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四级作文很不错哦

四级作文很不错哦

•用于四六级图表作文的精彩句型（4）

　●描写图表和数据的句型

　　1）...rankfirst（both）in...

　　2）...inproportionto...

　　3）Aisbyfarthelargest...

　　4）Asmanyas....

　　5）Thenumberis...timesasmuchasthatof...

　　6）Thefigurehasnearlydoubled/tripled,asagainstthatoflastyear.

　　7）Itaccountsfor35%of...

　　8）Bycomparisonwith...,itdecreased/increased/fellfrom...to...

　　9）...riserapidly（slowly）

　　10）...remainlevel...

　　11）...reach...

　　12）Thereisaslight/slow/steady/rapidrise/increasedemand./income./population./prices./production./decrease/decline/reduction/fall/dropin

　　13）beontheincrease/decrease/rise/decline（……在不断的增加,减少,上升,下降）

　　●图表作文中的过渡、概括句型：

　　1）Ascanbeindicatedinthetable,...

　　2）Aswecouldfindoutlater，...

　　3）Asisrevealedinthetable，...

　　4）Asthesurveyresultsshow，...

　　5）Thistableprovidesseveralimportantpointsofcomparison

　　between，...

　　6）Thetwographsdepictthesamethingin...

　　7）Thekeyfindingstakenfromthesurveysareasfollows:

　　8）Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthetable,...

　　9）Thischartshowsthat...

　　10）Asisshownbythegraph,...

　　11）Itcanbeseenfromthestatisticsthat...

　　12）Itisgenerallybelieved/accepted/thought/held...

一.对比选择型热点追踪

Thereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleasto（有关某事并无共识）whetherstudentsshouldstudyabroadornot.Somepeopleareoftheviewthattheyouthsshouldgooverseasforfurtherstudyifpossible,whileotherstakeanoppositestand,firmlybelievingthatitisofnonecessityforstudentstostudyinaforeigncountry.

Thosepeoplewhomaintainthatitisgoodforstudentstogoabroadforfurtherstudybelievethatdiverseculturebackgroundcanbroadenstudents’horizon.Theyalsoclaimthatoverseasstudycanshapestudents’personalitybecausetheyareforcedtodealwithallkindsofdifficultiesbythemselves.

Nevertheless,theotherpeoplewhocontendthatdomesticeducationisgoodenoughforstudentsarguethatoureducationalqualityhasbeengreatlyimprovedduringthepastdecade.Theyalsopointoutthatdomesticeducationisconvenientandeconomical.

AsfarasIamconcerned,theformeropinionholdsmoreweight.Foronething,itcanstrengthenthelearners’abilitiestounderstandandcommunicatewithpeoplefromothercultures.Foranother,thedevelopedcountriesstillhavealotofadvancedknowledgewhichisworthourstudy.Whenallthefactorsareexamined,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthatstudyingabroadifpossibleisadvisable.

二.问题解决型实例：

2001年1月（HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?

面试在求职过程中的作用、面试成功的因素：

仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……），2000年1月（HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation?

）1998年1月（MyViewonFakeCommodities）此型适用模板：

Withthedevelopment/improvementof（铺垫）,（某一问题）.Itisnecessarythat（关注解决现象引出的问题很必要）.Ontheonehand,（理由一）.Ontheotherhand,（理由二）.

Therefore,howto（承上启下句，要解决的问题）isworthpayingattention.Firstly,（办法一）.Secondly,（办法二）.Forexample,（举例解释解决办法二）.Thirdly,（办法三）.Inotherwords,（阐明解决办法三）.

Infact,thewaysto（解决问题的办法多种多样）arecountless.It’stimethat（强调解决问题时不可待）.

真题演练：

HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?

（2001年1月）

Withthedevelopmentofjobmarket,jobinterviewplaysanimportantroleinjob-hunting.Itisnecessarythatweshouldlearnsometrickstoperformbetterinajobinterview.Ontheonehand,ajobinterviewoffersintervieweesandinterviewersrespectivelyachancetoknoweachotherwithinaveryshorttime.Ontheotherhand,excellentperformanceinaninterviewwillenabletheintervieweestoexertagoodimpressionontheinterviewerandfinallywinthejob.

Therefore,howtosucceedinjobinterviewisworthpayingattention.Firstly,intervieweesshoulddressneatlyandproperly.Secondly,intervieweesshouldbeconfident.Forexample,whenaskedaboutprofessionalquestions,intervieweesshouldgiveaclearanddefiniteanswer.Thirdly,intervieweesshouldhavesomeknowledgeaboutthecompanyandthepositiontheyapplyfor.Inotherwords,intervieweesshouldpreparethemselvessomethingabouttheinterviewinadvancesoastoshowthattheyattachvitalimportancetothejob.

Infact,thewaystosucceedinajobinterviewarecountless.It’stimethatwelaidstressoninterviewbecauseit’sthefirststepofourworkexperience.

热点追踪TheDamageofPublicFacilities

1、公共设施破坏严重的问题亟待解决，2、解决办法有哪些，3、你的看法。

TheDamageofPublicFacilities

Withtheimprovementoflivingstandard,moreandmorepublicfacilities,suchaspublictelephoneboothsandATMshavebeeninstalledinthestreets.Itisnecessarythatwehavetopayattentiontothedamageofthesepublicfacilities.Ontheonehand,somepeopleusethemwithoutcare,whichleadstoinconveniencetoothers.Ontheotherhand,thedamagedpublicfacilitiesstainthebeautyofthecity.

Therefore,howtopreventpublicfacilitiesfrombeingdamagedisworthpayingattention.Firstly,publicfacilitiesshouldbemadeofhardmaterialssoastobemoredurable.Secondly,somedevicesshouldbeadoptedtoprotectthemfrombeingdamaged.Forexample,likecars,wecaninstallalarmdevicesinpublicfacilities.Thirdly,frommypointofview,itisessentialthatwecivilizeourcitizenstobehavemorally.Inotherwords,weshouldtellthecitizensthatitisshamefultodestroypublicfacilities.

Infact,thewaystoreducethedamageofpublicfacilitiesarecountless.It’stimethatwetookmosteffectiveonestoprotectthem.

三.观点论证型实例：

2003年1月（Itpaystobehonest）、1999年1月（Don’thesitatetosay“No”）、1997年1月（PracticeMakesPerfect）

模板：

Itistruethat（指出普遍存在的观点）.However,（谈不同的观点）.Ithink（提出自己的观点，即文章的论点）.（过渡句，转向观点的论证，根据情况选择具体的词）canbelistedasfollows.

Firstly,（论证理由一）.Secondly,（论证理由二）.Forexample,（举例具体说明理由二）.Thirdly,（论证理由三）.Acaseinpointisthat（举例具体说明理由三）.

Itgoeswithoutsayingthat（转折句，提出执行该观点时应注意的事项）.Thereisnodoubtthat（得出结论）.Inconclusion（总结全文）.

真题演练：

ItPaystobeHonest（2003年1月）

Itistruethatmostofusvaluehonestyhighly.However,nowadaysweoftenconfrontconfidencecrisissuchascheating,overcharging,fakecommoditiesandsoon.Ithinkthatweshouldbehonestbecausebeinghonestisnotonlybeneficialtoourselvesbutalsotoothersandthewholesociety.Thereasonscanbelistedasfollows.Firstly,onlyhonestpeoplecanbetrulyrespectedbytheothersandcanmakemorefriendsoveralongperiodoftime.Secondly,honesty,whichisthetraditionalvirtueoftheChinesepeople,canmakeourlifeeasierandmoreharmonious.Forexample,consumerswillnotbeafraidofbeingoverchargedifdealersarehonest,andthusdealerscanwinovermorecustomers.Thirdly,honestycanmakeoursocietymorestable.AcaseinpointisthatSingapore,asocietyfeaturingtrustworthinessandintegrity,hasacomparativelylowcriminalrate.

Itgoeswithoutsayingthatbeinghonestisofgreatbenefittoboththecommunityandindividuals.Thereisnodoubtthatweshouldfosterthespiritofhonesty.Inconclusion,layingstressonhonestywillbecomethepublicmoralsinoursociety.

四.图表说明型

实例：

2002年6月，1991年6月

模板:

（概括性词语最近出现的总体现象）hasbecomeacommonpartofpeople’slife.And（题目要求讨论的具体现象）hasalwaysarousedthegreatestconcern.Whatimpressesusmostis（现象的具体表现）.Thereasons（现象或现象带来的结果，为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫）arevaried.Amongthevariousreasons,（原因一）playsanimportantpart.Thatistosay,（具体说明原因一）.Whatismore,（原因二）.Forexample,（举例说明原因二）.

Whentalkingabout（作者要讨论的现象）,（作者的看法）.Ontheonehand,（支持看法的理由一或说明看法的第一个方面）.Ontheotherhand,（支持看法的理由二或说明看法的第二个方面）.Inbrief,（总结）.

真题演练：

Studentuseofcomputers（2002年6月）

Usingcomputershasbecomeacommonpartofpeople’slife.Andthetremendousgrowthofstudentuseofcomputershasalwaysarousedthegreatestconcern.Whatimpressesusmostisthat,in2000,collegestudentsaveragelyspent20hoursperweekoncomputer,whichisthesizemorethantentimesthatoftenyearsago.Thereasonswhycomputersarewidelyusedarevaried.AmongthevariousreasonsthedecreasingpriceofPCplaysanimportantpart.Thatistosay,morestudentscanaffordapersonalcomputer.Whatismore,theInternetprovidescollegestudentsanamazingworldtoexplore,Forexample,peoplecangetthelatestnewsandinformationaswellasconvenientlymakefriendsaroundtheworld.

Whentalkingaboutdisadvantagesandproblemsexistinginstudentuseofcomputers,Ithinkthattheirlackofskillsanddisciplinesisthepointweshouldpayattentionto,Ontheonehand,theirlackofskillsfailsstudentstomakefulluseofthecomputerandtheInternet.Ontheotherhand,theirlackofnecessarydisciplinesmakessomestudentsindulgeincomputergamesandnetworld,andevenothernegativematerials,forgettingtheirmajortasksascollegestudents.Inbrief,thereisstillalottodotohelpstudentsmakegooduseofcomputers.

热点追踪：

CheatinginExams

1、学生作弊现象越来越严重，2、作弊的原因，3、如何杜绝作弊。

CheatinginExams

Tryingtodefeatthecheathasbecomeacommonpartofpeople’slife.Andcheatinginexamsoncampushasalwaysarousedthegreatestconcern.Andcheatinginexamsoncampushasalwaysarousedthegreatestconcern.Whatamazesusmostisthatmanymethodsareadoptedbystudents.Thereasonsforcheatinginexamsarevaried.Amongthevariousreasons,togethigherscoresorscholarshipsplaysanimportantpart.That’stosay,somestudentsareundergreatpressurefromtheirparentsortheyfeartofallbehindothers,sotheytogethighscoresinexams.Whatismore,somestudentsjustplaythetimeawayandwanttopasstheexamswithoutefforts.Forexample,theyspendthewholenightplayingPCgamesbutfallasleepintheclass.

Whentalkingabouthowtodealwithcheatinginexams,Ithinkeducationandpunishmentmightwork.Ontheonehand,weshouldexplaintheh