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如何回复编辑和审稿人

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如何回复编辑和审稿人

专题半月谈-如何回复编辑和审稿人

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专题半月谈-如何回复编辑和审稿人

应战友要求，在版主的支持下，本人在此设立一个半月谈专题-如何回复编辑和审稿人实例分析。

需说明以下几点：

1.为了突出问题的典型性，有些“实例“已经过修饰，故已不是作者原稿（或原意）。

2.修改和注解谨代表本人观点。

对于同一问题可能有不同或更好的修改方法或回答方式。

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3.同时亦欢迎各高级战友按以下格式增加实例（请注意版权问题）。

希望战友回帖时紧紧围绕主题，不要讨（争）论与主题无关的话题。

论文题目：

所投杂志：

投稿结果：

编辑/审稿人问题：

作者原答：

建议改答：

注解请写在文中相应的地方或单独列出。

15January2009（第一讲）给编辑的回复信

论文题目

：

PharmacokineticandpharmacodynamicstudiesontheantiviruseffectsofA（一种中草药）againstvirusB（一种病毒）

所投杂志

：

LifeSciences

投稿结果：

这次大修后又经过一次小修，被接受发表

编辑信内容

（注：

有删节）：

DearMr.XXX,

Yourmanuscripthasbeenexaminedbytheeditorsandqualifiedreferee.WethinkthemanuscripthasmeritbutrequiresrevisionbeforewecanacceptitforpublicationintheJournal.Carefulconsiderationmustbegiventothepointsraisedinthereviewercomments,whichareenclosedbelow.

Ifyouchoosetosubmitarevisionofyourmanuscript,pleaseincorporateresponsestothereviewercommentsintotherevisedpaper.Acompleterebuttalwithnomanuscriptalterationsisusuallyconsideredinadequateandmayresultinlengthyre-reviewprocedures.

Aletterdetailingyourrevisionspoint-by-pointmustaccompanytheresubmission.

YouwillberequestedtouploadthisResponsetoReviewersasaseparatefileintheAttachFilesarea.

Weaskthatyouresubmityourmanuscriptwithin45days.Afterthistime,yourfilewillbeplacedoninactivestatusandafurthersubmissionwillbeconsideredanewmanuscript.

YouwillseeamenuitemcalledSubmissionNeedingRevision.Youwillfindyoursubmissionrecordthere.

Yourssincerely,

JosephJ.Bahl,PhD

Editor

LifeSciences

FormatSuggestion:

PleaseaccesstheGuidetoAuthorsatourwebsitetochecktheformatofyourarticle.PayparticularattentiontoourReferencesstyle.

Reviewers'comments:

Reviewer#1:

XXXXX（略）

Reviewer#2:

XXXXX（略）

Editorsnoteandsuggestions:

（注：

编辑的建议）

Title:

Re-writethetitletoreadmoresmoothlyincontemporaryEnglish>>>

PharmacokineticandpharmacodynamicstudiesoftheantiviraleffectsofAagainstvirusB.

Abstract:

Re-writetheabstracttoreadmoresmoothly.

A,analkaloidisolatedfromC（注：

一种中草药）,wastestedforantiviralactivityagainstvirusB.BothinvitroandinvivoassaysalongwithserumpharmacologicalexperimentsshowedAtohavepotentantiviralactivity.ThepharmacokineticprofileofAinSprague/DawleyratplasmaafteroraladministrationwasmeasuredbyHPLC.Bloodsamplestakenatselectedtimepointswereanalyzedtostudypotentialchangesinantiviralpharmacodynamicsasmeasuredbyinfectivityofviruses.FromthesimilarityoftheserumconcentrationprofilesandantiviralactivityprofilesitisconcludedthatAitself,ratherthanametabolite,exertedtheeffectagainsttheviruspriortobioinactivation.TheneedforeffectiveclinicalagentsagainstvirusBandtheseresultssuggestthepossibilityofbenefitfromfurtherexperimentswithA.

Theauthorsshouldchecktobesurethatthetermsbloodsamples,plasmaandserumarealwaysusedappropriatelythroughouttheabstractandtext.

Introduction:

somesentencescanbemadelesspassive.example1stparagraph

>>>>Aappearstobethemostimportantalkaloidisolatedfromtheplant,itsstructuralformulaisshowninFig1....Whileitproducedageneralinhibitionofantibodyproductionlymphocyteproliferationwasstimulated（XiaandWang,1997）.ThesepharmacologicalpropertiessuggestapotentialuseinthetreatmentofviralmyocarditisagainstvirusBthatcouldbestudiedinexperimentsincellcultureandanimals.

>>>Theauthorsshouldchecktheentiremanuscriptforspellingerrors（examplegiven:

inyourtextalkaloidisincorrectlyspelledalkaloid）

>>>Theauthorsshouldreadtheguidelinestotheauthorsandnotincludethefirstnameoftheauthorsbeingcitedinthetext.Inthereferencesectionthefirstnameshouldbeabbreviatedasshownintheguidelinetoauthors（thustheearliertextreferenceshouldbe（Liuetal.,2003）andtheremainingoneshouldbe（Chenetal.,2002）

>>>>>Theauthorsinsteadofdirectlyansweringthefirstcomplexquestionofreviewer#1mayincludethethreequestionsasfutureresearchaiminthediscussionsection.

>>>>>>Ratherthanredrawingfiguretheauthorsmaychoosetoamendthewordingofthestatisticalanalysissectiontostatethattheresultoftablesaremeans+-SEMandforfiguresare+-SD.

>>>>>reviewer#1commentnumber8andreviewer#2comment3mightbesatisfiedbyinclusionofarepresentativephotoofcellsandheartshowingCPE.Remembermostreadersofthejournalhaveneverseenwhatyouaretryingtodescribe.

JosephBahl,PhDEditor2LifeSciences

作者回复信原稿

：

DearDr.Bahl,

I’m（注：

正式信函不要简写）veryappreciate（注：

不适合作为给编辑回信的开始，同时有语法错误）foryourcommentsandsuggestions.

I（注：

实际上是学生做的）haveconductedinvivoantivirusexperimentsagain（注：

要表明是应审稿人或编辑建议而作）.Miceweresacrificedon15daysand30daysafterinfection.Deathrate,heartweighttobodyweightratio（HW/BW）,virustitersandpathologicslices（注：

用词错误）werecalculated（注：

用词不当）.ProductionofmRNAofIL-10,IFN-γandTNF-αwere（注：

语法错误）measuredbyRT-PCR.

Ihaverevisedthismanuscriptandespeciallypaidmuchattentiontoyourcommentsandsuggestions.Iwouldliketore-submitittoLIFESCIENCE.Titleofmanuscripthasbeenchangedto“TheantiviruseffectsofAagainstvirusBanditspharmacokineticbehaviourinSDratsserum”tomakeitmoreclearandsmooth.

AnswerstoReviewers’questionswereasfollows:

（注：

可附在给编辑的回复信后）

Reviewer#1:

XXXXX

Reviewer#2:

XXXXX

Editorsnoteandsuggestions:

Title:

Re-writethetitletoreadmoresmoothlyincontemporaryEnglish

Answer:

Ihaverewritethetitleto“TheantiviruseffectsofAagainstvirusBanditspharmacokineticbehaviourinSDratsserum”tomakeitmoreclearandsmooth（注：

多处语法错误）.

Abstract:

Re-writetheabstracttoreadmoresmoothly.

Answer:

Ihaverevisetheabstractcarefullytomakeitmoresmoothandinformative（注：

语法错误）.

Theauthorsshouldchecktobesurethatthetermsbloodsamples,plasmaandserumarealwaysusedappropriatelythroughouttheabstractandtext.

Answer:

Ihavepaidattentiontothisquestionanditisclearer（注：

不具体）.

Introduction:

somesentencescanbemadelesspassive.

Answer:

IhaverevisethewholepapertomakesentenceslesspassiveandobtainedhelpofmycolleagueproficientinEnglish（注：

语法错误，句子不通顺）.

Theauthorsshouldchecktheentiremanuscriptforspellingerrors

Answer:

I’mverysorrytogiveyousomuchtroubleforthosespellingerrors（注：

不必道歉，按建议修改即可）.Ihavecarefullycorrectedthem.

Theauthorsshouldreadtheguidelinestotheauthorsandnotincludethefirstnameoftheauthorsbeingcitedinthetext.Inthereferencesectionthefirstnameshouldbeabbreviatedasshownintheguidelinetoauthors（thustheearliertextreferenceshouldbe（Liuetal.,2003）andtheremainingoneshouldbe（Chenetal.,2002）

Answer:

Ichangedthestyleofreferences.

Ratherthanredrawingfiguretheauthorsmaychoosetoamendthewordingofthestatisticalanalysissectiontostatethattheresultoftablesaremeans+-SEMandforfiguresare+-SD.

Answer:

（注：

作者请编辑公司帮回答）

reviewer#1commentnumber8andreviewer#2comment3mightbesatisfiedbyinclusionofarepresentativephotoofcellsandheartshowingCPE.Remember:

mostreadersofthejournalhaveneverseenwhatyouaretryingtodescribe.

Answer:

Thankyouforyoursuggestions.Ihavesupplementedpicturesofcardiacpathologicslicesinthepaper（Fig2）.

Ihavetoapologizeforgivingyousomuchtroublebecauseofthosemisspellingandconfusingstatements（注：

一般不是延误或人为失误，不必轻易道歉，按建议修改即可）.Yourcommentsandsuggestionsreallyhelpedmealot.Ihaveputgreateffortstothisreview.Iwishitcanbesatisfactory.

Ifthere’s（注：

正式信函不要简写）anyinformationIcanprovide,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactme.

Thankyouagainforyourtimeandpatience.Lookforwardtohear（注：

语法错误）fromyou.

YoursSincerely

XxxxXxxx（通讯作者名）

建议修改稿：

DearDr.Bahl,

Thanksyouverymuchforyourcommentsandsuggestions.

Assuggested,wehaveconductedinvivoantivirusexperiments.Miceweresacrificedon15daysand30daysafterinfectionwithvirusB.Mortality,heartweighttobodyweightratio（HW/BW）,virustitersandpathologicscoresweredetermined.Inaddition,mRNAexpressionofIL-10,IFN-γandTNF-αweremeasuredbyRT-PCR.

Wehaverevisedthemanuscript,accordingtothecommentsandsuggestionsofreviewersandeditor,andresponded,pointbypointto,thecommentsaslistedbelow.Sincethepaperhasbeenrevisedsignificantlythroughoutthetext,wefeelitisbetternottohighlighttheamendmentsintherevisedmanuscript（正常情况最好表明修改处）.

TherevisedmanuscripthasbeeneditedandproofreadbyamedicaleditingcompanyinHongKong.

Iwouldliketore-submitthisrevisedmanuscripttoLifeSciences,andhopeitisacceptableforpublicationinthejournal.

Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Withkindestregards,

YoursSincerely

XxxxXxxx（通讯作者名）

RepliestoReviewersandEditor

Firstofall,wethankbothreviewersandeditorfortheirpositiveandconstructivecommentsandsuggestions.

RepliestoReviewer#1:

Xxxxx（略）

RepliestoReviewer#2:

Xxxxx（略）

RepliestotheEditorsnoteandsuggestions:

Title:

Re-writethetitletoreadmoresmoothlyincontmeporaryEnglish

Answer:

Ihaverewritethetitleto“TheantiviruseffectsofSophoridineagainstCoxsackievirusB3anditspharmacokineticsinrats”tomakeitmoreclearandreadmoresmoothly.

Abstract:

Re-writetheabstracttoreadmoresmoothly.

Answer:

Ihaverewrittentheabstracttomakeitmoreinformativeandreadmoresmoothly.

The