shanghai to Hong Kong to change to another plane to Merbourne, second largest city in A

24、ustralia. From there we flew to Brisbane, that is the capital city of Queensland, Australia. We were exchange students and send to the country by their government to learn English in Brisbane for twelve months. From the first few lessons, we found the teachers there really worked hardly, and I am su

25、re of that everything will go well in the next months.易错点整理：_模拟32得分：_I hadan unusual experience today.In the morning, I was walking along a street while I saw a lady knocked down by truck. Butthedriverjustdroveaway. Withouthesitations, I rushedacross the street to help her. I put her on my backand carryhertoahospitalnearby. Onreachingthehospital, however, she startedtoaccusemeofknockingherdownanddemand