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TOPIC:
MyViewsofUniversityStudentsGoinginforbusiness
Inarecentreport,someuniversitystudentsopenedsmallshopsneartheiruniversity.Thishasprovokedquiteabitofdiscussionamongtheirteachersandclassmates.Somesidedwiththestudentbusinessmen,whileotherstooktheoppositestand.Personally,Idisapproveofsuchpractice.
Tobeginwith,doingbusinesswhilestudyinginuniversityisoftenatoddswiththeprincipalgoalofreceivinghighereducation.Admittedly,weneeduniversitystudentswhoarewellpreparedfortheirsocialroleswhentheyentersocietyupongraduation,butthisdoesnotmeantheymustobtainsuchpreparationatthecostoftheiracademicstudy.Doingbusinessentailstheinvestmentofalotoftimeandenergy.Moreover,doingbusinessisnotthesolepathtosocialexperience.Thereareotherwaysbymeansofwhichtheycancomebythemuch-valuedsocialknowledge.Forinstance,theycantakepartinsomeextracurricularprogramsandsocialpracticesinvacations.Themajorityofstudentswhohavehadsuchexperiencesaresaidtobenefitalotfromthoseformsofshort-termsocialcontact.
Fortheabovereasonsandthosenotmentionedhere,Iinsistthatuniversitystudentsshouldnotgoinforbusiness.Primarily,itisnotthatdoingbusinessiswrongoruseless,butthatitmayspoilone’suniversityeducationduetoitshugedemandfortimeandenergy.
TOPIC:
OneConsequenceofUrbanization
Nowadayswiththedevelopmentofeconomy,existingcitiesaregrowingbiggerandnewcitiesareappearing.Nodoubt,thisprocessofurbanizationhasbroughtaboutfundamentalchangesinChina.However,someproblemsalsoemergefromthespreadofurbanization.Amongothers,Ithink,oneconsequenceisthedecreaseofarableland.
Foronething,citybuildingandexpansioninvolvesahugeexpenseofland…Asaresult,thesizeofthearablelandshrinksquickly.
What’smore,nationalconditionsofChinadeterminethattheproblemoflandlossisaseriousone.
Inaword,amongtheproblemposedbytheprocessofurbanization,landlossisdoubtlessaseriousoneintheactualcontextofChina.Thebestsolution,Isuppose,istomakethemostandbestofeveryinchoflandthroughreasonableplanning.
以上提纲的正文如何展开:
Foronething,citybuildingandexpansioninvolvesahugeexpenseofland.Atpresent,citiesarealreadythicklybuiltup.Cityconstructorshavetoturntothefarmland.Theretheysetupmorefactoriesandplants;theretheyconstructhighwaysandotherformsofinfrastructure.Asaresult,thesizeofthearablelandshrinksquickly.
What’smore,nationalconditionsofChinadeterminethattheproblemoflandlossisaseriousone.Asweallknown,Chinahasthebiggestpopulationintheworld.ItisalsoaknownfactthatChinaranksverylowintermsofthesizeofarablelandpercapita.Asamatteroffact,grainsupplyhasalwaysremainedaheavyburdeninourcountry.Withthereductionoffarmland,theproblemhasbecomeevenmoreacute.
课后思考:
确定自己观点;如何展开
1.MyViewsofPlagiarism
2.MyViewsofBloodDonation
1.MyViewsofPlagiarism
Sample1
Nowadaysthephenomenonofplagiarismattheuniversitiesisattractingeverincreasingattention.Themalpracticeisfoundespeciallyamongthestudents.Takeresearchpaperwritingforexample.ManystudentscopymoreorlessfromsomeoneelseontheInternetandpresentthepapersastheirown.Sometimesteachersgiveseverepunishmenttothosewhohaveplagiarized,butplagiarismstillpersists.Tosolvetheproblem,Ithinkwemustfindoutwhyittakesplace.
Whydoesplagiarismoccursofrequently?
Forsomestudents,writingapapercanbeaverydifficulttaskandtheyareafraidthattheirpaperswon’tpasswiththeirownacademicabilities.Sowhenitcomestowritingtheresearchpapers,theyhavetoresorttoplagiarism.Secondly,somestudentsplagiarizebecausetheyrunafterfameorcredit.Intheireyes,thepublishingofapaperisagreathonor,nomatterwhethertheycanmanageitornot.Tothatend,theystealothers’researchfindingsandclaimthemtobetheirown.Finally,stillsomestudentswanttosavetimeforplaywhentheycopyfromothers.ItisalltooeasytodaytofindwhattheywantontheInternet.
Inconclusion,sinceplagiarismstemsfrommanyfactors,weshouldworkwithconcertedactiontoremoveallpossiblesources.Forexample,wemayreformourwayofassessment,attachinglessimportancetoarticlepublication.Butaboveall,weshouldhelpthestudentsrealizetheshameofthedeceitfulbehavior.
MyViewsofPlagiarism
Sample2
Imaginethatsomeonehasspentmanyyearsofhislifeworkingonaninvention,andthemsomeoneelsehastakenthatinventionandreleaseditunderhisownname.Suchbehavioroftakingothers’creditforone’sownisnotonlyaproblemthataffectscollegestudents,butalsoaplaguewithteachersandseasonedwriters.Ideemittobemostharmfultotheacademiccircleandeventhewholesociety.
Theharmfulnesscanbesummarizedinthefollowingthreerespects.Inthefirstplace,therightsoftheoriginalcopyrightholdersarecruellyviolated.Withothersstealingtheirtechnology,alotofeconomicreturnswillevaporatealthoughtheyshouldbeprotectedunderapatent.Moreover,peoplewilllosetheaspirationtocreateifthereisplagiarismhereandthere.Comparedwithinventionandinnovation,illegalduplicationischeapandimmediatelyrewarding.Lastbutnotleast,plagiarismwillleadtothedegradationofthewholeacademiccircle.Noonewillreadilybelievewhatscientistssay.
Tosumup,plagiarismissomethingdetrimental,indeed.Thegovernmentandthecitizensshouldjoinhandstoputanendtoplagiarism.Ononehand,thegovernmentshouldpunishtheplagiarizersseverelyincasetheyharmtheauthorsagain.Ontheotherhand,commoncitizensshouldreportsuchharmfulphenomenaassoonaspossible.Onlybythejointeffortsofthegovernmentandthecommonpeoplecanwedoawaywithplagiarism.
2.MyViewsofOrganDonation
Sample
Sometimeago,weheardprotestslike“I’dratherburnmyselfthanbeingforcedtodonatemyorgansaftermydeath!
”Tobequitefrank,sayingsuchathingissimplystupid.Inmyopinioneveryoneshoulddonatehisorgansafterheorsheisdead.
Tobeginwith,donatingorgansissimplyaneasywayofsavingotherpeoplefromdeathorhandicap,whichisfarmoreimportantthanstickingtoethicaldoubts.Weliketohelppeoplewhoneedourhelp.Whenwearedead,wewillnotneedtheorgansanymore.Inthatcase,wecandonatethemandhelpanotherpersoninneed.Ontheotherhand,wecancontinueourlifeinanotherbodybydonatingkeyorganstoit.Puttingourselvesintheshoesofthosewhosufferfromadiseaselikekidneyfailure,wesurelywishsomeonewouldcometoourrescuewiththeofferofahealthykidney.
Therefore,organdonationneedstobeadvocated.Forbettereffect,thelawshouldbepassedthatstipulatesthatonlythosewhoagreetodonateorganswhennecessarywillreceiveorgantransplantation.Besides,peopleshouldgetbetterinformedaboutthewholeprocessofdonatingorgans.
3.OneConsequenceofPopularizationofPrivateCars
Sample
Nowadays,moreandmorefamiliesowntheirprivatecarsandthis,undoubtedly,makestheirlifeeasier.Buttheproblemsthatensuefromthepopularizationofprivatecarscannotbeneglected.Oneconsequenceofitisthatpeople’shealthandlivesarebeingthreatenedbytheincreasingcars.
Firstly,peoplewhodrivecarshavefewerchancestotakephysicalexercisesthanwhentheyusedtowalktoridebicycles.Lackofsufficientexercisemaymakepeopleweakerandweakerandfinallyleadtoallkindsofdisease.Secondly,therewillbemoretrafficaccidents,endangeringotherpeople’slives,foralotofprivatecarownersarenotexperiencedenough.Thesepeoplearecall“roadkillers”.EverydaywecanfindsomanyreportsaboutsuchaccidentseitherinnewspaperoronTV.Everyyear,thousandsofinnocentpeopledieincaraccidents.Tomakemattersworse,theincreasingprivatecarsseriouslypollutetheenvironment.Theexhaustsdischargedfromthecarspoisontheairandthenoiseofthehorndrivespeoplecrazy,whichdogreatharmtopeople’shealthandlives.
Inconclusion,privatecarsarenottobeexpanded.Thoughtheybringalotofconveniencetopeople’slife,theyalsoposethreatstotheirhealthandevenkillthem.
4.MyIdeaofaHarmoniousSociety
Outline1:
Thesis:
Formypart,thetwokeywordsofaharmonioussocietyareequalityandwealth.
T.S.1Firstofall,equalityhelpstoreducesocialconflict.
E.g.women;
farmer
T.S.2Second,economicaffluencecanensurethestabilityofsociety.
e.g.poverty—crime
Outline2:
Thesis:
Inconstructingaharmonioussociety,Ithink,itisessentialthatpeopleharmonizewellwitheachotherandwithnature.
T.S.1Firstofall,thereshouldbenosuchevilasterrorismorwars.
peace----people’shope
T.S.2Second,weshouldtakegoodcareofnature.
Punishedbynature
5.IfIamaParent
Outline1:
Thesis:
IfIamaparent,Iwilltaketheresponsibilityformychild’seducationbecauseithasagreatinfluenceonhisorherfuturelife.
T.S.1Firstofall,Iwilltrytobuildagoodfamilyatmosphere.
E.g.“Exampleisbetterthanprecept.”;
Setexampleinallaspects
T.S.2Second,Iwillseetoitthatmychildwillgetthebestchancesofbeingwelleducated.
e.g.supportandsendhim/hertopursuefurtherstudy
Outline2:
Thesis:
Iwilltrymybesttobringmychildahappylife.
T.S.1Firstofall,Iwillworkhardtoearnenoughmoneytoprovideherwithrichmaterialconditions.
T.S.2Inadditiontomaterialcomfort,Iwillalsoseetohersp