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优秀作文温室的花朵

暑期考研写作讲义连载（八）——第七部分优秀作文范文精选（十一

范文十一

Directions:

Studythefollowingsetofdrawingscarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould

1.describethesetofdrawings,interpretitsmeaning,and

2.pointoutitsimplicationsinourlife.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）

温室花朵经不起考验

（一）

Itgoes（vi.表达）withoutsayingthatthedrawingsaimatrevealingacommonandseriousprobleminChina:

howtoeducateandcultivate（培养）theyoung.Inthefirstpicture,theflowerbloomswellinthegreenhousedespitethestormoutside.

不用说,图画旨在揭示一个常见和严重的问题

中国:

如何教育和培养年轻人。

在第一张图片中,花朵在温室绽放,不管外面的风暴。

Onthecontrary,itperishesunderthestormwhenputoutside.Itisobviousthatthefloweringreenhousecan'twithstandwindandrains.

Nowadays,theyoungergenerationinChina,liketheflowerinthegreenhouse,livesunderthefullprotectionoftheirparents.Parentswanttoshowalltheirlovetotheirchildren.Theygiveallthebestthingstheycanaffordtotheirchildrenanddonotlettheirchildrendoanythingathome.Self-centerednessandarbitrarinesshavebecomeatraitoftheyoungergeneration.Onceleavingtheirhome,manyyoungpeoplecannotmakealivingoftheirown.Theygetlostwhensteppingintothecomplexrealityandcannotfaceanyhardshipsanddifficulties.

Childeducationhasbecomeoneofthemostpopulartopicsdiscussednotonlybyeducationalexperts,butalsobypeopleinallwalksoflife.Thefailureofchildeducationdoesmoreharmtothedevelopmentofoursocietyandourcivilizationthantothechildrenthemselves.Thus,itishightimethatparents,educatorsandourgovernmentmadeconcertedeffortstoputanendtothissituation.

（二）

Thesetofdrawingsabovevividlydepictsthedestinyofaflowerindifferentcircumstances.Asisshowninthefirstcartoon,theflowerisplacedinacomfortablegreenhousethatsheltersitfromthethreateninglighteningandstorm.Withpropertemperature,moistureandfertilizer,theflowerisgrowinginfullbloom.Onthecontrary,whenremovedfromthegreenhouseandexposedtothedrivingrain,theflowersoonfadesandwithers,withthepetalscastaboutonthegrounds.

Tobeginwith,thepurposeofthedrawingsistoshowusthattheflowergrowinginthegreenhousecannotwithstandthetestofthestorm,yetthesymbolicmeaningssubtlyconveyedshouldbetakenmoreseriously.Thedelicateflowerisnaturallyassociatedwithyoungpeople,tobespecific,theonlychildreninourcurrentsociety;thegreenhouseepitomizesparents'dotingcareandabundantmaterialsuppliesthatcanshieldthechildrenfromthestorms,ortheharshreality.Oncetheyoungpeoplebegintoseekindependenceandacceptchallengesfromtherealworld,theyarefoundtoospoiledtobestrongenoughinthefaceofdifficulties.

Accordingly,itisvitalforustoderivepositiveimplicationsfromthesethought-provokingdrawings.Ontheonehand,wecanfrequentlyusethemtoenlightentheyouthtobemoreindependentinlife.Ontheotherhand,parentsshouldbesensibleenoughtogivetheirchildrenmorefreedomtodealwithtroublesandproblems.Onlybyundergoingmorechallengesandtoilsinadversitycanyoungpeoplecultivatestrongpersonalityandability,andonlyinthiswaycantheybecomewinnersinthiscompetitiveworld.（272） 文都教育在线：

 范文十二

Directions:

Studythefollowingdrawingcarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould

1.describethedrawing,

2.interpretitsmeaning,and

3.supportyourviewwithexamples.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）

 Itisvividlydepictedinthecartoonthataboyisrunningalongtheracetrackwithpainstakingefforts,sweatpouringdownhisface.Afteralongjourney,heismakingthefinalspurttowardthefinishingline,withstrongdeterminationtobecomethechampion.Itseemsthathecouldrestforawhiletoenjoytheecstasyofvictory.However,straightaheadliesasignwhichindicatesanew"startingpoint"andurgeshimtocontinuerushingtothenextdestination.

Undoubtedlythecartoonconveysthemeaningthatlifeisliketheprocessofrunninginwhichoneshouldmakeconstanteffortsandneverstopmakingprogress.Owingtothequickeningpaceoflife,competitiongoesincreasinglyfierceinallwalksoflife,stimulatingeveryonetopursueonegoalafteranother.Onceapersonstopsmakingprogress,hecanhardlymaintainhispastgloryandsurviveinthiscompetitiveworld.AsDengXiaoping,thegreatChineseleadersaid,"developmentistheonlyway."Nomatterhowpowerfulacountryis,nomatterhowsuccessfulaspecificinstitution,itwilldefinitelyseeknewdevelopmentinhighspeed.Generallyspeaking,neitheracountrynorapersoncanremainstagnant.

Acaseinpointisthesuccessfullaunchingof"ShenzhouVSpacecraft"whichsetschinainahighpositionofaviationandspaceflight.AlthoughitmeansagreatachievementforusChinese,wearefacingnewchallengesinthefutureandneedtodofurtherresearchinspacetechnology.Anotherillustrationiscloselyrelatedtous,theexaminees.Ifwepassthistestandarefortunatelyadmittedbyauniversity,weshallnotstopmakingefforts.Instead,weareconfrontedwiththechallengeofconqueringthedifficultgraduatecourses.Westillhavetostriveforsuccessinourfutureacademicstudy,employmentandcareer.Onthewhole,these exampleseffectivelyclarifythesayingthat"destinationisanotherstartingpoint."（317）

 范文十三

Directions:

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshouldfirstdescribethedrawingtheninterpretthemeaning,andgiveyourcommentonit. 文都教育在线：

                                养老“足球赛”

Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoon,fourchildrenareplayinga"footballmatch"oftakingcareoftheiragedfather.Eachofthemstandsinadifferentcornerofafootballfield.Theeldestsonkickedoutthefatherwiththeotherthreechildrenguardingtheirgoals.

Thepurposeofthedrawingistoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtothemistreatmentofseniorcitizens.Firstandforemost,somepeopleshirktheirdutyoffinanciallysupportingtheiroldandhelplessparentsduetotheirowninterests.Furthermore,someelderlypeopleareoftenill-treatedbytheirownchildrenandcannotleadanormallife.Lastbutnotleast,whilesomeyoungpeopleenjoyacomfortablelife,theirparentsareneglectedandreducedtoutterpoverty.

Itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures.Tobeginwith,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetoseverelypunishthosewhoshuntheresponsibilitiesofcaringtheirparents.Inaddition,weshouldcultivatetheawarenessoftheyoungthatrespectingtheoldhasalwaysbeenthetraditionalvirtueofChineseculture.Onlyinthiswaycanwecurbthecurrentevilphenomenonrevealedinthepicture.（198）

范文十四

Directions:

         A.Studythefollowingcartooncarefullyandwriteanessayinabout200words.

        B.YouressaymustbewrittenclearlyonANSWERSHEETII.

         C.Youressayshouldmeettherequirementsbelow:

1.Describethecartoonandthemessageconveyed

2.Drawaconclusionandgiveyourcommentonthecartoon..

（一）

   Today,theearth'sdesertsarespreadingandgettinglargeranddesertificationisaseriousproblemfacingtheworld.Themajorreasonforthisisirresponsiblecuttingdownoftrees.Asisshowninthefirstcartoon,whenpeoplecutdowntreesdesertforcesonandbecomesirrepressible.

   Peoplecutdowntreesforvariousreasonsbuttheymayforgetthattreesplayavitalpartinwaterandsoilconservation.Treescanpreservemoistureandfertilityinthesoil,protectsoilagainsterosionandpreventfertilelandfrombecomingdesert.Thereforewhenpeoplecutdownallofthetrees,theearthliesbareanddryinthehotsun,anddesertisinevitable.

Desertificationcanleadtomanyotherseriousproblemswhichmaythreatentheexistenceofhumanbeings,suchasareductionofarableland,terribledroughtsandfamine.Inordertopreventdesertification,peoplehavetoplanttrees,asthesecondcartoonshows.Thetimewhenpeopleplanttreesisthetimewhendesertretreats.Peopleshouldnotcutdowntreesanymore,asisdoneinthefirstcartoon,butrather,theyshouldplantmoretrees,andonlyinthiswaycandesertificationbefinallydefeated.

（二）

Asisshowninthepictures,treesplayavitalroleinwaterandsoilconservation.Inthelefthandpicture,peoplearefleeingfromvoracioussanddunesbecausetheycutdownallthetrees.Thecaptionreads,"Asthesandadvances,weretreat."Intherighthandpicture,thepeoplehavereturnedcarryingtools,waterandsamplingsforthereforestationoftheland.Weareinformedthat,"Asweadvances,thesandretreats."

Itseemsthatthecartoonistissendingamessageaboutthesignificanceoftreesinwaterandsoilconservationandtheneedforeveryonetofightagainstthedangerofthedesertification.Infact,whatheissayingisifwedonotfightagainstthesand,itwilldriveusawayfromtheland.Ifweletthissituationgoasitis,ourenvironmentwillsufferagreatdestruction.

Thebestwaytofightbackagainstthegreedydesertismadeclearinthesecondpicture.Therethelocalpeoplearevigorouslysettingaboutthetaskofplantingtreestoreclaimthelandandmakeitfertile.Thefactthattherearethreepeopleinthepicture,eachwithadifferentjobsuggeststhatcooperativeeffortsisoneofthekeystosuccessinthebattleagainstsoilerosion.（215）

 范文十五

1.Describethepicture

   2.Deducethepurposeofthedrawerofthepicture

   3.Suggestyourcou