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2010英语高考满分作文
作文题目
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。
请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意:
1.词数:
100左右:
2.参考词汇:
房租—Tent（n.）.
I‘mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter,andI‘mgladtohearthatyouwillgotoChinatolearnChinesehere.Ihavealreadyfoundafiatforyou.ItisonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyouthere,anditisonestopbeforetheChineseSchool.Theflatisonthethirdfloorwith3rooms,oneofwhichisbedroom,theothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.Thereareabed,asofa,adeskandsomechairsinthis25square-metressmallfiat,andtherentis500yuanpermonth.Maybethisfiatisnotasgoodasyourwish,butI‘lltrymybesttomeetyourneeds.Ifitisnotsuitableenough,writetomeandIwilllookforanotherbetterplace.
Hopeyouwillcomeheresoon!
Allthebest!
Yours,
LiHua
满分理由
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。
作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以?
which,‘引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
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DearBob,
WelcometoChina!
Youwrotetometofindaplaceforyou.
IhavefoundanapartmentonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorandthere‘rethreeroomsinit:
abedroom,akitchen,andabathroom.Thereisabed,asofa,adeskandachairinthebedroom.Thehouseis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanpermonth.
Alsofromthishouseyoucangettoyourschooleasily.JusttaketheNo.11busatthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.Itisonlyonestop.Atlast,willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive?
ThenI‘Ubeabletomeetyouattheairport,seeyou.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiHua
满分理由
本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。
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DearBob,
Howareyouthesedays?
I‘msogladtoknowthatyou‘llcometoourcitytolearnChinese.Youaskedmetofindaplaceforyou.NowI‘vefoundonewhichIthinkisprettygood.TheplaceisonFangCaoStreetwhichisneartheNo.11busstop.It‘sjustonestopawayfromJianxinChineseSchool.
Therearethreerooms,akitchen,abathroomandabedroom.Thoughitisnotverybig,only25squaremetres,Ithinkitissuitable.Bytheway,therentis500yuanpermonth.Ihopeyou‘lllikeit.Ifnot,I‘lltrytofindanotherplaceforyou.
Yours,
LiHua
满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。
由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。
同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
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作文:
DearBob,
I‘mgladtohearfromyou.
Welcometoourcityinseptember.I‘vefoundasuitablehouseforyou.
ThehouseisonFangCaoStreet,notfarfromtheJianxinChineseSchool.IfyoutaketheNo.11bus,itisjustonestop.
Itisaflatonthethirdfloorofabuilding.Ithasthreerooms,aliving-room,abathroomandakitchen.Youcancookyourself.Themirror,thebasinandthebathtubareveryconvenientforyou.Intheliving-room,thereisabed,asofaandadeskwithchair.Thedeskisnexttothewindow.Itwillbegoodforstudy.Thetotalsizeis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanamonth.
Willyoubesatisfiedwiththisflat,oryouwantanotherone?
Justletmeknow.I‘lltrymybesttohelpyou.
Yours,
LiHua
满分理由
本文内容详实,描述具体细腻,用词适当准确,如―suitablehouse‖、―notfarfrom‘‘等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。
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2009年5月1日世博会志愿者招募仪式正式启动,志愿者是办好世博会的一支重要的工作力量。
另外,志愿者或做家教,教小孩子阅读、算术,或打扫公园与街道,或到医院或疗养院帮忙。
你愿意做志愿者吗?
请陈述理由写一篇100字左右的短文。
Onepossibleversion
Iwouldliketobeavolunteerinmysparetime.Myreasonsareasfollows:
Firstofall,itisagoodvirtuetohelpothers,eveninmodernsociety.Weallneedothers‘helpincasewegetintotrouble.Secondly,weareabletobetterourselvesbyhelpingothersbecausewegainvaluableexperienceandbuildupourconfidencewhileservingothers.What‘smore,volunteeringmakesusfeelbetteraboutourselves,thusmakingourlifemoreenjoyable.Moreimportantly,wecanmaketheworldabetterplacetoliveinbyvolunteeringtoimproveit.
Insummary,volunteeringcanmakeadifferencetoourlife,soIthinkitisveryrewardingtobeavolunteer.
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不同人都有着不同的习惯,个人习惯直接关系着公共卫生。
请根据下列要求,写一篇120字的英语短文,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
1.介绍有些人不同的好习惯和坏习惯。
2.习惯与卫生的关系:
习惯是卫生基础;不好的习惯,会导致一些传染疾病传播,如AIDS,SARS,H1N1流感等。
3.你的看法……。
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Itisgenerallybelievedthatdifferentpeoplehavedifferenthabits.Somepeopleareaddictedtohabitslikedrinkingandsmoking,whileotherspayspecialattentiontohealthydietandnevertastethingslikealcoholandcigarettes.
Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthereiscloserelationshipbetweenpersonalhabitsandpublichealth.Ontheonehand,goodhabitsserveasthenecessarybasisofpublichealth,thatistosay,withoutgoodhabits,publichealthcan‘tbeguaranteed.Ontheotherhand,infectiousdiseaseisthenaturalresultbroughtbydirtyhabits,likeAIDS,SARS,H1N1fluandsoon.
Personally,Ithinkitishightimeweplacedemphasisonimprovingpersonalhabitsandpublichealth.Ifwemindourmannersandbehaveourselveswell,theremustbeabrightandencouragingfuture.
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假如你是李华,你学校内有人得了猪流感,正在接受治疗,你校学生非常害怕,请你写一篇短文谈谈如何预防猪流感?
1.平时外出戴口罩,少去人群集中的公共场所,避免接触病人等。
2.勤洗手,保证充足睡眠,多锻炼多运动等。
3.词数:
120字左右
4.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数
参考词汇:
猪流感swineflu;口罩facemask.
SwinefluhascometoourSchool!
However,thereisnovaccinetoprotectitsvirus.Howdoweprotectusfromit?
Onepossibleversion
SwinefluhascometoourSchool!
However,thereisnovaccinetoprotectitsvirus.Howdoweprotectusfromit?
Weadvisethatyoushouldwearfacemaskandavoidgoingtothecrowdedplacewhenyougoout.Weremembernottobeinclosecontactwiththepatientsinfectedwithswineflu.Ontheotherhand,thebestwaytostayawayfromthisvirusistowashyourhandsoften,andmakesurethatyouhaveenoughsleep.Atthesametime,weshoulddomoreexercisesothatwecanbuildupourbody.
Wearesurethatwemustovercomethethreatagainstswinefluaslongaswetakepropermeasuresandinsistontakingexerciseeveryday.
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注意:
1.信的开头与结尾已经给出,不计算在总词数内。
2.字数要求:
120左右。
人口膨胀populationexpansion;过度开发overdevelopment。
Deareditor,
Environmentalproblemsarebecomingmoreandmoreseriousallovertheworld.
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Yourstruly
LiHua
Onepossibleversion
Deareditor,
Environmentalproblemsarebecomingmoreandmoreseriousallovertheworld.
Withthedevelopmentofindustryandagriculture,carsmakegreatnoisesandgiveoffpoisonousgas.Becauseofpopulationexpansionandoverdevelopment,resourceshasbecomelessandless.Treesonthehillshavebeencutdown,andwastewaterisbeingpouredcontinuouslyintorivers.Thewholeecologicalbalanceoftheearthischanging.Massivedestructionofenvironmenthasbroughtaboutnegativeeffectsandevenposesagreatthreattoman‘sexistence.
Wemustfacethesituationthatexistsandtakeactionstosolveourenvironmentalproblems.Wehopethatallthesemeasureswillbeeffectiveandbringbackahealthfulenvironment.
Yourstruly
LiHua
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低碳经济下的环境保护之一
―低碳经济‖是一个具有广泛社会性的经济前沿理念,最早是在2003年英国政府发布的能源白皮书《我们能源的未来:
创建低碳经济》正式提出的。
低碳经济
包括低碳发展、低碳产业、低碳技术和低碳生活等经济形态,是指在不影响经济发展的前提下,通过技术创新和制度创新,降低能源和资源消耗,尽可能最大限度地减少温室气体和污染物的排放,实现减缓气候变化的目标,促进人类的可持续发展。
ProtectionofEnvironment
1.目前环保还存在着许多问题。
2.为了保护环境,
3.各国政府做了大量的工作。
4.我的看法。
Onepossibleversion
Therearestillmanyproblemsofenvironmentalprotectioninrecentyears.Oneofthemostseriousproblemsistheseriouspollutionofair,waterandsoil.thepollutedairdoesgreatharmtopeople‘shealth.Thepollutedwatercausesdiseasesanddeath.Whatismore,vegetationhadbeengreatlyreducedwiththerapidgrowthofmoderncities.
Toprotecttheenvironment,governmentsofmanycountrieshavedonealot.Legislativestepshavebeenintroducedtocontrolairpollution,toprotecttheforestandsearesourcesandtostopanyenvironmentalpollution.Therefore,governmentsareplayingthemostimportantroleintheenvironmentalprotectiontoday.
Inmyopinion,toprotectenvironment,thegovernmentmusttakeevenmoreconcretemeasures.First,itshouldletpeoplefullyrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionthrougheducation.Second,muchmoreeffortsshouldbemadetoputthepopulationplanningpolicyintopractice,becausemorepeoplemeansmorepeoplemeansmorepollution.Finally,thosewhodestroytheenvironmentintentionallyshouldbeseverelypunished.Weshouldletthemknowthatdestroyingenvironmentmeansdestroyingmankindthemselves.
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13.外籍教师Lynne任教期满准备回国,学校答应派车送她去机场。
她在临行前一天写了张便条提醒办公室李老师:
1）.请检查（checkon）明天的车是否落实,提醒司机（remindsb.ofsth.提醒某人做某事）。
2）.她之所以要确定一下,是因为太早不好叫出租车。
3）.感谢费心,并感谢一年来的关心。
4）.在学校一年来,生活愉快、难忘,很可能再来。
5）.留下一些英语书给贵校图书馆,希望对学生有用。
字数:
100—120个词。
Hi,Mr.Li,
Couldyoupleasecheckonthecartotakemetotheairport?
Pleaseremindthecardriverofthis.Iwanttobesureofthiscar,becauseitwillbetooearlyinthemorningtocallataxiiftheschoolcardoesn‘tshowup.Iamsorrytotroubleyouagain.HereIthankyouagainforallthatyouhavedoneformeduringmystayinyourschool.Ireallyenjoyteachinghere,andwillneverforgetthedayIspentwithmystudents.ProbablyIwillcomebacksomeday.IleavesomeEnglishbookstoyourlibrary.Ihopetheywillbeusefultoyourstudents.
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