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1、中考作满分模版作文一、写作评分标准分值：15分难易度： 易中难 12分 容易 13-14分 中等15分 难原则：分档给分 第一档：(1513分)完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。第二档：(129分)基本符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。第三档：(85分)部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。第四档：(40分)与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理

2、解。阅卷老师的实际操作14分作文 用词准确，句式变换多样 如：长短句搭配使用 谚语的使用 被动句的使用 语法错误2个以内13分作文 句型使用较多且正确 连词使用恰当且正确 语法错误少于3个 时态使用正确 书写工整规范 字数80-100词 12分作文 标准线 主旨正确，要点齐全 语法错误2个以内 卷面、字迹清楚 字数看起来不是很少 11分作文主旨准确，少要点 2-3个语法错误扣1分 时态使用不正确扣1分 字迹潦草扣1-3分 大小写和标点符号错误扣1分 字数不够扣1分 9 7分作文 主旨表达不太清楚，要点不全 语法错误较多(多于5-6个) 字迹潦草、卷面不太清楚 大小写和标点符号有错误 6 4分作

3、文 主旨、要点几乎没有找到 只有个别句子能看懂 字数明显不够 3 0分作文 几乎白卷，有几个单词拼对了 3分 写字了，但是一个也看不懂 2分 交白卷 0分 ：1. 作文中人称不明确，扣2分。2. 文章时态出问题，1-2个错扣1分，3-5个错扣2分，最高可扣4分。3. 学生感悟与文章所写事件不匹配，扣3分。4. 写作不分段，扣5分。5. 字迹潦草，字迹不清楚，根据程度，可扣1-2分。6. 文章详略不当，可扣1-3分。7. 第一段仅一句话，对于题目第一个问题回答过于简单，扣1分。8. 文章缺少要点，扣5分。9. 文章没有结尾，扣1分。三、可套句型及所用范围 (按近几年考查话题多少排序)一、校园生活

4、与友谊 (所用范围：写人、记事)1. 开头段xxx, who is a 15-year-old student, is an outgoing and kind-hearted boy/girl. My best friend is a boy/girl named xxx, 2who is 15 years old this year.We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend-xxx.2. 中间段 (人物具体介绍部分)外形、性格特点及爱好Hes/shes

5、 of medium height and wears glasses. He/she is outgoing and hardworking and is always ready to help others.He/she is active, cute and energetic.Hes/shes not only kind but also helpful.Besides, he/she is friendly and enthusiastic. He/she has a lot of interests and xxx and xxx are his/her favorite.朋友做

6、的事情xxx is a top student, to realize his/her dream, who devoted himself /herself to his/her studies.Once I saw him help an old woman cross the road.I have a crystal clear memory that he/she used to give me a helping hand (help me out) whenever I was in trouble.We get on well with each other so we oft

7、en discuss our study together and he/she can always find out new ways to help me work out problems.3. 尾段Such is xxx, a warm-hearted and outgoing boy/girl. He/she is so good a boy/girl as everyone likes.Im proud of having such an outstanding friend. I should learn from him/her and try to be helpful.

8、I care so much about him/her that I want to do something meaningful for him/her. I hope he/she will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever. the + best + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read， etc) the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( kno

9、wn/heard/had/read，etc) 例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。 Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。 二、我有我观点 (所用范围：建议类)学习语言类：Learning English can help broaden our mind and enrich our school life.Satisfy peoples desire.Practice makes

10、 perfect. Firstly, its very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later. Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Then try to listen and read more in

11、 Chinese. Whats more, youd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day. Above all, you should be confident in yourself and dont give up whenever you meet with difficulty. Im sure you will succeed through your hard work.信件建议类作文学会可套用句型首段 I am glad to hear from you. I completely underst

12、and you because I used to have the similar experiences, but I dont think you are supposed to Here are my suggestions.中间段First of all/To begin with/Above all, if I were you, I would probably in the first place to so that/which will Whats more/Furthermore/Besides, just as the proverb goes like that ,

13、it would be a great idea to. By doing this,. In addition/Last but not the least, You might as well turn to sb. for help since 尾段I hope what I mentioned here can be helpful. /I hope the suggestions mentioned above can be helpful. 三、关注社会 热爱家国(所用范围：绿色出行/节水等)1. Its our duty to save water.2. We cant live

14、 without water.3. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.4. But some people dont care about it.5. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution.6. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become

15、 much more beautiful.7. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future.8. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.9. If everyone does one thing for our s

16、chool, we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.10. Believe that by doing all these small things we can improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.11. We all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse . In some places we cant see

17、 fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink, no fresh air to breathe, no quiet places to live in. 12. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel its our duty

18、 to protect and beautify our environment.四、身心健康 (所用范围：减压)段一：is coming/ approachingare under great pressuretrying to find some ways to solve it段二：Most of my classmates choose to relieve stressWhile others prefer to But I think / as for me By doing , I can relax myself and/as well as know more 段三：In s

19、hort, I think is a good way for us to relieve our stress, Through I could get the pleasure that I will never get through other ways. 四、中考英语常见作文话题 (按要点分类)(一) 难忘的事(1) 别人帮助我 We became friends by accident. One day Jack was playing basketball on the playground. Amazed at how skillful he was, I made up my

20、 mind to play as well as he. I was grateful when he agreed to teach me. Every time when I wanted to give up halfway, it was Jack who encouraged me. Gradually, I mastered the skills and became confident enough to challenge the best players in our school. (2) 我帮助别人 It happened on a Friday when I was s

21、eated in a crowded bus, heading for my school. It was just at that moment that an elderly lady with her little grandson stepped onto the bus. Immediately, I offered my seat to them without hesitation. The elderly lady expressed her great appreciation to me and we enjoyed a pleasant short trip togeth

22、er. (3) 做家务表示对父母的感恩 Being a 15-year-old middle school student and feeling my parents have done so much to me, I have been considering what I can do for them to show my gratitude. Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I decided to take this opportunity to do something helpful for our family

23、. Not only did I clean the bowls and cookers, but I put all the messy things away. Tired and sweaty, I was about to open the door to throw rubbish when my parents showed up at the door. They were amazed to see what I had done and praised me. From then on, I determined to work harder to do more for m

24、y family. (二) 写人(1) 外貌 My favorite teacher is Mr. Wang who is handsome and of medium build. My best friend is Linda who is a beautiful girl with long black hair and beautiful bright eyes.(2) 性格 Mary is always wearing a sweet smile and willing to help others. Mr. Lee is our favorite teacher who has g

25、reat sense of humor and always makes his class lively and interesting.(3) 爱好 He is not only good at playing basketball but also does well in playing chess. Swimming is his favorite thing to do in his free time and he also shows great interest in playing soccer.(4) 学习成绩 She is very good at lessons es

26、pecially English, so she is one of the top students in our class.(5) 难忘的一件事 (见话题一)(6) 感想 (体会) I feel lucky to have such a good teacher/ friend who always holds on to achieve his dream. Thats his best quality I should learn from him. Maybe thats only a small thing and its not worth being mentioned. B

27、ut I always believe a small act of kindness will make a big difference, so I make up my mind to learn from him to be the person who offers timely help to those in need.(7) 祝福 (祝愿) I sincerely hope Li Lei will make greater progress in a new high school. And I also wish he will have a bright future.(三

28、) 与人相处，友情 (How to get on well with others) 建议式 In our daily life, it is of great importance to know how to get along well with other people. First, sharing common hobbies or happiness with others may be of great help for you to make new friends. Then, being a friendly person, youd better learn to sm

29、ile to others often. Because smile passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Last but not least, when facing problems, always remember to communicate with each other patiently, try to overcome the difficulties together, which will also deepen your friend

30、ship.(四) 与父母沟通例题：如何与父母建立良好关系(1) 父母与子女关系良好的重要性 An ideal relationship between parents and children is very important for our growth. (2) 这种良好关系应该是怎样的 Parents always show love and concern for us. They are our good listeners, advisers and supporters. With their help, we can overcome many difficulties in

31、 our life.(3) 如何建立良好关系 In my opinion, the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which parents and children show respect to each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind, parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their parents and give voice to their feelings frankly. Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between parents and children.(五) 课余生活，兴趣爱好(1) 集邮版 Ive always been