雅思写作范文之博物馆是否应收费.docx

1、雅思写作范文之博物馆是否应收费雅思写作范文之博物馆是否应收费真题再现：Some museums charge visitors for admission while others are free. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.参考范文：Museums should feel free to charge admission so as not to entirely coun

2、t on government funding, particularly in a climate of austerity. Nowadays, museums are increasingly becoming entertainment, with some good museums mixing with education, of course. Analogically, a museum sounds like a public library for the purpose of education; and for that of entertainment, it is

3、similar to a theater.But for financial reasons, it would be a great idea to have free museums like public libraries that are available to all who are interested in gaining knowledge. Museums may be comparable to libraries in the sense that both are repositories of knowledge. Like books in the librar

4、ies, pieces of arts and other objects of cultural, scientific, or historical importance in the museums are tools for life-long education because it is through them that we discover and explore various aspects of humanity. In view of this claim, museums should be free for the good of the individual a

5、nd society as a whole. Besides, free access will not only encourage more people to find out about their country but also promote feelings of national unity and identity and lead to greater understanding of foreign cultures and histories. Indeed, many people would be appalled, should public libraries

6、 charge entrance fees, so why museums should be any different?Nevertheless, the core issue is about the costs of exhibitions because usually museums are extremely expensive to run. Operating on a limited annual budget, any museum would be in a crisis sooner or later without an increasingly supportiv

7、e government as the only source of funding. Thus, if museums offering free general admission to visitors were entirely funded out of government money, then the pressure on other governments demands of hospitals, schools, pensions, etc. would invariably make museums a poor second, resulting in under-

8、funding and consequently lack of excellence. This leads some people to think that museums ought to charge visitors for admission since they are designed to entertain the public as are theaters, for that matter. To be realistic in the presence of the current economic recession, the government simply

9、could not afford to fund any activity of possible value, such as paying all the bills generated by museum management.In any case, the museum purposes change from institution to institution, with some museums favoring education over entertainment, and vice versa. Were free museum entertainment consid

10、ered as a cultural right, should the government make theater tickets free as well? Or should museums in financial stress just start selling off their artifacts to make ends meet?雅思技巧:常用的雅思写作句型第一组1.the table shows the changes in the number of.over the period from.to. 该表格描述了在.年之.年间.数量的变化。2.the bar cha

11、rt illustrates that. 该柱状图展示了.3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding. 该图为我们提供了有关.有趣数据。4.the diagram shows (that). 该图向我们展示了.5.the pie graph depicts (that). 该圆形图揭示了.6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of. 这个曲线图描述了.的趋势。7.the figures/statistics show (that). 数据(字)表明.8.the tree d

12、iagram reveals how. 该树型图向我们揭示了如何.9.the data/statistics show (that). 该数据(字)可以这样理解.10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that. 这些数据资料令我们得出结论.11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table. 如图所示.12.according to the chart/figures. 根据这些表(数字).13.as is shown in th

13、e table. 如表格所示.14.as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in. 从图中可以看出，.发生了巨大变化。15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that.or it is clear/apparent from the chart that. 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到.16.this is a graph which illustrates. 这个图表向我们展示了.17.this table shows th

14、e changing proportion of a b from.to. 该表格描述了.年到.年间a与b的比例关系。18.the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in. 该图以圆形图形式描述了.总的趋势。19.this is a column chart showing. 这是个柱型图，描述了.20.as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of. 如图所示，两条曲线描述了.的波动情况。21.over the perio

15、d from.to.the.remained level. 在.至.期间，.基本不变。22.in the year between.and. 在.年到.期间.23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998. 1995年至1998三年里.24.from then on/from this time onwards. 从那时起.25.the number of.remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year). .月(年)至.月(年).的数量基本不变。26.the number sh

16、arply went up to. 数字急剧上升至.27.the percentage of.stayed the same between.and. .至.期间.的比率维持不变。28.the figures peaked at.in(month/year) .的数目在.月(年)达到顶点，为.29.the percentage remained steady at. 比率维持在.30.the percentage of.is sightly larger/smaller than that of. .的比例比.的比例略高(低)。31.there is not a great deal of d

17、ifference between.and. .与.的区别不大。32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of. 该图表表明.的数目增长了三倍。33.decreased year by year while.increased steadily. .逐年减少，而.逐步上升。34.the situation reached a peak(a high point at) of%. .的情况(局势)到达顶(高)点，为.百分点。 35.the figures/situation bottomed out in. 数字(情况)在.达到底

18、部。36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough. 数字(情况)达到底部(低谷)。37.a is .times as much/many as b. a是b的.倍。38.a increased by. a增长了.39.a increased to. a增长到.40.high/low/great/small/ percentage. 比低高(低)41.there is an upward trend in the number of. .数字呈上升趋势。42.a considerable increase/decrease

19、occurred from.to. .到.发生急剧上升。43.from.to.the rate of decrease slow down. 从.到.，下降速率减慢。44.from this year on，there was a gradual declinel reduction in the.,reaching a figure of. 从这年起，.逐渐下降至.45.be similar to. 与.相似46.be the same as. 与.相同47.there are a lot similarities/differences between.and. .与.之间有许多相似(不同

20、)之处48.a has something in common with b a于b有共同之处。49.the difference between a and b lies in. a与b之间的差别在于.50.(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in. .年.急剧上升。第二组1.according to the chart2.the date lead us to the conclusion that3.the date show4.the tree diagram reveals how5.the figures show6.this is a cure gr

21、aph which describes the trend of7.the pie graph depicts8.the graph provides some interesting date regarding9.the table shows the changes in the number of over the period from to 10.as is shown in the table 11.from the table ,we can clearly see that 12.this table shows the changing proportion of X an

22、d Y from to 13.the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in14.as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the fluctuation of 15.over the period from to theremained level.16.in the year between and .17.in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through 2008.18.the number of remained

23、steady from to .19.the number sharply went up to 20.the percentage of stayed the same between and 21.the percentage remained steady at22.the percentage of is slightly large than that of.23.there is not a great deal of difference between and 24.the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of 2

24、5.decreased year by year while increased steadily.26.there is an upward trend in the number of 27.a considerable increase occurred from to 28.from to the rate of decrease slow down.29.from this year on, there was a gradual decline reduction in the reaching a figure of.30.be similar to be the same as

25、31.there are a lot similarities between and 32.the difference between X and Y lies in雅思技巧:雅思写作增强语言表现力实际上，大部分中国考生在雅思作文的细节处理上，的确存在一些问题。“考官一看见不修边幅的文章，印象分就低，导致最后分数平平。而有些考生已经很注意细节方面，但分数仍不高，其中的问题通常就出在语句表现力上。”要想在雅思写作上获高分，必须先克服文章细节处理和正统呆板的问题。细节处理：标点、书写、分段一个都不能少文章细节处理讲求三大要点。专家的总结是：写对标点、写好卷面、划分段落一个都不能少。正确书写标点

26、，首先要注意句首单词首字母大小写。按照英文书写规定，标点应紧挨着它的附着的意群进行标注，与另一个意群要以一个字符的空格隔开。切记避免标点前后都留下空格，影响文章整体美感。需要注意的是，分号后面的句子也需要小写。考雅思也有“卷面分”，所以书写不能过于随意、格式混乱。卷面整洁是对于每一个考生最基本的要求，书写时要注意字间距，太密集或太稀疏都会影响考官阅读，不能准确理解文章大意。字体大小适中，尽量不要连写以免造成l,r,n,m等混淆不清，造成考官阅卷障碍。顾老师推荐学生多使用“齐头式”书写，因这种在顶头书写且段与段之间空出一行的格式会显得文章整体较为整洁。但是不要同时使用“齐头式”和“缩进式”，以免

27、造成不伦不类的感觉。归纳总结段、适当划分段落在作文中也很重要。考生尽量要写总结段，这样可以最大限度地弥补文章前面因为语言组织等导致的文章结构不清晰。最适当的段落划分是task1分为3-5段，task2控制在4-6段，既能段落清晰也不会过于分散。增强语言表现力：多用的和杜绝滥用的“中国考生喜欢用be动词，但是事实上，这并不好!要想拿写作高分，就要避免使用语意弱的be动词，多用语意具体的动词及主动语态，而且要防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语，杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。”句子写得过长，不但会使考官阅卷时产生倦怠感，而且容易出错。许多考生喜欢用很难的专业术语来体现自己的水平，专家也认为这种方法不可取。“最恰当的写法，就是句子做到言简意赅，并尽可能地使用自己掌握的词汇。”雅思写作范文：博物馆是否应收费