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1、高分作文黄金模板doc 高分作文黄金模板写作模板提纲式作文 My view型作文它也是议论文中的一种,其写作方法与议论文相同.My View这种题型是考试中常见的题目,在有些题型中(A or B), (What) (Advantages and Disadvantages), 有时也要求发表自己的看法,由此可见是非常有用的一种题型.My View on Pop Music1. 有人认为流行音乐登不上大雅之堂.2. 有人认为音乐无高低贵贱之分,只有兴趣上的差别.3. 我认为作文思路TopicMy View on Pop MusicDetailsA. some peoples view1. Wha

2、ts lofty music?2. Pop music is contrast to lofty music3. pop music should be excludedB.some other peoples view1. elite culture2. symphonies are not loftier than pop music3. Its unfair to contempt one and awe the otherConclusionMy view1. no distinction2. both have shortcomings3. They are the reflecti

3、on of different thoughts and interests范文Pop music is held in contempt by many people. In these peoples eyes pop music is always in sharp contrast to “lofty（高级的） music”. The latter mainly refers to symphonies and operas of the European countries. They show great concern for the fact that many people

4、prefer symphonies to pop music, because for them pop music should be excluded from the holy palace of music. Conversely, many people have an ardor（热情） for pop music. They argue that people who want us to listen to symphonies are advocating a kind of “elite （精华，杰出）culture”. This notion is unacceptabl

5、e to pop music fans, for they dont believe that symphonies are loftier than pop music. The difference only lies in the interests of different people. It is unfair to speak of pop music with contempt while speaking of symphonies with awe（敬畏）. In conclusion, my idea is that just as there is no distinc

6、tion between high culture and low culture, so it is inappropriate to say pop music belongs to the “lower people” whereas symphonies is a higher, loftier form of music. After all, there are many badly-composed symphonies. And we cannot expect every piece of pop music to be excellent. Pop music reflec

7、ts the thoughts and interests of a certain age group or a generation. It is the product of a certain age, but also has something universal, something that belongs to all human beings, that underlies（构成） its great success among people. In this sense it is rather foolish for some people to show great

8、concern simply because many people prefer pop music. Anyway pop music has become an indispensable part of the music family.点评1. 来代替给人以新鲜感,而且生动形象.2. 常用于比较良种事物时.3. 用次准确恰当.4. 提起转折,承上启下.5. 用在战士不同观点的文章里,恰当贴切。6. 用一用比喻使文章增色不少.7. 连用两个短语,中间用连接,使句子工整,句意明了.既见解又突出,不失为化龙点睛之笔.8. 的出结论,过度词好.9. 提起比较.10. 用文化的高低来比拟音乐的

9、高雅低俗,说服力强.11. 提出一个小结论.12. 层层递进,步步深入.13. 用词客观准确.14. 重申观点.15. 闪光点.写作模式Para.1主题引入S1 Background and introduction of the topicS2 Trnsition: general statemens of different attitudesPara.2双方对立观点的客观阐述S3 One sides attitude on the topicS4 5 details or supporting argumentsS6 The others attitude on the topicS7-

10、8 Details or supporting argumentsPaa3.作者个人态度；升华主题S9 My opinionS10-11 Specific statementS12 Conclusion注意运用因果法、对比法、推论法等，切忌在阐述双方观点时加入作者的个人评论。常见段首句式和过渡句1）Some (people) argue / claim/ believe /hold that. But others set (put) forth a different argument about/ opposite vies on the matter in question.2) Som

11、e (people) advocate/ favor / are for 9 oppose / object to / are against) Yet others stick to / hold on to / cling to the opposite views /argument/ points.3) To some peoples mind / In the eyes of some people, the matter in question is /seems/ should be / means However, to others mind, it is just/ qui

12、te the other way around/ contrary/ opposite(或the opposite /reverse is the case/ true.)1） Some people respond to/ react to by But others behave/act in the other direction/ in the opposite way.(eg. Some people respond to failure by remaining inactive or avoiding it. But others behave it in the opposit

13、e way.)5) Some take the view that And / But on the other hand, others argue for the opposite view that6）I am of the opinion /point/view that7) To my mind/ From my point of view /In my opinion, whether or depend on how8) Personally, (As a student, To be more important), I think ( believe, hold ) hold

14、.一、 观点类模块 My view on 1. Different people have different views on _. Some people think that _, while others argue that _ . As far as I am concerned, I agree with _ opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe _ . For another, _ . Just think of _ , who _ .Taking all these factors into consideration, we ma

15、y safely come to the conclusion that _ . Only if _ can we _ , just as the saying goes, _ . My View on Opportunity1 有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。2 你的看法如何？写出你的观点，说明你的理由并且适当举例。3 你的结论Different people have different views on opportunity. Some people think that there are few opportunities in the world, wh

16、ile others argue that everybody will have some kind of opportunity along his life route . As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe opportunities are everywhere around us .No person will be unlucky enough to have no opportunities all the time, because

17、 “every dog has his day”. For another, since opportunities are transient, we have to make good preparations and improve ourselves . Just think of Newton , who discovered the Law of Gravity when many people had watched an apple falling ahead of him.Taking all these factors into consideration, we may

18、safely come to the conclusion that there are quite a few opportunities in our society . Only if we get prepared can we seize the opportunities instead of letting them slip by , just as the saying goes, “Opportunities are only for the prepared minds .2. Peoples opinions are always different once they

19、 talk about _ . Those who_ maintain that _ . They also firmly believe that_ .Many people think otherwise. On the one hand, _. On the other hand,_ .My own opinion is that _ , in this fast-developing information era, has become more than common and acceptable. If we want to _ , we have to _ . So why n

20、ot _ ?My View on Job-hopping1 有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为2 有些人喜欢经常换工作，因为3 我的看法Peoples opinions are always different once they talk about job hopping . Those who never change their job through their life maintain that they have accumulated enough experience to work smoothly and efficiently, so whats the point i

21、n changing to another job? They also firmly believe that anyone who wants to excel in his specialty has to work hard on the same post for years to acquire the required skill and knowledge.Many people think otherwise. On the one hand, if the present job can offer neither satisfactory working conditio

22、n nor future opportunities, they will not hesitate a moment to leave. On the other hand, they hold that life is but once and job-hopping can provide rich and exacting experiences.My own opinion is that job-hopping, in this fast-developing information era, has become more than common and acceptable.

23、If we want to keep pace with the times, we have to change for the faster, the higher and the stronger. If life is a journey, we have nothing to regret so long as we put meaning into it. So why not make a change?My View on College Students joining the Army In recent years, college students are allowe

24、d to join the army during their academic years. After two years of military service, they can return to their original universities. In my mind , I welcome this practice with applause. For one thing, the strict training will be invaluable to a young man, making him stronger both in body and in mind.

25、 For another ,the recruitment of college students will help improve the quality of PLA soldiers as a whole, because they possess professional knowledge and skills. In addition, it is also a crucial move to help students be more patriotic and responsible, linking personal fortune with the future of o

26、ur motherland. We are very happy to see the smooth implementation of this new policy. Judging from what we have discussed above. We have every reason to look forward to more such policies which are beneficial to both individuals and the whole nation. 对比选择型Advantages and Disadvantages 型作文Advantages a

27、nd Disadvantages 型作文有议论文也有说明文，其特点是对某一事物或现象的优缺点或利与弊进行正反两个方面的分析，最后得出结论或发表自己的看法。阅读下列范文，看看作者是怎样安排整片文章结构的？怎样进行说明的？使用了哪些承上启下的关联词？使用了哪些优美的词语？ The Advantages and Disadvantages of Air Travel 1. The advantages of air travel2. The disadvantages of air travel3. Conclusion 考点提示：这是一篇议论文，这篇文章的考点是advantages 和disadv

28、antages，因此，写作重点要放在乘飞机旅行的优点和缺点这两个方面，并得出结论。作文思路： Topic The Advantages and Disadvantages of Air Travel DetailsA. advantages1. quick, easy2. film, music3. cheapB. disadvantages1. danger2. miss seeing places3. tired and confused Conclusion Advantages outweigh the disadvantages得分单词与词组：A. advantagesthe mos

29、t important, furthermore, another, whereasB. disadvantageson the other hand, however, undoubtedly, in addition toC. conclusionto conclude范文 (13a) In the last fifty years flying has become the most popular form of international travel. (1) The most important advantages of air travel is that it is qui

30、ck; you can fly from London to New York in three and a half hours.(2) Furthermore, (3) traveling by plane is very easy; someone takes your luggage after you have checked in and all you have to do is to get on and sit down. You will have (13b) reserved a seat and a friendly air hostess will look afte

31、r your every need. (4) On long flights there are films and music to entertain you. (5) Another point in favor of air travel is that it is now (12a) relatively cheap, especially for long distance travel. You can fly from London to Sydney (6) for $600, (13c) whereas by ship it can cost $ 2,000. (7) On the other hand, traveling by air has its disadvantages. Perhaps the most obvious is the element of danger (12b) involved. However, (12c) despite the publicity given to (12d) hijackings and crashes, flying is in fact one of the safest forms of transport. (8) Undoubte