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英语论文写作1答案

《英语写作》作业

I.Revisethefollowingsentences.Theproblemsofthesentenceshavealreadybeenpointedout.Fortherevisionofsomeofthesentences,pleasefollowthedirectionsafterthem.

1.Themostpopularanimaloilforperfumetodayismusk.Althoughsomepeopledislikeitsheavy,sweetodor.（fragment）

Themostpopularanimaloilforperfumetodayismusk,althoughsomepeopledislikeitsheavy,sweetodor.

2.TheearliesthistoricaldocumentsfromtheMiddleEastrecordtheuseoffragrances.Notonlyinreligiousceremoniesbutalsoonthebody.（fragment）

TheearliesthistoricaldocumentfromtheMiddleEastrecordtheuseoffragrancenotonlyinreligiousceremoniesbutalsoonthebody.

3.Thebaboonstaredathischallenger.Poisedforcombat.（fragment）

Thebaboonstaredathischallenger.Hewaspoisedforcombat.

4.Theanimalsactedoutarivalry.Whichmystifiedtheirkeepers.（fragment）

Theanimalsactedoutarivalry.Itmystifiedtheirkeepers.

5.Thechallengerwasanewcomer.Whowasunusuallyfierce.（fragment）

Thechallengerwasanewcomerwhowasunusuallyfierce.

6.Shebackedcloserandclosertotheendofthedivingboard.Atlastfallingintothewater.（fragment）

Shebackedcloserandclosertotheendofthedivingboard,atlastfallingintothewater.

7.Peoplewavingflagsandcheering.Linedthestreetsfortheparade.（fragment）

Peoplewavingflagsandcheeringlinedthestreetsfortheparade.

8.Manypinetreesbearlargecones.WhichappearinAugust.（fragment）

ManypinetreesbearlargeconeswhichappearinAugust.

9.Petricisnotanurse,sheisadoctor.（commasplice）

Petricisnotanurse.Sheisadoctor.

10.Shedidwellincollegeheraveragewas3.9.（commasplice）

Shedidwellincollege.Heraveragewas3.9

11.Theshipwashuge,itsmaststoodthirtyfeethigh.（commasplice）

Theshipwashuge.Itsmaststoodthirtyfeethigh.

12.Chemistryhascontributedmuchtoourunderstandingoffoods,manyfoodssuchaswheatandbeanscanbeproducedinthelaboratory.（commasplice）

Chemistryhascontributedmuchtoourunderstandingoffoods.Manyfoodssuchaswheatandbeanscanbeproducedinthelaboratory.

13.Somelaboratory-grownfoodstastegood,theyarenutritious.（commasplice）

Somelaboratory-grownfoodstastegood,andtheyarenutritious.

14.Thevitaminsareadequate,theflavorisdeficient.（commasplice）

Thevitaminsareadequate.Theflavorisdeficient.

15.Rainhadfallensteadilyforsixteenhours,manybasementswereflooded.（commasplice）

Rainhadfallensteadilyforsixteenhours,andmanybasementswereflooded.

16.Cattle,fermentedbeverages,andrareshellshaveservedasmoney,eachonehadactualvalueforthesociety.（commasplice）

Cattle,fermentedbeverages,andrareshellshaveservedasmoney.Eachonehadactualvalueforthesociety.

17.SportsfansstilladmirePeteRose,BabeRuth,andJoeNamatheventhoughtheycouldnotbeperfect.（unclearreference）

SportsfansstilladmirePeteRose,BabeRuth,andJoeNamatheventhoughthesestarscouldnotbeperfect.

18.WhenCatherineIbecameempressofRussiaatageforty,theyfearedmorethanlovedher.（unclearreference）

WhenCatherineIbecameempressofRussiaatageforty,herpeoplefearedmorethanlovedher.

19.Tokeepbirdsfromeatingseeds,soaktheminbluefoodcoloring.（unclearreference）

Tokeepbirdsfromeatingseeds,soaktheseedsinbluefoodcoloring.

20.Employeesshouldconsultwiththeirsupervisorwhorequirepersonaltime.（unclearreference）

Employeeswhorequirepersonaltimeshouldconsultwiththeirsupervisor.

21.Jodyfoundadressintheatticthatheraunthadworn.（unclearreference）

Jodyfoundadressthatheraunthadwornintheattic.

22.Shetoldmysisterthatshewaswrong.（unclearreference）

"You'rewrong,"shesaidtomysister.

23.Theworkersremovedallthefurniturefromtheroomandcleanedit.（unclearreference）

Theworkersremovedallthefurniturefromtheroomandcleanedtheroom.

24.JulietNobletoldSusanTorrethatshewasmistaken.（unclearreference）

SusanTorrewastoldbyJulietNovlethatshewasmistaken.

25.Questionsareaskedbythestudentswhentheydonotunderstandtheprofessor.（shift）

Studentsaskquestionswhentheydonotunderstandtheprofessor.

II.Rearrangethefollowingnumberedsentencessothattheyreadlogically.

1）

1.Stuffedunderthedeskisawovenwastepaperbasketoverflowingwithpaperanddebris.

2.Ontherighthandsideoftheroomisanarrowclosetwithclothes,shoes,hats,tennisracquets,andboxesbulgingoutofitsslidingdoors.

3.Asyouwalkintotheroom,youarestoppedshortbymybedwhichfillshalfoftheroom.

4.Againstthewallonyourleft,pushedintoacornerbehindtheheadofthebed,isalargebookcasewhichiscrammedwithpapers,books,andknick-knacks.

5.Thewallabovethebookcaseanddeskiscompletelytakenupwithtwosmallposters.

6.Ithasabrownwoodenchairwhichseemstofilltheleftendoftheroom.

7.Mydormitoryroom,onthesecondfloorofBienvilleHall,issmallandcrowded.

8.Thetwolargewindowsoverthebedarehiddenbyheavydarkgolddrapes.

9.EverytimeIwalkoutofthedoor,Ithink,“NowIknowwhatitisliketoliveinacloset.”

10.Wedgedinbetweenthebookcaseandthewalloppositethebedisasmallgraymetaldesk.

Correctorder:

（7,3,8,4,6,10,1,5,2,9）

2）

1.Usethreeorfourofthesmalllogsaroundthebottomedgetoholdthecardboardinplace.

2.Next,foldsomeofthecardboardoverthepaper.

3.Thenpiletheremainingsmalllogsandallthelargeonesontothepyramid.

4.Tobuildawoodfirethatrequiresminimumtending,youneedpaper,cardboard,kindling,afewsmalllogs,andtwoorthreelargelogs.

5.Finally,lightthepaper.

6.First,youshouldwadupthepaperintoatightballorrollitintoacylinderandtieitintoalooseknot.

7.Oncethefireisstarted,itwillneedonlytheoccasionaladditionofanotherlogtokeepburningforhours.

8.Thenlaythekindlingoverit,formingapyramid.

Correctorder:

（4,6,2,1,8,3,5,7）

3）

1.ItwasatthispointthatPaulnoticedhisowncar,rollingslowlydownthehill--andgoingtoofastforhimtostopit.

2.Hewassobusychasinghiscarthathedidn’tgetthenameofthedriveroftheRover,whojustcameoutofthesupermarketanddroveawaywithoutrealizingwhathadhappened.

3.Asifthiswasnotbadenough,Paulnowfindshehasno-onetoblame.

4.Paul,asalesmanfromLondon,wasdrivingpastaRoverparkedoutsideasupermarket,whenhesawitstarttorollslowlydownthehill.

5.Itcrashedintoabusatthebottomofthehill,andwassobadlydamagedthatithadtobetowedawaytoagarage.

6.PaulScofieldwasasmashhitinGuildfordyesterday,savingtwoyounggirlsinarunawaycar--butwreckinghisowncarintheprocess.

7.Anotherpasser-bygotintothecarandputonthehandbrake,savingthegirlsfromcertaininjury.

8.Insidethecarweretwoyounggirlsonthepassengerseat--butnodriver.

9.Paulstoppedquickly,jumpedinfrontoftheRoverandtriedtostopit,pushingagainstthefrontofthecar.

Correctorder:

（6,4,8,9,7,1,5,2,3）

4）

1.Andhermouth!

Itisasmallmouththatlooksdelicateandfeminine.

2.Herthick,wavy,longblackhairgracefullyfallsdowntohershouldersandsurroundsherexquisite,diamond-shapedface.

3.Asmallblackmoleontheleftsideofhernoseaddstoherbeauty.

4.MarieisasbeautifulasanyHollywoodstarlet.

5.Whenshesmiles,whichisoften,herwell-formedandeven,whiteteethbrightenupherwholeface.

6.ThereisnothingbutextraordinarybeautyinthefaceofMarie.

7.Herlipsareratherthin,butnottoothin;herlightpinklipstickaddsanothertouchoffemininebeauty.

8.Hereyesarelarge,butnottoolarge,withthickeyelashes.

9.Herslightlyarchedchestnutbrowneyebrowsdrawattentiontoherdeepblueeyes,whichremindmeofalakeonastormyday.

10.Hernoseisstraightandneithertoolongnortooshort.

Correctorder:

（4,2,6,9,8,10,3,1,7,5）

5）

Hereyouhaveajumbledparagraph.Re-organizethesentencessothattheyfollowdefinitespaceorder.

1）AsusualMadelinewasoverdressed.

2）Herhairstuckoutfromherheadinagrayingfrizz,andblackhorn-rimmedglassesencircledhereyes.

3）Herwhiteblousewasruffledattheelbows,andherreddirndlskirtwasembroideredwithblackandwhiteflowers.

4）Everyinchofherseemedtoscreamforattention.

5）Look,fromherearshungredpendantearringswhichbobbledasshetalked,andaboutherthickneckwasamatchingstrandofredbaubles.

6）Onherfeetwereblackpatenthighheeledsandals.

CorrectOrder:

（1,4,2,5,3,6）

III.Rewritethefollowingstoryintheformofadialogue.Thedialogueshouldincludeatleast10lines,whichmeanseachcharactershouldspeakatleast5times.

1）

1.Peterwasalmost30yearsoldandhestillremainedsingle.Oneday,hisfriendAndyaskedhimwhyhecouldn’tfindanyonethatsuitedhim.

2.PetertoldAndythathehaddatedmanynicegirls,buthismotherdidn’tlikeanyofthem,sohehadtokeeponlooking.

3.AndythensuggestedPetertofindagirlwhowasjustlikehismother.

4.ThreeweekslaterAndymetPeteragainandaskedhimifhehadalreadyfoundaperfectgirlfriendthatwasjustlikehismother.

5.PetertoldAndythathedidfindonejustlikehismotherandhismotherlovedthegirlverymuch.

6.AndyaskedPeterifheandthegirlweregoingtobeengaged.

7.PetertoldAndythathisfathercouldn’tstandthatgirlatall!

（Oneday,AndymethisoldfriendPeterinthestreet…）

Andy:

Hello,Peter!

Peter:

Hello,Andy.

Andy:

Peter,youknowIamalwayswonderingaboutonequestion.

Peter:

Wha