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雅思写作范文之博物馆是否应收费
雅思写作范文之博物馆是否应收费
真题再现:
Somemuseumschargevisitorsforadmissionwhileothersarefree.Whatisyouropinion?
Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.
参考范文:
Museumsshouldfeelfreetochargeadmissionsoasnottoentirelycountongovernmentfunding,particularlyinaclimateofausterity.Nowadays,museumsareincreasinglybecomingentertainment,withsomegoodmuseumsmixingwitheducation,ofcourse.Analogically,amuseumsoundslikeapubliclibraryforthepurposeofeducation;andforthatofentertainment,itissimilartoatheater.
Butforfinancialreasons,itwouldbeagreatideatohavefreemuseumslikepubliclibrariesthatareavailabletoallwhoareinterestedingainingknowledge.Museumsmaybecomparabletolibrariesinthesensethatbotharerepositoriesofknowledge.Likebooksinthelibraries,piecesofartsandotherobjectsofcultural,scientific,orhistoricalimportanceinthemuseumsaretoolsforlife-longeducationbecauseitisthroughthemthatwediscoverandexplorevariousaspectsofhumanity.Inviewofthisclaim,museumsshouldbefreeforthegoodoftheindividualandsocietyasawhole.Besides,freeaccesswillnotonlyencouragemorepeopletofindoutabouttheircountrybutalsopromotefeelingsofnationalunityandidentityandleadtogreaterunderstandingofforeignculturesandhistories.Indeed,manypeoplewouldbeappalled,shouldpubliclibrarieschargeentrancefees,sowhymuseumsshouldbeanydifferent?
Nevertheless,thecoreissueisaboutthecostsofexhibitionsbecauseusuallymuseumsareextremelyexpensivetorun.Operatingonalimitedannualbudget,anymuseumwouldbeinacrisissoonerorlaterwithoutanincreasinglysupportivegovernmentastheonlysourceoffunding.Thus,ifmuseumsofferingfreegeneraladmissiontovisitorswereentirelyfundedoutofgovernmentmoney,thenthepressureonothergovernmentsdemandsofhospitals,schools,pensions,etc.wouldinvariablymakemuseumsapoorsecond,resultinginunder-fundingandconsequentlylackofexcellence.Thisleadssomepeopletothinkthatmuseumsoughttochargevisitorsforadmissionsincetheyaredesignedtoentertainthepublicasaretheaters,forthatmatter.Toberealisticinthepresenceofthecurrenteconomicrecession,thegovernmentsimplycouldnotaffordtofundanyactivityofpossiblevalue,suchaspayingallthebillsgeneratedbymuseummanagement.
Inanycase,themuseumpurposeschangefrominstitutiontoinstitution,withsomemuseumsfavoringeducationoverentertainment,andviceversa.Werefreemuseumentertainmentconsideredasaculturalright,shouldthegovernmentmaketheaterticketsfreeaswell?
Orshouldmuseumsinfinancialstressjuststartsellingofftheirartifactstomakeendsmeet?
雅思技巧:
常用的雅思写作句型
第一组
1.thetableshowsthechangesinthenumberof...overtheperiodfrom...to...该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。
2.thebarchartillustratesthat...该柱状图展示了...
3.thegraphprovidessomeinterestingdataregarding...该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。
4.thediagramshows(that)...该图向我们展示了...
5.thepiegraphdepicts(that)....该圆形图揭示了...
6.thisisacuregraphwhichdescribesthetrendof...这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。
7.thefigures/statisticsshow(that)...数据(字)表明...
8.thetreediagramrevealshow...该树型图向我们揭示了如何...
9.thedata/statisticsshow(that)...该数据(字)可以这样理解...
10.thedata/statistics/figuresleadustotheconclusionthat...这些数据资料令我们得出结论...
11.asisshown/demonstrated/exhibitedinthediagram/graph/chart/table...如图所示...
12.accordingtothechart/figures...根据这些表(数字)...
13.asisshowninthetable...如表格所示...
14.ascanbeseenfromthediagram,greatchangeshavetakenplacein...从图中可以看出,...发生了巨大变化。
15.fromthetable/chart/diagram/figure,wecanseeclearlythat...oritisclear/apparentfromthechartthat...从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到...
16.thisisagraphwhichillustrates...这个图表向我们展示了...
17.thistableshowsthechangingproportionofabfrom...to...该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。
18.thegraph,presentedinapiechart,showsthegeneraltrendin...该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。
19.thisisacolumnchartshowing...这是个柱型图,描述了...
20.ascanbeseenfromthegraph,thetwocurvesshowthefluctuationof...如图所示,两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。
21.overtheperiodfrom...to...the...remainedlevel.在...至...期间,...基本不变。
22.intheyearbetween...and...在...年到...期间...
23.inthe3yearsspanningfrom1995through1998...1995年至1998三年里...
24.fromthenon/fromthistimeonwards...从那时起...
25.thenumberof...remainedsteady/stablefrom(month/year)to(month/year)....月(年)至...月(年)...的数量基本不变。
26.thenumbersharplywentupto...数字急剧上升至...
27.thepercentageof...stayedthesamebetween...and......至...期间...的比率维持不变。
28.thefigurespeakedat...in(month/year)...的数目在...月(年)达到顶点,为...
29.thepercentageremainedsteadyat...比率维持在...
30.thepercentageof...issightlylarger/smallerthanthatof......的比例比...的比例略高(低)。
31.thereisnotagreatdealofdifferencebetween...and......与...的区别不大。
32.thegraphsshowathreefoldincreaseinthenumberof...该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。
33....decreasedyearbyyearwhile...increasedsteadily....逐年减少,而...逐步上升。
34.thesituationreachedapeak(ahighpointat)of[%]....的情况(局势)到达顶(高)点,为...百分点。
35.thefigures/situationbottomedoutin...数字(情况)在...达到底部。
36.thefiguresreachedthebottom/alowpoint/hitatrough.数字(情况)达到底部(低谷)。
37.ais...timesasmuch/manyasb.a是b的...倍。
38.aincreasedby...a增长了...
39.aincreasedto...a增长到...
40.high/low/great/small/percentage.比低高(低)
41.thereisanupwardtrendinthenumberof......数字呈上升趋势。
42.aconsiderableincrease/decreaseoccurredfrom...to......到...发生急剧上升。
43.from...to...therateofdecreaseslowdown.从...到...,下降速率减慢。
44.fromthisyearon,therewasagradualdeclinelreductioninthe...,reachingafigureof...从这年起,...逐渐下降至...
45.besimilarto...与...相似
46.bethesameas...与...相同
47.therearealotsimilarities/differencesbetween...and......与...之间有许多相似(不同)之处
48.ahassomethingincommonwithba于b有共同之处。
49.thedifferencebetweenaandbliesin...a与b之间的差别在于...
50...(year)witnessed/sawasharprisein......年...急剧上升。
第二组
1.accordingtothechart```
2.thedateleadustotheconclusionthat```
3.thedateshow```
4.thetreediagramrevealshow```
5.thefiguresshow```
6.thisisacuregraphwhichdescribesthetrendof```
7.thepiegraphdepicts```
8.thegraphprovidessomeinterestingdateregarding```
9.thetableshowsthechangesinthenumberof```overtheperiodfrom```to```
10.asisshowninthetable```
11.fromthetable,wecanclearlyseethat```
12.thistableshowsthechangingproportionofXandYfrom```to````
13.thegraph,presentedinapiechart,showsthegeneraltrendin```
14.ascanbeseenfromthegrape,thetwocurvesshowthefluctuationof```
15.overtheperiodfrom```to```the```remainedlevel.
16.intheyearbetween```and```.
17.inthe3yearsspanningfrom2005through2008.
18.thenumberof```remainedsteadyfrom```to````.
19.thenumbersharplywentupto```
20.thepercentageof```stayedthesamebetween```and```
21.thepercentageremainedsteadyat```
22.thepercentageof```isslightlylargethanthatof.
23.thereisnotagreatdealofdifferencebetween```and```
24.thegraphsshowathreefoldincreaseinthenumberof```
25.```decreasedyearbyyearwhile```increasedsteadily.
26.thereisanupwardtrendinthenumberof```
27.aconsiderableincreaseoccurredfrom```to```
28.from```to```therateofdecreaseslowdown.
29.fromthisyearon,therewasagradualdeclinereductioninthe```reachingafigureof.
30.besimilarto```bethesameas
31.therearealotsimilaritiesbetween```and```
32.thedifferencebetweenXandYliesin
雅思技巧:
雅思写作增强语言表现力
实际上,大部分中国考生在雅思作文的细节处理上,的确存在一些问题。
“考官一看见不修边幅的文章,印象分就低,导致最后分数平平。
而有些考生已经很注意细节方面,但分数仍不高,其中的问题通常就出在语句表现力上。
”要想在雅思写作上获高分,必须先克服文章细节处理和正统呆板的问题。
细节处理:
标点、书写、分段一个都不能少
文章细节处理讲求三大要点。
专家的总结是:
写对标点、写好卷面、划分段落一个都不能少。
正确书写标点,首先要注意句首单词首字母大小写。
按照英文书写规定,标点应紧挨着它的附着的意群进行标注,与另一个意群要以一个字符的空格隔开。
切记避免标点前后都留下空格,影响文章整体美感。
需要注意的是,分号后面的句子也需要小写。
考雅思也有“卷面分”,所以书写不能过于随意、格式混乱。
卷面整洁是对于每一个考生最基本的要求,书写时要注意字间距,太密集或太稀疏都会影响考官阅读,不能准确理解文章大意。
字体大小适中,尽量不要连写以免造成l,r,n,m等混淆不清,造成考官阅卷障碍。
顾老师推荐学生多使用“齐头式”书写,因这种在顶头书写且段与段之间空出一行的格式会显得文章整体较为整洁。
但是不要同时使用“齐头式”和“缩进式”,以免造成不伦不类的感觉。
归纳总结段、适当划分段落在作文中也很重要。
考生尽量要写总结段,这样可以最大限度地弥补文章前面因为语言组织等导致的文章结构不清晰。
最适当的段落划分是task1分为3-5段,task2控制在4-6段,既能段落清晰也不会过于分散。
增强语言表现力:
多用的和杜绝滥用的
“中国考生喜欢用‘be’动词,但是事实上,这并不好!
要想拿写作高分,就要避免使用语意弱的‘be’动词,多用语意具体的动词及主动语态,而且要防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语,杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。
”
句子写得过长,不但会使考官阅卷时产生倦怠感,而且容易出错。
许多考生喜欢用很难的专业术语来体现自己的水平,专家也认为这种方法不可取。
“最恰当的写法,就是句子做到言简意赅,并尽可能地使用自己掌握的词汇。
”
雅思写作范文:
博物馆是否应收费