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中考英语书面表达系列训练2及参考范文
2014中考英语书面表达系列训练
(2)及参考范文
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中考书面表达题作为中考英语试题中的重点和难点,让很多同学望而生畏。
笔者从历年中考书面表达试题中总结了一些写作技巧,帮助同学们更好地应对中考书面表达题。
书面表达是对学生在初中阶段英语学习的综合考查,涉及篇章结构、句子构成、短语使用和单词拼写等多方面内容,以下就中考书面表达的写作方法和注意事项进行指导:
1.平时分专题积累,背诵好词、句是写好作文的前提。
在平时积累时,可以按照“词一句一段一篇”的训练程序,由易到难,循序渐进,有了积累之后写作便得心应手了。
2.动笔前一定要认真审题,包括审时态、审人称、审文体、审要点,之后再开始写提纲,谋篇布局,同时关注题材格式时态。
要特别注意书信的开头和结尾。
3.找全信息点,紧扣主题。
考生一定要把题目读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,做完题目后再涂掉。
根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。
特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
我们用大约5分钟起作文草稿,分2-3段,拟好开头、主
题及结尾部分。
4.文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩,可使文章在得分上提高一个档次。
考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连词或短语,可使文章结构紧凑、语意连贯。
5.认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。
检查后,花大约10分钟时间将作文清晰、整洁地写在答题纸上。
以深圳2012年中考英语作文题目为例:
为了节能环保及方便出行,提高生活质量,深圳市政府近年在很多地段为市民免费提供自行车服务,但部分市民对此了解不够。
假如你是一位志愿者,周日上午,你来到莲花山公园对市民进行自行车借用宣传。
请根据以下提示写出一篇演讲稿。
提示:
1.深圳市民可以在很多地方免费借用自行车,非常方便;
2.如果借用自行车,请注意爱惜,并及时归还:
3.希望大家多骑自行车出行……(请至少列出骑自行车出行的两点好处。
)
要求:
1.演讲稿内容必须包括以上提示,可以适当发挥;
2.表达清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范:
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;写一篇80字左右的演讲稿,演讲稿的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
resident,convenient,low-carbon,advantage
Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen!
MayIhaveyourattention,please?
I'mgladtotellyousomethingaboutusingbikesforfreeinShenzhen.
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Thankyouforyourlistening.Haveaniceweekend!
【答题指导】
1.动笔前认真审题。
审时态:
用一般现在时;
审人称:
第一、第二人称;
审文体:
演讲稿;
审要点:
鼓励深圳市民骑自行车出行。
2.找全信息点,紧扣主题。
(1)深圳市民可以在很多地方免费借用自行车,非常方便;
(2)如果借用自行车,请注意爱惜,并及时归还;
(3)希望大家多骑自行车出行……(请至少列出骑自行车出行的两点好处。
)
A.骑自行车可以让我们身体得到放松;
B.自行车方便停放,能减少交通阻塞;
C.骑自行车能减少污染,保护环境。
3.使用重点句型和适当的连词。
(1)表文章结构顺序:
firstofall,firstly/first,secondly/second,andthen,finally,intheend,atlast。
(2)表并列补充关系的:
what'smore,besides,moreover,furthermore,inaddition。
(3)表转折对比关系的:
however,onthecontrary,ontheonehand…ontheother
hand。
(4)表因果关系的:
because,thus,therefore,asaresult。
(5)表进行举例说明:
forexample,forinstance,suchas。
(6)表陈述事实:
infact,asamatteroffact。
(7)表达自己观点:
asfarasIknow,inmyopinion。
(8)表总结:
inshort,inaword,inconclusion,insummary。
(9)作文中可使用两三个重点句型,如:
宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。
A.Ibelievethatridingbikeswillbemoreandmorepopularinthefuture.
B.Ifwerideridesinsteadofdrivingcars,ourcitywillbecomecleanerandmorebeautiful.
C.Ridingbikestoschoolortoworkisbecomingmoreandmoreconvenient.
4.全面检查,认真书写。
下面列举一些在检查时可能会发现的错误:
(1)Ifwekeepride(keepriding)bikeseveryday(everyday),wewillbemoreandmorehealthy(healthierandhealthier).
(2)It'sveryconvenientofus(forus)tousebikesforfreeinShenzhen.
(3)Ifweborrowbikes,weshouldtakegoodcareofit(them)andreturnit(them)ontime.
(4)It'smoreconvenientofus(forus)toparkthebikes.Therewillhavelessandless(Therewillbefewerandfewer)trafficjams.
参考范文:
Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen!
MayIhaveyourattention,please?
I'mgladtotellyousomethingaboutusingbikesforfreeinShenzhen.
AscitizensofShenzhen,it'sveryconvenientforustousebikesforfreeinmanyplaces.Ifweborrowbikes,weshouldtakegoodcareofthemandreturnthemontime.Ridingbikeshasalotofadvantages.Firstofall,wecanrelaxafterabusyday.What'smore,it'smoreconvenientforustoparkthebikes,sotherewillbefewerandfewertrafficjams.Moreimportantly,itcanalsoreduceairpollution;therefore,thelivingenvironmentisprotected.Ifweridebikesinsteadofdrivingcars,ourcitywillbecomecleanerandmorebeautiful.
Thankyouforyourlistening.Haveaniceweekend!
实战演练
(1)
Debbie为体重的增加感到很不开心,于是Simon给了她一些建议。
下面是他们两个人的对话:
Simon:
Hello,I'mgladtoseeyouagain.Whyareyousounhappy?
Debbie:
I'mtallerthanbeforebutI'mbecomingfatterandfatter.
Simon:
I'msorrytohearthat.Ithinkyoushouldchangeyourdiet.
Debbie:
Whatdietisgoodforme?
Simon:
Vegetables,fruits,milkandsoon.
Debbie:
That'strue.Canyougivememoreadvice?
Simon:
Inmyopinion,youshouldeatlessmeat.Andyouneedtoloseweight.
Debbie:
CanyoutellmehowIcanloseweight?
Simon:
Takemoreexerciseeveryday.Andhaveagoodrest.Soon,youwillbethinner.
Debbie:
Thankyouverymuch.
根据上面的对话,就如何保持健康谈谈你的看法和建议(至少3点建议)。
要求80词左右。
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参考答案:
A
It’simportantforustokeephealthy.Herearemyopinions.Firstofall,weneedtohaveabalanceddiet.Forexample,wecaneatmorevegetables,fruitsandlessmeat.Neversmokeordrinkmuchbecausetheyareharmfultoourhealth.Then,weneedtokeepagoodsleepinghabit.It’sgoodforourhealthifwekeepearlyhours.What’smore,wemustdoenoughsports.Themoresportswedo,thestrongerandhealthierwewillbe.Keepinghealthyisreallyimportantforus,andweshouldpaymuchattentiontoit.
实战演练
(2)
1.Howtoprotect/saveourenvironment/world?
Asweallknow,theenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseandworse/moreandmoreseriouslytoday.Waterispolluted,andwehavenocleanwatertodrink.Manytreesarecuttingdown,someanimalsaregettinglessandless.Somefactoriesarepouringdirtyairintothesky.Thepopulationisincreasingfasterandfaster,resourcesaregettinglessandless.Notonlydoesitaffectourlivesandhealth,italsohasagreataffectioninthefuture.People’shealthhasbeengreatlyaffectedbyair,noiseandwaterpollution.Manypeoplediedofdiseases.Inordertoliveabetterlife,somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.It’sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.Weshouldn’tthrowawayrubbisheverywhere.Treesareveryhelpfulandimportantforus.Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandhealthierinthefuture.
Ifeveryonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.Inaword,ifeveryonepaysmoreattentiontoourenvironment,therewillbelesspollutionandourlifewillbebetter.“Thereisonlyoneearth”,Ihopeeveryonewillprotectourenvironmentwell.
实战演练(3)
请你以校学生会的名义,写一份下周五将在本校举行的心理讲座的书面通知,内容如下:
Time
2:
00pm,nextFriday
Place
theschoolhall
Contents
AlectureonhowtodealwithbigtestswillbegivenbyDoctorJohnson.
Thelecturewhichismadeupofthreepartswilllastoneandahalfhours.
Afterit,studentsareallowedtodiscusswithDoctorJohnson.
Orders
Listentothelecturecarefullyandtakenotes.
Writeanessay(文章)totalkaboutyourfeelings.
要求:
1.词数:
不少于80词(开头和落款已给出,不计入总词数)。
2.通知内容包括以上要点,语言通顺、完整。
Notice
Attention,please!
Wehavesomethingforallofyou.___________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Students’Union
Friday,May26
【参考范文】B
Notice
Attention,please!
Wehavesomethingforallofyou.Intheschoolhall,therewillbeanimportantlectureonhowtodealwithbigtestsnextFriday.It’llbegivenbyDoctorJohnson.Andit’llbeginat2:
00pm.Thelectureismadeupofthreepartsandwilllastoneandahalfhours.Afterit,allofyouwillbeallowedtodiscusswithDoctorJohnson.Besuretolistentothelecturecarefullyandtakenotes.Andeachofyouwillhavetowriteanessaytotalkaboutyourfeelings.
Students’Union
Friday,May26
实战演练(4)
2.MyOpinionsonVolunteering
Wearemiddleschoolstudentsandwearebusywithourlessons.Sosomepeoplethinkweshouldconcentratemoreonourstudies.Ifwevolunteertohelpothers,it’sawasteoftime.ButIthinkvolunteeringisgreat.
InotonlyfeelgoodabouthelpingothersbutalsogettospendtimedoingwhatIlovetodo.AndfromvolunteeringIhavelearnedmanythingsthatIhaveneverlearnedinclass.SoifIhaveanoppoutunity,I’dliketovisitoldpeople’shousestocleanupforthem.I’dalsoliketohelpsickkidsinhospital.IlovekidsandIplantoputmylovetogoodusebyworkinginhospital.
Inaword,I’dliketohelppeoplewhoneedhelp.Ifeveryonehelpsoutabit,theworldwillbemorecolorful.
实战演练(5)
每个人都有自己喜欢的老师。
请根据以下要求,结合你自己的实际情况,写一个你最喜欢的老师,要求80词左右。
提示:
1.老师的外貌;
2.喜欢这位老师的原因(至少两点)。
要求:
1.信中不能出现真实的姓名和校名;
2.条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确;
3.80词左右。
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【参考范文】C
MyfavoriteteacherisMrWu.Letmetellyousomethingabouthim.MrWuisourEnglishteacher.Heis1.7meters’tallandisveryhandsome.Heisregardedasoneofthebestteachersinourschool.Thoughheisstrictwithusonourstudies,healwaystakesgoodcareofuslikeourbrother.Withhishelp,wehavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.Inhisfreetime,MrWulikesdoingsportsverymuch,andhealwaysencouragesustodosportstokeephealthy.Inmyopinion,MrWuisnotonlyagreatteacher,butalsoagoodfriendofours.
实战演练(6)
3.怎么学好英语HowtoLearnEnglishWell
Asweknow,Englishhasbecomeaninternationallanguage.ItismorepopularthananyotherlanguageinChina.Englishiswidelyspokenintheworldanditisthemostusefullanguagearoundtheworld,buthowcanwelearnitwell?
ThebestwaytolearnEnglishwellistouseitallthetime.Atschool,weshouldlearntohear,speak,readandwritecarefully.Afterschool,wearesupposedtospendenoughtimeinpracticingEnglishaswell.WecanreadEngli