新东方考研英语写作常见语言错误.docx

1、新东方考研英语写作常见语言错误新东方考研英语写作常见语言错误I.词法错误A. Article 冠词(1) a. The machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what are essential for them to keep alive.b. Machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what are essential for them

2、 to keep alive.(2) a. Pollution is the biggest problem of the cities.b. Pollution is the biggest problem of the cities.(3) a. The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both government and people.b. The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both the government and peop

3、le.(4) a. Bicycle is the most common means of transport in our country.b. The bicycle/A bicycle is the most common means of transport in our country.(5) a. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on a rise.b. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on the rise.(6) a. We c

4、ant avoid being beaten by the others.b. We cant avoid being beaten by others.(7) a. And once the artificial-intelligent robots were put into use, what would these clever “people” do to their producers?b. And once robots with artificial-intelligence were put into use, what would these clever “people”

5、 do to their producers?(8) a. For an example, with the wide adoption of the automatic working apparatuses, more and more people will lose their jobs in the future.b. For example, with the wide adoption of the automatic working apparatuses, more and more people will lose their jobs in the future.(9)

6、a. Almost everyday I open TV at 6:30 p.m. and wait for the news program.b. Almost everyday I turn on the TV at 6:30 p.m. and wait for the news program.(10) a. Then, during the second part, were showed some pictures of the foreign customs.b. Then, during the second part, were showed some pictures of

7、foreign places and customs.(11) a. My favourite programme is called “The Animal World”, which is provided by CCTV every Sunday night.b. My favourite programme is called “Animal World”, which is provided by CCTV every Sunday night.(12) a. It provides us with natural scenes and the life of all kinds o

8、f wild animals, with the explanation by the narrator.b. It provides us with views of natural scenes and a look of the life style of all kinds of wild *2012新东方考研英语写作*2012新东方考研英语写作*animals, with an explanation by the narrator.(13) a. Not only do the leaders of the countries visit the foreign countries

9、, but also the common people visit abroad.b. Not only do the leaders of countries often visit the foreign countries, but also the common people visit abroad.(14) a. I think they are the questions of great interest.b. I think they are questions of great interest.(15) a. In short, the bad ads can be c

10、lassified into two categories. One category has the bad purpose. The advertisers want to sell cigarettes, drinks, guns and so on. .The other category of bad ads are those in which the advertiser use violence and sex to promote their sales.b. Generally speaking, the bad ads can be classified into two

11、 categories. One category has a bad purpose. The advertisers want to sell things like cigarettes, alcohol, and guns. .The other category of bad ads are those in which the advertiser use violence and sex to promote their sales.(16) a. This seems to be on fashion now.b. This seems to be in fashion now

12、.(17) a. And also, they treat the firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture.b. And also, they treat firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture.(18) a. Finally we can teach ourselves and learn the new knowledge.b. Finally we can teach ourselves and learn new knowledge.(19) a. Highe

13、r English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.b. A higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.(20) a. Some students whose major is chemistry, math or physics and so on would think that when they graduate from the college theyll not apply Engl

14、ish any more.b. Some students with majors like chemistry, math or physics would think that when they graduate from college theyll not use English any more.(21) a. Such opinion leads to surprising waste of water.b. Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.(22) a. And wide spread of educatio

15、n is also a good reason.b. And the wide spread of education is also a good reason.(23) a. The given graph tells us the changes of life expectancy and infant mortality of the developing countries in 1960 and 1990.b. The given graph tells us the changes of life expectancy and infant mortality in the d

16、eveloping countries in 1960 and 1990.*2012新东方考研英语写作*2012新东方考研英语写作*(24) a. There are other countless examples. All in all, we must keep the proverb in mind for lifetimePractice makes perfect.b. There are other countless examples. In a word, we must keep the proverb in mind for a lifetimePractice make

17、s perfect.(25) a. Community services as well as mass media are both golden chances to practice our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people, to contribute our intelligence to the society.b. Community services is a golden chance to use our ability, through which we can learn to co

18、operate with people and contribute our intelligence to society.(26) a. I dont think numbers have anything to do with the luck.b. I dont think numbers have anything to do with luck.B. Nouns 名词-可数名词1) a. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recording and films need electricity.b. Even a lot of ente

19、rtainment such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.2) a. People who suggested this said that one cause of the heavy traffic is traffic accident.b. People who suggested this said that one cause of the heavy traffic is traffic accidents.3) a. Two solutions have been recommended so far, and ea

20、ch one has both advantage and disadvantage.b. Two solutions have been recommended so far, and each one has both advantages and disadvantages.4) a. Man has lived in this world for thousands of years. They fight against nature from time to time and they survive.b. Human beings have lived in this world

21、 for thousands of years. They have fought against nature from time to time and they have survived.5) a. As long as we dont give up and believe in ourselves, and in the meantime learn something from failure, well certainly make our marks in the end.b. As long as we dont give up keeping believing in o

22、urselves, and in the meantime learn something from failure, well certainly make our mark in the end.6) a. With money we can travel widely and have more experience.b. With money we can travel widely and have more experiences.7) a. What money will ring you depends on your personal belief and goal in l

23、ife.b. What money will ring you depends on your personal beliefs and goals in life.8) a. During this process, job interview has arisen and appeared more and more important.*2012新东方考研英语写作*2012新东方考研英语写作*b. During this process, the job interview has arisen and appeared more and more important.9) a. Fir

24、st, the interviewer can tell something about the job to the interviewee such as the wage, the work conditions and some other things which is relevant to the job.b. First, the interviewer can tell something about the job to the interviewee such as the wages, the working conditions and something else

25、which is relevant to the job.10) a. They think that fresh water comes from such varieties of sources that it is always sufficient for use.b. They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.11) a. The primary cause is that we can expand our horizo

26、n.b. The primary cause is that we can expand our horizons.12) a. In their opinion, people who change their job frequently are superficial and tactless.b. In their opinion, people who change their jobs frequently are imprudent and tactless.13) a. They range from foods, clothes to radios, TV sets, and

27、 even some medicine is fake, which has brought a lot of troubles in our daily life.b. They range from foods, clothes to radios, TV sets, and even medicines are fake, which has brought a lot of troubles to our daily life.14) a. First, government should forbid the fake commodities by law.b. First, the

28、 government should forbid the fake commodities by law.-不可数名词1) a. The fresh air and beautiful sceneries will attract people to leave the overcrowded city.b. The fresh air and beautiful scenery will attract people to leave the overcrowded city.2) a. Nowadays radios and TV play a more and more importa

29、nt role in our daily life.b. Nowadays radio and TV play a more and more important role in our daily life.3) a. For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and causes many damages.b. For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and causes a lot of damage

30、.4) a. They think only when they are absorbed in one work can they do it well.b. They think only when they are devoted to one job can they do it well.*2012新东方考研英语写作*2012新东方考研英语写作*-集合名词1) a. Even a lot of entertainments such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.b. Even a lot of entertainment

31、such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.-名词前的数量1) a. A great deal of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science, has come into existence and enrich the sea of human knowledge greatly.b. A great number of new subjects, which are actually derived from both

32、natural and social science, has come into existence and enriched the sea of human knowledge greatly.-用词不当1) a. They have little chance to find jobs.b. They have little chance to find work.2) a. They dont get equal pay for equal job.b. They dont get equal pay for equal work.3) a. For example, in reporting, a reporter can use it(tape recorder) instead of the old means of writing them on a notebook.b. F