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短文改错训练

1.DearSirorMadame,

I’mLiHua,aChinesestudenttakesummercoursesinyour

university.I’mwritingtoaskhelp.Icameherelastmonthand

foundmycoursesinteresting.SoIhavesomedifficultywith

note-takingandIhavenoideaofwhattousethelibrary.The

learningCentreprovidedhelpforthestudentsandIamanxiously

togethelpfromyou.IhavenotclassonTuesdaymornings

andFridayafternoons.PleaseletmetoknowwhichdayisOK

withyou.Youmayemailorphoneme.Hereismyemailaddress

andphonenumber:

lihua@,12345678.

Lookingforwardyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

2.TodayIattendedameetingholidayholdingbyourschool.

Atthemeetingmorethanthirtystudentswaspraised.Forour

happiness,Bruce,monitorofourclass,whowasamongthem.

Weallfeltproudabouthim.Thentheheadmastergavethema

talk.Hewantedustolearnthesemodelstudentsandhopedthat

moreandmorestudentswillbepraisedatthenextschoolmeeting.

Iwasgreatencouragedandmadeupmymindtoworkharder.

NextweektherewillbetheEnglishexam.Iwilltrytoget

goodmarks.

3.LastSundayIsawaworststormintheyears.Itcamesudden

andwentonforoverthreehours.Afterlunch,Iwentinto

myroomtohavearest.Theairwashotter,andallisquiet.

Thenastrongwindstartedtoblowintomyroom.Piecesof

paperonmydeskflewhighintotheairandsomeflewouttheopen

window.AsIranouttocatchthem,bigdropofrainbeganto

fall.WhenIcameintohouse,itwasrainingharderandharder.I

triedveryhardtoclosethewindow.ThenIheardaloudly

crashingsoundfromthebackofthehouse.WhenIranoutonly

tofindthatabigtreehadfallendownandbrokethetopofthe

backroom.

4.Everyoneinourvillagelikesmyfather,sohehasasenseof

humor.Onotherwords,hecanmakeotherslaugheasyand

peoplefeelhappytobearoundhim.Iadmirehimverymuchand

dreamofthatsomedayIwillbeashumorousashim.Ieven

askedhimhowhaveagoodsenseofhumor,butwhatshereplied

disappointedme.“Notsomeonecanbehumorous,because

thosewhoishumorousareusuallyborntobehumorous,”he

said.However,later,headds,“Butyoucanbehumoroustooif

youknowalotofjoke.”That’swhynowI’mreadingabookof

jokes.

5.ThisafternoonIwashavingaPElessonwhileIfelldown

andhurtmyfoot.Iwasingreatlypainatthatmoment,butI

triedtoactasifnothinghashappeneduntiltheclasswasover.

ThoughIhaddifficultywalkbacktomyclassroom,Istilldidn’t

tellanyonebutevenrefusedtheofferofhelpofmyclassmates.

Asresult,thehurtinmyfootbecamebad.NowIknowIam

wrong.Wecantellothersourneedforhelpandaccepthishelp.

Somedaywecanhelpothersinreturnfor.Inthisway,wecan

getalongtoeachotherhappilyandpeacefully.

6.TodayIvisitedtheSmiths--myfirstvisittoanAmerica

family.Theyliveinansmalltown.Itwereverykindofthemto

meetmeattherailwaystationanddrovemetotheirhome.The

Smithsdidhisbesttomakemefeelathome.Theyofferedme

withcoffeeandotherdrinks.Wehaveagoodtimetogether.

TheywantedtoknoweverythingaboutChinabutaskedlotsof

question.Infact,theyareplanningvisitChinanextyear.

答案

Taking^forbuthowprovidesanxiousnotoare^to

Heldweretowhoofus^fromwouldgreatlyan

Thesuddenlyhotwas^ofdrops^the/myloudwhenbroken

Becauseineasilyof^toheeveryoneareaddedjoke

Whengreathadwalkingand^aworsetheirforwith

Americanawasdrivetheirwithhadandquestions^to

7.OnThursdayIwillhavetodecidewhatIwantmyselftodo

overaweekend.IamthinkingofmakingatriptoLondon,and

visittheBritishMuseumandsomeparks.ButIhavespentlots

mymoney,soIcannotevengooutoftown.Imaygotoafilm,

oraconcert.Yes,aconcertcanbeveryexcited.Youcanwatch

yourstarswhileenjoyingyourfavoritemusic.Sothen,aconcert

costsomuch.Imayjustlistentomusic,Ihavesomerecords

givingtomeasbirthdaygifts.IfIlistentomyownrecords,

Therearenoneedtospendmoney.Allright.That’show

I’mgoingtodo.

8.Ihavetwoforeignfriends,KariandVance,theycome

fromtheUSA.NowtheyareteachingEnglishintheuniversity

inNanjing.Lastyeartheypaidavisittoourschool.Inevermet

anyforeignersbeforeandwantedverymuchknowhowIwas

gettingonwithmyspokenEnglish.SoIwentovertotalkwith

him.Allofthemweresurprisingaschoolstudentcouldspeak

Englishsowell.Theysuggestedtotakingaphototogether.

SincethenwehadbeengoodfriendsandnowwriteEnglish

lettertoeachotheroften.

9.DearDiary,

HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350milesfarawayfrom

Ourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?

Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,“Hewasluckytofind

otherone”HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomy

classmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.

Tomakemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmy

youngersister,Maggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.Iam

awfullytiring,butIknowI’llneverfallsleep.

Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonly

souvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.

Your,

Rosemary

10.Twoyearsbefore,ItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedfora

car.Unfortunate,Ihadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andI

neededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweek.Icalledmy

parents,soIdidnottellthemwhathadhappened.Iknewthat

theywillbeworriedaboutmyselfbecauseIwassofartheraway,

andthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.Therefore,I

toldtheminterestedstoriesandhowIwasenjoyingBrazil.

Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatitwasthe

rightthingtodo.

11.DearMary,

Whatiseverythinggoing?

Inyourlaste-mailyousaidyou

willbuyanewcomputer.Iamwonderingifornotyouhavealready

boughtone.

MyparentsjustdecidedtosendmetotheUnitedStatesto

study,butI’mplanningtospendmysparethereworkwith

anAmericanfamily.Ontheonehand,IhopeIcanearnsome

pocketmoneysandbuymyfavoritebooks.Onotherhand,I

thinkIcanimprovemyEnglishonthisway.

However,Idon’treallyunderstandmoreaboutAmerican

customsandlivinghabits.Couldyoupleasetellmesomeofthe

moreuseelements?

Thankyou.

I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

12.MyparentsandIwenttotheparkonlastSunday.There

werelotsofvisitorsstandinfrontoftheticketwindow.We

waitedalongtimeandbuythreetickets.OntheTigerMountain

ofthepark,Iwastooeagertoseethefiercefrightenedanimals

thatIquickenedmystepsthroughthecrowd.Unfortunate,I

gotseparatedfrommyparents.Ihadhardtimelookingforhim,

butIhadnoluck.Wanderinginthepark,Ifeltalonewithout

anycompanions.Worsestill,Ihadnomoney,soIhadtowalk

Home,coveredasmuchas5kilometers.

13.Yourproblemiscommononeamongmiddleschool

students.Maybethefollowingadvicescanhelpyou.Firstin

all,believeinyourself.Yourgreatestproblemisthatyoulack

self-confidence.Thefirstthingyoumustdoitistosmileatyour

classmates.Onesmilespeaksloudaboutyourwishtomake

friendsthananywords.Yoursmilewillshowthatyouare

friendlytohim.Next,tryingtalkingwithastudentwhoisas

shyasyouorwhosharethesameinterestwithyou.Youcan

discussyourstudieswithaclassmateandyoucanalsotalkabout

yourhobbies.Unlessanyoneisintrouble,youshouldbeready

tohelphimorher.Onceyouhaveconfidence,youcanmakeas

Manyfriendsaspossibly.

14.IgrewupinasmalltowninOhio.Therewasamaninmy

towncallingBob,whodidn’treceivemucheducationand

couldn’ttalkclear.Childrenallthoughthewasstupidandoften

madefunofhim.Oneday,whenImeetBob,Ialsomadefunof

himjustliketheotherschildren.Itoldhimthatmyfatherhad

beenlosthisjob,andthatwewereshortformoney.Itoldhim

theydidn’thaveenoughmoneytobuyfood.Thenextmorning,

Iopeneddoorandfoundaboxoffoodoutsidemyhouse.I

lookedatthesmallboxwithtearinmyeyes.Ifeltverysadly

andwantedtoreturnthebox.Myfatherstoppedme.Hesaidit

wouldhurtBob’sfeelings.

15.Inmyhometowntherewasariver.Manystudentsgoand

swimthere,somyparentsdon’tallowmetodothat.Theyconsider

SwimmingdangerousbecauseofIamverythinandweak.

Theyareafraidtheymaydrown.Oneafternoon,myfriendand

Iwentouttoplay.TheyplayedintheriverhappywhileIjust

stoodinthebank.Ireallywantedtojointhem.Atlast,one

friendofferedtoteachmewheretoswim.Afterhalfhour,to

mysurprise,Icouldswim.Iwasexciting.

16.OnewintermorningJohnwassenttoavillageschoolby

business.Hegotdownabusatastopinasmalltown.Thenhe

hadtowalkthere.Theroadtothevillagewasn’tsmoothly.

Therewerestoneshereandthere.Hefelloverseveraltimes,

andwhatmadehisclothesverydirty.Atlasthegottothevillage.

Suddenlyitbegantoblowstronglyanditgotverycolder.

Hishatwasblownoffwhilewaslookingfortheschool.Hehad

torunafterit,sohecouldn’tcatchit.Hewaswonderingwhy

hishatranintoahouseevenifithadlegs.Andthenheraninto

thehouse,too.Abigwomanwasappearedandstoppedhimby

shoutingangrily,“Howareyourunningaftermyhenfor?

”

17.AgreatearthquakestruckChileearlyinSaturday,killing

atleast78people,andknockingdownhomesandhospitals.

Buildingscaughtafireandthepeoplestayedinstreets.President

MechelleBacheletsaidtherehad78confirmed

deathsandthatmo