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范文欣赏
范文欣赏:
SampleOne
WhySchoolchildren’sHomeworkShouldBeReduced
ItisafamiliarsceneinChinathatschoolchildren,withaheavyschoolbagalmosthalftheheightofthem,hurrytoandbackfromtheirclass.Ourschoolchildrenhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyhavehardlyanytimetoenjoytheirchildhood.Inmyopinion,toomuchhomeworkdoesharmtothechildrenanditmustbereduced(通过现象描述引出自己的观点).
Ihavetworeasonstosupportmystatementthatschoolchildren’shomeworkshouldbereduced(段落主题句承上启下,并对本段内容加以统领和制约).First,toomuchhomeworkdoesharmtotheirmentaldevelopment(要点一:
精神方面).Mostpartoftheirhomeworkisnothingbutrepeatedexercisesimposeduponthekidsonlyforthepurposeoftheirpassingvariousexams.Therepeatedboringhomeworkwillinevitablyresultintheirlossofinterestinlearningand,evenworse,putthemundergreatpressure.Second,toomuchhomeworkdoesharmtotheirphysicaldevelopment(要点二:
身体方面).Childrenneedphysicalactivities,fromwhichtheycanbuilduptheirbodies,gainasenseofpartnershipanddisplaytheirtalentsincertainsports.AsanEnglishsayinggoes:
allstudy,noplay,makesJackadullboy.Itisnowgenerallyacceptedthatchildrenwhoarefullyoccupiedwiththeirhomeworkwillbecomeweakinhealth.
Accordingtotheaboveanalysis,wecanarriveattheconclusionthatit’swiseforteacherstoreducetheirstudents’homework.(结论)
审题须知:
1.说明文。
2.须解释减负的原因。
3.可从“减负的重要性”入手,也可从“不减负的危害性”入手,即:
可正面阐述,也可反面论证,但必须“择一而作”,不可正反相混。
SampleTwo
MyViewoftheInternet
TheInternetbringsknowledgetousinanewway.WecanacquireallkindsofinformationfromtheInternet;wecanalsodoshoppingandhaveentertainmentonline;andwecaneventakeacourseontheweb.WhatacolorfulworldtheInternethasbroughttous!
However,justaseverythinghastwosides,IfindtheInternethasmanydisadvantages.(简要地讲述互联网带来的好处后指出自己认为它也有许多不利方面)
Tobeginwith,theInternetdoesharmtostudents.Somestudentsareeasilyaddictedtoonlinegames.Theyplaythegamesalldayandnight,sotheydonothavemuchtimeintheirstudyandoftenfailintheirexams.Tomakemattersworse,someotherstudentsliketochatontheInternetintheirsparetime,andtrytohavecyberlove.Apersonmayfallinlovewithanotherwhoismucholderoryounger,ortheonewhodoesnottellhisorherrealidentityatall.Thismaycausemanyproblemsinsociety.Worstofall,therearemanycheatsontheInternet.CrimesinvolvingInternetfraudkeephappening,withpeoplebeingcheatedoutoftheirmoney.(运用例证法详细地分析其带来的不良后果)
Thus,theInternetisbynomeansaperfectinvention.Itisveryimportantforustomakeaproperuseofit,turningitintoausefulimportantresourceforourstudyandlife.(得出合理使用互联网才能有助于学习和生活这一结论)
Today,computershavebeenpopularizedanditisverycommonforustosurftheInternet,especiallyforthecollegestudents.However,manyofusspendmoretimeplayinggamesandchattingthanlearningviatheInternet,leadingpeopletocondemnthattheInternethasdoneharmtobothourbodyandmind.Despiteallthesedisadvantages,IdonotthinkwecandenytheadvantagesoftheInternet.
First,itisveryconvenienttogetinformationfromtheInternet.Informationcanoftenbefoundveryquickly,andtheamountofpotentialinformationisveryhuge.Wedonothavetosearchpilesofbooksornewspapersfortheinformationweneed.Second,theInternetmakesiteasierforpeopletokeepintouchwiththeirfriendsandrelatives.Ittakesmuchmoretimetopostlettersinthetraditionalwayanditalsocostsmoretomakelong-distancecalls.Nowwecanwritetoourfriendsandrelativesbye-mailingandtheycanreceivethelettersoveralongdistanceinafewseconds.
Inconclusion,theInternetbringsusalotofconvenienceandcreatesaworldwherenothingisimpossible.Solongaswemakeproperuseofit,itsadvantageswilloutweighthedisadvantages.
Internet—aCoinofTwoSides
Internetisnowverypopularinourcountry.Surfingonthenethasbecomedailytopicamongpeople,oldoryoung.Buteverycoinhastwosides,wehavetoidentifyitsimpactsonus,goodandbad.(事实陈述法作引言句,引出本文主题)
Internetplaysanimportantroleinourlife(正面作用).Itmakestheworldsmallerandpeopleclosertoeachother.Surfingonthenet,wefeelthenationsandpeoplebecomeourneighborsandchattingpartners.Internetisalsothemostconvenientandefficientaccesstoinformation.Everyhour,peopleofdifferentagesandprofessionsseekinformationonthenet,andthenetneverfailsthem.Moreover,formodernpeoplewhosuffermuchpressureofworkandlife,thenethasalsobecometheirprivaterepose.HoweverusefultheInternetistous,ithasitsownproblems(通过转折,引出负面作用).First,somepeoplearesoenthusiasticaboutthenetthattheylosethemselvesintheworldinventedbythenet.Second,thenetsometimesoffersinformationoflargerquantityandwiderrangethanitisexpected,therefore,ittakesmoreandmoretimetoseektherealusefulinformation.Mostimportantly,theInternethasbecomeanewlieuofcrimes.
Infact,nothingisflawlessintheworld.Weshouldmakefulluseofthenetwhileminimizingitsnegativeeffects.Withastricteradministrationofthenetandtheimprovementofvaguemorality,theInternetwillbettertheworldforallofus(建议和展望式结尾).
SampleThree
ShouldClassAttendanceBeRequired?
Requiredclassattendanceissocommonlypracticedatcollegesanduniversitiesthatmanyteachersandevenstudentsthemselvessimplyassumeitisagoodthing(一些老师和同学的观点).Infact,requiredclassattendancedoesmoreharmthangood(我自己的观点).
Thereareseveralreasonsthatcollegesanduniversitiesshouldnotrequirethestudents’classattendance(段落主题句).First,rigidattendancepoliciesdonotbenefitstudents’studies.Forexample,astudentmayhavetogiveupalecturewhichhefindsvitaltohisstudiessimplybecausehedarenotruntheriskofbeingpenalizedforpoorattendanceinhiscourse.Second,thelecturesofsometeachersarenotalwaysconstructive.Astudentshouldbeallowedtodecideforhimselfwhetheranin-classexperienceisworthwhilewhenhisteachermerelyrepeatsmaterialfromthetextbookorwastesclassbytellingirrelevantstories.Finallyandmostimportantly,thereisnoprovencorrelationbetweenattendanceandperformanceinacourse.Astudentmaynevermissasingleattendanceinacourse,butwhoknowswhetherornotheisjustsittingtheredaydreamingallthetime?
Requiredclassattendancemaysecureonehundredpercentattendanceforacourse,butitdoesnotmakemuchsense(结论).
SampleFour
IsFilmGivingWaytoTV?
Itwasafamiliarscenethatpeopleflockedintocinemasandwaitedanxiouslyforthebeginningofamovieinthe1980s.Nowadays,however,filmboomseemstohavegonewiththewindbecausemostofthepeoplepreferwatchingTVtoseeingfilms(简要描述作引言句,引出自己的观点).
OneofthereasonsthatfilmisgivingwaytoTVisthatmostofthepeopleturntoTVastheirchiefentertainment.Comparedwithseeingafilminthecinema,watchingTVathomeismoreconvenientandcomfortablewayofrelaxation.Peoplejustseatthemselvesatthecozylivingroom,chattingwithothers,eatingordrinkingalittle,whilekeepinganeyeonTV.Moreover,TVprovidesalargevarietyofprogramswhiletheaudienceisateasetomaketheirownchoice.Therefore,mostoftheaveragefamilieshaveatleastoneTVsetathomeandsomeevenhavemorethanonesothatthefamilymemberswon’thavetoargueaboutthechoiceofchannels.Besides,withtheimprovementofTVtechnology,thelargerscreenandexcellentsoundsystemofTVcanalsoprovidethesimilaratmosphereandeffectofacinema.Sowhybothertogooutforafilm?
AlltheseshowthatfilmisgivingwaytoTV.Itisnotafashionthatpeopletrytofollowbutarealitythatpeopleliketoembrace(重申自己的观点).
SampleFive
Examinations—HarmfulorUseful?
InChina,Julyiscalled“DarkJuly”becauseeachyearinJulystudentshavetotakevariousexams.Quiteafewdreadthem,worryaboutthem,andstayupallnightstudyingforthem.However,Iamnotoneofthem.Onthecontrary,Ilovetotakeexamsbecausetheyareveryuseful.
Examinationsarestillconductedeverywhere,and,toagreatdegree,theyareuseful.First,theyforcestudentstostudyallthecourseswell.Usuallyafterexaminationsthetopstudentsareencouragedtogofurtheraheadintheirstudy;whilethelowachieverswillhavetostudyhardtocatchup.Second,theyofferstudentsanopportunitytodemonstratehowwelltheyhavelearned.Afterdifferentexaminations,studentswillseeonwhichcoursetheyhavetoworkharderorinwhichcoursetheyhavemadegreaterprogress.Thustheywillknowtheirstrongpointsandshortcomings.Andtheteacherswillalsoknowtheirstudentsbetterandadjusttheirteachingmaterialsandeventeachingmethods.Soexaminationsarebothbeneficialandusefultobothteachersandstudents.
Asacollegestudent,Ithink,theproperattitudetowardsexamsisthatweshouldtakeadvantageoftheirpositiveaspects.Ifwearefullypreparedforthecoursestobeexamined,wecanbenefitalotfromtheseexams.
CollegeExaminations
Inmostschoolsandcollegesexaminationsarecommonlyusedasachiefmeansofdecidingwhetherastudentsucceedsorfailsinmasteringaparticularsubject.Althoughitdoesthejobefficiently,itssideeffectsarealsoenormous.
Themostundesirableeffectisthatexaminationsencouragebadstudyhabits.Aswhatreallycountstothemistheexaminationscore,studentstendtolayemphasisonthecontentwhichwillbetested.Theyareencouragedtomemorizemechanicallyratherthantothinkcreat