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写作模板——提纲式作文

Myview型作文

它也是议论文中的一种,其写作方法与议论文相同.MyView这种题型是考试中常见的题目,在有些题型中（AorB）,（What…）（AdvantagesandDisadvantages）,有时也要求发表自己的看法,由此可见是非常有用的一种题型.

MyViewonPopMusic

1.有人认为流行音乐登不上大雅之堂.

2.有人认为音乐无高低贵贱之分,只有兴趣上的差别.

3.我认为…

作文思路

Topic

MyViewonPopMusic

Details

A.somepeople’sview

1.What’sloftymusic?

2.Popmusiciscontrasttoloftymusic

3.popmusicshouldbeexcluded

B.someotherpeople’sview

1.eliteculture

2.symphoniesarenotloftierthanpopmusic

3.It’sunfairtocontemptoneandawetheother

Conclusion

Myview

1.nodistinction

2.bothhaveshortcomings

3.Theyarethereflectionofdifferentthoughtsandinterests

范文

Popmusicisheldincontemptbymanypeople.Inthesepeople’seyespopmusicisalwaysinsharpcontrastto“lofty（高级的）music”.ThelattermainlyreferstosymphoniesandoperasoftheEuropeancountries.Theyshowgreatconcernforthefactthatmanypeopleprefersymphoniestopopmusic,becauseforthempopmusicshouldbeexcludedfromtheholypalaceofmusic.

Conversely,manypeoplehaveanardor（热情）forpopmusic.Theyarguethatpeoplewhowantustolistentosymphoniesareadvocatingakindof“elite（精华，杰出）culture”.Thisnotionisunacceptabletopopmusicfans,fortheydon’tbelievethatsymphoniesareloftierthanpopmusic.Thedifferenceonlyliesintheinterestsofdifferentpeople.Itisunfairtospeakofpopmusicwithcontemptwhilespeakingofsymphonieswithawe（敬畏）.

Inconclusion,myideaisthatjustasthereisnodistinctionbetweenhighcultureandlowculture,soitisinappropriatetosaypopmusicbelongstothe“lowerpeople”whereassymphoniesisahigher,loftierformofmusic.Afterall,therearemanybadly-composedsymphonies.Andwecannotexpecteverypieceofpopmusictobeexcellent.Popmusicreflectsthethoughtsandinterestsofacertainagegrouporageneration.Itistheproductofacertainage,butalsohassomethinguniversal,somethingthatbelongstoallhumanbeings,thatunderlies（构成）itsgreatsuccessamongpeople.Inthissenseitisratherfoolishforsomepeopletoshowgreatconcernsimplybecausemanypeoplepreferpopmusic.Anywaypopmusichasbecomeanindispensablepartofthemusicfamily.

点评

1.来代替给人以新鲜感,而且生动形象.

2.常用于比较良种事物时.

3.用次准确恰当.

4.提起转折,承上启下.

5.用在战士不同观点的文章里,恰当贴切。

6.用一用比喻使文章增色不少.

7.连用两个短语,中间用连接,使句子工整,句意明了.既见解又突出,不失为化龙点睛之笔.

8.的出结论,过度词好.

9.提起比较.

10.用文化的高低来比拟音乐的高雅\低俗,说服力强.

11.提出一个小结论.

12.层层递进,步步深入.

13.用词客观准确.

14.重申观点.

15.闪光点.

写作模式

Para.1

主题引入

S1Backgroundandintroductionofthetopic

S2Trnsition:

generalstatemensofdifferentattitudes

Para.2

双方对立观点的客观阐述

S3Oneside’sattitudeonthetopic

S4–5detailsorsupportingarguments

S6Theother’sattitudeonthetopic

S7-8Detailsorsupportingarguments

Paa3.

作者个人态度；升华主题

S9Myopinion

S10-11Specificstatement

S12Conclusion

注意运用因果法、对比法、推论法等，切忌在阐述双方观点时加入作者的个人评论。

常见段首句式和过渡句

1）Some（people）argue/claim/believe/holdthat..Butothersset（put）forthadifferentargumentabout/oppositeviesonthematterinquestion.

2）Some（people）advocate/favor/arefor9oppose/objectto/areagainst）…Yetothersstickto/holdonto/clingtotheoppositeviews/argument/points.

3）Tosomepeople’smind/Intheeyesofsomepeople,thematterinquestionis/seems/shouldbe/means…However,toothers’mind,itisjust/quitetheotherwayaround/contrary/opposite（或theopposite/reverseisthecase/true.）

1）Somepeoplerespondto/reactto…by…Butothersbehave/actintheotherdirection/intheoppositeway.

（eg.Somepeoplerespondtofailurebyremaininginactiveoravoidingit.…Butothersbehaveitintheoppositeway.）

5）Sometaketheviewthat…And/Butontheotherhand,othersarguefortheoppositeviewthat…

6）Iamoftheopinion/point/viewthat…

7）Tomymind/Frommypointofview/Inmyopinion,whether…or…dependonhow…

8）Personally,（Asastudent,Tobemoreimportant…）,Ithink（believe,hold…）hold...

一、观点类模块Myviewon…

1.

Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewson____.Somepeoplethinkthat____,whileothersarguethat____.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewith____opinion.Foronething,Ifirmlybelieve______.Foranother,_____.Justthinkof____,who_____.

Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat____.Onlyif____canwe____,justasthesayinggoes,____.

MyViewonOpportunity

1．有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。

2．你的看法如何？

写出你的观点，说明你的理由并且适当举例。

3．你的结论

Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewsonopportunity.Somepeoplethinkthattherearefewopportunitiesintheworld,whileothersarguethateverybodywillhavesomekindofopportunityalonghisliferoute.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththelatteropinion.Foronething,Ifirmlybelieveopportunitiesareeverywherearoundus.Nopersonwillbeunluckyenoughtohavenoopportunitiesallthetime,because“everydoghashisday”.Foranother,sinceopportunitiesaretransient,wehavetomakegoodpreparationsandimproveourselves.JustthinkofNewton,whodiscoveredtheLawofGravitywhenmanypeoplehadwatchedanapplefallingaheadofhim.

Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthattherearequiteafewopportunitiesinoursociety.Onlyifwegetpreparedcanweseizetheopportunitiesinsteadoflettingthemslipby,justasthesayinggoes,“Opportunitiesareonlyforthepreparedminds.

2.People’sopinionsarealwaysdifferentoncetheytalkabout_____.Thosewho_____maintainthat_____.Theyalsofirmlybelievethat_____.

Manypeoplethinkotherwise.Ontheonehand,______.Ontheotherhand,_____.

Myownopinionisthat_____,inthisfast-developinginformationera,hasbecomemorethancommonandacceptable.Ifwewantto_____,wehaveto_____.Sowhynot____?

MyViewonJob-hopping

1．有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为…

2．有些人喜欢经常换工作，因为…

3．我的看法

People’sopinionsarealwaysdifferentoncetheytalkaboutjobhopping.Thosewhoneverchangetheirjobthroughtheirlifemaintainthattheyhaveaccumulatedenoughexperiencetoworksmoothlyandefficiently,sowhat’sthepointinchangingtoanotherjob?

Theyalsofirmlybelievethatanyonewhowantstoexcelinhisspecialtyhastoworkhardonthesamepostforyearstoacquiretherequiredskillandknowledge.

Manypeoplethinkotherwise.Ontheonehand,ifthepresentjobcanofferneithersatisfactoryworkingconditionnorfutureopportunities,theywillnothesitateamomenttoleave.Ontheotherhand,theyholdthatlifeisbutonceandjob-hoppingcanproviderichandexactingexperiences.

Myownopinionisthatjob-hopping,inthisfast-developinginformationera,hasbecomemorethancommonandacceptable.Ifwewanttokeeppacewiththetimes,wehavetochangeforthefaster,thehigherandthestronger.Iflifeisajourney,wehavenothingtoregretsolongasweputmeaningintoit.Sowhynotmakeachange?

MyViewonCollegeStudents’joiningtheArmy

Inrecentyears,collegestudentsareallowedtojointhearmyduringtheiracademicyears.Aftertwoyearsofmilitaryservice,theycanreturntotheiroriginaluniversities.

Inmymind,Iwelcomethispracticewithapplause.Foronething,thestricttrainingwillbeinvaluabletoayoungman,makinghimstrongerbothinbodyandinmind.Foranother,therecruitmentofcollegestudentswillhelpimprovethequalityofPLAsoldiersasawhole,becausetheypossessprofessionalknowledgeandskills.Inaddition,itisalsoacrucialmovetohelpstudentsbemorepatrioticandresponsible,linkingpersonalfortunewiththefutureofourmotherland.

Weareveryhappytoseethesmoothimplementationofthisnewpolicy.Judgingfromwhatwehavediscussedabove.Wehaveeveryreasontolookforwardtomoresuchpolicieswhicharebeneficialtobothindividualsandthewholenation.

对比选择型

AdvantagesandDisadvantages型作文

AdvantagesandDisadvantages型作文有议论文也有说明文，其特点是对某一事物或现象的优缺点或利与弊进行正反两个方面的分析，最后得出结论或发表自己的看法。

阅读下列范文，看看作者是怎样安排整片文章结构的？

怎样进行说明的？

使用了哪些承上启下的关联词？

使用了哪些优美的词语？

TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofAirTravel

1.Theadvantagesofairtravel

2.Thedisadvantagesofairtravel

3.Conclusion

考点提示：

这是一篇议论文，这篇文章的考点是advantages和disadvantages，因此，写作重点要放在乘飞机旅行的优点和缺点这两个方面，并得出结论。

作文思路：

Topic

TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofAirTravel

Details

A.advantages

1.quick,easy

2.film,music

3.cheap

B.disadvantages

1.danger

2.missseeingplaces

3.tiredandconfused

Conclusion

Advantagesoutweighthedisadvantages

得分单词与词组：

A.advantages

themostimportant,furthermore,another,whereas

B.disadvantages

ontheotherhand,however,undoubtedly,inadditionto

C.conclusion

toconclude

范文

（13a）Inthelastfiftyyearsflyinghasbecomethemostpopularformofinternationaltravel.

（1）Themostimportantadvantagesofairtravelisthatitisquick;youcanflyfromLondontoNewYorkinthreeandahalfhours.

（2）Furthermore,（3）travelingbyplaneisveryeasy;someonetakesyourluggageafteryouhavecheckedinandallyouhavetodoistogetonandsitdown.Youwillhave（13b）reservedaseatandafriendlyairhostesswilllookafteryoureveryneed.（4）Onlongflightstherearefilmsandmusictoentertainyou.（5）Anotherpointinfavorofairtravelisthatitisnow（12a）relativelycheap,especiallyforlongdistancetravel.YoucanflyfromLondontoSydney（6）for$600,（13c）whereasbyshipitcancost$2,000.

（7）Ontheotherhand,travelingbyairhasitsdisadvantages.Perhapsthemostobviousistheelementofdanger（12b）involved.However,（12c）despitethepublicitygivento（12d）hijackingsandcrashes,flyingisinfactoneofthesafestformsoftransport.（8）Undoubte