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中考作满分模版

作

文

一、写作评分标准

分值：

15分

难易度：

易中难

12分容易

13-14分中等

15分难

原则：

分档给分

第一档：

（15~13分）

完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。

句式多样，词汇丰富。

语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。

第二档：

（12~9分）

基本符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。

语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。

语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。

虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。

第三档：

（8~5分）

部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。

语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。

第四档：

（4~0分）

与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。

阅卷老师的实际操作

14分作文

用词准确，句式变换多样

如：

长短句搭配使用

谚语的使用

被动句的使用

语法错误2个以内

13分作文

句型使用较多且正确

连词使用恰当且正确

语法错误少于3个

时态使用正确

书写工整规范

字数80-100词

12分作文–标准线

主旨正确，要点齐全

语法错误2个以内

卷面、字迹清楚

字数看起来不是很少

11分作文

主旨准确，少要点

2-3个语法错误扣1分

时态使用不正确扣1分

字迹潦草扣1-3分

大小写和标点符号错误扣1分

字数不够扣1分

9–7分作文

主旨表达不太清楚，要点不全

语法错误较多（多于5-6个）

字迹潦草、卷面不太清楚

大小写和标点符号有错误

6–4分作文

主旨、要点几乎没有找到

只有个别句子能看懂

字数明显不够

3–0分作文

几乎白卷，有几个单词拼对了3分

写字了，但是一个也看不懂2分

交白卷0分

：

1.作文中人称不明确，扣2分。

2.文章时态出问题，1-2个错扣1分，3-5个错扣2分，最高可扣4分。

3.学生感悟与文章所写事件不匹配，扣3分。

4.写作不分段，扣5分。

5.字迹潦草，字迹不清楚，根据程度，可扣1-2分。

6.文章详略不当，可扣1-3分。

7.第一段仅一句话，对于题目第一个问题回答过于简单，扣1分。

8.文章

缺少要点，扣5分。

9.文章没有结尾，扣1分。

三、可套句型及所用范围

（按近几年考查话题多少排序）

一、校园生活与友谊（所用范围：

写人、记事）

1.开头段

xxx,whoisa15-year-oldstudent,isanoutgoingandkind-heartedboy/girl.

Mybestfriendisaboy/girlnamedxxx,2whois15yearsoldthisyear.

Wearegraduatingfromschoolsoon.Imisssomanygoodfriends,especiallymybestfriend--xxx.

2.中间段（人物具体介绍部分）

外形、性格特点及爱好

He’s/she’sofmediumheightandwearsglasses.

He/sheisoutgoingandhardworkingandisalwaysreadytohelpothers.

He/sheisactive,cuteandenergetic.

He’s/she’snotonlykindbutalsohelpful.

Besides,he/sheisfriendlyandenthusiastic.

He/shehasalotofinterestsandxxxandxxxarehis/herfavorite.

朋友做的事情

xxxisatopstudent,torealizehis/herdream,whodevotedhimself/herselftohis/herstudies.

OnceIsawhimhelpanoldwomancrosstheroad.

Ihaveacrystalclearmemorythathe/sheusedtogivemeahelpinghand（helpmeout）wheneverIwasintrouble.

Wegetonwellwitheachothersoweoftendiscussourstudytogetherandhe/shecanalwaysfindoutnewwaystohelpmeworkoutproblems.

3.尾段

Suchisxxx,awarm-heartedandoutgoingboy/girl.He/sheissogoodaboy/girlaseveryonelikes.

I’mproudofhavingsuchanoutstandingfriend.Ishouldlearnfromhim/herandtrytobehelpful.

Icaresomuchabouthim/herthatIwanttodosomethingmeaningfulforhim/her.Ihopehe/shewillhaveabrightfutureandthatourfriendshipwilllastforever.

the+best+名词+（that）+主词+haveever+seen（known/heard/had/read，etc）

themost+形容词+名词+（that）+主词+haveever+seen（known/heard/had/read，etc）

例句：

HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.

海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad.

张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。

二、我有我观点（所用范围：

建议类）

学习语言类：

LearningEnglishcanhelpbroadenourmindandenrichourschoollife.

Satisfypeople’sdesire.

Practicemakesperfect.

Firstly,it’sveryimportanttolistentotheteachercarefullyinclassandmakesomenotessothatyoucangooveryourlessonslater.Secondly,trytocatcheverychancetopracticespeaking,bothinandoutofclass.Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.ThentrytolistenandreadmoreinChinese.What’smore,you’dbetterplanyourtimewellandstudyitregularlyeveryday.

Aboveall,youshouldbeconfidentinyourselfanddon’tgiveupwheneveryoumeetwithdifficulty.I’msureyouwillsucceedthroughyourhardwork.

信件建议类作文——学会可套用句型

首段

Iamgladtohearfromyou.IcompletelyunderstandyoubecauseIusedtohavethesimilarexperiences,butIdon’tthinkyouaresupposedto…Herearemysuggestions.

中间段

Firstofall/Tobeginwith/Aboveall,ifIwereyou,Iwouldprobably…inthefirstplaceto…sothat/whichwill…

What’smore/Furthermore/Besides,justastheproverbgoeslikethat…,itwouldbeagreatideato….Bydoingthis,….

Inaddition/Lastbutnottheleast,……Youmightaswellturntosb.forhelpsince…

尾段

IhopewhatImentionedherecanbehelpful./Ihopethesuggestionsmentionedabovecanbehelpful.

三、关注社会热爱家国（所用范围：

绿色出行/节水等）

1.It’sourdutytosavewater.

2.Wecan’tlivewithoutwater.

3.Theamountofwaterwhichissuitabletodrinkislessandless.

4.Butsomepeopledon’tcareaboutit.

5.Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.

6.Ifeveryonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.

7.Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandhealthierinthefuture.

8.Thereisnodenyingthefactthatairpollutionisanextremelyseriousproblem:

thecityauthoritiesshouldtakestrongmeasurestodealwithit.

9.Ifeveryonedoesonethingforourschool,wewillturnourschoolintoabetterplacetostudyandlivein.

10.Believethatbydoingallthesesmallthingswecanimproveourenvironmentandhelpmakeourworldabetterplacetolivein.

11.Weallknow,theenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseandworse.Insomeplaceswecan’tseefishswimmingintheriverortreesonthehills.Somepeopleevenhavenocleanwatertodrink,nofreshairtobreathe,noquietplacestolivein.

12.Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Wefeelit’sourdutytoprotectandbeautifyourenvironment.

四、身心健康（所用范围：

减压）

段一：

iscoming/approaching

areundergreatpressure

tryingtofindsomewaystosolveit

段二：

Mostofmyclassmateschooseto…relievestress

Whileotherspreferto

ButIthink/asforme

Bydoing×××,Icanrelaxmyselfand/aswellasknowmore×××

段三：

Inshort,Ithink×××isagoodwayforustorelieveourstress,Through×××IcouldgetthepleasurethatIwillnevergetthroughotherways.

四、中考英语常见作文话题（按要点分类）

（一）难忘的事

（1）别人帮助我

Webecamefriendsbyaccident.OnedayJackwasplayingbasketballontheplayground.Amazedathowskillfulhewas,Imadeupmymindtoplayaswellashe.Iwasgratefulwhenheagreedtoteachme.EverytimewhenIwantedtogiveuphalfway,itwasJackwhoencouragedme.Gradually,Imasteredtheskillsandbecameconfidentenoughtochallengethebestplayersinourschool.

（2）我帮助别人

IthappenedonaFridaywhenIwasseatedinacrowdedbus,headingformyschool.Itwasjustatthatmomentthatanelderlyladywithherlittlegrandsonsteppedontothebus.Immediately,Iofferedmyseattothemwithouthesitation.Theelderlyladyexpressedhergreatappreciationtomeandweenjoyedapleasantshorttriptogether.

（3）做家务表示对父母的感恩

Beinga15-year-oldmiddleschoolstudentandfeelingmyparentshavedonesomuchtome,IhavebeenconsideringwhatIcandoforthemtoshowmygratitude.LastSunday,whenmyparentswentoutshopping,Idecidedtotakethisopportunitytodosomethinghelpfulforourfamily.NotonlydidIcleanthebowlsandcookers,butIputallthemessythingsaway.Tiredandsweaty,Iwasabouttoopenthedoortothrowrubbishwhenmyparentsshowedupatthedoor.TheywereamazedtoseewhatIhaddoneandpraisedme.Fromthenon,Ideterminedtoworkhardertodomoreformyfamily.

（二）写人

（1）外貌

MyfavoriteteacherisMr.Wangwhoishandsomeandofmediumbuild.

MybestfriendisLindawhoisabeautifulgirlwithlongblackhairandbeautifulbrighteyes.

（2）性格

Maryisalwayswearingasweetsmileandwillingtohelpothers.

Mr.Leeisourfavoriteteacherwhohasgreatsenseofhumorandalwaysmakeshisclasslivelyandinteresting.

（3）爱好

Heisnotonlygoodatplayingbasketballbutalsodoeswellinplayingchess.

Swimmingishisfavoritethingtodoinhisfreetimeandhealsoshowsgreatinterestinplayingsoccer.

（4）学习成绩

SheisverygoodatlessonsespeciallyEnglish,sosheisoneofthetopstudentsinourclass.

（5）难忘的一件事（见话题一）

（6）感想（体会）

Ifeelluckytohavesuchagoodteacher/friendwhoalwaysholdsontoachievehisdream.That’shisbestqualityIshouldlearnfromhim.

Maybethat’sonlyasmallthingandit’snotworthbeingmentioned.ButIalwaysbelieveasmallactofkindnesswillmakeabigdifference,soImakeupmymindtolearnfromhimtobethepersonwhoofferstimelyhelptothoseinneed.

（7）祝福（祝愿）

IsincerelyhopeLiLeiwillmakegreaterprogressinanewhighschool.AndIalsowishhewillhaveabrightfuture.

（三）与人相处，友情

（Howtogetonwellwithothers）建议式

Inourdailylife,itisofgreatimportancetoknowhowtogetalongwellwithotherpeople.First,sharingcommonhobbiesorhappinesswithothersmaybeofgreathelpforyoutomakenewfriends.Then,beingafriendlyperson,you’dbetterlearntosmiletoothersoften.Becausesmilepassesloveandfriendshipandhelpsshortenthedistancebetweenyouandotherpeople.Lastbutnotleast,whenfacingproblems,alwaysremembertocommunicatewitheachotherpatiently,trytoovercomethedifficultiestogether,whichwillalsodeepenyourfriendship.

（四）与父母沟通

例题：

如何与父母建立良好关系

（1）父母与子女关系良好的重要性

Anidealrelationshipbetweenparentsandchildrenisveryimportantforourgrowth.

（2）这种良好关系应该是怎样的

Parentsalwaysshowloveandconcernforus.Theyareourgoodlisteners,advisersandsupporters.Withtheirhelp,wecanovercomemanydifficultiesinourlife.

（3）如何建立良好关系

Inmyopinion,therelationshipbetweenparentsandchildrenshouldbeonefilledwithlove,careandunderstanding,inwhichparentsandchildrenshowrespecttoeachotherandexchangeideasfreely.Tobuildarelationshipofthiskind,parentsshouldbecomefriendsoftheirchildrenwhilechildrenoughttoplacemoretrustintheirparentsandgivevoicetotheirfeelingsfrankly.

Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyaharmoniousrelationshipbetweenparentsandchildren.

（五）课余生活，兴趣爱好

（1）集邮版

I’vealwaysbeen