新东方考研英语写作常见语言错误.docx

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新东方考研英语写作常见语言错误

新东方考研英语写作常见语言错误

I.词法错误

A.Article冠词

（1）a.Themachinescouldnotrunandpeoplewouldhavetofallbackontheirhandstoproducewhatareessentialforthemtokeepalive.

b.Machinescouldnotrunandpeoplewouldhavetofallbackontheirhandstoproducewhatareessentialforthemtokeepalive.

（2）a.Pollutionisthebiggestproblemofthecities.

b.Pollutionisthebiggestproblemofthecities.

（3）a.Thehousingprobleminbigcitiesisratheraheadachetobothgovernmentandpeople.

b.Thehousingprobleminbigcitiesisratheraheadachetoboththegovernmentandpeople.

（4）a.Bicycleisthemostcommonmeansoftransportinourcountry.

b.Thebicycle/Abicycleisthemostcommonmeansoftransportinourcountry.

（5）a.Onthecontrary,thepercentagesofmilkandmeatareonarise.

b.Onthecontrary,thepercentagesofmilkandmeatareontherise.

（6）a.Wecan’tavoidbeingbeatenbytheothers.

b.Wecan’tavoidbeingbeatenbyothers.

（7）a.Andoncetheartificial-intelligentrobotswereputintouse,whatwouldtheseclever“people”dototheirproducers?

b.Andoncerobotswithartificial-intelligencewereputintouse,whatwouldtheseclever“people”dototheirproducers?

（8）a.Foranexample,withthewideadoptionoftheautomaticworkingapparatuses,moreandmorepeoplewilllosetheirjobsinthefuture.

b.Forexample,withthewideadoptionoftheautomaticworkingapparatuses,moreandmorepeoplewilllosetheirjobsinthefuture.

（9）a.AlmosteverydayIopenTVat6:

30p.m.andwaitforthenewsprogram.

b.AlmosteverydayIturnontheTVat6:

30p.m.andwaitforthenewsprogram.

（10）a.Then,duringthesecondpart,we’reshowedsomepicturesoftheforeigncustoms.

b.Then,duringthesecondpart,we’reshowedsomepicturesofforeignplacesandcustoms.

（11）a.Myfavouriteprogrammeiscalled“TheAnimalWorld”,whichisprovidedbyCCTVeverySundaynight.

b.Myfavouriteprogrammeiscalled“AnimalWorld”,whichisprovidedbyCCTVeverySundaynight.

（12）a.Itprovidesuswithnaturalscenesandthelifeofallkindsofwildanimals,withtheexplanationbythenarrator.

b.Itprovidesuswithviewsofnaturalscenesandalookofthelifestyleofallkindsofwild

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animals,withanexplanationbythenarrator.

（13）a.Notonlydotheleadersofthecountriesvisittheforeigncountries,butalsothecommonpeoplevisitabroad.

b.Notonlydotheleadersofcountriesoftenvisittheforeigncountries,butalsothecommonpeoplevisitabroad.

（14）a.Ithinktheyarethequestionsofgreatinterest.

b.Ithinktheyarequestionsofgreatinterest.

（15）a.Inshort,thebadadscanbeclassifiedintotwocategories.Onecategoryhasthebadpurpose.Theadvertiserswanttosellcigarettes,drinks,gunsandsoon....Theothercategoryofbadadsarethoseinwhichtheadvertiseruseviolenceandsextopromotetheirsales.

b.Generallyspeaking,thebadadscanbeclassifiedintotwocategories.Onecategoryhasabadpurpose.Theadvertiserswanttosellthingslikecigarettes,alcohol,andguns....Theothercategoryofbadadsarethoseinwhichtheadvertiseruseviolenceandsextopromotetheirsales.

（16）a.Thisseemstobeonfashionnow.

b.Thisseemstobeinfashionnow.

（17）a.Andalso,theytreatthefirecrackersastheheritageoftheChineseculture.

b.Andalso,theytreatfirecrackersastheheritageoftheChineseculture.

（18）a.Finallywecanteachourselvesandlearnthenewknowledge.

b.Finallywecanteachourselvesandlearnnewknowledge.

（19）a.HigherEnglishlevelwillhelpyoutofindasatisfactoryjobinthefuture.

b.AhigherEnglishlevelwillhelpyoutofindasatisfactoryjobinthefuture.

（20）a.Somestudentswhosemajorischemistry,mathorphysicsandsoonwouldthinkthatwhentheygraduatefromthecollegethey’llnotapplyEnglishanymore.

b.Somestudentswithmajorslikechemistry,mathorphysicswouldthinkthatwhentheygraduatefromcollegethey’llnotuseEnglishanymore.

（21）a.Suchopinionleadstosurprisingwasteofwater.

b.Suchanopinionleadstoashockingwasteofwater.

（22）a.Andwidespreadofeducationisalsoagoodreason.

b.Andthewidespreadofeducationisalsoagoodreason.

（23）a.Thegivengraphtellsusthechangesoflifeexpectancyandinfantmortalityofthedevelopingcountriesin1960and1990.

b.Thegivengraphtellsusthechangesoflifeexpectancyandinfantmortalityinthedevelopingcountriesin1960and1990.

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（24）a.Thereareothercountlessexamples.Allinall,wemustkeeptheproverbinmindforlifetime——Practicemakesperfect.

b.Thereareothercountlessexamples.Inaword,wemustkeeptheproverbinmindforalifetime——Practicemakesperfect.

（25）a.Communityservicesaswellasmassmediaarebothgoldenchancestopracticeourability,throughwhichwecanlearntocooperatewithpeople,tocontributeourintelligencetothesociety.

b.Communityservicesisagoldenchancetouseourability,throughwhichwecanlearntocooperatewithpeopleandcontributeourintelligencetosociety.

（26）a.Idon’tthinknumbershaveanythingtodowiththeluck.

b.Idon’tthinknumbershaveanythingtodowithluck.

B.Nouns名词

-可数名词

1）a.EvenalotofentertainmentsuchasTV,recordingandfilmsneedelectricity.

b.EvenalotofentertainmentsuchasTV,recordingsandfilmsneedelectricity.

2）a.Peoplewhosuggestedthissaidthatonecauseoftheheavytrafficistrafficaccident.

b.Peoplewhosuggestedthissaidthatonecauseoftheheavytrafficistrafficaccidents.

3）a.Twosolutionshavebeenrecommendedsofar,andeachonehasbothadvantageanddisadvantage.

b.Twosolutionshavebeenrecommendedsofar,andeachonehasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.

4）a.Manhaslivedinthisworldforthousandsofyears.Theyfightagainstnaturefromtimetotimeandtheysurvive.

b.Humanbeingshavelivedinthisworldforthousandsofyears.Theyhavefoughtagainstnaturefromtimetotimeandtheyhavesurvived.

5）a.Aslongaswedon’tgiveupandbelieveinourselves,andinthemeantimelearnsomethingfromfailure,we’llcertainlymakeourmarksintheend.

b.Aslongaswedon’tgiveupkeepingbelievinginourselves,andinthemeantimelearnsomethingfromfailure,we’llcertainlymakeourmarkintheend.

6）a.Withmoneywecantravelwidelyandhavemoreexperience.

b.Withmoneywecantravelwidelyandhavemoreexperiences.

7）a.Whatmoneywillringyoudependsonyourpersonalbeliefandgoalinlife.

b.Whatmoneywillringyoudependsonyourpersonalbeliefsandgoalsinlife.

8）a.Duringthisprocess,jobinterviewhasarisenandappearedmoreandmoreimportant.

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b.Duringthisprocess,thejobinterviewhasarisenandappearedmoreandmoreimportant.

9）a.First,theinterviewercantellsomethingaboutthejobtotheintervieweesuchasthewage,theworkconditionsandsomeotherthingswhichisrelevanttothejob.

b.First,theinterviewercantellsomethingaboutthejobtotheintervieweesuchasthewages,theworkingconditionsandsomethingelsewhichisrelevanttothejob.

10）a.Theythinkthatfreshwatercomesfromsuchvarietiesofsourcesthatitisalwayssufficientforuse.

b.Theythinkthatfreshwatercomesfromsuchavarietyofsourcesthatitisalwayssufficientforuse.

11）a.Theprimarycauseisthatwecanexpandourhorizon.

b.Theprimarycauseisthatwecanexpandourhorizons.

12）a.Intheiropinion,peoplewhochangetheirjobfrequentlyaresuperficialandtactless.

b.Intheiropinion,peoplewhochangetheirjobsfrequentlyareimprudentandtactless.

13）a.Theyrangefromfoods,clothestoradios,TVsets,andevensomemedicineisfake,whichhasbroughtalotoftroublesinourdailylife.

b.Theyrangefromfoods,clothestoradios,TVsets,andevenmedicinesarefake,whichhasbroughtalotoftroublestoourdailylife.

14）a.First,governmentshouldforbidthefakecommoditiesbylaw.

b.First,thegovernmentshouldforbidthefakecommoditiesbylaw.

-不可数名词

1）a.Thefreshairandbeautifulscenerieswillattractpeopletoleavetheovercrowdedcity.

b.Thefreshairandbeautifulscenerywillattractpeopletoleavetheovercrowdedcity.

2）a.NowadaysradiosandTVplayamoreandmoreimportantroleinourdailylife.

b.NowadaysradioandTVplayamoreandmoreimportantroleinourdailylife.

3）a.Forexample,settingofffirecrackersoftensetsfiretobuildings,andcausesmanydamages.

b.Forexample,settingofffirecrackersoftensetsfiretobuildings,andcausesalotofdamage.

4）a.Theythinkonlywhentheyareabsorbedinoneworkcantheydoitwell.

b.Theythinkonlywhentheyaredevotedtoonejobcantheydoitwell.

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-集合名词

1）a.EvenalotofentertainmentssuchasTV,recordingsandfilmsneedelectricity.

b.EvenalotofentertainmentsuchasTV,recordingsandfilmsneedelectricity.

-名词前的数量

1）a.Agreatdealofnewsubjects,whichareactuallyderivedfrombothnaturalandsocialscience,hascomeintoexistenceandenrichtheseaofhumanknowledgegreatly.

b.Agreatnumberofnewsubjects,whichareactuallyderivedfrombothnaturalandsocialscience,hascomeintoexistenceandenrichedtheseaofhumanknowledgegreatly.

-用词不当

1）a.Theyhavelittlechancetofindjobs.

b.Theyhavelittlechancetofindwork.

2）a.Theydon’tgetequalpayforequaljob.

b.Theydon’tgetequalpayforequalwork.

3）a.Forexample,inreporting,areportercanuseit（taperecorder）insteadoftheoldmeansofwritingthemonanotebook.

b.F