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1、范文欣赏范文欣赏：Sample OneWhy Schoolchildrens Homework Should Be Reduced It is a familiar scene in China that schoolchildren, with a heavy schoolbag almost half the height of them, hurry to and back from their class. Our schoolchildren have so much homework to do that they have hardly any time to enjoy the

2、ir childhood. In my opinion, too much homework does harm to the children and it must be reduced (通过现象描述引出自己的观点). I have two reasons to support my statement that schoolchildrens homework should be reduced (段落主题句承上启下，并对本段内容加以统领和制约). First, too much homework does harm to their mental development (要点一：

3、精神方面). Most part of their homework is nothing but repeated exercises imposed upon the kids only for the purpose of their passing various exams. The repeated boring homework will inevitably result in their loss of interest in learning and, even worse, put them under great pressure. Second, too much h

4、omework does harm to their physical development (要点二： 身体方面). Children need physical activities, from which they can build up their bodies, gain a sense of partnership and display their talents in certain sports. As an English saying goes: all study, no play, makes Jack a dull boy. It is now generall

5、y accepted that children who are fully occupied with their homework will become weak in health. According to the above analysis, we can arrive at the conclusion that its wise for teachers to reduce their students homework. (结论)审题须知：1 说明文。2 须解释减负的原因。3 可从“减负的重要性”入手，也可从“不减负的危害性”入手，即：可正面阐述，也可反面论证，但必须“择一

6、而作”，不可正反相混。Sample TwoMy View of the Internet The Internet brings knowledge to us in a new way. We can acquire all kinds of information from the Internet; we can also do shopping and have entertainment online; and we can even take a course on the web. What a colorful world the Internet has brought to

7、 us! However, just as everything has two sides, I find the Internet has many disadvantages. （简要地讲述互联网带来的好处后指出自己认为它也有许多不利方面） To begin with, the Internet does harm to students. Some students are easily addicted to online games. They play the games all day and night, so they do not have much time in th

8、eir study and often fail in their exams. To make matters worse, some other students like to chat on the Internet in their spare time, and try to have cyber love. A person may fall in love with another who is much older or younger, or the one who does not tell his or her real identity at all. This ma

9、y cause many problems in society. Worst of all, there are many cheats on the Internet. Crimes involving Internet fraud keep happening, with people being cheated out of their money. （运用例证法详细地分析其带来的不良后果） Thus, the Internet is by no means a perfect invention. It is very important for us to make a prope

10、r use of it, turning it into a useful important resource for our study and life. （得出合理使用互联网才能有助于学习和生活这一结论） Today, computers have been popularized and it is very common for us to surf the Internet, especially for the college students. However, many of us spend more time playing games and chatting tha

11、n learning via the Internet, leading people to condemn that the Internet has done harm to both our body and mind. Despite all these disadvantages, I do not think we can deny the advantages of the Internet. First, it is very convenient to get information from the Internet. Information can often be fo

12、und very quickly, and the amount of potential information is very huge. We do not have to search piles of books or newspapers for the information we need. Second, the Internet makes it easier for people to keep in touch with their friends and relatives. It takes much more time to post letters in the

13、 traditional way and it also costs more to make long-distance calls. Now we can write to our friends and relatives by e-mailing and they can receive the letters over a long distance in a few seconds. In conclusion, the Internet brings us a lot of convenience and creates a world where nothing is impo

14、ssible. So long as we make proper use of it, its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages.Internet a Coin of Two Sides Internet is now very popular in our country. Surfing on the net has become daily topic among people, old or young. But every coin has two sides, we have to identify its impacts on

15、 us, good and bad.(事实陈述法作引言句，引出本文主题) Internet plays an important role in our life (正面作用). It makes the world smaller and people closer to each other. Surfing on the net, we feel the nations and people become our neighbors and chatting partners. Internet is also the most convenient and efficient acce

16、ss to information. Every hour, people of different ages and professions seek information on the net, and the net never fails them. Moreover, for modern people who suffer much pressure of work and life, the net has also become their private repose. However useful the Internet is to us, it has its own

17、 problems (通过转折，引出负面作用). First, some people are so enthusiastic about the net that they lose themselves in the world invented by the net. Second, the net sometimes offers information of larger quantity and wider range than it is expected, therefore, it takes more and more time to seek the real usefu

18、l information. Most importantly, the Internet has become a new lieu of crimes. In fact, nothing is flawless in the world. We should make full use of the net while minimizing its negative effects. With a stricter administration of the net and the improvement of vague morality, the Internet will bette

19、r the world for all of us (建议和展望式结尾).Sample ThreeShould Class Attendance Be Required? Required class attendance is so commonly practiced at colleges and universities that many teachers and even students themselves simply assume it is a good thing (一些老师和同学的观点). In fact, required class attendance does

20、 more harm than good (我自己的观点). There are several reasons that colleges and universities should not require the students class attendance (段落主题句). First, rigid attendance policies do not benefit students studies. For example, a student may have to give up a lecture which he finds vital to his studies

21、 simply because he dare not run the risk of being penalized for poor attendance in his course. Second, the lectures of some teachers are not always constructive. A student should be allowed to decide for himself whether an in-class experience is worthwhile when his teacher merely repeats material fr

22、om the textbook or wastes class by telling irrelevant stories. Finally and most importantly, there is no proven correlation between attendance and performance in a course. A student may never miss a single attendance in a course, but who knows whether or not he is just sitting there daydreaming all

23、the time? Required class attendance may secure one hundred percent attendance for a course, but it does not make much sense （结论）.Sample FourIs Film Giving Way to TV? It was a familiar scene that people flocked into cinemas and waited anxiously for the beginning of a movie in the 1980s. Nowadays, how

24、ever, film boom seems to have gone with the wind because most of the people prefer watching TV to seeing films (简要描述作引言句，引出自己的观点). One of the reasons that film is giving way to TV is that most of the people turn to TV as their chief entertainment. Compared with seeing a film in the cinema, watching

25、TV at home is more convenient and comfortable way of relaxation. People just seat themselves at the cozy living room, chatting with others, eating or drinking a little, while keeping an eye on TV. Moreover, TV provides a large variety of programs while the audience is at ease to make their own choic

26、e. Therefore, most of the average families have at least one TV set at home and some even have more than one so that the family members wont have to argue about the choice of channels. Besides, with the improvement of TV technology, the larger screen and excellent sound system of TV can also provide

27、 the similar atmosphere and effect of a cinema. So why bother to go out for a film? All these show that film is giving way to TV. It is not a fashion that people try to follow but a reality that people like to embrace (重申自己的观点).Sample FiveExaminationsHarmful or Useful? In China, July is called “Dark

28、 July” because each year in July students have to take various exams. Quite a few dread them, worry about them, and stay up all night studying for them. However, I am not one of them. On the contrary, I love to take exams because they are very useful. Examinations are still conducted everywhere, and

29、 , to a great degree, they are useful. First, they force students to study all the courses well. Usually after examinations the top students are encouraged to go further ahead in their study; while the low achievers will have to study hard to catch up. Second, they offer students an opportunity to d

30、emonstrate how well they have learned. After different examinations, students will see on which course they have to work harder or in which course they have made greater progress. Thus they will know their strong points and shortcomings. And the teachers will also know their students better and adju

31、st their teaching materials and even teaching methods. So examinations are both beneficial and useful to both teachers and students. As a college student, I think, the proper attitude towards exams is that we should take advantage of their positive aspects. If we are fully prepared for the courses t

32、o be examined, we can benefit a lot from these exams.College Examinations In most schools and colleges examinations are commonly used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job efficiently, its side effects are also enormous. The most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As what really counts to them is the examination score, students tend to lay emphasis on the content which will be tested. They are encouraged to memorize mechanically rather than to think creat