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四级英语作文历年汇总

2011年12月

英语四级作文题目

　Directions:

You'reallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,"Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I'vedoneithundredsoftime."You'dwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

　　Outlines:

　　1.坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。

　　2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命

　　3.学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才

【范文1】

　　NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWill

　　Aswehavereadfromabove,quitting-smokingseemseasy,butinrealityitisrarelyachieved.Thereissomethingprovokingandinterestinginthisparadox,justbecausesworddoesnotwearthestoneasdrippingwaterdoes.

　　Theabilitytodosomethingoverandoveragaininashorttimemayimplyitseasiness,butinalongrun,alifetimemaybe,thingsturnouttobequitetheopposite.Also,asisoftenthecase,onemayhaveobtainedallthetoolsandopportunitiestoachievesomething,butintheendtheystillfailduetothewillshortage.

Sohowcouldweavoidthedilemma?

Hereistheprimeconditionofsuccess:

willandperseverance.Concentrateyouenergy,thoughtandmindexclusivelyonthebusinessinwhichyouareengaged,hangoninthereandbepatient,for,asEmersonputit,noonecancheatyououtofyourultimatesuccessbutyourself.

【范文2】

NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWill

　　Withthecomingofabrandnewerafullofopportunitiesandinnovations,theissueofhowtosucceedhasarousedgrowingconcerninthepublic.Althoughtherearethousandsofwaystosuccess,inmyopinion,astrongwillistheimportantguaranteeofsuccess,justasaproverbsays,“Wherethereisawillthereisaway”.

　　Thelonghistoryofhumanbeinghasprovedthatonlythosewhohaveastrongwillcanfulfillgreatmissionandachievesuccessatlast.Nothingsucceedswithoutastrongwill.TakeMaoZedong,oneofthegreatfoundersofthePeople’sRepublicofChina,asanexample.IfwithoutthestrongwilltosaveChinesepeoplefromheavydisasterandbuildaprosperous,democraticandcivilizednewcountry,howcouldhedriveJapaneseoutofChinaandbecomesuchafamousleaderintheworld?

Ifweasastudentwanttobesuccessfulinthefuture,thestrongwillonhardworkingisthemostimportant.Nowadays,wehavebeenenteringaninformationagewithrapidupdateofknowledge.Whofirstlyseizesandkeepsupwiththedevelopmentofadvancedinformationcansucceedsatlast.Therefore,studyinghardtogetmoreknowledgeandimproveourabilitytohandlecomplicatedproblemsaspossibleistheonlywaytolaythesolidfoundationoffuturesuccess.

2012年6月

OnExcessivePackaging

　　Nowadaysthephenomenaofexcessivepackagingofgoodsareprevailinginoursociety:

clothesswathedintissuepaper,placedincardboardboxandfinallywrappedinwell-designedplasticbags,importedbottlesofgrapewinepackedinwoodenboxes,fruitsputinhand-wovenbaskets,tonamebutafew.

　　Thereareseveralcausesofexcessivepackaging.Thefirstreasonisthatalargenumberofcompaniesbelievethattheycanattractcustomers’attentionandstimulatetheirpurchasingdesirebyover-packagingtheirgoods,thusgainingmoreprofits.Ontheotherhand,quiteanumberofconsumersmistakenlyholdthatthemoredelicatethepackageis,thebetterthequalitywillbe,thusencouragingexcessivepackaging.

　　Inmypointofview,excessivepackaginghasdisastrousconsequences,includingthelossofpreciousresources,excessiveconsumptionofwaterandenergy,andunnecessaryextractionofscarcelandforlandfill.

　　Tosolvetheproblem,it’snecessarytotakethefollowingmeasures.First,lawsandregulationsmustbemadetorestrictexcessivepackagingofcompanies.Inaddition,weneedtoraiseconsumer’sawarenessthatexcessivepackagingdoesn’tequaltohighqualityandadvocatepackagingrecycling.

　　【解析】

　　本次作文的话题是“过度包装”，话题不断新，考生应该都比较熟悉。

写好本篇作文的关键在于紧跟题目所列提纲：

现象——原因——看法和建议，确定相应的写作结构。

重点分析产生此现象的原因有哪些，把最重要的两三点罗列下来。

最后，根据分析出的原因提供相应的建议。

　　范文首段开门见山，首先一句话总结如今社会上过度包装现象盛行，而后举出一些实例补充说明。

　　第二段重点从公司和消费者两方面论述产生过度包装的原因。

公司方面是为了吸引顾客，刺激消费，赢取更多的利润;消费者方面是认为包装越精美，质量越好这种错误的消费意识。

　　接下来作者表明自己的看法，认为过度包装会导致很多问题：

稀缺资源的流失;水，能源的过度消耗以及产生不必要的垃圾场等。

　　最后一段作者针对原因提出了一些解决方案。

第一方面，建立法律规章制度来约束企业的过度包装行为。

第二方面，必须让消费者认识到过度包装不等同于高质量，并提倡包装物的回收利用。

　　本文条理清晰，论述充分，语言使用规范得当，如：

tonamebutafew，thefirstreasonisthat…，ontheotherhand，inmypointofview，tosolvetheproblem，first，inaddition等。

2012年12月

【第一套试卷：

】

　　Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteALetterApplyingforaBankLoan.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese. 

　　1.你的基本情况

　　yourbasicinformation1

　　2.你申请贷款的原因、数额及用途

　　youreasonfortheloan,theamountandpurpose

　　3.你如何保证专款专用以及你的还款打算

【范文一】EducationPays

Theabovebarchartclearlyshowsuseducationpaysin2010.Weseethatonewithhighereducationbackgroundearnsmoremoneyweeklythanthosewithlowerones.Forinstance,thecollegestudentswithnodegreegetpaid$712perweekwhereasthosewithaBachelor’sdegreecanearn$1038.

Severalreasons,inmyopinion,canbeidentifiedtoaccountforthisphenomenon.Tobeginwith,comparedwiththosewithcomparativelylowereducationdegree,peoplewhohavereceivedhighereducationpossessconsiderablywiderknowledge,moreremarkablelearningandresearchability,greaterinnovationandmostofall,resourcefulsocialnetwork,allofwhichareessentialtoahigh-incomework.Also,thehigherone’seducationdegreeis,thebiggerplatformhewillhavetoshowhisability.Forexample,hiscollege,university,orresearchinstitutewillorganizevariousjobfairsforthemtocommunicatefacetofacewithemployers.

Thisphenomenontellsusthateducationisaworthyinvestment.Therefore,substantialeducationinvestmentshouldbestrengthenedwhilewe,ascollegestudents,shouldstudyhardertobuildourcountryandstriveforabetterlifeforourselves.

【范文二】

EducationPays

Judgingfromthetable,wecanseethatpeople’sincomeincreasesalongwiththeireducationlevels.Aboveall，theaveragecollegegraduatesearnmuchmorethanthetypicalhigh-schoolgraduates.

Thefactrevealedbythesedataisobvious:

adegreedoesbringdistinctivefinancialbenefitstoitsholders.Butisittruethatadegreealonecanensureabrightfuture?

Idon’tthinksobecause,ontheonehand,thefinancialvalueofhigheducationdependsheavilyonwhatskillsgraduatescangainfromitinsteadofthedegreeitself.Afterall,anemployeronlypaysforyourabilityandperformance,notforyourcertificate.Ontheotherhand,themostvaluableblesshigheducationbringstograduatesistheabilitytolearnquicklyandefficiently.Peoplereceivedmoreeducationtendtokeeplifelonglearninghabitsaftertheirgraduation,whichwouldhelpthemgainmoreopportunitiesintheircareerpath.

Inconclusion,whataccountsforeducationpaysisnotthedegreealone,butthegraduate’sabilityandlearninghabit.

【第二套试卷：

】

　　图表说明：

全英文，无中文翻译和提示

　　EducationPays,publishedeverythreeyears,presentsdetailedevidenceoftheprivateandpublicbenefitsofhighereducation.Italsoshedslightonthedistributionofthesebenefitsbyexaminingboththeincreasesandthepersistentdisparitiesincollegeparticipationandcompletion.InthethreeyearsbetweenthepublicationofEducationPays2007andEducationPays2010,medianearningsforfour-yearcollegegraduatesincreasedmorerapidlythanthoseofhighschoolgraduatesandthegapbetweentheunemploymentratesofthetwogroupsgrew.Inadditiontoearningscomparisons,thereportdocumentsdifferencesinlifestyles,health,andotheroutcomesforpeoplewithandwithoutcollegeeducation.Differencesinenrollmentandcompletionpatternsacrossdemographicgroupshighlighttherealitythatgapsineducationalattainmentareexplainedbyacombinationofmoneyandotherfactors.

第一段：

引入现象

　　因为这是图片题，所以先上句“应景”的废话“Aswecanseefromthepicturethat”，其余的部分直接往上写我们的模版“nowadays,thephenomenonof……hasarousedwideconcernamongthepeoplewhocareabouttheyoungpeople'sfuture”记得要把原来的“……”换成关键词“EducationPays”，要不就跑题了!

剩下的随便写写，凑足字数就好了。

　　第一段可以写成：

　　Aswecanseefromthepicturethatnowadays,thephenomenonofEducationPayshasarousedwideconcernamongthepeoplewhocareabouttheyoungpeople'sfuture.Especiallytotheyounggenerationlivinginthebigcities,theytendtoputthepaystothefirstplacebutnotthedegree,ignoringthefactthatthisbehaviormayposeunderlyingthreattotheirpresentcareerandmayevenendangerfutures.

　　第二段可以有两种写法，即第一种，说明这个“EducationPays”的原因，我给大家了四个原因写上一个就行。

第一种写成：

现象原因。

　　AmplereasonscanaccountfortheissueofEducationPays，thefollowingonemightbethemostcritical.Forthemajorityofyoungpeople,theyhavebeenalwaysconsideringtheeducationasabotheringthingtodoornotaopportunitythatcanaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.So,theywanttogetajobasearlyaspossible.But,asmatteroffact,asthepicturedescribed,thepeoplewhohavelearnedmoreearnmorethanothersAnd,inthepicture,theoneswhohavethedoctoraldegreeearnmoreXXXXthantheoneswhohaveonlyadegreeasbachelor.

　　在这个段落中，最后一句话，我着重引用了一下图片的数据，比较了一下，没写倍数，那东西一不留神就写错，不写!

　　第二段也还可以写成：

现象讨论，即大家对这个事儿看法不一致。

有的人觉得这个事儿对什么好，有的人觉得这个事儿对什么坏!

写上就好，因为，无论什么事儿，大家的观点都不是一致的哦!

第二段第二种如下：

　　Doesanyonemaintainthesameattitudetowardsthisissue?

Definitelynot，asamatteroffact，opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.SomearguethatEducationPaysisbeneficialtodoctors,because,bythisway,theycanearnmaremoney.However，quiteafewpeopleholdtheoppositeopinionthatEducationPaysisdetrimentaltotheoneswholearntheskillsthroughhardworks.But,mostofpeopleagreethatthedemeritsoflesseducationfaroutweighitsmerits