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高三英语写作失分点讲解

Overview

教案撰稿人

完稿时间

审核人

审核时间

课程进度

第次课

课程标题

注意高考失分点

学生对象:

高三

教学目标

1.准确掌握写作常见失分点

教学安排一览

事项

时间

1

复习上次课的内容

5分钟

2

批改并讲评上次课的家庭作业

10分钟

3

引入本课内容-

10分钟

4

讲解重点考点及相关习题

60分钟

5

课堂巩固练习及评讲

30分钟

6

总结本次课所学内容及布置回家作业

5分钟

7

8

9

10

Review

1,对上次课内容的回顾

2,对上次课作业的评讲

 

Introduction

Handout1快速阅读

BeautyandBodyImageintheMedia

Imagesoffemalebodiesareeverywhere.Women—andtheirbodyparts—selleverythingfromfoodtocars.Popularfilmandtelevisionactressesarebecomingyounger,tallerandthinner.Somehaveevenbeenknowntofaintonthesetfromlackoffood.Women’smagazinesarefullofarticlesurgingthatiftheycanjustlosethoselasttwentypounds,they’llhaveitall—theperfectmarriage,lovingchildren,greatsex,andarewardingcareer.

Whyarestandardsofbeautybeingimposedonwomen,themajorityofwhomarenaturallylargerandmorematurethananyofthemodels?

Theroots,someanalystssay,areeconomic.Bypresentinganidealdifficulttoachieveandmaintain,thecosmeticanddietproductindustriesareassuredofgrowthandprofits.

Andit’snoaccidentthatyouthisincreasinglypromoted,alongwiththinness,asanessentialcriterionofbeauty.Ifnotallwomenneedtoloseweight,forsurethey’reallaging,saystheQuebecActionNetworkforWomen’sHealthinits2001report.And,accordingtotheindustry,ageisadisasterthatneedstobedealtwith.

Thestakesarehuge.Ontheonehand,womenwhoareinsecureabouttheirbodiesaremorelikelytobuybeautyproducts,newclothes,anddietaids.Itisestimatedthatthedietindustryaloneisworthanywherebetween40to100billion(U.S.)ayearsellingtemporaryweightloss(90to95%ofdietersregainthelostweight).Ontheotherhand,researchindicatesthatexposuretoimagesofthin,young,air-brushedfemalebodiesislinkedtodepression,lossofself-esteemandthedevelopmentofunhealthyeatinghabitsinwomenandgirls.

TheAmericanresearchgroupAnorexiaNervosa&RelatedEatingDisorders,Inc.saysthatoneoutofeveryfourcollege-agedwomenusesunhealthymethodsofweightcontrol—includingfasting,skippingmeals,excessiveexercise,laxative(泻药)abuse,andself-inducedvomiting.Thepressuretobethinisalsoaffectingyounggirls:

theCanadianWomen’sHealthNetworkwarnsthatweightcontrolmeasuresarenowbeingtakenbygirlsasyoungas5and6.Americanstatisticsaresimilar.Severalstudies,suchasoneconductedbyMarikaTiggemannandLevinaClarkin2006titled“AppearanceCultureinNine-to12-Year-OldGirls:

MediaandPeerInfluencesonBodyDissatisfaction,”indicatethatnearlyhalfofallpreadolescentgirlswishtobethinner,andasaresulthaveengagedinadietorareawareoftheconceptofdieting.In2003,Teenmagazinereportedthat35percentofgirls6to12yearsoldhavebeenonatleastonediet,andthat50to70percentofnormalweightgirlsbelievetheyareoverweight.Overallresearchindicatesthat90%ofwomenaredissatisfiedwiththeirappearanceinsomeway.

MediaactivistJeanKilbourneconcludesthat,“Womenaresoldtothedietindustrybythemagazineswereadandthetelevisionprogramswewatch,almostallofwhichmakeusfeelanxiousaboutourweight.”

UnattainableBeauty

Perhapsmostdisturbingisthefactthatmediaimagesoffemalebeautyareunattainableforallbutaverysmallnumberofwomen.ResearchersgeneratingacomputermodelofawomanwithBarbie-dollproportions,forexample,foundthatherbackwouldbetooweaktosupporttheweightofherupperbody,andherbodywouldbetoonarrowtocontainmorethanhalfaliverandafewcentimetersofbowel.Arealwomanbuiltthatwaywouldsufferfromchronicdiarrhea(慢性腹泻)andeventuallydiefrommalnutrition.JillBarad,PresidentofMattel(whichmanufacturesBarbie),estimatedthat99%ofgirlsaged3to10yearsoldownatleastoneBarbiedoll.

Still,thenumberofreallifewomenandgirlswhoseekasimilarlyunderweightbodyisepidemic,andtheycansufferequallydevastatinghealthconsequences.In2006itwasestimatedthatupto450,000Canadianwomenwereaffectedbyaneatingdisorder.

TheCultureofThinness

Researchersreportthatwomen’smagazineshavetenandone-halftimesmoreadsandarticlespromotingweightlossthanmen’smagazinesdo,andoverthree-quartersofthecoversofwomen’smagazinesincludeatleastonemessageabouthowtochangeawoman’sbodilyappearance—bydiet,exerciseorcosmeticsurgery.

Televisionandmoviesreinforcetheimportanceofathinbodyasameasureofawoman’sworth.CanadianresearcherGregoryFoutsreportsthatoverthree-quartersofthefemalecharactersinTVsituationcomediesareunderweight,andonlyoneintwentyareaboveaverageinsize.Heavieractressestendtoreceivenegativecommentsfrommalecharactersabouttheirbodies(“Howaboutwearingasack?

”),and80percentofthesenegativecommentsarefollowedbycannedaudiencelaughter.

Therehavebeeneffortsinthemagazineindustrytobuck(抵制,反抗)thetrend.ForseveralyearstheQuebecmagazineCoupdePoucehasconsistentlyincludedfull-sizedwomenintheirfashionpagesandChâtelainehaspledgednottotouchupphotosandnottoincludemodelslessthan25yearsofage.InMadrid,oneoftheworld’sbiggestfashioncapitals,ultra-thinmodelswerebannedfromtherunwayin2006.FurthermoreSpainhasrecentlyundergoneaprojectwiththeaimtostandardizeclothingsizesthroughusingauniqueprocessinwhichalaserbeamisusedtomeasurereallifewomen’sbodiesinordertofindthemosttruetolifemeasurement.

Ethics

Anotherissueistherepresentationofethnicallydiversewomeninthemedia.A2008studyconductedbyJuanitaCovertandTravisDixontitled“AChangingView:

RepresentationandEffectsofthePortrayalofWomenofColorinMainstreamWomen’sMagazines”foundthatalthoughtherewasanincreaseintherepresentationofwomenofcolour,overallwhitewomenwereoverrepresentedinmainstreamwomen’smagazinesfrom1999to2004.Self-ImprovementorSelf-Destruction?

Thebarrageofmessagesaboutthinness,dietingandbeautytells“ordinary”womenthattheyarealwaysinneedofadjustment—andthatthefemalebodyisanobjecttobeperfected.

JeanKilbournearguesthattheoverwhelmingpresenceofmediaimagesofpainfullythinwomenmeansthatrealwomen’sbodieshavebecomeinvisibleinthemassmedia.Therealtragedy,Kilbourneconcludes,isthatmanywomeninternalizethesestereotypes,andjudgethemselvesbythebeautyindustry’sstandards.Womenlearntocomparethemselvestootherwomen,andtocompetewiththemformaleattention.Thisfocusonbeautyanddesirability“effectivelydestroysanyawarenessandactionthatmighthelptochangethatclimate.”

1.Women’smagazinesarefullofarticlestourgewomento___________.

A)eatlesssweetfoodC)marryarichhusband

B)loseweightD)haveatleasttwokids

2.Thecosmeticanddietproductindustriesgainprofitsby____________.

A)exaggeratingthegoodnessabouttheirproducts

B)targetingatchildrenandfemales

C)presentinganidealimagedifficulttoachieve

D)distributingfreesamplesfromhometohome

3.CanadianWomen’shealthNetworkwarnsthatweightcontrolmeasuresarenowbeingtakenbygirls_____________.

A)atage5or6C)atage13or14

B)atage9or10D)atage16or17

4.In2003,Teenmagazinereportedthat____________percentofnormalweightgirlsbelievetheyareoverweight.

A)35to50C)50to70

B)50D)90

5.ResearchersfoundthatarealwomanwithBarbie-dollproportionswould_____________.

A)sufferfromheartdiseaseC)liveamorerewardinglife

B)beverypopularwithmalesD)diefrommalnutrition

6.Televisionandmoviesemphasizethatawoman’sworthcanbejudgedby_____________.

A)thecosmeticssheusesC)thethinnessofherbody

B)thejewelryshewearsD)thewealthofherhusband

7.Spainhasrecentlyundergoneaprojectto_____________.

A)includefull-sizedwomeninitsfashionmagazines

B)standardizeclothingsizes

C)banultra-thinmodelsfromtherunway

D)promoteweightlossamongmen

8.Inmainstreamwomen’smagazinesfrom1999to2004,______________wereoverrepresented.

9.JeanKilbourneconcludesthatmanywomenjudgethemselvesby_______________________.

10.Thefocuson___________________________destroysanyawarenessandactionthatmighthelptochangethetrend.

Thekeys:

1-7BCACDCB

8.overallwhitewoman

9.thebeautyindustry'sstandards

10.thebeautydesirability

 

Presentation-写作失分点

解析:

典型例子2

解析:

比较下面这篇满分作业,它从以下方面论述了参加集体舞比赛的理由。

1>能够减轻学习压力,活跃气氛

2>舞蹈不仅创造美,还锻炼了身体

3>在排练的过程中,可以培养交往能力

4>增强凝聚力,培养集体荣誉感

典型例子3

古人云:

“天生我材必有用”(theremustbeauseformytalent).通过描述你生活中一件事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人

 

学生习作:

Chinesehaveaoldsayingthat“theremustbeausefortalent”.Ithinkitistrue.WhyIthinkso?

Becauseofaexperienceofme

解析:

这篇作文除了较多的语法和拼写错误(划线部分)外,所举的例子似乎不能说明题目要求,讲的是通过努力做成某事。

对于如何体现天生我材必有用而言,有些离题。

典型例子4

学生习作:

解析:

这篇作文之所以得高分,因为它结构严谨,遣词造句讲究地道,另外,一个主要原因是,该考生认真审题,以题目中的要求为指导,仔细读懂表格,准备把握,无一遗漏地表达所传递的信息。

典型例子5

分析:

学生习作:

失分点二:

构思不周

真题点拨1:

请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后,对家庭,环境和经济可能产生的影响。

学生习作:

解析:

真题点拨2:

学生习作:

解析:

真题点拨3:

解析:

 

失分点三:

立意不高

学生习作:

解析:

真题点拨2

解析:

 

真题点拨3:

学生习作:

解析:

真题点拨4:

 

学生习作:

解析:

FocusedPractice

Handout2提高练习

 

范文:

Handout3提高练习

 

参考作文:

 

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