改错专练+宁夏高考试题短文改错+答案.docx

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改错专练+宁夏高考试题短文改错+答案

改错专练

改错练习注意事项

短文改错主要考查运用基础语言知识的能力。

在改错时，可着重注意下列知识点：

1，基本的词法：

动词，名词，代词，数词，介词，形容词和副词,冠词

2，句法：

定语从句，状语从句，4个名词性从句；

倒装句，祈使句，感叹句，强调句

3，行文逻辑：

上下文叙述是否一致:

主要指上下文在意义、语气、人称、数等方面要保持一致，以使短文成为一个完整的整体。

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解题方法：

1.先按字面翻译全文---掌握大意。

重点关注人称、时态、并列连词的使用。

2.细读全文。

-----逐句找错。

从谓语动词入手，分析句子成分，查看词法、句法及行文逻辑是否有错。

3.复读全文。

----验证答案。

充分利用上下文的逻辑关系，查看文章中的名词的单复数，代词指代的一致性，动词的时态和语态，介词的固定搭配，形容词和副词是否误用，从句连词的选用，非谓语动词todo,doing,done形式是否正确，等。

4.注意做题规范，严格按照题目中的要求去做。

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一、时态语态的错误：

1.Thatmachinedidn’twork.Ithasn’tworkedforyears.

2.Heinvitedmetogoridingwithhim.ButitistwoyearssinceIhaveriddenahorse,soIwasn’tsurethatIwillenjoyit.

3.GreatchangeshavebeentakenplacesinceIleftmyhometown.

二、词法的错误：

1.Wehadaverygoodweatherwhenwewereonholiday.

2.TomlookedsadlywhenIsawhim.Helookedatmesad.

3.Hecouldrememberdrivealongtheroadjustbeforetheaccidenthappenedbuthecouldn’tremembertheaccidentitself.

三、句法的错误：

1.Goingonwalkingforanother15minutes,andyou’llfindtherailwaystation.

2.ThemanIsatnexttohimontheplanetalkedallthetime.

3.ItwasonSundaywhentheyheldaneveningparty.

四、逻辑错误：

1.Weareworkinghardinordertomakeyourhometownmorebeautiful.

2.Atfirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.

3.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.

句子改错：

句子累赘与残缺:

语义重复是短文改错中容易忽略的方面。

如，return不与back连用。

从句中句子成分重复。

固定搭配。

1，I’llspendallthewholeweekendreadingandpreparingforit.

2，Youshouldtakegoodcareofyourtextbookcarefully.

3,Thebosslookedsoproudthenthatfewpeoplehardlytalkedtohim.

3，Footballisourmostfavoritesport.

4，Wewilltryourbesttoimproveourlivingconditionsbetter.

5，Everyonemustlookoutfire.

6，Maryroseupfromherseatandraisedaquestion.

7，Look,theGreensarehavingmealsattable.

8，Hewaslookingforaglassthecupboard.

9，Becausethehelpyougavemethatsummer,mylifechanged.

10，Somestudentsmayalsotosaveupfortheircollegeorfutureuse.

11，Mr.Jackson,aheadmasteroftheJacksonHighSchool,hasmuchknowledgeandexperience.

12，Myfirstonejobwastocleanthetablesinasmallrestaurant.

13，Hedidnoteatanyvegetablesthroughoutthewholewinter.

14，Theyreturnedbackintheeveningwithsomemoney.

15，Thechildrenallgatheredtogetheratthegateoftheschoolafterschool.

16，SeveralyearshavepassedandMr.Brownstillremainsacook.

17，Goandgetyourraincoat.Itistherewhereyouleftit.

18，Insummer,thelittlegirlisdressedinwhitecolour.

19，ThenameofthestreetiscalledWangFuJingstreet.

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一致性特例：

1，Everyminuteandeverysecondareprecious.

2，E-mail,aswellastelephones,areplayinganimportantpartindailycommunication.

3，Theteacherratherthanthestudentsarecareaboutthat.

4，Allgowell,whichmakesusverydelighted.

5，Asweallknow,thewiselookstowiserforadvice.

6，Havingfunwiththeirfriendsmakethemhappy.

7，Whatweneedisdoctors.

8,Howhehasdonetheworkandwherehehasputthetoolsisstillunknown.

8，Heisoneofthoseboyswhohasbeenpraisedbytheteacher.

9，Iwastheonlyoneofthepersonsinmyofficewhowereinvited.

10，Notonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherareenjoyingthefilm.

11，Iseitheryouorhetogothere?

12,Tomfeltthathekneweverybody’sbusinessthantheyknewithimself.

12，Finallythementhrewawaymostofhisclothestosavethemselves.

13，Ididn’tlendhimanymoney,becauseIhadmuch.

14，I’mmovingtothecountrysidebecausetheairthereismuchfresherthanoneinthecity.

15，Somewantedtoseetheprogrammewhileotherspreferredanother.

16，Askingwhoshewas,shesaidshewasMr.Johnson’sfriend.

17，Havingbeensufferedfromhearttroubleforyears,ProfessorWhitehastotakesomemedicinewithhimwhereverhegoes.

20,Theteachercameintothelab,followingbysomestudents.

宁夏高考试题短文改错

（1）

IfirstmetLiMingatafriendbirthdaypartyfiveyearsago.ThenIinvitedLiMingoverinmyplace.WelistentomyCDstogetherandsoonbecamebestfriends.Threeyearsago,LiMing’sparentsinvitedItospendtwowonderfulweekinQingdaowiththemduringthesummerholiday.LiMingandIlovedwalkingalongthebeautifullybeachesthere.LastyearIwasillbuthadtostayinhospitalforaweek.LiMingcameseemeeveryday.Thenhisfatherhaschangedjobsandtheymovedtoanothercity.Sincethenwehaven’tseeeachothermuch，butwe’vekeptwritingtoeachother.

（2）

DearMsSmith,

IamsecretaryoftheCityStudentUnion（CSU）.Wewereorganizinganartexhibitionforhighschoolstudentsincity.Thiswillbeheldonthe9thofJulyintheExhibitionHallofBeihai.Morethan1000paintingwillbeonshow,buthighschoolstudentsfromalltheeightdistrictswillcometotheevent.AsyouareverypopularlywithusChinesehighschoolstudents,we’dliketoinviteforyoutotheexhibition.Wewouldbegratefulwhenyoucouldjointhemthatday.Lookingforwardtohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiMing

（3）

DearMrs.Winthrop,

Somyfirstweekatcollegeisover!

NolecturesthismorningsoIthinkI’demailyouandletyouknowwhatthingsaregoing.I’mgladtosaythatanythinghasworkedoutfineinthedorm.Irememberaskingforaroomasfarawayfromtheliftsaspossibleandtheyfindmeacomfortableoneonsecondfloor.TherearetwogirlsfrommycoursehereandIplantomakefriendwiththemsowecanhelpeachotheronthecoursework.Everyoneelseseemsveryniceandwarmlyhere.Well,Ihadbettertostopnow.I’mgoingtoattendminefirstlessonthisafternoon,forI’vegotsomepreparationstomake,Keepintouch.

Best,

Carol

（4）

MyfriendNicktoldmestoryabouthisexperiencebackintheUS.whichwasveryinterested.Onedayhewashavingayardsaleandtheoldmanlivingnextdoorcomebytohelp.Astheoldmanlookedoverthethingsontheyardthatweretobesold,hestoppedataboxofgoldenballforChristmastrees.Ontheboxwasacardsay:

“25centseach.Youwillneverselltheseforthatmuch.”hetoldNick.Convinced,Nickhasbroughtthepriceupto10centsapiece.Withoutamoment’sdelay,myneighborpickeduptheboxbutannounced:

“I’lltakethem.”

（5）

Mysummertravelstartedterribly.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.IwasgoingtovisitafriendhereandafterthatIwouldgotoXiamenforlongholiday.IboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit.LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket,buttheonlyclothesIhadwasthoseIhadon.Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.WhenIfinallyarrivedatmyfriendhelenttomelotsofclothes.IfeelveryhappythatIcouldchangemyclothesatlast.

（6）

IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.FromthetimeIwasaboutfouruntilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachofmytoy.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingsdidwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.Forawhileparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,"That'sit.Nomoretoystoyou."Mypunishmentlastedayear.Meanwhile,IfoundoutthatwithmorepatienceImustmakemytoystolastMyattitudechangedfromthenon.

2007短文改错答案

IfirstmetLiMingatafriend（friend’s）birthdaypartyfiveyearsago.ThenIinvitedLiMingoverin（to）myplace.Welisten（listened）tomyCDstogetherandsoonbecamebestfriends.Threeyearsago,LiMing’sparentsinvitedI（me）tospendtwo（a或）wonderfulweek（weeks）inQingdaowiththemduringthesummerholiday.LiMingandIlovedwalkingalongthebeautifully（beautiful）beachesthere.LastyearIwasillbut（and）hadtostayinhospitalforaweek.LiMingcame∧（to）seemeeveryday.Thenhisfatherhas去changedjobsandtheymovedtoanothercity.Sincethenwehaven’tsee（seen）eachothermuch，butwe’vekeptwritingtoeachother.

2008短文改错答案

DearMsSmith,

IamsecretaryoftheCityStudentUnion（CSU）.Wewere/areorganizinganartexhibitionforhighschoolstudentsin^thecity.This/Itwillbeheldonthe9thofJulyintheExhibitionHallofBeihai.Morethan1000painting/paintingswillbeonshow,but/andhighschoolstudentsfromalltheeightdistrictswillcometotheevent.Asyouareverypopularly/popularwithusChinesehighschoolstudents,we’dliketoinvitefor去youtotheexhibition.Wewouldbegratefulwhen/ifyoucouldjointhem/usthatday.Lookingforwardtohear/hearingfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiMing

2009短文改错答案

DearMrs.Winthrop,

Somyfirstweekatcollegeisover!

NolecturesthismorningsoIthinkI’demailyouandletyouknowwhat/howthingsaregoing.I’mgladtosaythatanything/everythinghasworkedoutfineinthedorm.Irememberaskingforaroomasfarawayfromtheliftsaspossibleandtheyfind/foundmeacomfortableoneon^thesecondfloor.TherearetwogirlsfrommycoursehereandIplantomakefriend/friendswiththemsowecanhelpeachotheron/withthecoursework.Everyoneelseseemsveryniceandwarmly/warmhere.Well,Ihadbetterto（去掉）stopnow.I’mgoingtoattendmine/myfirstlessonthisafternoon,for/soI’vegotsomepreparationstomake,Keepintouch.

Best,

Carol

2010短文改错答案

MyfriendNicktoldme^astoryabouthisexperiencebackintheUS.whichwasveryinterested/interesting.Onedayhewashavingayardsaleandtheoldmanlivingnextdoorcome/camebytohelp.Astheoldma