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SampleOne

WhySchoolchildren’sHomeworkShouldBeReduced

ItisafamiliarsceneinChinathatschoolchildren,withaheavyschoolbagalmosthalftheheightofthem,hurrytoandbackfromtheirclass.Ourschoolchildrenhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyhavehardlyanytimetoenjoytheirchildhood.Inmyopinion,toomuchhomeworkdoesharmtothechildrenanditmustbereduced（通过现象描述引出自己的观点）.

Ihavetworeasonstosupportmystatementthatschoolchildren’shomeworkshouldbereduced（段落主题句承上启下，并对本段内容加以统领和制约）.First,toomuchhomeworkdoesharmtotheirmentaldevelopment（要点一：

精神方面）.Mostpartoftheirhomeworkisnothingbutrepeatedexercisesimposeduponthekidsonlyforthepurposeoftheirpassingvariousexams.Therepeatedboringhomeworkwillinevitablyresultintheirlossofinterestinlearningand,evenworse,putthemundergreatpressure.Second,toomuchhomeworkdoesharmtotheirphysicaldevelopment（要点二：

身体方面）.Childrenneedphysicalactivities,fromwhichtheycanbuilduptheirbodies,gainasenseofpartnershipanddisplaytheirtalentsincertainsports.AsanEnglishsayinggoes:

allstudy,noplay,makesJackadullboy.Itisnowgenerallyacceptedthatchildrenwhoarefullyoccupiedwiththeirhomeworkwillbecomeweakinhealth.

Accordingtotheaboveanalysis,wecanarriveattheconclusionthatit’swiseforteacherstoreducetheirstudents’homework.（结论）

审题须知：

1．说明文。

2．须解释减负的原因。

3．可从“减负的重要性”入手，也可从“不减负的危害性”入手，即：

可正面阐述，也可反面论证，但必须“择一而作”，不可正反相混。

SampleTwo

MyViewoftheInternet

TheInternetbringsknowledgetousinanewway.WecanacquireallkindsofinformationfromtheInternet;wecanalsodoshoppingandhaveentertainmentonline;andwecaneventakeacourseontheweb.WhatacolorfulworldtheInternethasbroughttous!

However,justaseverythinghastwosides,IfindtheInternethasmanydisadvantages.（简要地讲述互联网带来的好处后指出自己认为它也有许多不利方面）

Tobeginwith,theInternetdoesharmtostudents.Somestudentsareeasilyaddictedtoonlinegames.Theyplaythegamesalldayandnight,sotheydonothavemuchtimeintheirstudyandoftenfailintheirexams.Tomakemattersworse,someotherstudentsliketochatontheInternetintheirsparetime,andtrytohavecyberlove.Apersonmayfallinlovewithanotherwhoismucholderoryounger,ortheonewhodoesnottellhisorherrealidentityatall.Thismaycausemanyproblemsinsociety.Worstofall,therearemanycheatsontheInternet.CrimesinvolvingInternetfraudkeephappening,withpeoplebeingcheatedoutoftheirmoney.（运用例证法详细地分析其带来的不良后果）

Thus,theInternetisbynomeansaperfectinvention.Itisveryimportantforustomakeaproperuseofit,turningitintoausefulimportantresourceforourstudyandlife.（得出合理使用互联网才能有助于学习和生活这一结论）

Today,computershavebeenpopularizedanditisverycommonforustosurftheInternet,especiallyforthecollegestudents.However,manyofusspendmoretimeplayinggamesandchattingthanlearningviatheInternet,leadingpeopletocondemnthattheInternethasdoneharmtobothourbodyandmind.Despiteallthesedisadvantages,IdonotthinkwecandenytheadvantagesoftheInternet.

First,itisveryconvenienttogetinformationfromtheInternet.Informationcanoftenbefoundveryquickly,andtheamountofpotentialinformationisveryhuge.Wedonothavetosearchpilesofbooksornewspapersfortheinformationweneed.Second,theInternetmakesiteasierforpeopletokeepintouchwiththeirfriendsandrelatives.Ittakesmuchmoretimetopostlettersinthetraditionalwayanditalsocostsmoretomakelong-distancecalls.Nowwecanwritetoourfriendsandrelativesbye-mailingandtheycanreceivethelettersoveralongdistanceinafewseconds.

Inconclusion,theInternetbringsusalotofconvenienceandcreatesaworldwherenothingisimpossible.Solongaswemakeproperuseofit,itsadvantageswilloutweighthedisadvantages.

Internet—aCoinofTwoSides

Internetisnowverypopularinourcountry.Surfingonthenethasbecomedailytopicamongpeople,oldoryoung.Buteverycoinhastwosides,wehavetoidentifyitsimpactsonus,goodandbad.（事实陈述法作引言句，引出本文主题）

Internetplaysanimportantroleinourlife（正面作用）.Itmakestheworldsmallerandpeopleclosertoeachother.Surfingonthenet,wefeelthenationsandpeoplebecomeourneighborsandchattingpartners.Internetisalsothemostconvenientandefficientaccesstoinformation.Everyhour,peopleofdifferentagesandprofessionsseekinformationonthenet,andthenetneverfailsthem.Moreover,formodernpeoplewhosuffermuchpressureofworkandlife,thenethasalsobecometheirprivaterepose.HoweverusefultheInternetistous,ithasitsownproblems（通过转折，引出负面作用）.First,somepeoplearesoenthusiasticaboutthenetthattheylosethemselvesintheworldinventedbythenet.Second,thenetsometimesoffersinformationoflargerquantityandwiderrangethanitisexpected,therefore,ittakesmoreandmoretimetoseektherealusefulinformation.Mostimportantly,theInternethasbecomeanewlieuofcrimes.

Infact,nothingisflawlessintheworld.Weshouldmakefulluseofthenetwhileminimizingitsnegativeeffects.Withastricteradministrationofthenetandtheimprovementofvaguemorality,theInternetwillbettertheworldforallofus（建议和展望式结尾）.

SampleThree

ShouldClassAttendanceBeRequired?

Requiredclassattendanceissocommonlypracticedatcollegesanduniversitiesthatmanyteachersandevenstudentsthemselvessimplyassumeitisagoodthing（一些老师和同学的观点）.Infact,requiredclassattendancedoesmoreharmthangood（我自己的观点）.

Thereareseveralreasonsthatcollegesanduniversitiesshouldnotrequirethestudents’classattendance（段落主题句）.First,rigidattendancepoliciesdonotbenefitstudents’studies.Forexample,astudentmayhavetogiveupalecturewhichhefindsvitaltohisstudiessimplybecausehedarenotruntheriskofbeingpenalizedforpoorattendanceinhiscourse.Second,thelecturesofsometeachersarenotalwaysconstructive.Astudentshouldbeallowedtodecideforhimselfwhetheranin-classexperienceisworthwhilewhenhisteachermerelyrepeatsmaterialfromthetextbookorwastesclassbytellingirrelevantstories.Finallyandmostimportantly,thereisnoprovencorrelationbetweenattendanceandperformanceinacourse.Astudentmaynevermissasingleattendanceinacourse,butwhoknowswhetherornotheisjustsittingtheredaydreamingallthetime?

Requiredclassattendancemaysecureonehundredpercentattendanceforacourse,butitdoesnotmakemuchsense（结论）.

SampleFour

IsFilmGivingWaytoTV?

Itwasafamiliarscenethatpeopleflockedintocinemasandwaitedanxiouslyforthebeginningofamovieinthe1980s.Nowadays,however,filmboomseemstohavegonewiththewindbecausemostofthepeoplepreferwatchingTVtoseeingfilms（简要描述作引言句，引出自己的观点）.

OneofthereasonsthatfilmisgivingwaytoTVisthatmostofthepeopleturntoTVastheirchiefentertainment.Comparedwithseeingafilminthecinema,watchingTVathomeismoreconvenientandcomfortablewayofrelaxation.Peoplejustseatthemselvesatthecozylivingroom,chattingwithothers,eatingordrinkingalittle,whilekeepinganeyeonTV.Moreover,TVprovidesalargevarietyofprogramswhiletheaudienceisateasetomaketheirownchoice.Therefore,mostoftheaveragefamilieshaveatleastoneTVsetathomeandsomeevenhavemorethanonesothatthefamilymemberswon’thavetoargueaboutthechoiceofchannels.Besides,withtheimprovementofTVtechnology,thelargerscreenandexcellentsoundsystemofTVcanalsoprovidethesimilaratmosphereandeffectofacinema.Sowhybothertogooutforafilm?

AlltheseshowthatfilmisgivingwaytoTV.Itisnotafashionthatpeopletrytofollowbutarealitythatpeopleliketoembrace（重申自己的观点）.

SampleFive

Examinations—HarmfulorUseful?

InChina,Julyiscalled“DarkJuly”becauseeachyearinJulystudentshavetotakevariousexams.Quiteafewdreadthem,worryaboutthem,andstayupallnightstudyingforthem.However,Iamnotoneofthem.Onthecontrary,Ilovetotakeexamsbecausetheyareveryuseful.

Examinationsarestillconductedeverywhere,and,toagreatdegree,theyareuseful.First,theyforcestudentstostudyallthecourseswell.Usuallyafterexaminationsthetopstudentsareencouragedtogofurtheraheadintheirstudy;whilethelowachieverswillhavetostudyhardtocatchup.Second,theyofferstudentsanopportunitytodemonstratehowwelltheyhavelearned.Afterdifferentexaminations,studentswillseeonwhichcoursetheyhavetoworkharderorinwhichcoursetheyhavemadegreaterprogress.Thustheywillknowtheirstrongpointsandshortcomings.Andtheteacherswillalsoknowtheirstudentsbetterandadjusttheirteachingmaterialsandeventeachingmethods.Soexaminationsarebothbeneficialandusefultobothteachersandstudents.

Asacollegestudent,Ithink,theproperattitudetowardsexamsisthatweshouldtakeadvantageoftheirpositiveaspects.Ifwearefullypreparedforthecoursestobeexamined,wecanbenefitalotfromtheseexams.

CollegeExaminations

Inmostschoolsandcollegesexaminationsarecommonlyusedasachiefmeansofdecidingwhetherastudentsucceedsorfailsinmasteringaparticularsubject.Althoughitdoesthejobefficiently,itssideeffectsarealsoenormous.

Themostundesirableeffectisthatexaminationsencouragebadstudyhabits.Aswhatreallycountstothemistheexaminationscore,studentstendtolayemphasisonthecontentwhichwillbetested.Theyareencouragedtomemorizemechanicallyratherthantothinkcreat