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初中英语作文专题讲解作文15动物环保类作文配套练习教师版
动物环保类作文练习
Introduction
写作评分标准2020年:
1.内容分8分。
内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚完整。
2.语言分8分。
学生需用语规范,表达准确,无或少见语法错误,词汇拼写正确,句型使用恰当。
首先是字数,少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
3.组织结构分4分,也就是我们常说的文采分。
根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。
(一)内容:
7-8分内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整。
5-6分内容基本切题,意思大致连贯,表达基本清楚,但不够完整。
3-4分内容不够切题,意思不够连贯,表达不够清楚,离题目要求较远。
0-2分文不对题,表达不清。
(二)语言:
①拼写:
每错扣0.5分,同一错误不重复计数。
②语法:
同①
③标点符号、大小写:
每两处错误扣0.5分,但标点符号和大小写的扣分总和均不得超过1分。
④语言分最多扣8分。
(3)组织结构:
①内容充实,不写废话;上下文连贯、用语规范、表达正确、无或少见语法错误;词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可给3分。
②一般情况下,要得到3分组织结构分,内容和语言积累得分在14分以上者(含)。
③内容和语言累积不足14分者,如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达,可酌情考虑给1-2分组织结构分。
④通篇句型、句式单一。
词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,一般亦不给组织结构分。
(4)词数:
①词数不足30词者,得分最多不得超过9分;
②词数不足40词者,得分最多不得超过14分;
③词数不足50词者,得分最多不得超过15分;
④词数在50-59词之间者,每少5个词扣0.5分;
⑤只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。
Presentation
“动物环保类”作文的写作素材积累:
1.It"sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.
保护环境是我们的责任。
2.Asweknow,waterisveryimportanttoman.
众所周知,水是非常重要的人,
3.Theamountofwaterwhichissuitabletodrinkislessandless.
水的量是适宜的饮料是越来越少了
4.Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.
许多河流和湖泊受到严重污染。
5.Weshouldnotspitinapublicplace/cutdownthetrees.
我们不应该在公共场所吐痰/砍伐的树木
6.Weshouldplantmoreflowersandtrees.
我们应该种更多的花和树。
7.Wemustpickupsomerubbishandthrowitintoadustbin.
我们必须拿起一些垃圾,扔到垃圾桶它
8.Ifeveryonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.
如果人人都为保护环境作出贡献,世界将变得更加美丽。
9.Treesareveryhelpfulandimportantforus.
树是非常有益的,对我们很重要。
10.Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmorehealthyinthefuture.
我们应该种更多的树,为了生活得更好,更健康的未来。
FocusedPractice
【练习一】
Writeanemailofatleast80wordsaccordingtotheinformationgivenbelow.
假如你是李明,你收到网友Daniel的邮件,他收养了一只流浪狗,但又担心照顾不好,希望你给他一些建议。
请根据下面的提示,给他回一封邮件,告诉他你的想法。
提示:
1.爱护动物人人有责,因为动物是人类的朋友;
2.对动物要有爱心、耐心和责任心;
3.喂养动物很辛苦,但也很快乐。
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范文:
DearDaniel,
It’sniceofyoutokeepahomelessdog.Weknowanimalsareourgoodfriends.Everyoneshouldprotectthem.Ifyoulikethedog,Ithinkyoucankeepit.Butyoumustbepatientandcarefulenough.Andyoushouldberesponsibleforit.What’smore,keepdogisn’teasy.Itwillcostyoumuchtimeandeffort.Ifyoudon’tknowhowtofeedit,youcanfindsomeinformationonline.Ibelieveyoucankeepitwell.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiMing
【练习二】
Writeanemailofatleast80wordsaccordingtotheinformationgivenbelow.
假如你是环保局局长Mandy,请根据以下来信写一封回信。
提示:
1.感谢来信;
2.避免使用有害物品或一次性物品;
3.大家共同努力美化我们的环境。
DearSir/Madam
Ireadanarticleinthenewspaper.Itsaysthatpeopleshouldonlyusethingsthatdonotharmtheenvironment.Thearticlesaysweareingreatdanger,andourplanetwillbecomelifelessifwedonotstopusingharmfulproducts.Butitdosenottelluswhichproductsweshoulduseandwhichweshouldnot.SoIhavesomequestions.Whatkindoffuelshouldweusetoheatwater?
Also,whichproductsshouldweavoidusingifwewanttostoppollutingtheEarth?
Yourssincerely
TommyWilson
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范文:
DearMrWilson,
Thankyouforyourletteraboutprotectingourenvironment.Manypeoplereadthesearticlesandthey’reallaskingthesamequestionasyourare.Howcanweprotecttheenvironment?
Weshouldavoidusingthingslikeplasticproducts.Forexample,whenpeoplegoshopping,theycanusethepaperbagsinsteadofplasticbags.Ifpeoplecollectwastethings,suchaspaperandbottles,theycannotonlygetsomemoney,butalsodosomethingfortheenvironment.Therearemanysmallthingsinourlife.Let’sdoourbesttoprotecttheenvironment.Themorethingswedo,thebettertheenvironmentwillbe.
Yourssincerely
Mandy
【练习三】
Writeanpassageofatleast80wordsaccordingtothesentence”Ifwedon’tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeatear-drop.”andtheinformationgivenbelow.
根据电视广告词“如果我们不节约用水,最后一滴水就将是我们的眼泪。
”写一篇作文。
提示:
1.生活离不开水;
2.可饮用水在减少;
3.水污染严重;
4.应保护水源,再利用水。
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范文:
Waterisveryimportanttohumans.Peoplecan’tlivewithoutwater.Plantsandanimalswilldiewithoutwater.Canyouimaginetheworldwithoutwater?
Almosteverybodyknowstheimportanceofwater,butsomepeopledon’tseemtocareaboutit.Theywastealotofwater.Somepeopleevenpourdirtywaterintoriversandlakes.Itcausestheseriouswaterpollutionandthewaterwecandrinkisfalling.Weshouldtakeashowerinsteadoftakingabathanddosomethingtostopthepollution.What’smore,wemustnotonlyprotectthewaterbutalsofindwaystoreuseit.Ifwedon’tdothis,thelastdropofwaterwillbeatear-drop.
Actnowtosavewater!
【练习四】
Writeanpassageofatleast80wordsaboutthetopic”Whydoweneedplants”accordingtotheinformationgivenbelow.
根据以下内容提示,以“我们为什么需要植物”写一篇不少于60字的作文。
提示:
1.净化空气;
2.保护土壤;
3.提供食物。
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范文:
Plantsareverynecessaryandimportantinourlife.Plantscangiveusfood,likevegetablesandfruits.Peoplecanuseplantstomakefurnitureorbuildhouses.Medicinesandclothingaremadefromplants,too.Plantscanhelpcleantheairaswell.Forexample,theycoverthesoilsothatwindandraincan’tcarrythesoilaway.Plantsmaketheworldamuchnicerplacetolivein.Wecannotlivewithoutthem.Letdoourbesttoprotectplants.
【练习五】
Writeanpassageofatleast80wordsaboutthetopic”Howtoprotectourenvironment”accordingtotheinformationgivenbelow.
请以“怎样保护环境”为题,写一篇不少于60字的作文。
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范文:
Theenvironmentalpollutionismoreandmoreserioustoday.Wehavenocleanwatertothinkbecauseofwaterpollution.Andwhentreesarecutdown,someanimalsdisappear.Thereismoreandmoredirtysmokeintheair.People’shealthhasbeengreatlyaffectedbyair,noiseandwaterpollution.Manypeoplediedofdiseases.Inordertoliveabetterlife,it’stimeforustoprotectourworld.
Firstly,weshouldnotthrowawayrubbisheverywhere.Andweshouldrecycle,reduceandreusethings,forthissavesmoneyandreducespollution.Usethingsforaslongaspossible.Don’tuseplasticbags.Also,wemustplantmoretreesandstoppeoplecuttingthem.Wehopeourworldwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.
【练习六】
根据国务院发布的“限塑令”,自2008年6月1日起,在所有超市、商场实行塑料购物袋有偿使用制度,超市、商场一律不得免费提供塑料购物袋。
请你写一篇英语短文,要求包括以下内容:
1.现状:
目前中国每天消费近30亿个塑料袋,造成了严重的资源浪费和环境污染;
2.限塑令的意义:
减少塑料袋使用量,提高公众的环保意识;
3.提倡:
重拎布袋子,重提菜篮子。
参考词汇:
禁令ban意识awareness提倡advocate
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范文:
Theproblemof“whitepollution”causedbyusedplasticisbecomingincreasinglyserious,inwhichplasticshoppingbagsplayanimportantrole.InChinaaboutthreebillionplasticshoppingbagsareconsumedeveryday,whichresultsinagreatwasteofresourcesandheavyenvironmentalpollution.Luckily,Thegovernmenthasputanationwidebanontheuseoffreeplasticbags,demandingthatallstoresandsupermarketsnotprovidecustomerswithfreeplasticbagsafterJune1.Therulewillundoubtedlyreducetheuseofplasticbagsandenhancetheawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Itishighlyadvocatedthatweshouldturntoclothbagsandshoppingbasketsfromnowon.
【练习七】
Writean