初中英语作文专题讲解作文15动物环保类作文配套练习教师版.docx

1、初中英语作文专题讲解作文15动物环保类作文配套练习教师版动物环保类作文练习Introduction写作评分标准2020年：1.内容分8分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚完整。2.语言分8分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。3.组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。（一）内容：7-8分 内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。5-6分 内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚，但不够完整。3-4分 内容不够切题，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚，离题目要求较远。0-2分 文不

2、对题，表达不清。（二）语言： 拼写：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。 语法：同 标点符号、大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但标点符号和大小写的扣分总和均不得超过1分。 语言分最多扣8分。 （3）组织结构： 内容充实，不写废话；上下文连贯、用语规范、表达正确、无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给3分。 一般情况下，要得到3分组织结构分，内容和语言积累得分在14分以上者（含）。 内容和语言累积不足14分者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达，可酌情考虑给1-2分组织结构分。 通篇句型、句式单一。词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，一般亦不给组织结构分。（4）词数： 词

3、数不足30词者，得分最多不得超过9分； 词数不足40词者，得分最多不得超过14分； 词数不足50词者，得分最多不得超过15分； 词数在50-59词之间者，每少5个词扣0.5分； 只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。Presentation“动物环保类”作文的写作素材积累： 1. Its our duty to protect our environment.保护环境是我们的责任。2. As we know , water is very important to man. 众所周知，水是非常重要的人，3. The amount of water which is suitable to drink

4、 is less and less.水的量是适宜的饮料是越来越少了4. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.许多河流和湖泊受到严重污染。5. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees.我们不应该在公共场所吐痰/砍伐的树木6. We should plant more flowers and trees.我们应该种更多的花和树。7. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin.我们必须拿起一些垃圾，扔到

5、垃圾桶它8. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.如果人人都为保护环境作出贡献，世界将变得更加美丽。9. Trees are very helpful and important for us.树是非常有益的，对我们很重要。10. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future. 我们应该种更

6、多的树，为了生活得更好，更健康的未来。Focused Practice【练习一】 Write an email of at least 80 words according to the information given below.假如你是李明，你收到网友Daniel的邮件，他收养了一只流浪狗，但又担心照顾不好，希望你给他一些建议。请根据下面的提示，给他回一封邮件，告诉他你的想法。提示：1. 爱护动物人人有责，因为动物是人类的朋友；2. 对动物要有爱心、耐心和责任心；3. 喂养动物很辛苦，但也很快乐。_范文：Dear Daniel,Its nice of you to keep a hom

7、eless dog. We know animals are our good friends. Everyone should protect them. If you like the dog, I think you can keep it. But you must be patient and careful enough. And you should be responsible for it. Whats more, keep dog isnt easy. It will cost you much time and effort. If you dont know how t

8、o feed it, you can find some information online. I believe you can keep it well.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【练习二】 Write an email of at least 80 words according to the information given below.假如你是环保局局长Mandy，请根据以下来信写一封回信。提示：1. 感谢来信；2. 避免使用有害物品或一次性物品；3. 大家共同努力美化我们的环境。 Dear Sir/ MadamI read an article in t

9、he newspaper. It says that people should only use things that do not harm the environment. The article says we are in great danger, and our planet will become lifeless if we do not stop using harmful products. But it dose not tell us which products we should use and which we should not. So I have so

10、me questions. What kind of fuel should we use to heat water? Also ,which products should we avoid using if we want to stop polluting the Earth?Yours sincerelyTommy Wilson_范文：Dear Mr Wilson,Thank you for your letter about protecting our environment. Many people read these articles and theyre all aski

11、ng the same question as your are. How can we protect the environment? We should avoid using things like plastic products. For example, when people go shopping, they can use the paper bags instead of plastic bags. If people collect waste things, such as paper and bottles, they can not only get some m

12、oney, but also do something for the environment. There are many small things in our life. Lets do our best to protect the environment. The more things we do, the better the environment will be.Yours sincerelyMandy【练习三】 Write an passage of at least 80 words according to the sentence ”If we dont save

13、water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.” and the information given below.根据电视广告词“如果我们不节约用水，最后一滴水就将是我们的眼泪。”写一篇作文。提示：1. 生活离不开水；2. 可饮用水在减少；3. 水污染严重；4. 应保护水源，再利用水。_范文 ：Water is very important to humans. People cant live without water. Plants and animals will die without water. Can you imagine

14、 the world without water?Almost everybody knows the importance of water, but some people dont seem to care about it. They waste a lot of water. Some people even pour dirty water into rivers and lakes. It causes the serious water pollution and the water we can drink is falling. We should take a showe

15、r instead of taking a bath and do something to stop the pollution. Whatsmore, we must not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it. If we dont do this ,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.Act now to save water!【练习四】 Write an passage of at least 80 words about the topic ”Why do we

16、 need plants” according to the information given below.根据以下内容提示，以“我们为什么需要植物”写一篇不少于60字的作文。提示：1. 净化空气；2. 保护土壤；3. 提供食物。_范文：Plants are very necessary and important in our life. Plants can give us food, like vegetables and fruits. People can use plants to make furniture or build houses. Medicines and clo

17、thing are made from plants, too. Plants can help clean the air as well. For example, they cover the soil so that wind and rain cant carry the soil away. Plants make the world a much nicer place to live in. We can not live without them. Let do our best to protect plants.【练习五】 Write an passage of at l

18、east 80 words about the topic ”How to protect our environment” according to the information given below.请以“怎样保护环境”为题，写一篇不少于60字的作文。_范文：The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to think because of water pollution. And when trees are cut down, some animals disa

19、ppear. There is more and more dirty smoke in the air. Peoples health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, its time for us to protect our world.Firstly, we should not throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should rec

20、ycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. Dont use plastic bags. Also, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful.【练习六】 根据国务院发布的“限塑令”，自2008年6月1日起，在所有超市、商场实行塑料购物袋有偿使用制度，超

21、市、商场一律不得免费提供塑料购物袋。请你写一篇英语短文，要求包括以下内容：1. 现状：目前中国每天消费近30亿个塑料袋，造成了严重的资源浪费和环境污染；2. 限塑令的意义：减少塑料袋使用量，提高公众的环保意识；3. 提倡：重拎布袋子，重提菜篮子。参考词汇：禁令 ban 意识 awareness 提倡 advocate_范文：The problem of “white pollution” caused by used plastic is becoming increasingly serious, in which plastic shopping bags play an importan

22、t role. In China about three billion plastic shopping bags are consumed every day, which results in a great waste of resources and heavy environmental pollution. Luckily, The government has put a nationwide ban on the use of free plastic bags, demanding that all stores and supermarkets not provide customers with free plastic bags after June 1. The rule will undoubtedly reduce the use of plastic bags and enhance the awareness of environmental protection. It is highly advocated that we should turn to cloth bags and shopping baskets from now on.【练习七】 Write an