优秀作文温室的花朵.docx

1、优秀作文温室的花朵暑期考研写作讲义连载（八） 第七部分 优秀作文范文精选（十一 范文十一 Directions: Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should1.describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and2. point out its implications in our life.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

2、（20 points）温室花朵经不起考验（一）It goes（vi.表达） without saying that the drawings aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China: how to educate and cultivate （培养）the young. In the first picture, the flower blooms well in the greenhouse despite the storm outside. 不用说,图画旨在揭示一个常见和严重的问题中国:如何教育和培养年轻人。在第一张图

3、片中,花朵在温室绽放,不管外面的风暴。 On the contrary, it perishes under the storm when put outside. It is obvious that the flower in greenhouse cant withstand wind and rains.Nowadays, the younger generation in China, like the flower in the greenhouse, lives under the full protection of their parents. Parents want to

4、 show all their love to their children. They give all the best things they can afford to their children and do not let their children do anything at home. Self-centeredness and arbitrariness have become a trait of the younger generation. Once leaving their home, many young people can not make a livi

5、ng of their own. They get lost when stepping into the complex reality and can not face any hardships and difficulties.Child education has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by educational experts, but also by people in all walks of life. The failure of child education does more

6、 harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to the children themselves. Thus, it is high time that parents, educators and our government made concerted efforts to put an end to this situation. （二）The set of drawings above vividly depicts the destiny of a flower in different cir

7、cumstances. As is shown in the first cartoon, the flower is placed in a comfortable greenhouse that shelters it from the threatening lightening and storm. With proper temperature, moisture and fertilizer, the flower is growing in full bloom. On the contrary, when removed from the greenhouse and expo

8、sed to the driving rain, the flower soon fades and withers, with the petals cast about on the grounds.To begin with, the purpose of the drawings is to show us that the flower growing in the green house cannot withstand the test of the storm, yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken

9、more seriously. The delicate flower is naturally associated with young people, to be specific, the only children in our current society; the greenhouse epitomizes parents doting care and abundant material supplies that can shield the children from the storms, or the harsh reality. Once the young peo

10、ple begin to seek independence and accept challenges from the real world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in the face of difficulties.Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from these thought-provoking drawings. On the one hand, we can frequently use them to e

11、nlighten the youth to be more independent in life. On the other hand, parents should be sensible enough to give their children more freedom to deal with troubles and problems. Only by undergoing more challenges and toils in adversity can young people cultivate strong personality and ability, and onl

12、y in this way can they become winners in this competitive world. （272） 文都教育在线：范文十二Directions:Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should1. describe the drawing,2. interpret its meaning, and 3. support your view with examples.You should write about 200 words neatly on

13、 ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points）It is vividly depicted in the cartoon that a boy is running along the racetrack with painstaking efforts, sweat pouring down his face. After a long journey, he is making the final spurt toward the finishing line, with strong determination to become the champion. It seems

14、that he could rest for a while to enjoy the ecstasy of victory. However, straight ahead lies a sign which indicates a new starting point and urges him to continue rushing to the next destination.Undoubtedly the cartoon conveys the meaning that life is like the process of running in which one should

15、make constant efforts and never stop making progress. Owing to the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, stimulating everyone to pursue one goal after another. Once a person stops making progress, he can hardly maintain his past glory and survive in this

16、 competitive world. As Deng Xiaoping, the great Chinese leader said, development is the only way. No matter how powerful a country is, no matter how successful a specific institution, it will definitely seek new development in high speed. Generally speaking, neither a country nor a person can remain

17、 stagnant.A case in point is the successful launching of Shenzhou V Spacecraft which sets china in a high position of aviation and space flight. Although it means a great achievement for us Chinese, we are facing new challenges in the future and need to do further research in space technology. Anoth

18、er illustration is closely related to us, the examinees. If we pass this test and are fortunately admitted by a university, we shall not stop making efforts. Instead, we are confronted with the challenge of conquering the difficult graduate courses. We still have to strive for success in our future

19、academic study, employment and career. On the whole, these examples effectively clarify the saying that destination is another starting point. （317）范文十三Directions: Write an essay of 160 - 200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing then interpret th

20、e meaning, and give your comment on it. 文都教育在线： 养老“足球赛”As is vividly depicted in the cartoon, four children are playing a football match of taking care of their aged father. Each of them stands in a different corner of a football field. The eldest son kicked out the father with the other three child

21、ren guarding their goals.The purpose of the drawing is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the mistreatment of senior citizens. First and foremost, some people shirk their duty of financially supporting their old and helpless parents due to their own interests. Furthermore, some elderly

22、people are often ill-treated by their own children and cannot lead a normal life. Last but not least, while some young people enjoy a comfortable life, their parents are neglected and reduced to utter poverty.It is imperative for us to take drastic measures. To begin with, relevant laws and regulati

23、ons should be made to severely punish those who shun the responsibilities of caring their parents. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of the young that respecting the old has always been the traditional virtue of Chinese culture. Only in this way can we curb the current evil phenomenon r

24、evealed in the picture. （198）范文十四Directions: A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in about 200 words. B. Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET II. C. Your essay should meet the requirements below:1. Describe the cartoon and the message conveyed2. Draw a conclusion

25、 and give your comment on the cartoon.（一） Today, the earths deserts are spreading and getting larger and desertification is a serious problem facing the world. The major reason for this is irresponsible cutting down of trees. As is shown in the first cartoon, when people cut down trees desert forces

26、 on and becomes irrepressible. People cut down trees for various reasons but they may forget that trees play a vital part in water and soil conservation. Trees can preserve moisture and fertility in the soil, protect soil against erosion and prevent fertile land from becoming desert. Therefore when

27、people cut down all of the trees, the earth lies bare and dry in the hot sun, and desert is inevitable.Desertification can lead to many other serious problems which may threaten the existence of human beings, such as a reduction of arable land, terrible droughts and famine. In order to prevent deser

28、tification, people have to plant trees, as the second cartoon shows. The time when people plant trees is the time when desert retreats. People should not cut down trees any more, as is done in the first cartoon, but rather, they should plant more trees, and only in this way can desertification be fi

29、nally defeated.（二）As is shown in the pictures, trees play a vital role in water and soil conservation. In the left hand picture, people are fleeing from voracious sand dunes because they cut down all the trees. The caption reads, As the sand advances, we retreat. In the right hand picture, the peopl

30、e have returned carrying tools, water and samplings for the reforestation of the land. We are informed that, As we advances, the sand retreats.It seems that the cartoonist is sending a message about the significance of trees in water and soil conservation and the need for everyone to fight against t

31、he danger of the desertification. In fact, what he is saying is if we do not fight against the sand, it will drive us away from the land. If we let this situation go as it is, our environment will suffer a great destruction.The best way to fight back against the greedy desert is made clear in the se

32、cond picture. There the local people are vigorously setting about the task of planting trees to reclaim the land and make it fertile. The fact that there are three people in the picture, each with a different job suggests that cooperative efforts is one of the keys to success in the battle against soil erosion. （215）范文十五1. Describe the picture 2. Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the picture 3. Suggest your cou