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高考英语概要写作专题

高考英语概要写作专题

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【考情探究】

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考情分析

2018.11

2018.6

2017.11

2017.6

2016.10

概要写作

1.对原文主旨及要点的理解和呈现情况;2.概括要点时语法结构和词汇应用的准确性;3.概要文章上下文的连贯性;4.对各要点表达的独立性情况

提供一篇350词以内的短文,要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要

在申请大学之前,最好亲自去目标学校看一下。

如果时间和金钱不允许,就在网上获取信息

分析解读　　概要写作是综合性的写作考查。

要求考生首先对原文有准确的理解、对原文的结构和要点有准确的把握,然后再用高级的语法结构及合适的连接词写出包含所有要点的短文。

所以,考生要想做好本题,就必须注意以下几点:

（1）准确理解文章。

（2）把握文章的各个要点。

（3）使用准确的语法结构、丰富的词汇和合适的连接词。

（4）使用自己的语言表述,不要照抄原文中的句子。

【真题典例】

　　阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus（校园）likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.

There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwon’tbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!

Ifcampusvisitsaren’tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou’dliketoattend.Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudon’tlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldn’tknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.

Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.It’sachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecounselors（顾问）,anditwon’tcostyouapenny!

Youcanregisterforitsonlinecollegefairat.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircan’ttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyou’dliketoattend.

概要写作的文章一般都是说明文或议论文。

文章结构比较清楚,段落之间的逻辑关系也很紧密。

文章第一段开门见山,提出观点:

在你申请大学之前,要去亲自看看目标大学。

第二段特别指出一定要去看看附近的大学。

第三段的内容是,如果你在申请之前没有去过;在申请之后,或得到offer之前,一定要去看看,免得将来后悔。

第四段的主要内容是如果无法亲自去参观的话,可以登录网站了解相关的信息。

并提供了网站的信息。

参考范文

范文鉴赏

　　Itisawisechoiceforyoutopayapersonalvisittothecollegeyouareapplyingto,especiallytheonesthatareclosetoyou.（要点1）Inordertoavoidbeingregretful,youshou

ldatleastvisitthecollegeyoudecidedtoattend.（要点2）Ifalltheaboveisnotaffordable,itwillbehelpfultosearchtheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLivewhereyoucangetthenecessaryinformation（要点3）.

1.范文准确地把握了各个段落的要点。

2.各个要点之间的连接和逻辑都很顺畅,相互关系密切。

3.句子之间用了比较好的连接方式。

如第一句的especially;第二句的Inorderto,第三句的If。

4.文章使用了比较高级的词汇和结构。

如,Itisawisechoice;youareapplyingto;thatareclosetoyou;avoidbeingregretful;notaffordable;whereyoucangetthenecessaryinformation。

【三年模拟】

模拟题组

Writing1（2019浙江五校）

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush.Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeingin

ahurry.However,it’sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.

Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwronginarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry,theycan’tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesayinggoes,“Hastemakeswaste.”Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.

Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Forexample,takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives.

Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus.Asisknowntoall,takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem.Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases,tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter.

Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced.Yet,muchstresscan’tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace.

答案

【写作提示】

本文是一篇议论文。

文章论述了降低生活节奏的各种好处。

文章结构清楚,观点明确。

同时在第一段提出了主旨,第二至第四段进行了论述,最后一段给予了总结。

【参考范文】

Despitebeingaccustomedtothefastpaceinmodernsociety,peoplearerecommendedtoleadaslowerlife.（要点1）Slowingdownlowersthepossibilityofcommittingerrorsmadebyhurrydecisions.（要点2）Itcanalsoprovideuswithmoreopportunitiestoenjoylife.（要点3）Besides,aslowerlifeissupposedtobringbetterhealthconditionphysicallyandmentally.（要点4）Therefore,aslowlifeisstronglysuggest

ed.（要点5）

Writing2（2019浙江宁波返校考）

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Haveyouheardanoldsaying“Thegrasslooksgreenerontheothersideofthefence”?

Itmeansotherplacesoftenlookbetter,moreinterestingthantheplacewhereyoulive.“Let’sgotoKFCfordinnerandthenwatchsomeJapanesecartoons!

”Weallknowit:

moreandmoreChinesekidsloveAmericanandJapanesefoodandmovies.SomepeopleworrythatyoungChinesearebeginningtofeelthatway.TheyseeyoungChineseignoring（忽视）Chinesecultureand,instead,buyingJapanesecartoonbooks,watchingKoreansoapoperasandevencelebratingwesternholidays.

Foreignbooksandsoapoperasaregood,butChinesewritersandactorsarejustasgood.Asforholidays,Christmasisnice,butitcanneverhavethemeaningforChinesethatSpringFestivalhas,andtheWesthasnothingtocomparewiththeMid-AutumnFestival.Chinahaslotsofcoolthingsinitsculture:

calligraphy,BeijingOpera,quickmealsonthestreets,andevenJayChou!

Andlet’snotforgetthepartofChinesecultureIlikebest:

itsfriendliness.NotallcountriesareaswarmasChina.

It’sgoodtoenjoyotherculturesandlearnfromthem,buttheycanneverreplaceyourownculture.It’sgoodtolookontheothersideofthefence,butmakesureyoutakeagoodlonglook.Youwillfindthatthegrassisn’talwaysgreener.

Althoughsomepeoplebecomeworriedaboutthat,Idon’tthinktheyshould.Willwegetmorepowerfulwithoutlearningfromothercountries?

WillChinesepeoplelivemorehappilywithoutAmericanfastfood?

Besides,it’sfuntolearnaboutdifferentcultures.Chinesekidscanlearnaboutotherculturesandhavefun,buttheyalsoneedtolearnmoreabouttheirownculture.BeproudofChinesecultureandofbeingChinese!

答案

【写作提示】

本文是议论文。

文章论述了“本地的花不香”这种盲目崇洋媚外的现象。

文章结构清楚,概括时根据自然段的中心思想组织要点。

【参考范文】

ManyyoungChinesepreferforeignitems,consideringthemtobebetter.（要点1）Nevertheless,Chinesecultureisequallygood,colorfulandevenmoremeaningful,suchasitsfestivals,calligraphyandfriendliness.（要点2）Foreigncultures,whicharenotalwaysgood,canneverreplaceyourownculture.（要点3）Inaword,ChinesekidsneedtolearnmoreandtakeprideinChineseculturewhileenjoyingothercu

ltures.（要点4）

Writing3（2019浙江杭州模拟）

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

“IthinkI’mnothingmorethanadeadfish.”“Idon’twanttodoanything.”“I’msobeatandsosad.”...Theyounggenerationinourcountryusedtoenjoytheir“happyculture”butnowtheyhavebecome“beatandsad”slowlyandsecretly.Somepeopleevencalledit“thebeatculture”.The“beat”youthsdon’twanttodoanything.Theyhavenopurpose,nodesireandtheyaretotallydepressedandtheyonlywanttoliveanaimlesslife.The“GeYouslouch（葛优瘫）”andthesong“Ifeellikehavingbeendrained”aretheexamples.

Manymediaconcernthemselvesaboutthisphenomenonandtrytopersuadetheyouthsintoembracingpositiveandhealthyfeelingsandencouragethemtoworkhardtogetridofdecadence.Thisisreallyakindgesture.However,wedon’thavetoworrytoomuch

aboutthis“beatculture.”Infact,it’snotanegativething.“Beat”nevermeansdespair,butawayofself-mockery（自嘲）andpressurerelief.

Ingeneral,theyouthsinChinaarenot“beat”.According

toarecentinternationalresearch,theyouthsinChinaholdpositiveattitudetowardsthefuture.29%oftheChineseintervieweesbelievetheywillliveandworkinpeaceinChinabecause“aslongasyouworkhard,youcanhaveyourownday”.Around93%oftheChineseintervieweesbelievethefutureispromisingbecauseofmedicineindustry,renewableenergysourcesandcomputer.ComparedwithChineseyoungsters,youthsindevelopedcountriesaremorepessimistic.

Ofcoursetherearesomesocialreasonsfortheappearingof“theBeatCulture”.Asurbanizationdevelopsrapidly,youthslivinginbigcitiesarefacingnewchallengesthattheirforefathershaveneverencounteredbefore.Lonelinessandfeelingsofinsignificanceandpowerlessnessareeasytogetaholdoftheyoungpeople.Withoutpropercare,theycouldthreatentheyouths’mentalityandcausemanysocial