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DearElle,

IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyougavemehelpattheschoolpartylastSunday.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinyoulendmeyourbeautifuldress,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenappearinginonceayearcampusdancingparty.

Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogenerouslyoffereddresstome.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

Pleaseacceptmygratitude.

Yourssincerely,LiMing

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DearElle,

Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyougavemehelp（for后面不能加句子，可改为yourhelp）attheschoolpartylastSunday.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinyoulend（改为lending）meyourbeautifuldress,IfearthatIwould（加not）havebeenappearing（appeared）in（改为at）onceayear（可以用个定语从句来修饰，此处删掉）campusdancingparty（加,whichisheldonlyonceeveryyear）.

Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogenerouslyoffered（加the）dresstome.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

Pleaseacceptmygratitude.

Yourssincerely,LiMing

2分

章的意思完全相反，因此，定要好好研究虚拟语气的用法。

另外，for后面是不能加句子的。

第二

DearBob,

IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyoutohelpmetoimprovemyEnglishduringthesedays.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinteachingmevariousknowledgeincludingthecultureofEnglish,ThenhelpmetopracticeEnglishfacetoface,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenseektothewayoflearningEnglishforalongtimewithoutyourhelp.

Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhoarewarmlyandlikelytohelpotherswithoutthepay.Again，Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

Pleaseacceptmygratitude.

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DearBob,

IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyoutohelpmetoimprovemyEnglishduringthesedays.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinteachingmevariousknowledgeincludingthecultureofEnglish,Then（删除）help（改为helping）metopracticeEnglishfacetoface,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenseek（改为seeking）tothewayoflearningEnglishforalongtimewithoutyourhelp.（删除）

Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhoarewarmlyandlikely（likely是很可能的意思）tohelpotherswithoutthepay（itwas…who..是强调句，此句可以改为，itwasyouwhoaresowarmlytohelpothersforfree）.Again，Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

Pleaseacceptmygratitude.

4分

微点评写完书信要有yourssincerely和你的名字。

英语的句号是.此外，建议你看关于强调句和虚拟语气的知识。

第三

DearBob,

IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforthehelpyougivemeaboutlearningEnglish.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinavarietyofactivitiesincludingholdingfunnydiscussionswithme,teachingmesingingEnglishsongs,playingsimpleEnglishgames,andsoon,IfearthatIwouldhavebeensearchingawronganddifficultwaytolearnEnglishandfeelingunhappytolearnit.

EveryoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogivememanyopportunitiestospeakEnglishloudly,beacuseyouknowthatIamsoshytotalkwithothersbyEnglish.YourhelpraisemylevelofproficiencyinEnglish,andnowIenjoygreatestinterstinEnglishbothlisteningandwriting.

Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

Pleaseacceptmygratitude.

Yourssincerely,LiMing

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DearBob,

Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforthehelpyougive（改为gave）meaboutlearningEnglish.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistancein（in后面要加doingsth.）avarietyofactivitiesincluding（删除）holdingfunnydiscussionswithme,teachingmesingingEnglishsongs,（加and）playingsimpleEnglishgames,andsoon（删除）,IfearthatIwouldhavebeensearching（改为going）awronganddifficultwaytolearnEnglishandfeelingunhappytolearnit（删除）.

Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogive（改为gave）memanyopportunitiestospeakEnglishloudly,（改为.because首字母大写）beacuse（拼写错误，改为because）youknowthatIamsoshytotalkwithothersby（改为in）English.Yourhelpraisemylevelofproficiency（中式英语）inEnglish,andnowIenjoy（have）greatest（改为great）interst（拼写错误interest）inEnglishbothlisteningandwriting.

Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

Pleaseacceptmygratitude.

Yourssincerely,LiMing

3分

章，可有效杜绝中式英语。

第四

DearBob,

Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhelpintheprocessofmyseekingjobconformedtomypastdecadestraining,afterigraduatedfrompekinguniversity.

IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinrecommendationtotheprestigiouscompanyinChina.ifearthatiwouldhavebeenonthejobroadbackandforth.ireallyappreciatethispreciousopportunity,whichyouoffered.everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhowrotealettertotheesteemedcompanyboss,regardingasmyqualifications,educationback–ground,andmyspecialskillsatcomputerprogramwhichihaveahugeintrestin.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

pleaseacceptmygratitude.

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DearBob,

Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhelpintheprocessofmy（删除my）seekingjobconformedtomypastdecadestraining,afteri（大写）graduatedfrompekinguniversity（两个单词的首字母大写）.

Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinrecommendation（改为recommending）totheprestigiouscompanyinChina.i（大写）fearthatiwouldhavebeenonthejobroad（中式英语）backandforth.ireallyappreciatethispreciousoppotunity（拼写错误opportunity）whichyouoffered.everyone（首字母大写）agreesthatitwasyouwhowrotealettertotheesteemedcompany（删除）boss,regardingas（删除）myqualifications,educationback–ground,andmyspecialskillsatcomputerprogramwhichihaveahugeintrestin（删除）.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

please（首字母大写）acceptmygratitude.

Mysincerely,LiMing

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。

第五

Dearteacher,

IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourhelptoimprovemyEnglish.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceintherespectofEnglishwriting,IfearthatIwouldhavebeensooutstandingachievement.

Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhoarekindnessandduty.Itseemsthatyoudon’tfeeltiredforever.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

Pleaseacceptmygratitude.

Yourssincerely,LiMing

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Dearteacher,

IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourhelptoimprovemyEnglish.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceintherespectofEnglishwriting（in后面应该加动名词，此外，respect是尊敬的意思，用词不当）,IfearthatIwouldhavebeensooutstandingachievement.（这句话是虚拟语气，意思是如果不是你的帮助，我恐怕将会…）

Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhoarekindnessandduty（itwas…who…是个强调句，这句话的意思是每个人都说是你…例如帮助我）Itseemsthatyoudon’tfeeltiredforever.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

Pleaseacceptmygratitude.

Yourssincerely,LiMing

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，背些模版。

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DearPro.Smith,

Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourassistance.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinsendingtimelythelistofreferencebookswhichIaskedfor,IfearthatIwouldhavenotbeenachievedmyessayonthedeadline.

Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhosavemunchvaluabletimeformetosearchthereferencebooksinthelibraryandthesereferencebookswhichareratherprofessionalconformtotherequirementsofmyessay.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

Pleaseacceptmygratitude.

Yourssincerely,LiMing

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DearPro.Smith,

Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourassistance.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinsendingtimely（删掉）thelistofreferencebooks（加tometimely）whichIaskedfor,IfearthatIwouldhavenotbeenachievedmyessayon（改为by）thedeadline.

Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhosave（改为saved）munch（拼写错误，改为much）valuabletimeformetosearchthereferencebooksinthelibraryandthesereferencebookswhichareratherprofessionalconformtotherequirementsofmyessay.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

Pleaseacceptmygratitude.

Yourssincerely,LiMing

6分

时要再细心些，尽量避免单词拼写的错误。

时态要保持前后致。

第二

DearBob,

Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmreceptioninthistravelabroad.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinthistravelingthatyouareasaguideforme,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenlostsothatIcannotfindthewaycomingback.

Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhopatientlyguidemetoeverytouristattractionsandexplainsomeofpeculiarstoriesaboutsceneries.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

Pleaseacceptmygratitude.

Yourssincerely,LiMing

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DearBob,

Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmreceptioninthistravel（改为inthejourney）abroad.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinthistraveling（改为onthetrip）thatyouareasaguideforme,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenlostsothatIcannot（改为couldn’t）findthewaycomingback.

Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhopatientlyguide（改为guided）metoeverytouristattractionsandexplainsomeofpeculiarstoriesaboutsceneries.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

Pleaseacceptmygratitude.

Yourssincerely,LiMing

6分

写得还不错，但应保持时态的前后致以及固定搭配。

第三

DearTeacher,

Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourongoingpatienceandselflesscare.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinourEnglishstudy,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenfailedmyCET4andCET6.

EvenoneagreesthatitwasyouwhohasalwaysbeendevotingmostofyourfreetimetodaytodayEnglishteachingandinstructionintest-takingskills.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!

Pleaseacceptmygratitude.

Yourssincerely,LiMing

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DearTeacher,

Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourongoingpatienceandselflesscare.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinourEnglishstudy,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenfailed（改为failing）（加topass）myCET4andCET6.

Evenoneagreesthatitwasyouwhohas（改为had）alwaysbeendevotingmostofyourfreetimetodaytodayEnglishteachingandinstruction（改为instruc