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1pets5大作文范文六个类型最新模板
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引言段一句用改写的方式扣题,另一句承上启下。
正文段写两句或者三句,给出两个或者三个理由。
结论段一两句呼应主题,另一两句升华论述。
一、赞同与反对型
Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?
Ithasrecentlybeenannouncedthatalargeshoppingcentermaybebuiltinyourneighborhood.
(不同意这个观点)
Thisissueisacontroversialonethataffectsthedailylifeofeveryone.Peopleusuallytakeonesideovertheother,despitenothavinganyideaaboutthesubject.Butinmycase,Itotallydisagreewiththetitlestatementformyreasonsbelow.
Withreferencetolivingsurroundings,thereasonwhyIdisagreewithbuildingashoppingcenternearmycommunityisthatitwouldbeverynoisy.Simplyspeaking,consumersorshoppersmaydisruptthedailylifeofpeopleinthelocalcommunity.Forexample,ifashoppingmallwillbebuilt,itwouldattractthousandsofpeopleandconsequently,alotofnoisyandtrashaswell.Althoughthemajoritymaysticktotheideathatthisnewsupermarketwillbegoodforwholepeopleinandoutofthecommunity,Istillthinkitsdrawbacksoutweighthebenefits.
Second,ashoppingmallalwaysoccupiesmuchspace.Ifacommunitynewlyincludesashoppingmall,itwillbecomecrowdedandmaylosesomegrassland.Obviously,wewillnotbeabletoseethegreentreesbehindthemallorappreciatethenightskyclearly.Asanillustration,privatecarsanddeliverytrunksarealwaysseentocomeinandgooutofthecommunity.Consequently,whatwemayhearisnoisyandwhatweseeisamess.
Finally,ifashoppingcenterwerebuilt,theoverallresultwouldhaveanadverseeffectonpeople’shealthbecauseautomobilesemitexhaustedgasandtrashwillbeseeneverywhere.Puttingtoomuchemphasisonthis,itwillobviouslyresultinobscuringotherfacts.AsfarasIamconcerned,Icompletelybelievethatwecannotignoretheneedofhealthduetotheconvenienceofbuyingsomething.Moreover,itisimpossiblethatwearecrazyforhealthylifeinsuchanunpleasantcondition.
Tosumup,Iwouldstatemypointonthisissueafteranalyzingthethreereasonsagain.Itistruethatbuildingashoppingmallinacommunitywillinterruptlocalresidentsandharmtheenvironmentandhumanbeing’shealth.Soitissagacious/wisetosupportthestatementthatitisbettertobuilditinhesuburborotherplaces.
分析版
Thisissueisacontroversialonethataffectsthedailylifeofeveryone.Peopleusuallytakeonesideovertheother,despitenothavinganyideaaboutthesubject.Butinmycase,Itotallydisagreewiththetitlestatementformyreasonsbelow.
Withreferencetolivingsurroundings主题词,thereasonwhyIdisagreewithbuildingashoppingcenternearmycommunity选取的观点isthatitwouldbeverynoisy理由一.Simplyspeaking,consumersorshoppersmaydisruptthedailylifeofpeopleinthelocalcommunity进一步说明.Forexample,ifashoppingmallwillbebuilt,itwouldattractthousandsofpeopleandconsequently,alotofnoisyandtrashaswell举例说明.Althoughthemajoritymaysticktotheideathatthisnewsupermarketwillbegoodforthewholepeopleinandoutofthecommunity相反的观点,Istillthinkitsdrawbacksoutweighthebenefits重申观点.
Second,ashoppingmallalwaysoccupiesmuchspace理由二.Ifacommunitynewlyincludesashoppingmall假设在这种情况下,itwillbecomecrowdedandmaylosesomegrassland会导致的结果.Obviously,wewillnotbeabletoseethegreentreesbehindthemallorappreciatethenightskyclearly进一步说明结果.Asanillustration,privatecarsanddeliverytrunksarealwaysseentocomeinandgooutofthecommunity举例说明.Consequently,whatwemayhearisnoisyandwhatweseeisamess这一段的结果.
Finally,ifashoppingcenterwerebuilt列出一个反面情况,theoverallresultwouldhaveanadverseeffectonpeople’shealth这个情况的结果becauseautomobilesemitexhaustedgasandtrashwillbeseeneverywhere为什么.Puttingtoomuchemphasisonthis,itwillobviouslyresultinobscuringotherfacts.AsfarasIamconcerned,Icompletelybelievethatwecannotignoretheneedofhealthduetotheconvenienceofbuyingsomething不同意的理由三.Moreover,itisimpossiblethatwearecrazyforhealthylifeinsuchanunpleasantcondition.进一步说明你的陈述
Tosumup,Iwouldstatemypointonthisissueafteranalyzingthethreereasonsagain.Itistruethatbuildingashoppingmallinacommunitywillinterruptlocalresidentsandharmtheenvironmentandhumanbeing’shealth总结全文三个理由.Soitissagacious/wisetosupportthestatementthatitisbettertobuilditinhesuburborotherplaces提出建议,升华论文.
(同意这个观点)
Thisissueisacontroversialonethataffectsthedailylifeofeveryone.Peopleusuallytakeonesideovertheother,despitenothavinganyideaaboutthesubject.Butinmycase,Itotallyagreewiththetitlestatementformyreasonsbelow.
Withreferencetolivingsurroundings,thereasonwhyIagreewithbuildingashoppingcenternearmycommunityisthatitwillsavemoretime.Simplyspeaking,currentshoppingcenterarealwaysbuiltsofarawayfromhomethattheresidentsoftenspendmuchtimetobuysomething.Forexample,livingfarawayfromshoppingmallsmakesmespendonehour,evenmoretogettobuywhatIneedinmydailylife.Althoughthemajoritymaysticktotheideathatthenewsupermarketerectingnearmycommunitywillbringinconvenience,Istillthinkgoingshoppinginthenearbyshoppingcenterwillsavealotofprecioustimefirus.
Second,shoppingnearhomenotonlysavestime,butsavesmoneyandenergyaswell.Ifpeoplewhobuythingsinasuburbcannotaffordaprivatecar,itwilltakethemmuchmoneyorenergytotakebusesortaxis.Obviously,itsanenjoyablethingthatspendinglesstimetobuywhatweneedatnearbymarket.Asanillustration,whenhavingaholiday,amothercanwalktogoshoppingwithherfamilyhandinhand.Consequently,theybuynecessitieseffectivelyandenjoyahappylife.
Finally,ifashoppingcenterwerebuilt,theoverallresultwouldhaveanadverseeffectonpeople’squietandpeacefullife,tosomeextent.Puttingtoomuchemphasisonthis,itwillobviouslyresultinobscuringotherfacts.AsfarasIamconcerned,Icompletelybelievethateachcitizenshouldfocusontheirfutureconvenience,butnotonsomenoisy.Moreover,wespendmoretimeindoorsothatalargepartofourlivescannotbeinterrupteddirectly.
Tosumup,Iwouldstatemypointonthisissueafteranalyzingthethreereasonsagain.Itistruethatalmosteverypersonwillwelcomethisactionanditwillbringalotofadvantagesforus.Soitissagacious/wisetosupportthestatementthatitisbettertobuildtheshoppingcenternearourcommunity.
题目范例:
同意与否
Itisoftensaidthatthesubjectstaughtinschoolsaretooacademicinorientationandthatitwouldemoreusefulforchildrentolearnaboutpracticalmatterssuchashomemanagement,workandinterpersonalskills.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
范例解析:
范文(多种技巧)
Acriticismoftenheardthesedaysisthatthesubjectstaughtinschoolstendtobetooacademic,andcontributelittletopreparingayoungpersonforthereal-lifetasksheorshewillhavetoperformaftergraduation.Theysaythatacademicsubjectsarerootedinthepast,andarenotusefulforsolvingmodernproblems.Idisagreewiththispointofviewforthreereasons.
Myfirstreasonisthatitisthedutyofparents,notteachers,topreparetheirchildrentodealwiththepracticalaffairsoflife.Thehome,nottheclassroom,istheidealplacetolearnabouthomemanagementandinterpersonalskills.Asforworkabilitiesandattitudes,theyarebestlearned"onthejob"andunderthesupervisionofanexperiencedolderworker.
Mysecondreasonisthatacademicsubjectshavewithstoodthetestoftime.Theyrepresenttheaccumulatedwisdomofourancestorsdownthroughtheages,and,farfrombeingimpractical,theyequipuswiththeknowledgeandconfidencetomakesoundjudgmentsaboutanyproblemswhichmaycropup.Inaddition,academicsubjectsaregoodfortrainingusinmentaldiscipline,whilepracticalsubjectsareweakinthisregard.
Mythirdreasonisbasedonthesaying"Mandoesnotlivebybreadalone."Schooldaysdevotedsolelytoinstructionindown-to-earthpracticalmatterswouldbedullindeed!
Lessonsinthebestliteratureoftheworld,andtheepoch-makingscientificandgeographicaldiscoveriesofthepastenrichourlivesandmakeusfeelthatwearepartofthegreatfamilyofmankind.
Allinall,theteachingofacademicsubjectsinschoolsisentirelyappropriate.Itismyfirmlyheldviewthatpracticalsubjectshavenoplaceintheclassroom.Onthecontrary,thecurriculumshouldbemoreacademic!
本范文在结构上可以说是雅思作文的一个经典范例,而且操作性比较强,也就是说考生经过一段时间的学习,完全可以写出这样的文章来。
首段简要描述题目设置的情况,说有一种观点认为学校教的课程学术性倾向太强tendto的意思是"倾向于某事",这种观点是一种criticism批评),所以这种观点显然是反对学校教授学术性太浓的课程,紧接着作者旗帜鲜明地表明了自己的态度"Idisagree"我是不同意这个观点的",同时说明不同意有三个理由,读者读到这里,就可以判断出正文将会从