关于四季的写作材料.docx

关于四季的写作材料.docx

《关于四季的写作材料.docx》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《关于四季的写作材料.docx（6页珍藏版）》请在冰豆网上搜索。

关于四季的写作材料

ThePowerofHumour

Manyyearslater,Icanstillclearlyrecallthatclass.

Whenthebellforclassstartedringing,IhadjustfinishedtellinganinterestingjoketoJane,thegirlwhosatrightbehindme.Iwasalwaysconsideredaverygoodstory-teller,butJaneseemedtohavenoreactiontomystory.Shejustsatthereandremainedindifferent,asifshehadnotheardevenawordofmystory.Ifeltratherfrustratedandsaid,“Allright,Iwon’tsayanymore.Theteacheriscoming,”andthenturnedround.

Alittlewhileaftertheteacherhadbeguntheclass,asoundliketheleakingofatyrewasheardintheclassroom.Atfirst,itwasalmostunnoticeable,butsoonitbecamelouderandlouder.Andeverybodycouldhearunmistakablythatitwassomeonegiggling,andbegantolookforthesourceofthelaughter.AsIlookedaround,IwassosurprisedwhenIfounditwasJanewhowasgiggling.Shecouldhardlycontrolherselfandwasshakingwithlaughter.Alleyesturnedtowardsher,includingtheteacher’sfuriousones,butshedidn’tnoticethem.Shejustlaughedandlaughed.Suddenly,theteacherroared:

“Jane,stopthat!

Stoplaughing.”

AtthistimeJanestoppedlaughingandawoketotheembarrassingsituationshewasin.Shestooduptimidlywithherfaceturningred.

“I…I’msorry,sir,”shesaidnervously,almostintears.

“Justgetoutoftheclassroom!

Understand?

Getoutofhere!

”theteacherwastooangrytocalmdown.

Tearstrickleddownthepoorgirl’scheeks,thendownherlovelybright-coloureddress.Shesteppedoutoftheclassroom,sobbingsosadlythatyoucouldnotimagineshehadlaughedheartilyonlyafewminutesago.

ThePowerofHumour

Para1:

Manyyearslater,Icanstillclearlyrecallthatclass.

Revised:

Itwasaneventinmyschoollife.Icanstillrecallitvividlymanyyearsafterwards.

Para2:

Whenthebellforclassstartedringing,IhadjustfinishedtellinganinterestingjoketoJane,thegirlwhosatrightbehindme.Revised:

ThebellforclasswasringingwhenIjustfinishedtellingahumourousstorytoJanesittingrightbehindme.Iwasalwaysconsideredaverygoodstory-teller,butJaneseemedtohavenoreactiontomystory.Shejustsatthereandremainedindifferent,asifshehadnotheardevenawordofmystory.Ifeltratherfrustratedandsaid,“Allright,Iwon’tsayanymore.Theteacheriscoming,”Revised:

“Well,forgetit.”andthenturnedround.

Para3:

Alittlewhileaftertheteacherhadbeguntheclass,asoundliketheleakingofatyrewasheardintheclassroom.Revised:

Ahissingnoisearose.Atfirst,itwasalmostunnoticeable,Revised:

Atfirstitdidnotcatchanyattention,but…butsoonitbecamelouderandlouder.Andeverybodycouldhearunmistakablythatitwassomeonegiggling,andbegantolookforthesourceofthelaughter.AsIlookedaround,IwassosurprisedwhenIfounditwasJanewhowasgiggling.Revised:

IlookedaroundonlytofinditwasJane…Shecouldhardlycontrolherselfandwasshakingwithlaughter.Alleyesturnedtowardsher,includingtheteacher’sfuriousones,butshedidn’tnoticethem.Shejustlaughedandlaughed.Suddenly,theteacherroared:

“Jane,stopthat!

Stoplaughing.”

Para4:

AtthistimeJanestoppedlaughingandawoketotheembarrassingsituationshewasin.Shestooduptimidlywithherfaceturningred.Revised:

Shameflushedhercheeksandtimidlysherosetoherfeet.

Para5:

“I…I’msorry,sir,”shesaidnervously,almostintears.

Para6:

“Justgetoutoftheclassroom!

Understand?

Getoutofhere!

”Revised:

“You’dbetterleavetheroom,anddonotcomebacktillyoustopthatnuisance,”commandedtheteacher.theteacherwastooangrytocalmdown.

Para7:

Tearstrickleddownthepoorgirl’scheeks,thendownherlovelybright-coloureddress.Shesteppedoutoftheclassroom,sobbingsosadlythatyoucouldnotimagineshehadlaughedheartilyonlyafewminutesago.Iknowitwasallmyfault.Thepowerofhumourissoirresistible.

AWalkontheSeashore

Notveryfarfrommyhouseliesaseashoreinthesouth.Wecangothereonfootinabouttenminutes.Insummereveningswhenthesunissetting,myfatherlikestotakemewithmysisterstohaveawalkalongtheseashore.Thoughwedonotlikethelonelinessoftheplace,yetwearegladtoenjoythecoolnessofseabreezeandthebeautifulsceneryofthenature.

Thebeachisratherroughwithmanybigandsmallstonesonthesurface.Thesandisalsoverybiginformandbrownincolor.Atthetimeoflowtide,wecanseethereefsappearingoutofthewater.Itisnotfitforswimmerstocomeheretobathe,soitisquietallovertheyear.

Moreover,whenthetideislow,wemayseealsosomepoorboysofthenearbyvillages.Theycarrybamboobasketsontheirbacksorundertheirarms.Runningonthesolitarybeach,theyaretryingtopickupthesmallcrabsamongtherocks.Theytakethemhomeforfoodortheysellthemforalittlemoney.

Onthesea,wecanseethedistantfishingboatssailingbacktotheharbourtoanchorthereatnight.Thesettingsunlookslikeanimmenseyolk.Theskyturnsintoorangeredandthesurfaceoftheseaisglitteringlikeasheetofgoldleaf.Thewavesbeatingattherockssoundlikemusic.Afterall,awalkontheseashoreisalwaysenjoyable.

1.Dominantimpression

景—情（交融）；景：

绘生、绘色；景—人

2.Concretedetails

3.Logicaldevelopment

第一段：

鸟瞰

第二段：

近景

第三段：

人物

第四段：

远景

景（Scenery）

春（Spring）

Flowersblossominariotofcolour.百花争艳

Springreturnstotheearth./Springishereagain./Springhascomebacktotheearth.春回大地

Awarmlyspringscenery./Springfillstheairwithwarmth.

春光和煦

Agardenfullofthebeautyofspring.春色满园

Flowersblossominwarmspring.春暖花开

Aradiantandenchantingspringscene.明媚的春天

夏（Spring）

Thescorchingsun赤日炎炎

Earlysummer初夏

Theintenseheatofsummer酷暑

Difficulttoenduretheintenseheatofsummer酷暑难熬

Theheightofsummer盛夏

秋（Autumn）

Earlyautumn初秋

Goldenautumn金秋

Thebeginningofautumn立秋

Lateautumn/lateintheautumn晚秋

Autumnwind秋风

Autumnscenery秋色

Theautumnskyisclearandtheairiscrisp.秋高气爽

Charmingautumnscenery秋色宜人

Autumnwindclearsawayfallenleaves.秋风扫落叶

冬（Winter）

Earlywinter初冬

Chillywinter/severewinter寒冬

Latewinter深冬

Hardwinter/rigorouswinter/severewinter严冬

早、中、晚（morning,noonandevening）

Firstraysofmorningsun晨曦

Theeastisdawning./Theeasternskyisturningfish-bellygrey.东方发白

Beforedawn拂晓

Thedaywasjustdawning.天刚破晓

Withthescorchingsundirectlyoverhead烈日当头

Thesettingsunisgoingdown.夕阳西下

Almostdusk将近黄昏

Deepeningshadesofdusk/Theduskisgathering.

暮色苍茫

Lateatnight/inthedepthofnight深夜、三更半夜

Allisquiet./Silencereignssupreme./Allsoundsarehushed.

万籁俱寂

日、月、星（thesun,themoonandthestars）

Thesunisshiningfiercely.骄阳似火

Theskywasfullofstars.满天星斗

Heatwavesblowonone’sface.热浪扑面

Theredsunisrisingovertheeasternhorizon.旭日东升

Glowingraysshineinalldirections.霞光万道

Scatteredalloverlikestarsinthesky.星罗棋布

Themoonhanginginaclearbluesky.月悬碧空

Themoonwasshiningasbrightasday.月明如昼

Afullmoon一轮明月

Anewmoon一弯明月

TheMilkyWay银河

冰、雪、霜（ice,snow,frost）

Thinice薄冰

Allcoverediniceandsnow/aworldoficeandsnow

冰天雪地

Ice-dissolvingandsnow-melting冰消雪化

Thefirstsnow初雪

Itwassnowingthickandfast./Thesnowfellinawhirl.

大雪纷纷

Snowingreatflakes/largesnowflakes鹅毛大雪

Lightsnow小雪

Accumulatedsnow积雪

Snowflakesaredancing.雪花飞舞

风、雨、雷、电（wind,rain,thunder,lightning）

Violentstorm暴风骤雨

Thenorthwindhowls.北风呼啸

Springbreezecaressingone’sface春风拂面

Headwind顶头风

Theraincomingdowninsheets大于滂沱

Thethunderroaredandthelightningflashed.电闪雷鸣

Therustleofleavesinthewind风吹草动

Finerainwithsoftwind/agentlebreezeandamildrain

和风细雨

Therumbleofthunder雷声轰鸣

Drizzle/finedrizzlingrain牛毛细雨

Cloudyanddrizzlyfordaysonend/anunbrokenspellofwetweather阴雨连绵