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TEM4WritingofArgumentation
TEM4WritingofArgumentation
1.Evaluationcriterion
1.1Understanding
Table1.evaluationcriterion
内容（参照字数）6
结构4
语言5
15-14
论点明确、前后一致、例证丰富
完整、层次清、合逻辑、段落句子连贯
卷面整洁、标点、词汇、语法、拼写、语言得体性好，有说服力
13-12
论点明确、前后一致、但例证稍不足或不当
完整、层次、逻辑、段句连贯稍有不足
卷面、标点、词汇、语法、拼写、得体性稍有不足，有一定说服力
11-9
大体上论点明确、一致、例证不足不当
层次、逻辑、段句较乱，但不影响理解
卷面、标、词、法、拼错误较多，内容较难理解，说服力稍差
8-6
论点大体明确、但前后有些矛盾、无例证
层次逻辑较乱，读者能勉强明白大意
标、词、法、拼错误多，造成误解，语气不当，缺乏说服力
5-
没观点或观点不清、前后矛盾、无例证
层次逻辑混乱、读者不得要领
标、词、法、拼错误很多，无法理解，语气生硬，毫无说服力
Table2.gradingcriterion
评分标准（参照字数）
单项分
总分
内容6
论点明确2、前后一致2、例证丰富（说理1举例1）
结构4
完整清楚合逻辑（话题主论点1主题句1总结评论1）、段句连贯1
语言5
卷面整洁1、标点（大小写）1、词汇1、语法1、语言得体1
Table3.gradingform
论明
一致
说理
举例
话论
主句
总评
连贯
卷面
标点
词汇
语法
得体
总分
签名
2
2
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
15
注：
上述各条需要给出具体的整分、0.5分或0分，把分数总和填入“总分”并签名。
1.2Memorizing:
精炼一下：
写作任务要完成
论点明确例证丰
合乎逻辑结构清
整洁标点词法拼
段落句子连贯好
不要高分都不行
2.Howtowritetheintroductionpart?
2.1Understanding
2.1.1Causingthereader’sattentionwith1stsentence:
usingstatistics/askingaquestion/usingdirectorindirectspeech
2.1.2Introducingthetopicin2ndor3rdsentence:
directopening/narrowing-down/refutation
2.1.3Introducingthethesisstatementin4thsentence（andsuggestingthebodystructure）
2.2Memorizing:
精炼一下：
引言一句抢眼球
数问引语来开头
开门收网驳论式
三句话题论点出
最好论点俩任务
表明观点和结构
2.3Practicing
Analyzingsamples
3.Howtowritethebodypart?
3.1Understanding
topicsentences/supportingdetails（experttestimony,statistics,example,personalexperience,logicandreasoning,knownfacts,analogy）
Table4
Introduction（1stpart）:
topic+thesisstatement
Body（2ndpart）:
topicsentence1（goodreasons+fact1/2）
topicsentence2（goodreasons+fact1/2）
Conclusion（lastpart）:
Summary（thesisstatement+topicsentencesin1-2sentences）
+finalcomment（suggestion/warning/prediction/importance）
3.2Memorizing:
精炼一下：
开门话题主论点
正文理由一二三
一二三中再举例
总结评论把门关
2.3Practicing
analyzingsamples
4.Howtowritetheconclusionpart?
4.1Understanding
summary:
directsummary,concessionandechoing
finalcomment:
suggestion,warning,prediction,importance
4.2Memorizing:
精炼一下：
总结评论为结论
直接让步或呼应
评论方法有建议
警告预测重要性
4.3Practice:
AnalyzingasamplefromTEM8in2008,score17
评分标准（参照字数）
单项分
总分
内容6
论点明确2、前后一致2、例证丰富（说理1举例1）
结构4
完整清楚合逻辑（话题主论点1主题句1总结评论1）、段句连贯1
语言5
卷面整洁1、标点（大小写）1、词汇1、语法1、语言得体1
WhatIHaveLearnedFromMyYearsatUniversity
Inafewmonths’time,Iamgoingtograduatefrommyuniversity.Duringthepastthreeandahalfyears,Ihavelearnedalotfrommyuniversity,suchasteamworkspirit,senseofresponsibilityandcompetitiveawareness.However,whatIcherishmostaresomenecessaryskillstobeagoodEnglishjournalistthatIhavelearnedatuniversity,suchasgoodEnglish,broadhorizonandcommunicationskills.
Forastart,IhaveacquiredgoodEnglishskillsatuniversitythatisarequirementtobeagoodEnglishjournalist.ThroughtakingcoursesofEnglishreading,writingandtranslation,IhavegreatlyenhancedmyproficiencyinEnglish.Moreover,IhaveknownmuchmoreaboutEnglish-speakingcountiesbylearningtheircultureandliterature.Obviously,goodEnglishskillswillassistmealotinbeingagoodEnglishjournalist.
Furthermore,myhorizonhasbeengreatlybroadenedatuniversitythroughvisitingfrequentlylibrariesandlisteningtovariouslectures.Afterall,broadhorizonisnecessarytobeagoodjournalist.Ontheonehand,Ioftengotothelibraryofmyuniversityandreadagreatmanybooksinarangeoffields,suchaspolitics,economyandculture.Ontheotherhand,Ihavelistenedtovariouslecturesdeliveredbyfamousprofessorsaswellassomeoutstandingpeopleinvitedtogivelecturesatmyuniversity.Forinstance,myfavoriteTVpresenter,ChaiJing,oncecamehereanddeliveredalectureabouthowtobecomeagoodjournalist.Ilearnedalotfromherspeech.Readingwidelyandlisteningtolectures,Ifeel,havebroadenedmyhorizonsandthis,undoubtedly,isgoodformyfuturecareer---beingagoodjournalist.
Lastbutnotleast,Ihavelearnedgoodcommunicationskillsatuniversity.GoodcornmunicationskillsisessentialtobecomingagoodEnglishjournalist.Ontheonehand,mycommunicationskillshavebeengreatlyimprovedbylearningfrommyteachersandclassmates.Ontheotherhand,therearemanycoursesoncommunicationskillsatmyuniversityformetotake.Asamatteroffact,thesecoursesdomeagreatfavorinenhancingmycommunicationskills.
Inmyuniversitydays,IhavelearnedsomenecessaryskillstobeagoodEnglishjournalist:
goodEnglish,broadhorizonandcommunicationskills.Ibelievetheseskillswillhelpmealotinmyfuturecareer.Idothankmyuniversityforteachingmeallthoseusefulthings.
WhatIHaveLearnedFromMyYearsatUniversity
Inafewmonths’time,Iamgoingtograduatefrommyuniversity.Duringthepastthreeandahalfyears,Ihavelearnedalotfrommyuniversity,suchasteamworkspirit,senseofresponsibilityandcompetitiveawareness.However,whatIcherishmostaresomenecessaryskillstobeagoodEnglishjournalistthatIhavelearnedatuniversity,suchasgoodEnglish,broadhorizonandcommunicationskills.
Forastart,IhaveacquiredgoodEnglishskillsatuniversitythatisarequirementtobeagoodEnglishjournalist.ThroughtakingcoursesofEnglishreading,writingandtranslation,IhavegreatlyenhancedmyproficiencyinEnglish.Moreover,IhaveknownmuchmoreaboutEnglish-speakingcountiesbylearningtheircultureandliterature.Obviously,goodEnglishskillswillassistmealotinbeingagoodEnglishjournalist.
Furthermore,myhorizonhasbeengreatlybroadenedatuniversitythroughvisitingfrequentlylibrariesandlisteningtovariouslectures.Afterall,broadhorizonisnecessarytobeagoodjournalist.Ontheonehand,Ioftengotothelibraryofmyuniversityandreadagreatmanybooksinarangeoffields,suchaspolitics,economyandculture.Ontheotherhand,Ihavelistenedtovariouslecturesdeliveredbyfamousprofessorsaswellassomeoutstandingpeopleinvitedtogivelecturesatmyuniversity.Forinstance,myfavoriteTVpresenter,ChaiJing,oncecamehereanddeliveredalectureabouthowtobecomeagoodjournalist.Ilearnedalotfromherspeech.Readingwidelyandlisteningtolectures,Ifeel,havebroadenedmyhorizonsandthis,undoubtedly,isgoodformyfuturecareer---beingagoodjournalist.
Lastbutnotleast,Ihavelearnedgoodcommunicationskillsatuniversity.GoodcornmunicationskillsisessentialtobecomingagoodEnglishjournalist.Ontheonehand,mycommunicationskillshavebeengreatlyimprovedbylearningfrommyteachersandclassmates.Ontheotherhand,therearemanycoursesoncommunicationskillsatmyuniversityformetotake.Asamatteroffact,thesecoursesdomeagreatfavorinenhancingmycommunicationskills.
Inmyuniversitydays,IhavelearnedsomenecessaryskillstobeagoodEnglishjournalist:
goodEnglish,broadhorizonandcommunicationskills.Ibelievetheseskillswillhelpmealotinmyfuturecareer.Idothankmyuniversityforteachingmeallthoseusefulthings.
TheMostImportantPersonalQualityofaUniversityStudent
Asthemodernsocietyputsmoreemphasisonpersonaldifferenceandpersonalvalues,itprovidesmoreopportunitiesforstudentstoseeksuccess.However,thefactisthatnoteveryonecansucceed.Successcallsforcertainopportunities,butmoreimportantly,itcallsformanypersonalqualities.Ithinktosucceedinthemodernsociety,onehastohaveadaptabilitybecauseofitsimportanceinstudy,incareer,aswellasinfailures.
Goodadaptabilitycanhelponebecomeasuccessfulstudent.First,adaptabilitycanhelpstudentsmeettherequirementofdifferentcourses.Asweknow,studentshavetotakevariouscourses;somerequiremorereading;othersrequiremoreresearch,forexample.Adaptablestudentscanstudydifferentcoursesindifferentways,thuslearningasmuchaspossible.Besides,adaptabilitycanalsohelpstudentsdealwithdifferentteachers.Teachersdifferalotintheirwaysofteaching.Ifstudentscannotmakenecessarychangestomeetteachingmethodsofdifferentteachers,theycannotbecomesuccessfulstudents.
Goodadaptabilitycanhelponesucceedinone’scareer.Whenonestartsworking,hemayfindthattheworkisverydifferentfromwhatwastaughtintheclassroom.Inthiscase,hemustlearntomakenecessarychangestoreallyapplyknowledgetopractice.Atthesametime,hemaygetdifferentdirectionsfromdifferentbosses,anddifferentrequirementsanddemandsfromdifferentcustomers.Ifonecannotlearntobeflexible,thenhecannotpossiblysucceedinthejob.
Goodadaptabilitycanhelponewinpopularityinthesociety.Besidesourbosses,colleaguesandcustomers,wealsohavetofacemanyotherpeopleinthesociety.Forexample,wehavetomeetourneighborsalmosteveryday,visitourrelativesonimportantholidays,andmeetstrangersinthestreetwheneverweareoutthere.Aspeoplevaryalot,wemayfindsomeofthemholdingdifferentviewsfromusonmanyissues,butwehavetobeadaptable,thatis,sometimesagreewiththem,sometimespersuadethem,ifwewanttogetalongwiththemwell.
Tosumup,ifonewantstodealwithfailures,makesachievementsinthejob,oracquiresasmuchknowledgeaspossible,oneneedsadaptability.Ifonedoesnotlearntobeadaptable,hewillnevermanagetogetusedtothemodernsociety,nottomentionsucceedinit.
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