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雅思写作素材Technologymedia

Technology&media类

科技类

Peopletodaycanperformtheeverydaytaskssuchasshopping,bankingorevenbusinesstransactions,withoutmeetingothersface-to-face.Whateffectswillthisphenomenonhaveonindividualsandsocietyasawhole?

开头段（不少于3+1句）

TheinteractivityoftheInternetandthemobilephonehasenabledamultitudeofpeopletopurchasetheirdesireditemsorpaytheirphonebillswithoutsteppingoutoftheirofficesorhomes.Andmanyotherscanevenregisterfortestsorsigncontractsonline.Thissweepingtrendofgoingabouteverydaybusinessinthevirtualworldhastriggeredamarkeddeclineinface-to-facecontactbetweenpeople.Thus,itisessentialthatweidentifytheimplicationofthistrendonbothindividualsandsocietyasawhole.

主体段1（不少于1+6句）

Theimpactofthisphenomenononindividualsisprofound.First,Individualefficiencyinbusinesstransactionandbankingwillbegreatlyenhanced.Andthosewhodreadshoppingaresparedthechoreofbrowsingaroundinshops.Secondly,theincreasinglysedentarylifestylewillengenderahigherincidenceofailment.Moreoverweightpeoplemeansmorepatientssufferingfromcardiovasculardiseasessuchasveinhardening,diabetesandhypertension.Thirdly,theabsenceofface-to-facecontactmayinducedistrustbetweenbusinesspartners.AninherentsenseofdisbeliefisapttoruinatelecommunicatednegotiationwhennegotiatorscanonlyseevideosofeachothertransmittedviatheInternet.

主体段2（不少于1+6句）

Thistrendalsohaswidespreadrepercussionsonsocietyasawhole.Inthefirstplace,theburgeoninge-commercewill,doubtless,boostcorporateefficiencyimmeasurably.Andhigherefficiencymeansmoreearningsandlesscostsforbusinesses.Inthesecondplace,onlinefraud,beitbankingortrading,retailorwholesale,issuretoaboundinthecyberspace.Wemustsearchforpracticableandeffectualmeansofcurbingit.Inthethirdplace,theproliferationofe-commercemayexacerbateman'soverdependenceontechnology.Andthatcanrenderourlivesunspontaneousandourtempooflifetoofastandfurious.

结尾段（不少于2句）

Insum,thereisnodenyingthatthevirtualworldisexertinginfluenceonourlivesinvariousways.Itisakeythatwetakeadvantageoftheupsideofthistrendandinthemeantimemitigateitsdownsideasmuchaspossible.

8分范文科技类

Manypeopleworkathomeusingmoderntechnologytoday.Somepeoplethinkonlyworkersbenefitfromit,nottheemployers.Towhatextenddoyouagreeordisagree?

折衷式，四段式，大负小正

Progressionsintelecommunicationstechnologyhaveenabledthepracticeoftelecommuting.Whichmeansworkercanconducttheirassignedtaskswithouthavetocommutebackandforthtoworkregularly.Thisemergingworkingpatternhasprofoundimplicationonourworkandlife.Someassertthatonlyworkers,nottheemployers,canbebeneficiariesoftelecommuting.Personally,Ithinktheirviewhasbothmeritanddemerit.

Granted,telecommutingcanbringaboutnumerousbenefitstotheemployees.Tobeginwith,employeesdonothavetolivewiththeconstantfearthattheirbossmaylookovertheirshoulder,astheirworkissupervisedfromfarawayandinmorelaissezfairefashions.Thereisnoneedforthemtogetsuperwell-groomedandtheycan"slackoff"abitwhenthework-inducedstressistoointensetobear.Furthermore,telecommutingcanspareworkerstheeverydaychoreoftravelingbackandforthtowork.Andthis,inturn,helpsthemtocutdownoncostsofbusfare,fuelorextravagantworkclothes.

Yetontheotherhand,itwouldbeerroneousifwefailtoacknowledgethatemployerscanprofitfromtelecommuting,too.Inthefirstplace,lessconstraint,lesspeerpressureatwork,noofficepoliticsandmoreflexibleschedulescanboostemployeemoraleandenhanceproductivity.Empiricalevidenceaboundsinthisrespectthatmoreoccupationalfreedomcan,moreoftenthannot,leadtostrongervocationalmotivationandmoreinnovativeideas.Inthesecondplace,telecommutingisaneconomicaloptionfortheemployer.Atelecommutingworkforcecanhelpbusiness-ownerssubstantiallycurtailtheoverheadcosts,suchasthecostsofrentandutilities.Thirdly,thefactthatworkerscantelecommuteviatheworldwidecommunicationsnetworkallowsemployertorecruitpeoplefromremotelocationsorevenhalfwayaroundtheglobe.Thismarkedlyaugmentsthelaborpoolofbusinesses.

Toconclude,Iconcedethattelecommutingcanbringaboutavarietyofboonstoemployees.However,itwouldbeunjustifiableifweoverlookedtheadvantagestelecommutingcanspawnontheemployers'side.Onbalance,Iamconvincedthatweshouldstrivetoseekoutthemosteffectiveapproachtoexploitthiswin-winsituation.

8分范文媒体类

媒体类

Wecangetknowledgefromnews.Butsomepeoplethinkweshouldnottrustthejournalists.Whatdoyouthinkaretheimportantqualitiesthatajournalistshouldhave？

题目要求分析现象一个方面,写成5段式

开头段3+1:

paraphrasethetopic+thesisstatement（转述题目+主旨句）

转述题目（不少于3句）

Intheinformationera,newsplaysacrucialroleinourwork,leisureaswellasfamilylife.Itinformsusaboutthecurrentworldaffairsandaffordsusknowledge,entertainmentandconversationpieces.Ontheotherhand,thecredibilityofnewsandjournalistsisahighlycontroversialissue.Hence,itisessentialthatwedeterminethemostimportantqualitiesofatrustworthyjournalist.

主体段第一段1+3:

topicsentence+3supportingsentence（主题句+3句论证）

（主题句）Firstandforemost,atrustworthyjournalistmustbeanindividualwithhonestyandintegrity.（论证主题句3句）Inthisdayandage,thereareahostoftemptationstolurethereporterintofabricatingstories,whenconfrontedwithsuchtemptations,onlyprofessionalswithhighmoralvaluescanadheretotheircodeofethics.Hence,thecouragetoalwayspursueandexposethetruthsaboutnewsworthyeventsisreallycrucialtoajournalist.

主体段第二段1+3topicsentence+3supportingsentence（主题句+3句论证）

（主题句）Secondly,determinationandtenacitydistinguishfinejournalistsfrommediocreones.（论证主题句3句）Intoday'sworld,regardedastheconscienceofsociety,agreatmanyjournalistsfinditincreasinglydifficultforthemtocomeupwithfactualnewsstories.Itisnotunusualthatajournalistreceivesseverewarningsorevendeaththreatsfromgangmembersorbusinesstycoonswhentheysetouttotracecrimesandbusinessscandals.Hence,ittakesimmensedeterminationandperseverancetobeagenuinelydependablejournalist.

主体段第三段1+3:

topicsentence+3supportingsentence（主题句+3句论证）

（主题句）Lastly,atrustworthyjournalistmustbeabletopresentkeenobservationsonthecoveredevents.（论证主题句3句）Toproducetrulyinstructivecoverage,areportermustpossessthecapacitytoanalyzeandsynthesizetheinformationhe/shegathers.Thisrequirespenetratinginsightsandoutstandinganalyticalskills.Onlywhenanindividualmeetssuchrequirementscanhe/shecreatein-depthcoverageofevents.

结尾段2句

Toconclude,tobeareliablesourceofinformation,ajournalistmustpossessself-discipline,tenacityandinsights.Otherwise,hisprofessionalismwouldbequestionableindeed.

7分范文媒体类

媒体类

Somepeoplecontendthatadvertisingonlyhaspositiveimpactonsociety.Towhatextenddoyouagreeordisagreewiththeirviews

折衷式写法，四段式

开头段，（不少于4句）

Advertisinghasbecomeoneofthemostpervasiveindustriesinpresent-daysociety.Today,vastbillboardshaveturnedintoanindispensablepartofourcityscape.Moreover,theproliferationofTVcommercial,websiteadbannerandflyeralsoexertsprofoundinfluenceonourlives.Somearguethatadvertisinghasonlybeneficialimpactonourlives.Personally,Ithinktheirviewhasbothmeritanddemerit.

主体段1（小方面,不少于5句）

Granted,advertisingmaycarrysomedrawbacks.Firstandforemost,emailspammingcouldfillupyouremailboxinnotime.AndmanyofthejunkemailswouldgetyourPCinfectedwithviruses,wormorTrojanhorses.Furthermore,todayaconsiderableproportionofadvertisementsmaybefabricated.Theyconveymisleadinginformationthatdefraudspeopleoftheirmoney.

主体段2（大方面，不少于7句）

However,theboonsadvertisingcanbringabouttoourlivesfaroutweighitsdisadvantages.Inthefirstplace,advertisementsgetuswell-informedaboutthelatestproducts.Theyhelpusnarrowdownthechoiceonourshoppinglistsandmakeshoppingmorecost-effectiveandlesstime-consuming.Inthesecondplace,elaborateadvertisementscanbeatrueartform.Therecanbenodenyingthatgenuinelycreativeadscanbrighterupourlivesimmensely.Lastbutnotleast,non-profitadvertisingintheprintaswellastheelectronicmediacanmotivatepeopletocontributetooursociety.Withthehelpofsuchads,charitiesandenvironmentalconservationistscanraiseenoughfundingforthepoorandenvironmentalpreservation.

结尾段（不少于三句）

Inthefinalanalysis,Iconcedethatadvertisingdoesnotcomewithoutsomebanes.However,theproofadvertisingfaroutweighitscons.Onbalance,Iamconvincedthatweshoulddoistogetthisindustrybetter-regulatedandensurethatthisindustrycanaffordusevenmoreblessinginyearstocome.

Technology&media词汇

尖端技术cutting-edged（adj）technology

信息爆炸informationexplosion/informationoverload

信息时代theinformationage/theinformationera

互联网被广泛使用theproliferationoftheInternet

科技创新及发展technologicalinnovations/inventions/advances/progressions（nouns）

提高效率augment/enhance/boostefficiency

提高生产效率augment/enhance/boostproductivity

减少人力机器（计算机发明之前技术）labor-savingmachinery

取代人力机器labor-replacingmachinery

自动化automation（noun）/automated（adj）

生物技术biotechnology

克隆cloning（noun）clone（verb）

远程通讯telecommunications（noun）

太空探索（名词）spaceexploration

人基因构成one'sgeneticmakeup/one'sDNAprogramming