考研英语作文万能模板范文万能句子汇总之考研英语写作小作文批改范文感谢信等10个话题含中文对照.docx

1、考研英语作文万能模板范文万能句子汇总之考研英语写作小作文批改范文感谢信等10个话题含中文对照考研英语作文万能模板范文万能句子篇一：考研英语写作小作文批改范文感谢信0-4分第Dear Elle,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would have been

2、appearing in once a year campus dancing party.Everyone agrees that it was you who generously offered dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming修改意见Dear Elle,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help(for

3、 后面不能加句子，可改为your help) at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend(改为 lending) me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would (加 not)have been appearing (appeared)in(改为at) once a year (可以用个定语从句来修饰，此处删掉)campus dancing party(加 ,which is held only once every year )

4、.Every one agrees that it was you who generously offered(加the ) dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming2分章的意思完全相反，因此，定要好好研究虚拟语气的用法。另外，for 后面是不能加句子的。第二Dear Bob,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me

5、to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then help me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.Everyo

6、ne agrees that it was you who are warmly and likely to help others without the pay. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.修改意见Dear Bob,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been

7、for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then(删除) help(改为helping) me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek(改为seeking) to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.(删除)Every one agrees that it was you who

8、 are warmly and likely(likely 是很可能的意思)to help others without the pay(it was who.是强调句，此句可以改为，it was you who are so warmly to help others for free). Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.4分微点评写完书信要有yours sincerely 和你的名字。英语的句号是.此外，建议你看关于强调句和虚拟语气的知识。第三Dear Bob,I

9、 am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give me about learning English. If it had not been for your assistance in a variety of activities including holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs, playing simple English games, and so on, I fear that I would h

10、ave been searching a wrong and difficult way to learn English and feeling unhappy to learn it.Every one agrees that it was you who give me many opportunities to speak English loudly, beacuse you know that I am so shy to talk with others by English. Your help raise my level of proficiency in English,

11、 and now I enjoy greatest interst in English both listening and writing.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming修改意见Dear Bob,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give(改为gave) me about learning English. If it had

12、not been for your assistance in (in 后面要加doing sth.)a variety of activities including(删除) holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs,(加and) playing simple English games, and so on(删除), I fear that I would have been searching(改为going) a wrong and difficult way to learn Englis

13、h and feeling unhappy to learn it(删除).Every one agrees that it was you who give(改为gave) me many opportunities to speak English loudly, (改为.because 首字母大写)beacuse(拼写错误，改为because) you know that I am so shy to talk with others by(改为in) English. Your help raise my level of proficiency(中式英语) in English, a

14、nd now I enjoy ( have)greatest (改为great)interst(拼写错误interest) in English both listening and writing.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming3分章，可有效杜绝中式英语。第四Dear Bob,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm help in the p

15、rocess of my seeking job conformed to my past decades training, after i graduated from peking university.If it had not been for your assistance in recommendation to the prestigious company in China. i fear that i would have been on the job road back and forth .i really appreciate this precious oppor

16、tunity ,which you offered. every one agrees that it was you who wrote a letter to the esteemed company boss, regarding as my qualifications ,education back ground ,and my special skills at computer program which i have a huge intrest in. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! please a

17、ccept my gratitude.修改意见Dear Bob,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm help in the process of my(删除my) seeking job conformed to my past decades training, after i(大写)graduated from peking university(两个单词的首字母大写).If it had not been for your assistance in recommendation (改为recommendin

18、g)to the prestigious company in China. i(大写)fear that i would have been on the job road (中式英语)back and forth .i really appreciate this precious oppotunity(拼写错误opportunity) which you offered. every one(首字母大写) agrees that it was you who wrote a letter to the esteemed company(删除) boss, regarding as(删除)

19、 my qualifications ,education back ground ,and my special skills at computer program which i have a huge intrest in(删除). Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! please(首字母大写)accept my gratitude.My sincerely,Li Ming4分。第五Dear teacher,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your h

20、elp to improve my English. If it had not been for your assistance in the respect of English writing, I fear that I would have been so outstanding achievement.Every one agrees that it was you who are kindness and duty.It seems that you dont feel tired forever. Again, I would like to express my warm t

21、hanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming修改意见Dear teacher,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your help to improve my English. If it had not been for your assistance in the respect of English writing(in 后面应该加动名词，此外，respect 是尊敬的意思，用词不当), I fear that I would have bee

22、n so outstanding achievement.(这句话是虚拟语气，意思是如果不是你的帮助，我恐怕将会)Every one agrees that it was you who are kindness and duty(it waswho是个强调句，这句话的意思是每个人都说是你例如帮助我)It seems that you dont feel tired forever. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming2分

23、，背些模版。5-7分第Dear Pro. Smith,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timely the list of reference books which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on the deadline.Everyone agrees that it was you who

24、save munch valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming修改意见Dear Pro. Smith,I

25、am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timely(删掉)the list of reference books(加to me timely) which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on(改为by ) the deadline.Everyone agrees that it was you who save

26、(改为saved) munch (拼写错误，改为much)valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming6分时要

27、再细心些，尽量避免单词拼写的错误。时态要保持前后致。第二Dear Bob,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot find the way coming back.Everyo

28、ne agrees that it was you who patiently guide me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming修改意见Dear Bob,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you

29、r warm reception in this travel (改为in the journey)abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling (改为on the trip)that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot(改为couldnt) find the way coming back.Every one agrees that it was you who patiently gui

30、de(改为guided) me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming6分写得还不错，但应保持时态的前后致以及固定搭配。第三Dear Teacher,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongo

31、ing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed my CET4 and CET6.Even one agrees that it was you who has always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction in test-taking skills.

32、 Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming修改意见Dear Teacher,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongoing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed(改为failing)(加to pass) my CET4 and CET6.Even one agrees that it was you who has(改为 had) always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction(改为instruc