中考作文主题训练8校园生活.docx

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中考作文主题训练8校园生活

主题训练8----校园生活

【名师点拨】

校园生活是学生热切关注的主题之一。

有关如何做一个好学生、校规问题、穿校服问题、学生间的友谊、校园活动、初中生活回顾等都是非常好的讨论话题。

因为校园生活与学生的学习、生活密切联系,所以也是中考命题的热点之一。

【主题词汇】

校园活动:

acolourfulschoollife,allkindsofactivties,after-schoolactivities,takeanactivepartin,haveasportsmeeting,haveabasketballmatchwith,goonaspringouting,takeatripto,beamemberof,learnfromeachother,fillone'sheartwithhope,holdaneveningparty,jointheReadingClub,buildoneself/sb.up,havethechancetodosth.,helpeachother-improveone'sskills,winthefirstprize,beattheotherplayer,losethegame,stepintosociety

校园人物:

atopstudent,atruefriend,befulloflife,fairandhonest,befriendlytosb.,bepatientwithsb.,bereadytohelpothers,bestrictwithsb.,bewillingtodo,facedifficultiesbravely,haveasenseofhumour,haveastrongwill,havethesamerulesforeverybody,treateveryoneequally,keepasecret,playdifferentroles,organizeclassactivities,speakhighlyofsb.（高度平价集人）,thinkofothersfirst,shareone'sjoyandsadness

【常用句型】

校园活动

1.Themodernsocietyrequiresmanyqualitiesofyoungstudents,soonlylearningfromtextbooksisnotenough.（总起句,通常在第一段或段落的首句。

）

2.Wecanlearnagreatdealfromotherstudentswemeetinactivities.

3.Afterlonghoursofstudy,theycanrelaxthemselvesbytakingpartinschoolactivities.

4.SometimeswehaveclassmeetingsandEnglishfestivals.Theyareveryinteresting.

5.Wecantakepartindifferentactivitiesaccordingtoourpersonalhobbies.

6.Ifwelikemusic,wecanjointheMusicClubonThursday.

7.Ithinktheseactivitiescanmakeourschoolliferichandcolourful.

8.Ienjoymyschoollifeverymuch.

9.AtlastArtFestival,myclassmatesandIprovidedaprettygooddrama.On

accountofthem,itbecamemygreatesthonorinmylife.

【校园人物】（可以从自己、老师、同学和朋友的角度写）

1.Howtimeflies!

Mycolourfulmiddleschoollifeisnearlyending.HereiswhatI

thinkofaboutmyself.

2.Iwasproudofmyselfbecauselgotonwellwithmyclassmatesandmygrades

weregood.

3.Ihavegotmoreknowledgeandimprovedmylife.

4,Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Now,Icanevencommunicate

withforeigners!

5.ItwasMarywhogavemethegreatesthelpandmademyschoollifeso

wonderful.

6.Weshareourjoyandsadnessjustlikeabigfamily.

7.WhenIhadastomachache,myclassmateslookedafterme.Itmadememoved.

8.Whenmyclassmatesmeetsometroublesthattheyareunabletoovercome,

Iamreadyforgivingthemahandanytimeanywhere.Ihavehelpedthemalot,

andIamalwayshappytodothat.

【模拟试题】

Beproudofmyschool

a.Whatdoesyourschoollooklike?

b.Whatfundoyouhaveatschool?

c.Whydoyoulikeyourschool?

（Giveatleasttworeasons.）

【要点分析】

1.通过具体的活动（如:

兴趣小组、体育运动、与老师同学的相处、自己在学校生活

中的收获等）来表达对学校的情感。

2.时态:

一般现在时。

3.文章结构:

略写校园环境,详写校园生活和自己的成长、收获,

4.切忌:

言之无物,只说“热爱”自己的学校,却不说为什么“热爱”。

【写作思路】

36.o

I）总体概述“我为学校而骄傲”

1.lamproudofmyschoolbecauseitisbeautifulandwehavemanyinteresting

schoolactivities.

2.Myschoolisverybig.Wehave...Thereare..（从建筑、设施、绿化的角度写）

2）具体谈谈校园活动和人物

1.Wehavelotsoffunatschool.Afterschoolweplay..,Wedolotsofsports

like..,Sometimeswehave...（从体育运动、课外活动、主题活动的角度写）

2.Studentsinourschoolstudyhardanddowellintheirsubjects.

3.Eachstudentrespectshis/herteachersandispolitetoothers.

3）从校园活动和人物中得到的启迪

1.Ilovemyschoolbecause..,llearnalotfrom...Ireallyfeelproudofmyschool.

2.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontoourschool,itwillbemorebeautiful.

【范文评讲】

原文稿

Iamproudofmyschoolbecauseitisbeautifulandwehavemanyinterestingschoolactivities.Myschoolisverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Wehaveabigplayground,andtherearelotsoftreesandflowerseverywhere.Besides,thereisabigfountaininourschoolgarden.Somestudentsusuallyplaytogetherafterclass.Othersappreciatethegoldfishinthejoke.Italsogivesusmuchhappiness.

Wealsohavelotsoffunatschool.Afterclassweplaygamesanddolotsofsports,likeplayingbasketball,footballandtabletennis.SometimeswehaveclassmeetingsandEnglishfestivals.

Ilovemyschool.Theteachersareverykindandthestudentsarefriendlytoeachother.Weshareourjoyandsadnessjustlikeabigfamily.

【点评与评分】

作者在整篇文章中条理清晰,意思连贯,语句通顺,全文流畅。

可文章在整体布局时还需考虑,注意详略得当。

按中考作文20分计算,属于第三档~第二档的文章,可得14~15分,需改进之处:

1.文章应略写校园环境,详写校园生活和自己的成长、收获。

而作者在第一段中用

了过多的笔墨,使文章显得头重脚轻弪。

所以去掉部分描写校园环境的句子更好。

2.第二段中,加上Sportsandschoolactivitiesmakeushealthyandmakeour

schoollitecolourful.更能突出运动和校园活动带来的好处。

3.在最后一段中加上一个连接词,表明热爱学校更重要的原因。

4.原文中少了结尾,应添上结尾,使文章具有完整性。

修改稿

Iamproudofmyschoolbecauseitisbeautifulandwehavemanyinterestingschoolactivities.Myschoolisverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Wehaveabigplayground,andtherearelotsoftreesandflowerseverywhere.

Wealsohavelotsoffunatschool.Afterclassweplaygamesanddolotsofsports,likeplayingbasketball,footballandtabletennis.SometimeswehaveclassmeetingsandEnglishfestivals.Sportsandschoolactivitiesmakeushealthyandmakeourschoollifecolourful.

Ilovemyschool.Thefurtherreasonistheteachersareverykindandthestudentsarefriendlytoeachother.Weshareourjoyandsadnessjustlikeabigfamily.Ilearnalotfrommyschoollife,Ifeelproudofmyschool.Itisoneofthebestschoolsinmyheart.

【范文选登】

Myschoolisverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Thereare2-000studentsinmyschool.Wehaveabigplaygroundwithlotsoftreesaroundit.Therearealotofflowerseverywhere.

Wehavelotsoffunatschool.Afterclasswedolotsofsports,likeplayingbasketball,footballandtabletennis.Also,wechatwitheachotherunderthetreesandplaygamestogether.Howhappyweare!

Ilovemyschoolbecauseit'slikeabigfamily.Theteachersinmyschoolareaskindtousasourparents.Ifeelproudofmyschoolanditisoneofthebestschoolsinmyheart.

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【范文链接】

Myclassmatesandmyclass

MyschoollifeiswonderfulandIfeelproudtobeamemberofmyclass.Inmyclass,Igetalongverywellwithmyclassmates.Iusuallyreadbookswiththemandshareourthoughtstogether.WhenIhaveaPElesson,Ialwaysplaybasketballwiththemandweallenjoyourselves.AndIrememberoneday,whenIhadastomachache,myclassmateslookedafterme.ltmadememoved.Soinmyopinion,myclassmatesareveryfriendlyandkind.

Frommypointofview,myclassismysecondhomebecauseitalwaysgivesmewarmthandlove.It'llbethemostvaluabletreasureinmymemory.

Studyisfun

Whydowecometoschool?

Differentpeoplemayhavedifferentanswers.Somepeoplesaythattheycometoschooltostudyjustbecausetheydreamofabetterjobandabetterfuture.Butinmyviewpoint,studyisfun.

Itissaidthateveryonewhoisinterestedinstudymayfindpleasureinreading.Exactly!

Studycannotonlyenrichmyknowledgeandbroadenmymind,butalsobringme lots of fun as w ell. What's more,study always teaches me how to be honest,confident and knowledgeable.

In a word,study is fun.

Taking part in school activities

Many students are very interested in school activities. They.have their reasons.Firstly,they think that learning from textbooks is not their only task. They believe thatthey should take every chance to get more practical knowledge. Secondly,they thinkthat after long hours of study,they can relax themselves by taking part in schoolactivities.

However, a large group of students have little interest in them and spend most oftheir time on studies. First, they believe that they should make full use of time tostudy. Second, they feel that school activities have little to do with their furtherdevelopment.

In my opinion, we should take an active pa rt in school activities.On one hand,we can learn a great deal from other students we meet in activities. Besides, themodern society demands that students have many good qualities,so only learningfrom textbooksis not enough.

A letter about my school activities

Dear Tom,

How are you?

 Now I enjoy my school life very much. Besides learning manysubjects at school, we have all kinds of activities after class.

We can take part in different activities ac cording to our personal hobbies. Forexample, we can go to our school computer group on Monday to learn more aboutcomputer science. We can also ,improve our English by joining in English Corner onTuesday.If we like music,we can join the Music Club on Thursday.We can go to playball games on Friday in order to make ourselves stronger.

Of all these activities,I like playing ball games best because health is veryimportant for us students. I think these activities can make our school life rich andcolourful. We all like these activities.

Yours,

Wang Lin

My middle school life

a.How time flies!

 My colourful middle school life is nearly ending- Here is what Ithink of about myself.

In the past four years,I was proud of myself because I got on well with myclassmates and my grades were good,Now, I have many interests such as readingbooks, playing sports and so on, In this way, I have got more knowledge andimproved my life.

As for the future,I have two dreams. One is to be a teacher,and the other is tobe a volunteer. Helping others is my greatest happiness.

Although I have made much progress ,I'll try my best to do even better. Believingin myself is the key to success.

b.Howtimeflies!

Mycolourfuljuniormiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.I'mgladtotellyousomethingaboutmyschoollife.WhenIwassixyearsold,Istartedschool.SinceIbecameastudent,Ihavebeenstudyingveryhard.Myparentsarequiteproudofme.Now,Istudyatakeymiddleschool,whichisnotonlymodernbutalsobeautiful.Theteachersinmyschoolaresokindandhard-workingthatIlovethemverymu