于君星雅思基础写作补充材料Version 10.docx

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于君星雅思基础写作补充材料Version10

雅思写作补充材料

HelenYjx

2011/10

●屠鸭路，我为伴

一、雅思写作类型介绍

（一）Task1：

小作文：

______（类）考生写图表；_______（类）考生写书信；时间_________分钟；字数至少_______字；评分比值大约是：

_______

（二）Task2：

大作文：

要求在_________分钟之内完成一篇至少_______字的大作文，评分比值大约是：

_______

二、雅思写作评分标准介绍

TASK1：

TA_____________；CC_____________；LR_____________；GRA_________________

TASK2：

TR_____________；CC_____________；LR_____________；GRA_________________

●小作文，大智慧——Task1

一、图表简介：

（一）图表分类：

1、主流图形：

________图（curvegraph/linechart），________图（barchart/columnchart），________图（pie/fanchart）和________（table）。

2、非主流图形：

________图、________图（diagram/flowchart）、________（map）、主流图形的组合图（combinations）

（二）图表出题频率：

最多柱状图，其次曲线图，再者饼状图，表格。

（三）图表3大忌：

切忌发表________________，切忌词汇_____________、切忌简单________数据、避免句子____________

（四）写作注意事项：

1、词汇语法特征：

词汇准确多样，不能重复，如：

thosewhoworkin=peopleworkingin=theemployeein

2、句子特征：

结构不能太简单，一句话要同时写两个对象的特征。

3、逻辑特征：

句子本身，句子之间，段落之间都要使用表示对比，转折，相似的连词或副词。

4、时态特征：

第一句使用一般现在时，主体部分_______________________________________________________。

二、Task1的解题思路：

（一）文本：

1、________词汇（keywords）：

2、写首句：

（二）图表

1、有题目看题目，没有题目看________（items）

2、找________（laws）

3、________（paragraph）布局谋篇

三、Task1作文范例

（一）柱形图

1、范例：

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

ThegraphbelowgivesinformationaboutthepreferredleisureactivitiesofAustralianchildren.

Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshown.

You

shouldwriteatleast150words

2、modelanswer:

Thegraph_________（show/illustrate）thepreferredleisureactivitiesofAustralianchildrenaged5-14.Asmightbeexpected,itisclearfromthedatathat___________（静态的）pursuitsarefarmorepopularnowadaysthan________（动态的）ones.

Ofthe10,000childrenthatwereinterviewed,alltheboysandgirlsstatedthatthey___________（喜欢）watchingTVorvideos___________________（业余时间）.___________（此外）,___________________________（其次受欢迎的）activity,___________（吸引）80%ofboysand60%ofgirls,wasplayingelectronicorcomputergames（注意该句型中插入语，现在分词短语的使用，精彩！

）.Whilegirlsratedactivitiessuchasartandcrafthighly——justunder60%statedthatthey___________（喜欢）these___________________（业余时间）——only35%ofboysoptedforcreativepastimes.Bikeriding,ontheotherhand,wasalmostaspopularaselectronicgamesamongstboysand,perhapssurprisingly,almost60%ofgirlssaidthattheyenjoyedthistoo.Skateboardingwasrelatively______________（不太受欢迎的）amongstbothboysandgirls,althoughitstillattracted35%ofboysand25%ofgirls.（157words）

3、柱形图的总结

（二）曲线图

1、范例

ThegraphshowsUndergroundStationPassengerNumbersinLondon.

Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

2、范文

Thelinegraph_____________howthenumberofpeopleusingaLondonundergroundstation_____________（变化）overthecourseof16hours.

As_____________如图所示fromthegraph,at6amthenumberofpeopleatthestationstandsatonly100.Thenumber_____________急剧上升overthenexttwohours,_________达到峰值at400at8am.Thenthenumber_____________急剧下降fortwohours,_________________到达低谷at180at10am.Theperiodbetween10o’clockand12o’clock____________（见证了/经历了）a____________（小幅上升）inthenumberofpeopleinthestation,withthenumberreaching280atmidday.

Numbersinthefollowingtwohoursalmost____________（稳定不变）atjustunder300people.Thenthenumber____________（急剧下降）toonly100from2pmto4pm.Thenthenexttwohours____________（见证了/经历了）a____________（急剧上升）again,with6pmregistering380people.After6pm,thenumber________（下降）again,________（到达）the____________（低点）of130at8pm.Theperiodfrom8pmto10pm____________（见证了/经历了）a____________（小幅上升）,butthenthenumberofpeople_______（下降）againfrom180at9pmto135at10pm.

Thislinegraphclearlydemonstratesthatrushhoursintheearlymorningandtheearlyeveningareperiodswhenthestationisusedbythemostpeople.（214words）

3、总结

（四）饼形图

1、范例

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

ThetwographsshowthemainsourcesofenergyintheUSAinthe1980sandthe1990s.

Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingthechangeswhichoccurred.

Writeatleast150words.

2、Modelanswer:

Thetwographsshow（换掉该词）thatoilwasthemajorenergysourceintheUSAinboth1980and1990andthatcoal,naturalgasandhydroelectricpower_______________（保持不变）proportions._______________（另一方便）,therewas_______________（急剧上升）innuclearpower,which__________（翻番）itspercentageoverthetenyears._______________（小幅）

Oilsuppliedthe__________（最大）percentageofenergy,althoughthepercentage___________（下降）from42%in1980to33%in1990.Coalin1990was_______________（第二大）sourceofenergy,_______________（增加）itsproportionto27%from22%inthepreviousdecade.Naturalgas,thesecondlargestsourcein1980at26%,decreaseditssharevery___________（小幅）toprovide25%ofAmerica’senergytenyearslater.Therewasnochangeinthepercentagesuppliedbyhydroelectricpowerwhichremainedat5%ofthetotalenergyused.Nuclearpowerthegreatestchange:

in1990itwas10%,twicethatofthe1980s.（152words:

（雷人啊，能掐会算啊）

3、总结

（四）表格1、范例

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

ThetablebelowprovidesinformationonrentalchargesandsalariesinthreeareasofLondon.

Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

2、modelanswer:

Thetableshowstwosetsofrelatedinformation:

therelativecost,inpounds,ofrentingapropertywithone,twoorthreebedroomsinthreedifferentsuburbsofLondonandanindicationofthekindofannualsalaryyouwouldneedtobeearningtorentintheseareas.

Ofthethreeareasmentioned,NottingHillis_________________（最贵的）withweeklyrentsstartingat£375（salaryapproximately£100,000）andrisingto£738perweekfora3-bedroomproperty.Toaffordthis,youwouldrequireasalaryintheregionof£200,000perannum.Alternatively,Fulhamis______________（最便宜）areashownwithrentsrangingfrom£215perweekforaonebedroompropertyto£600perweekfora3-bedroomproperty.__________________________________________________________________________________.______________________________________________________________________________________________________.Torentinthisarea,salariesneedtobesomewherebetween£85,000and£170,000dependingonthenumberofbedroomsrequired.

Forthoseabletopayinthemiddlepricerangeforaccommodation,Regent'sParkmightbeamoresuitabledistrict.（163words）

3、总结

（五）流程图

1、范例

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

Theflowchartillustratestheproductionofcolouredplasticpaperclipsinasmallfactory.

Writeareportforauniversitytutordescribingtheproductionprocess.

Writeatleast150words

2、Modelanswer:

Thereare_________mainstagesintheproductionofplasticpaperclipsfromthissmallfactory.Twoofthesestagesinvolve______________oftheclips,whiletheothertwoconsistof_____________beforetheclipsaresentoutfromthefactorytotheretailerstobesoldtothepublic.

______________（首先）,moltenplasticispouredintothreedifferentmoulds______________（根据）thecolourrequired:

thecoloursarered,blueandyellow._______（一旦）theseclipsemergefromthemouldsaqualitycontrolmachinechecksthemforstrength.Unsatisfactoryclipsarerejected.______________（第三）intheprocesstheclipsarestoredbyhandintotwogroups,mixedandsinglecolours.________（当）thisstageiscompletethegroupsarecheckedasecondtimetoensurethatthecolourmixturesaredividedcorrectlyintosinglecoloursandmixedcolourbatches.______________（最后）,theclipsarepackedanddispatchedtothemarkets.（152words惜字如金啊）

3、总结

（六）地图

1、范例

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

ThemapbelowisofthetownofGarlsdon.Anewsupermarket（S）isplannedforthetown.Themapshowstwopossiblesitesforthesupermarket.

Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.

2、Sampleanswer：

Thefirstpotentiallocation（S1）isoutsidethetownitself,andis_____________（坐落在）justoffthemainroadtothetownofHindon,_____________（坐落在）12kmstothenorth-west.Thissiteisinthe_____________（乡下）andsowouldbeableto_____________（提供）alotofcarparking.Thiswouldmakeit_____________（便利）toshoppersfrombothHindonandGarlsdonwhocouldtravelbycar._____（因为）itisalsoclosetotherailwayline___________（连接）thetwotownstoCransdon（25kmtothesouth-east）,apotentiallylargenumberofshopperswouldalsobeabletotravelbytrain.

_____________（相反）,thesuggestedlocation,S2,isrightinthetowncentre,whichwouldbegoodforlocalresidents.Theoreticallythestorecouldbe_________（到达）byroadorrailfromthe_________（附近）towns,includingBransdon,butasthecentralareaisano-trafficzone,carswouldbeunabletoparkandaccesswouldbedifficult.

_________（总之）,neithersiteis_________（合适）forallthetowns,butforcustomersinCransdon,HindonandGarlsdon,theout-of-townsite（S1）wouldprobablyoffermoreadvantages.（179words）

3、总结

（七）混合图

1、范例：

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

Thechartsbelowshowthepercentageoftheirfoodbudgettheaveragefamilyspentonrestaurantmealsindifferentyears.Thegraphshowsthenumberofmealseateninfastfoodrestaurantsandsit-downrestaurants.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyr