高中英语作文 建议信.docx

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高中英语作文建议信

建议信

（1）-----阐释原因；提出建议类

请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。

问题包括：

1.菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现象严重。

注意：

1.词数不少于120；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:

食堂canteen

DearPrincipal,

Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!

Yours,

LiHua

作文范文：

DearPrincipal,

Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.The

problemsareasfollows.

Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoices

aretoolimited.Anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwe

havelesstimetohavearest.Meanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthe

foodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.

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AsfarasI'mconcerned,measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovethe

conditionsofthecanteen.Firstofall,it'ssuggestedthatthepricesbemore

reasonableandthechoicesofdishesbemorevarious.Inaddition,it'sbettertoopen

moreservicewindowstoreducewaitingtime.

Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!

需注意的词汇、表达：

deliciouswaitingtaste（n.味道）tasty（adj.可口的）cook（n.厨师）cooker（n.炊具）

price价格

lower/bringdowntheprice降低价格

atalower/reasonableprice以较低的价格

varietiesofdishes种类多样的菜品

Foronething,…….Foranother,……

makesb（not）dosth

wait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtime

Thekindsoffoodarefew.

表达食堂出现的问题：

Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscan'taffordthem.

Therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,whichisfarfromsatisfactory./which

can'tsatisfyourneeds.

Ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,whichdecreasesourtimeofrestat

noon.

Thefoodinthecanteendoesn'ttastegood./nice.

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Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn'tgood.

Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftandwasted

It'sawasteoftimetostandinlineforalongtime.

Thefoodinthecanteentastessobad,whichleadstoaseverephenomenonof

wastingfood.

Inthelongrun,it'sbadforourhealthandstudy.

Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.

表达提出的建议：

Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoagoodsolutiontotheproblems.

Ithinkit'snecessarytoprovidemorekindsoffood.

It'shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.

Soit'shightimeforustotakemeasures

Tosolvetheproblems,Ithinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure（形象）and

improvethepresentconditiontosatisfythestudents'needs.

Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityata

reasonableprice.

Thecanteenshouldopenmorewindowssothatweneedn'twaitsolong.

AsfarasI'mconcerned,thecanteenshouldattachimportancetothequality.

What'smore,differentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.

Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.

建议模板：

Dear….,

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I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…….（引出话题）.

Hereareafewsuggestions.Firstofall,itisimportanttodosth.Then,italsohelpsto

dosth.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatodosth.

建议句型积累：

Manywayscancontributetosolvingtheproblem,butIthinkthefollowingmay

bethemosteffectiveones.

I'dliketomakesomesuggestionson…….

It'sofgreatimportanceforsbtodosth.

It'snecessaryforsbtodosth

Itwouldbeagoodideaforsbtodosth./Itwouldbeabetterideaif…….

Itcontributes/helpsalotif………

Isuggestthat…../Mysuggestionisthat…

You'dbetterdosth./We'dbetterdosth

It'sbettertodosth

Measuresaresupposedtobetakentodosth

Wearesupposedtotakeeffectivemeasurestodosth

It'shightimethatsbdidsth./It'shightimeforsbtodosth

建议信

（2）-----阐释原因；提出建议类

假定你是中学生李华。

在一位名叫SadMother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。

请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。

I'mthemotherofafourteen-year-old.RecentlyIhavefoundthatmydaughter

toldliestome.Theotherdayshetoldmethatshedidwellinthefinalexam.

HoweverIfoundoutshefailedinmathandEnglish.WhatshouldIdo?

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写作要点：

1.表明了解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因；

3.提出至少两条建议

要求：

1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。

2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。

3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

4.书写需清晰、工整。

Hi，SadMother，

Ihavelearnedthat_____________________________________________

作文范文：

Hi,SadMother,

Ihavelearnedthatyourdaughtertoldliestoyou.Asapeerofyourdaughter,I

thinkthereasonsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,maybethereasonwhyyourdaughtertoldalieisthatyouaretoo

strictwithherandsheisafraidyouwillpunishherifshetellsyouthetruth.Besides,

nowadays,pare