1pets5大作文范文六个类型最新模板.docx

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1pets5大作文范文六个类型最新模板

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Criteria

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TaskAchievement

●Addressesallpartsofthetask

●Presentsaclearpositionthroughouttheresponse

●Presents,extendsandsupportsmainideas,buttheremaybeatendencytoover-generalizeand/orsupportingideasmaylackfocus

Coherence&Cohesion

●Logicallyorganizesinformationandideas;thereisaclearprogressionthroughout

●Usesarangeofcohesivedevicesappropriatelyalthoughtheremaybesomeunder-/over-use

●Presentsaclearcentraltopicwithineachparagraph

LexicalResource

●Usesasufficientrangeofvocabularytoallowsomeflexibilityandprecision

●Useslesscommonlexicalitemswithsomeawarenessofstyleandcollocation

●Mayproduceoccasionalerrorsinwordchoice,spelling,and/orwordformation

GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy

●Usesavarietyofcomplexstructures

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●Hasgoodcontrolofgrammarandpunctuationbutmaymakeafewerrors

引言段一句用改写的方式扣题，另一句承上启下。

正文段写两句或者三句，给出两个或者三个理由。

结论段一两句呼应主题，另一两句升华论述。

一、赞同与反对型

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?

Ithasrecentlybeenannouncedthatalargeshoppingcentermaybebuiltinyourneighborhood.

（不同意这个观点）

Thisissueisacontroversialonethataffectsthedailylifeofeveryone.Peopleusuallytakeonesideovertheother,despitenothavinganyideaaboutthesubject.Butinmycase,Itotallydisagreewiththetitlestatementformyreasonsbelow.

Withreferencetolivingsurroundings,thereasonwhyIdisagreewithbuildingashoppingcenternearmycommunityisthatitwouldbeverynoisy.Simplyspeaking,consumersorshoppersmaydisruptthedailylifeofpeopleinthelocalcommunity.Forexample,ifashoppingmallwillbebuilt,itwouldattractthousandsofpeopleandconsequently,alotofnoisyandtrashaswell.Althoughthemajoritymaysticktotheideathatthisnewsupermarketwillbegoodforwholepeopleinandoutofthecommunity,Istillthinkitsdrawbacksoutweighthebenefits.

Second,ashoppingmallalwaysoccupiesmuchspace.Ifacommunitynewlyincludesashoppingmall,itwillbecomecrowdedandmaylosesomegrassland.Obviously,wewillnotbeabletoseethegreentreesbehindthemallorappreciatethenightskyclearly.Asanillustration,privatecarsanddeliverytrunksarealwaysseentocomeinandgooutofthecommunity.Consequently,whatwemayhearisnoisyandwhatweseeisamess.

Finally,ifashoppingcenterwerebuilt,theoverallresultwouldhaveanadverseeffectonpeople’shealthbecauseautomobilesemitexhaustedgasandtrashwillbeseeneverywhere.Puttingtoomuchemphasisonthis,itwillobviouslyresultinobscuringotherfacts.AsfarasIamconcerned,Icompletelybelievethatwecannotignoretheneedofhealthduetotheconvenienceofbuyingsomething.Moreover,itisimpossiblethatwearecrazyforhealthylifeinsuchanunpleasantcondition.

Tosumup,Iwouldstatemypointonthisissueafteranalyzingthethreereasonsagain.Itistruethatbuildingashoppingmallinacommunitywillinterruptlocalresidentsandharmtheenvironmentandhumanbeing’shealth.Soitissagacious/wisetosupportthestatementthatitisbettertobuilditinhesuburborotherplaces.

分析版

Thisissueisacontroversialonethataffectsthedailylifeofeveryone.Peopleusuallytakeonesideovertheother,despitenothavinganyideaaboutthesubject.Butinmycase,Itotallydisagreewiththetitlestatementformyreasonsbelow.

Withreferencetolivingsurroundings主题词,thereasonwhyIdisagreewithbuildingashoppingcenternearmycommunity选取的观点isthatitwouldbeverynoisy理由一.Simplyspeaking,consumersorshoppersmaydisruptthedailylifeofpeopleinthelocalcommunity进一步说明.Forexample,ifashoppingmallwillbebuilt,itwouldattractthousandsofpeopleandconsequently,alotofnoisyandtrashaswell举例说明.Althoughthemajoritymaysticktotheideathatthisnewsupermarketwillbegoodforthewholepeopleinandoutofthecommunity相反的观点,Istillthinkitsdrawbacksoutweighthebenefits重申观点.

Second,ashoppingmallalwaysoccupiesmuchspace理由二.Ifacommunitynewlyincludesashoppingmall假设在这种情况下,itwillbecomecrowdedandmaylosesomegrassland会导致的结果.Obviously,wewillnotbeabletoseethegreentreesbehindthemallorappreciatethenightskyclearly进一步说明结果.Asanillustration,privatecarsanddeliverytrunksarealwaysseentocomeinandgooutofthecommunity举例说明.Consequently,whatwemayhearisnoisyandwhatweseeisamess这一段的结果.

Finally,ifashoppingcenterwerebuilt列出一个反面情况,theoverallresultwouldhaveanadverseeffectonpeople’shealth这个情况的结果becauseautomobilesemitexhaustedgasandtrashwillbeseeneverywhere为什么.Puttingtoomuchemphasisonthis,itwillobviouslyresultinobscuringotherfacts.AsfarasIamconcerned,Icompletelybelievethatwecannotignoretheneedofhealthduetotheconvenienceofbuyingsomething不同意的理由三.Moreover,itisimpossiblethatwearecrazyforhealthylifeinsuchanunpleasantcondition.进一步说明你的陈述

Tosumup,Iwouldstatemypointonthisissueafteranalyzingthethreereasonsagain.Itistruethatbuildingashoppingmallinacommunitywillinterruptlocalresidentsandharmtheenvironmentandhumanbeing’shealth总结全文三个理由.Soitissagacious/wisetosupportthestatementthatitisbettertobuilditinhesuburborotherplaces提出建议，升华论文.

（同意这个观点）

Thisissueisacontroversialonethataffectsthedailylifeofeveryone.Peopleusuallytakeonesideovertheother,despitenothavinganyideaaboutthesubject.Butinmycase,Itotallyagreewiththetitlestatementformyreasonsbelow.

Withreferencetolivingsurroundings,thereasonwhyIagreewithbuildingashoppingcenternearmycommunityisthatitwillsavemoretime.Simplyspeaking,currentshoppingcenterarealwaysbuiltsofarawayfromhomethattheresidentsoftenspendmuchtimetobuysomething.Forexample,livingfarawayfromshoppingmallsmakesmespendonehour,evenmoretogettobuywhatIneedinmydailylife.Althoughthemajoritymaysticktotheideathatthenewsupermarketerectingnearmycommunitywillbringinconvenience,Istillthinkgoingshoppinginthenearbyshoppingcenterwillsavealotofprecioustimefirus.

Second,shoppingnearhomenotonlysavestime,butsavesmoneyandenergyaswell.Ifpeoplewhobuythingsinasuburbcannotaffordaprivatecar,itwilltakethemmuchmoneyorenergytotakebusesortaxis.Obviously,itsanenjoyablethingthatspendinglesstimetobuywhatweneedatnearbymarket.Asanillustration,whenhavingaholiday,amothercanwalktogoshoppingwithherfamilyhandinhand.Consequently,theybuynecessitieseffectivelyandenjoyahappylife.

Finally,ifashoppingcenterwerebuilt,theoverallresultwouldhaveanadverseeffectonpeople’squietandpeacefullife,tosomeextent.Puttingtoomuchemphasisonthis,itwillobviouslyresultinobscuringotherfacts.AsfarasIamconcerned,Icompletelybelievethateachcitizenshouldfocusontheirfutureconvenience,butnotonsomenoisy.Moreover,wespendmoretimeindoorsothatalargepartofourlivescannotbeinterrupteddirectly.

Tosumup,Iwouldstatemypointonthisissueafteranalyzingthethreereasonsagain.Itistruethatalmosteverypersonwillwelcomethisactionanditwillbringalotofadvantagesforus.Soitissagacious/wisetosupportthestatementthatitisbettertobuildtheshoppingcenternearourcommunity.

题目范例：

同意与否

Itisoftensaidthatthesubjectstaughtinschoolsaretooacademicinorientationandthatitwouldemoreusefulforchildrentolearnaboutpracticalmatterssuchashomemanagement,workandinterpersonalskills.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

范例解析：

范文（多种技巧）

Acriticismoftenheardthesedaysisthatthesubjectstaughtinschoolstendtobetooacademic,andcontributelittletopreparingayoungpersonforthereal-lifetasksheorshewillhavetoperformaftergraduation.Theysaythatacademicsubjectsarerootedinthepast,andarenotusefulforsolvingmodernproblems.Idisagreewiththispointofviewforthreereasons.

Myfirstreasonisthatitisthedutyofparents,notteachers,topreparetheirchildrentodealwiththepracticalaffairsoflife.Thehome,nottheclassroom,istheidealplacetolearnabouthomemanagementandinterpersonalskills.Asforworkabilitiesandattitudes,theyarebestlearned"onthejob"andunderthesupervisionofanexperiencedolderworker.

Mysecondreasonisthatacademicsubjectshavewithstoodthetestoftime.Theyrepresenttheaccumulatedwisdomofourancestorsdownthroughtheages,and,farfrombeingimpractical,theyequipuswiththeknowledgeandconfidencetomakesoundjudgmentsaboutanyproblemswhichmaycropup.Inaddition,academicsubjectsaregoodfortrainingusinmentaldiscipline,whilepracticalsubjectsareweakinthisregard.

Mythirdreasonisbasedonthesaying"Mandoesnotlivebybreadalone."Schooldaysdevotedsolelytoinstructionindown-to-earthpracticalmatterswouldbedullindeed!

Lessonsinthebestliteratureoftheworld,andtheepoch-makingscientificandgeographicaldiscoveriesofthepastenrichourlivesandmakeusfeelthatwearepartofthegreatfamilyofmankind.

Allinall,theteachingofacademicsubjectsinschoolsisentirelyappropriate.Itismyfirmlyheldviewthatpracticalsubjectshavenoplaceintheclassroom.Onthecontrary,thecurriculumshouldbemoreacademic!

本范文在结构上可以说是雅思作文的一个经典范例，而且操作性比较强，也就是说考生经过一段时间的学习，完全可以写出这样的文章来。

首段简要描述题目设置的情况，说有一种观点认为学校教的课程学术性倾向太强tendto的意思是"倾向于某事"，这种观点是一种criticism批评），所以这种观点显然是反对学校教授学术性太浓的课程，紧接着作者旗帜鲜明地表明了自己的态度"Idisagree"我是不同意这个观点的"，同时说明不同意有三个理由，读者读到这里，就可以判断出正文将会从