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2012年5月雅思大作文真题+范文

Nowadaysconsumersarefacedwiththeadvertisementsfromcompetitivecompanies.Towhatextentdoyouagreethatconsumersareinfluencedbyadvertisements?

Whatmeasuresshouldbetakentoprotectthem?

写作语汇一览表:

  1.inresponsetoanadvertisement回应广告

  mercials商业广告

  3.informative传递信息

  4.hooks圈套

  5.tricksandcatchyphrases花言巧语

  6.Advertisingisnowacircus-show.广告现在就像是在进行马戏表演。

  7.beimmunetotheinfluenceofadvertising不受广告的影响

  8.subtle不易察觉

  9.agreatvarietyofbeautifulproducts玲琅满目的商品

 

写作例句推荐:

  1.Theeffectadvertisinghasonoursocietymaybesubtle,andmostofus

remainunawareofhowitmoldsustofillintheparticularcompany’sneeds.

  2.Whileadvertisingisusefulforahostofthings,fromsellingproducts,

toputtingpublicannouncementsontheair,someoftheeffectsaredetrimental

astheycanintentionallymisrepresent“real”peopleintheircommercials.

 

写作提纲思路:

经济角度:

promoteconsumption,enhanceeconomy

公众角度一:

makeconsumersinformedofthelatestinformationofcommodities

公众角度二:

exaggerating,misleading,stimulateconsumerstobuywhattheydonotneed.

 

分别形成三个中心句:

1.Oneofthemainfunctionsofadvertisingistoassistconsumerstofindandbuysuitableproducts.

2.Meanwhile,advertisingservestostimulateconsumptionandcontributestoeconomicdevelopment.

3.Despiteitsimportance,thereisnodenyingthateverynowandthen,advertisingleadsconsumersintoanimpulsivepurchase,therebycausingwastefulspending.

 

如何解决supportingsentences:

1.explanation解释和说明中心句的意思或原因

2.extension对主题句拓展,阐述其影响

3.example举例说明

4.sorting当主题句有几个分论点支持的时候,将分论点分类说明

5.contrasting描述相反的情形,尤其针对无法落笔的情形

 

主题句:

Oneofthemainfunctionsofadvertisingistoassistconsumerstofindandbuysuitableproducts.

【1】Asforthemajorityofpeople,itisunlikelyforthemtogetoutoftheirwaytohaveanoverallknowledgeofcommoditiestheyneed;thusadvertisementsserveasaneffectiveandup-to-datechannelofinformationrenderingtheminformedofnewproducts.(Explanation/paraphrase/makethestatementmoreexplicitandconcrete.)

【2】Withthepresenceofadvertising,aconsumerisabletoacquirethelatestinformationinthemarket,suchaspropertiesofaproductorservice,andtherebymakeawiserbuyingdecision.(Extension,furtherstatementandexemplification.)

【3】Incontrast,withoutadvertising,aconsumerisattheriskofpurchasingaproductthatfailstomeetallofhisorherneeds,becauseoflackofknowledgeofbetteralternativesinthemarket.(Contrasting)

 

【1】Besidestheinformativemeritsofadvertising,itisalsobeneficialinboostingeconomyandarousetheconfidenceofconsumption.(Explanationtopicsentence.)

【2】Advertisingdescribesaproductinsuchanimpressivewaythatitalwayssucceedsinattractingtargetcustomersanddrivingthemintoafinalpurchase.

【3】Furthermore,advertisingremindsthepotentialcustomersoftheirneeds.(theabovetwosentenceshaveutilized“sorting”,thatistosay,classificationofthedifferentlayersofacertainstatement.)

【4】Forexample,theadvertisementofchocolatesontelevisionalwaysremindsyouimpressivelythatyouneedabarofchocolatetoappetiteyourself.(exemplification)

【5】Hence,bythesetwoapproachesadvertisingencouragesspendingandcontributestoeconomicdevelopment.

 

1.

Whetherwelikeitornot,wearebombardedbyallkindsofadvertisementsineveryaspectofourlifethesedays.Althoughadvertisementsprovideusefulinformationforconsumerswhentheydecidewhatproductstobuy,thereisawideconcernthatadvertisementshaveanegativeinfluenceonpeople’slife.

 

Itiscommonpracticeforpeopletosearchforadvertisements,onnewspaperorinternet,whentheyfindithardtochoosefromalargevarietyofgoodsofthesamekind.Asmostconsumershavelittlespecializedknowledgeabouttheproducts,theycanonlyrelyontheinformationfromtheadvertisements.However,quitealargenumberofadvertisementstendtoexaggeratethequalityoftheproductsforhighersalesamount,orevenmisleadconsumersbygivingthemfalseinformation.Ithasputconsumersathighriskofbeingdeceivedandsufferingfromeconomicloss.

 

Thereisnodenyingthatadvertisingsignificantlybooststhesalesofgoodsandpromotestheeconomicdevelopment.However,italsoleadstowasteofsocialwealth,asmanyconsumersbuythegoodswithoutenoughconsiderationaftertheywatchtheattractiveadvertisements.Itiscommonforcompaniestoproduceadvertisementswithfamoussingersandactors,andasaresult,people,particularlyteenagers,followthetrendandbuygoodsimpulsively.

 

Topreventthenegativeimpactofadvertisingonconsumers,thegovernmentneedstoplayamajorroleandtakeactivemeasures.Relatedlawsandregulationsarerequiredtobananymisbehaviorintheadvertisingindustryandpunishthoseviolators.Manufacturersandadvertisingcompaniesshouldbeawareoftheirsocialresponsibilityandrefrainfrombeingprofit-oriented.Also,consumersshouldlearntojudgethetruthfulnessofadvertisementsandavoidbecomingover-dependentonthem.

 

2. 

Advertisinghasbecomeprevalentinthecontemporarysociety,andvastbillboards,TVcommercialsandfliersareallexertingprofoundimpactonmodernlife.Inthemeantime,whetheradvertisingisablessingoracursehassparkedspiriteddebate.Someindividualsarguethatadvertisinghasonlybeneficialinfluenceonourliveswhilemanyotherscontendthatithasdetrimentaleffectaswell.Personally,Iaminfavoroftheformerview.

 

Admittedly,advertisingmayalsocarryconsiderablepotentialdrawbacks.Tobeginwith,avastofnumberofonlineadvertisementsmayharmtheinternetusers’lives.Toillustrate,emailspammingmayfillupone’semailboxwithjunkemailsandworseyet,manyofthesejunkemailscoulddestroyPCswithvirusesorTrojanhorses.Moreover,ahighpercentageofadvertisementsinthemediaaremisleadingones.Today,itseemsthatmanydrugcompaniesgivefalseinformationabouttheirproducts,whichhasrenderedahostofcustomersafraidtobuymedicine.

 

Despitethis,advertisinghasbroughtnumerousbenefits.Inthefirstplace,advertisementsinformusaboutthelatestproductsonthemarkets.Ingeneral,withthehelpofads,customerscouldmakeshoppingmoreeconomicalandlesstime-consuming.Inthesecondplace,elaborateadvertisementscanbeagenuineartform.Indeed,insteadofwastingourtime,creativeadscanaffordusdiverseamusements,therebyimmenselybrighteningupourlives.Lastbutnottheleast,someadvertisinginthemediacanmotivatepeopletocontributetocharities.Asamatteroffact,Iwouldbehard-pressedtoimaginehowcharitiescangetenoughfundswithoutthehelpofnon-profitads.

 

Inthefinalanalysis,Iconcedethattheproliferationoftheadvertisingindustrydoesnotcomewithoutsomeadverseeffects.However,thebenefitscreatedbyadvertisingfaroutweighthedisadvantages.Overall,Iamconvincedthatweshouldfurtherpromotethedevelopmentofadvertisingandmeanwhilegetthisindustrybetter-regulated.

 

3. 

Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisementsandadvertisingexertsatremendousinfluenceonus.Recently,therearepeoplewhoareoftheopinionthatpublichavetherighttoknowthecorrectinformationoftheadvertisementsandgovernmentalsoshouldrestrictthecontentsoftheseadvertisements.Personally,Iagreewiththisopinionforthefollowingreasons.

 

Inthefirstinstance,consumershavetherighttoknowthecorrectinformationbeforedecidingonwhethertobuythem.Advertisementsarehighlyinformationthathelpspeopletomakechoicebeforetheygotobuywhattheyneed.Iftheadvertisementexaggeratestheproductsitalsowillpersuadepeopleintobuyingthings,whichtheydonotreallywant.

 

Secondly,anymisleadingadvertisementswillleadtothemarketingtricks,causingchaosinthemarket.Thatistosay,thesemisleadinginformationcausesillegalcompetition.Forexample,someadvertisingwebpageswithfakeandoverstatedinformationwhichalwaysjumpintooursightwhenwearebrowsingthewebsites,canbeextremelydeceptiveandmisleading.

 

Lastbutnotleast,governmentshouldstipulatelawsinconsumers’interests.Accordingtothelaws,advertisementsmustbetruthful.Iftheadvertisementsmisleadconsumers,governmentmayimposeseverefineonthem.

 

Ingeneral,theroleofadvertisementsisinevitableandundeniable.Agoodadvertisementcanbeabridgebetweenenterpriseandconsumersandhelpskeepbusinessmoving.Soweneedcorrectinformationandgovernmentalsoneedstorestrictthecontentsofadvertisements.

 

4. 

Althoughadvertisinghasexistedforthousandsofyearsandiscertainlynotarecentinvention,itisonlyinourmodernsocietythatthegreatinfluenceandimportanceofwidespreadadvertisingisfullplay.However,inmyopinion,manyadvertisementsareharmfultoyoungpeople’smentaldevelopmentand,therefore,shouldbebannedinthemassmedia.

 

Tobeginwith,variousfactorshavegivenrisetothethrivingofadvertisingindustry,themostsignificantonebeingtheproliferationofnewproducts,servicesandtechnologies.Inordertogivetheirnewinventionstheutmostpublicity,manybusinesseschoosetopromotethembybroadcastingattractiveadvertisementsthroughmassmedia,suchastelevision,radioandinternet.Inaddition,theincreasinglyfiercecompetitioninthecommercialworldhascompelledalotofcompaniestoresorttoexaggeratedandevendeceitfuladvertisementstogainanedgeovertheirbusinessrivals.

 

Asmanysocialcriticshavepointedout,thecurrenttrendinadvertisingexertsacorrupt

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