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四级作文高分模板_高分哦
第一段:
陈述现状段
文章第一句话:
1)第一句的第一种写法:
就某事,人们又热烈讨论
Thereisaheateddiscussionwhether(通常用在选择性话题:
是否年级小出国,是否有必要参加?
)
theyshouldliveoffcampusorlivetogetherwithotherroommates.(住在校外,还是和同学共住)
studentsshouldbeaskedtogradetheirteacher(是否学生应该要求给老师打分)studentsshouldtakeapart-timejobinschool(是否学生在校期间应该找兼职)
2)第一句的第二种写法:
某事引发人们关注(不用写事情的经过,用一个词儿代替事情过程)Recently,theproblemof“”hasarousedwideconcernamongthepublic
Currently,hephenomenonofdrunkendrivinghasarousewideconcernamongthepublic(酒后驾驶)
Currently,thefrequentjob-hoppingofgraduateshasarousedwideconcernamongthepublic.(跳槽)
Currently,theproblemof“foodsafety”hasarousedwideconcernamongthepublic.(食品安全)
3)第一句的第三种写法:
社会现象变成某个“词”(这种写法最大的魅力也是,将事件过程压缩成一个词!
)
Thenewly-coinedword/phrase“”maybynomeanssoundstrangetomostpeopleinthisdayandage.
(“”中填进的词有:
nudepicturescandal艳照门丑闻;watershortage缺水;onlineeducation网络教育;fakediplomas假证书;crazefortalentshows选秀狂热)
4)第一句的第四种写法:
社会趋势(一般都写在“有越来越多的人干什么去了”
5)Thereisagrowingtendencynowadaysthat?
graduatesinmountingnumberscanhardlyfindanidealjob(就业难)
peopleinmountingnumbersshowgreatenthusiasmforvolunteerworks/varioustalentshows(选秀热)
studentsinmountingnumbersshowgreatenthusiasmforstudentsleadersselection(竞选班干部热)
peopleinmountingnumbersparticipateinthetestfornationalcivilservants.(公务员热)
undergraduatesingrowingnumberstakethepostgraduateentranceexamination(考研热)
peopleinmountingnumberstrytheirlucktobuylotterytickets(买彩票热)peopleinmountingnumbersusecreditcard.(信用卡热)
5)第一句的第五种写法:
某个现象人尽皆知(一般写比较大的,比较严重的社会问题)NooneinChinahasfailedtonoticethephenomenonthat?
thatgoodsinmountingnumbersarewrappedinflaringboxesorbags(过度包装)thattherehasbeenasteadyriseinthenumberofrurallaborerswhoswarmintobigcities.(农工进城)
Theeconomyhasbeendevelopingataconsiderablyhighspeedattheexpenseoflivingenvironment.(经济发展以牺牲环境为代价)(背景段)
文章第二句话:
第二段:
对立观点论述段
文章第三句话:
(提出正方观点,比如说他支持什么;总体来说,有两种表示支持的说法)
Somemaintainthat(表示“认为”的单词;maintain/argue/hold/claim都可以写)
1)某物是有好处的:
somethingisbeneficialtosth.(练习:
跳槽对学生有利)
2)某物优点>缺点:
Themeritsofsth.faroutweighitsdemerits.(练习:
用手机的优点>缺点)(优点段)
文章第四句话:
(上句提出了论点,这句就必须要用论据来证明,论据可以写一个,也可若干个;个数的标准是字数达标)
Firstly,?
secondly,?
lastbutnotleast,?
.(论证段)
文章第五句话:
(既是正反对立观点作文,第三句提出正方观点,那么这句当然要提出对立观点啦!
)However,quiteafewpeopleholdtheoppositeopinionthat(反方观点),
1)某物是有坏处:
somethingisdetrimentaltosth.
2)某物缺点>优点:
Thedemeritsofsth.faroutweighitsmerits.(merits代替advantages)(缺点段)
文章第六句话:
(上句提出了论点,这句就必须要用论据来证明,论据可以写一个,也可若干个;个数的标准是字数达标)Foronething,?
foranother,?
(万能理由:
这个只能在新东方小虹的六级写作课堂听啦!
)(论证段)
第三段:
个人观点段
文章第七句话:
Tomywayofthinking,?
Frommyperspective,+个人观点句(参见第三、五)(观点段)
文章第八句话:
(上句提出了论点,这句就必须要用论据来证明,论据可以写一个,也可若干个;个数的标准是字数达标)Inthefirstplace,?
inthesecondplace,?
(万能理由)(论证段)
文章第九句话:
(再次重申自己的观点,和第七句话正好构成“总分总结构”)
GivenallthefactorsIhaveoutlined,Istronglycommittothenotionthat(观点句)
或者是:
Weighingtheprosandconsofthesearguments,Iaminclinedtoagreewiththeideathat?
(总结段)
模板二:
问题解决作文{3段9句话,201X年12月六级可能考}
第一段:
陈述现状段
文章第一句话:
(小虹有话:
第一句话的功能,就是介绍文章写作背景,社会现状;所以呢,写法和“对立观点作文”的文章第一段,第一句的写法是完全一样的!
)
Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedanotuncommonphenomenonthat?
(社会现象).(背景段)
文章第二句话:
具体描述
(将文章第一句话所讲的抽象的、大体的社会现象,用具体的文字描述一下,增加字数,只能这么做了!
)
举例:
(第一句)Nowadays,thephenomenonofdrunkendrivinghasarousewideconcernamongthepublic.
(第二句)Especiallytheyounggenerationlivinginmetropolis,tendtodriveafterdrinking,ignoringthefactthatthisbehaviormayposeunderlyingthreattotheirpreciouslifeandmayevenendangerothers.(背景段)
第二段:
原因或危害陈述段(分析问题)
文章第三句话:
(过渡句,引发讨论某个社会问题、现象产生的原因)
Amplereasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon,andthefollowingsmightbethemostcriticalones:
(原因段)
文章第四句话:
(提出某个社会问题、现象产生的原因;具体写几个原因,根据字数情况斟酌)Firstly,?
secondly,?
.(万能理由)(原因段)
文章第五句话:
(提出如果我们不关注这个问题,后果很严重!
)
Theproblemmentionedabovewillboundtogeneratesevereconsequencesifwekeepturningablindeyeanddeafeartoit.(翻译:
如果我们对这个问题视而不见,听而不闻,将产生严重后果)(加强说明段)
文章第六句话:
(危害和后果分别是什么呢?
)
Ontheonehand,?
ontheotherhand,?
(优点段、缺点段)
第三段:
原因或危害陈述段(解决问题)
文章第七句话:
(号召句,“放空话”!
号召大家赶紧采取措施,投入关注等等)
Effectivemeasuresshouldbeadoptedbeforethingsgetworse.(号召句)文章第八句话:
Firstandforemost,(措施).
1)扬善去恶:
(两面性问题,比如手机,彩票等等)
Whatweshoulddoistoencouragethemeritsanddiminishthedemeritstotheleastextent
2)大家联合起来:
(一般用在解决学生的问题,心理健康啊,网瘾啊等等)
Itishightimethatparents,educators,andtheauthoritiesmakecombinedeffortstoputanendtothissituation.
3)个人意识:
(提高环境保护的意识等等)
Thepublicshouldenhancetheirconsciousnessofthesignificanceof?
4)采取行动:
(这句话纯粹就是凑字数的)
Wemustpressforwardondeeperresearch,butresearchaloneisinadequate,actually,anyoneofushasgoodreasontotakeactionsto?
我们必须加紧更深入的研究,但是仅仅研究是不够的,事实上,我们中的任何人都有足够的理由去做。
。
。
。
5)加强教育:
(一般用在涉及面比较广的社会问题)
Apubliceducationcampaign(活动)shouldbelaunched(发起)toinformthepublicoftheimportance(重要的地位)ofspiritualcivilization(精神文明)
6)政府出台:
(一般用在比较大的,比较严重的社会问题,如节约问题,浪费问题等等)Itisessentialthattheauthoritiesshouldmakeandimplementrelevantlawsandregulationstoimposeaheavypenaltyonthosewho(contaminatetheenvironmentdeliberately)
7)呼吁相关部门加强监管:
(一般用在比较大的,比较严重的社会问题。
如质量问题,假冒产品问题)
Weshouldappealtotherelevantadministrationdepartmentstostrengthensupervisionover(方案段)
文章第九句话:
(采取了措施之后,当然要有美好的远景啊!
)
1)只有采取措施,我们才能:
Onlywiththesemeasuresadoptedcanweputanendtothisproblem.(结束这个问题)
Onlyinthiswaycan(graduatesfindasatisfactoryjobandenjoyabrilliantfuture.)
2)采取了这些措施以后
Withthesemeasurestaken,itisreasonableforustobelievethatthisproblemcanbeperfectlysolvedinthenearfuture(我们有理由相信问题一定能完美解决)Withthesemeasureadopted,Istronglybelievethattheproblemof(drunkendriving)willbethingsofthepast.(这个问题将会成为过去式)
3)我坚信生活美好:
Itisdeeply-rootedinmymindthatahappyandbrightfutureisawaitingusifwemakeeveryeffortto?
4)和谐社会人人追求:
Itisdeeply-rootedinmymindthattheworldwillbeamoreharmoniousplaceforustolivein.(总结段)
七、开篇(背景段)
1)Manynationshavebeenfacedwiththeproblemof?
?
2)Recentlytheproblemhasbeenbroughtintofocus.
3)Recentlythephenomenonhasbecomeaheatedtopic.
4)Recentlytheissuehasarousedgreatconcernamong?
?
5)Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover?
?
6)Neverinourhistoryhastheideathat?
?
beensopopular.
7)Facedwith?
?
quiteafewpeoplearguethat?
?
8)Accordingtoarecentsurvey,?
?
9)Withtherapiddevelopmentof?
?
?
?
二、原因(原因段)
1.Anumberoffactorsareaccountableforthissituation.
Anumberoffactorsmightcontributeto(leadto)(accountfor)thephenomenon(problem).
2.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.
3.Thephenomenonmainlystemsfromthefactthat?
?
4.Thefactorsthatcontributetothissituationinclude?
?
5.Thechangein?
?
largelyresultsfromthefactthat?
?
6.Wemayblame?
?
buttherealcausesare?
?
7.Partoftheexplanationsforitisthat?
?
Oneofthemostcommonfactors(causes)isthat?
?
Anothercontributingfactor(cause)is?
?
Perhapstheprimaryfactoristhat?
Butthefundamentalcauseisthat?
?
一、比较(优缺点段)
1.Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.
2.TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.
3.AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat?
?
4.Itisreasonabletomaintainthat?
?
butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat?
?
5.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.
6.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.
7.AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.
8.AbearssomeresemblancestoB.
9.However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.
10.AandBdifferinseveralways.
11.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.
12.Peopleusedtothink?
?
butthingsaredifferentnow.
13.ThesameistrueofB.
14.WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.
15.ItistruethatA?
?
butthechieffaults(obviousdefects)are?
?
三、后果
1.Itmaygiverisetoahostofproblems.
2.Theimmediateresultitproducesis?
?
3.Itwillexerciseaprofoundinfluenceupon?
?
4.Itsconsequencecanbesogreatthat?
?
四、批驳(观点段—反驳)
1)Itistruethat?
?
butonevitalpointisbeingleftout.
2)Thereisagrainoftruthinthesestatements,buttheyignoreamoreimportantfact.
3)Somepeoplesay?
?
butitdoesnotholdwater.
4)Manyofushavebeenundertheillusionthat?
?
5)Acloseexaminationwouldrevealhowridiculousthestatementis.
6)Itmakesnosensetoarguefor?
?
7)Toomuchstressplacedon?
?
mayleadto?
?
8)Suchastatementmainlyrestsontheassumptionthat?
?
9)Contrarytowhatiswidelyaccepted,Imaintainthat?
?
六、证明(论证段)
1)Noonecandenythefactthat?
?
2)Theideaishardlysupportedbyfacts.
3)Unfortunately,noneoftheavailabledatashows?
?
4)Recentstudiesindicatethat?
?
5)Thereissufficientevidencetoshowthat?
?
6)Accordingtostatisticsprovedby?
?
itcanbeseenthat?
?
五、举例
1)Agoodcaseinpointis?
?
2)Asanillustration,wemaytake?
?
3)Suchexamplesmightbegiveneasily.
4)?
?
isoftencitedasanexample.
八、结尾(总结段)
1)Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecandrawtheconclusionthat?
?
2)Itishightimethatstrictmeasuresweretakentostop?
?
3)Itisnecessarythatstepsshouldbetakento?
?
4)Inconclusion,itisimperativethat?
?
5)Thereisnoeasymethod,but?
?
mightbeofsomehelp.
6)Tosolvetheabove-mentionedproblem,wemust?
?
7)Insummary,ifwecontinuetoignoretheabove-mentionedissue,moreproblemswillcropup.
8)Withtheeffortsofallpartsconcerned,t