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改错

错A

DearElli,

I’maseniorstudent.Ilikemakefriendswith

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peoplebutIdomybesttogetonwellwitheveryone.

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ButinlastweekIfoundthatoneofmyfriends

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wroteinherEnglishdiarythatshedislikedmeand

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thathedidn’twanttobemyfriendanymore.Now

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shehasstartedtomakefunofmebecauseofI’m

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fat.I’mkindtoher,butwhycan’tshebefriend

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ofmine?

Otherproblemisaboutmyweight.Should

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Idolessexerciseorusepills?

Anddoyouknow

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anyotherway?

Pleasegivemesomeadvices.

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Yours,

Mary

B

DearSir,

IamnowacollegestudentatPekingUniversity.I’m

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quiteinterestedinthepositionofferingbyyourwebsite

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forpart-timeEnglishreporters.IthinkI’mfitthejob.

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Asastudent,I’vereadalotandhavemanyknowledge

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indifferentfield.I’mfondofEnglishanddowellin

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bothspeakingandwriting.Besides,I’measilytoget

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alongwithandIenjoyworkingtogetherwithanother.

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Aboveall,Ionceworkasareporterformycollege

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broadcaststation.SoI’msureIcandothejobwellifIwillget

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thechancetoworkforawebsite.I’mlookingforwardto

yourreply.10

Yoursfaithfully,

LiHua

C

Peoplehavedifferenttastesinfood.Some

feeltheyhaven’tamealunlesstheyhavehad

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porkorothermeat;somepreferchickens2

orfish,andeatsoneortheotherateverymeal.

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Othersprefervegetablesandfruitor

grainsbutwouldenjoyamealofpotatoes,

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noodlesandcarrotsandsomeanotherfruit.

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Otherscouldliveonthefoodsarecalled6

fastfoods,forexample,ahamburgeror7

hotdog,Frenchfriesandasoftdrinks.8

Foodcanbepreparedbysomanyways.9

Everyissatisfactorytodifferentpersons.10

D

Somestudentsdon’tliketalkingabouttheirparents

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oftenasiftheirparentslovethemverymuch.Areyou

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gettingonwellwithyourparents?

Youandyourparents

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willbeveryhappyifyoucanbefriends.Herearesome

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waytohaveagoodtalkwiththem.Findagoodtimeto

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talk,likewhenyou’reeatingdinner,goingoutforwalk

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andwatchingTV.Tellthemsomethingyou’reinterested

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in,oraskthemabouttheirlifewhentheyareyoung.

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Theylovetotalkaboutourpast!

Meetthemfacetofaceand

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listentothemcarefully.Behonesty,andyourparents

willtrustyoumore.10

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Ourschoolinvitedaforeignteacherwhomisworkingin

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acollegeinourcitygiveaclasstothestudentsofSenior

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Three.Theclasswasveryinterested.Ihavelearneda

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lotoffromhim.Theteacherhadafreetalkwithus

usingsimple4

English.Hespokeslowlysothatwecouldunderstand

him5

well.Sometimesherepeatedwhatwedon’tunderstand.

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Myclassmateswereallactiveintheclass.Tohisjoy,I

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understoodalmosteverythingtheteachersaid.ButIwas

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abletoaskquestioninEnglish.Thisclassencouragedme

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greatly.I’msurewekeeponpracticing,itwillbeeasy

forustolearnspokenEnglishwell.10

F

Yesterdaywewenttoplanttreesonthehillnearto

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ourschool.Theboysweremadedigpits（坑）.The

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girlsweretoldtoplanttheyoungtreesintothepits.

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Allofusworkedveryhardly.Soonwewereallwet

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withsweat.Aftertheyoungtreesplanted,we

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begantowaterit.Thewaterwasatthefootof

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thehill.Butwestoodinlinetopasspails（桶）

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ofwaterfromonetootheruptothehill.8

Wedidnotfinishwaterthetreesuntilit9

wasdark.Thoughweweretired,wefeelveryhappy.

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G

IwasreallyexcitingwhenIwasofferedtheopportunity

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togotoGuangzhouinChinaformywork.Ihadnever

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beentoChinabutIhadneverbeenoutsideEurope.

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Ididn’tknowwhattoexciting.WeflewtoHongKong,

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thentookthetrainfromHongKongtoGuangzhou.

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Iwasimpressedalotofbythemodern,comfortable

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trainandtheworkersintheirsmartclothes.Sincewegot

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toGuangzhou,thefirstthingIsawaswewentoutofa

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stationwas…McDonalds!

Thatisabitdisappointing,

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Ihavetosay,butitwastheonlydisappointmentsonthetrip.10

H

DuringtheweekendItraveledbyairthefirsttime

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inmylife.Igenerallytravelbytrainandbus.Itis

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bothcheaperandsafe.Butthiswasashortjourney

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InthebeginningIdidnotfeelveryhappily,butthis

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feelingdidnotlastlonger.Thejourneywasveryexciting.

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Iwassoonhighupintheskyamongthecloud.Theviews

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ofmountains,fieldsandriverswereinterested.

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Ienjoyedmyshortandcomfortablejourneyverymuch.

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Thisexperiencehasshownthattravelinginairis

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actuallythesafestwayofmakejourneys.10

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DearJohn,

I’dliketotellyouanythingthathappenedseveraldays

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before.Onemorningitwasrainingcatsanddogs.Isawanold2

manwalkingintherainwhohadnothingbutastickwithher.3

Fortunate,aChineseboywentoverandopenedhisumbrella4

forhim.Sothelittleboywasnottallenoughandhecouldn’t5

holdithighenoughtocoverhim.Theoldmandoesn’tnotice6

that.Thentheboythoughtofwonderfulidea.Hestoppedthe7

oldman,tiedhisumbrellawiththeoldman’sstick,andheld8

itforhim.Thentheboyhelpedtheoldmantohishome.

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Don’tyouthinkifthelittleboyisreallysmartandnice?

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J

DearKangLi,

Ihaven’theardyouforalongtime.Howare

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you?

Ihadjustfinishedtheexams.NowI’m

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gladthatIhavetimetowriteforyou.Ourteacher

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tellsusthatChinaisabigcountrythathavethe

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mostpopulationintheworld.It’sontheother

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sidesoftheworld.Nowthesunisshiningbrightly

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here,andperhapsyou’resleepinginthedark

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night.Iwishtoknowanythingmoreaboutthe

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Chinesewayofliving.Iwonderatifyoucan

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tellmeaboutitinyourletter.Pleasewritesoon.

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Yours,

John

K

Recentlyasurveyhasconductedtofindouthowmany

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hoursofsleepweSeniorThreestudentsgetorhowmuchtime2

wespendonphysicalexercise.Thesurveyshowedthat

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50%ofthestudentsgetabout7hours’sleepsand10%sleep4

forevenfewerthan6hours.Meanwhile,80%ofthem

take5

physicalexerciseforbelowanhour.Itcanbeeasilyseen

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thatthemostofthestudentsdon’thaveenoughsleepor

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exercise,thatisofgreatharmtotheirhealth.Inmy

opinion,8

Theyshouldhaveenoughsleepandexercise.Theycan

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helpustobemoreenergeticandlearnmoreeffective.

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L

TheInternetisplayingaimportantpartin

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ourdailylife.Onthenet,wecanlearnabout

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newsbothhomeandabroadandsomeother

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informationsaswell.Wecanalsomakephonecalls,

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sendmessagesbye-mails,gotonetschools,and

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learnforeignlanguagesbyourselves.Beside,we

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canenjoymusic,watchsportsmatches,andplaythe

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chessorcards.Thenetevenhelpusdoshopping,

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makeachatwithothersandmakefriendswiththem.

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Inaword,theInternethasmadeourlifemoreeasier.

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短文改错M

Lifeinthetwenty-onecenturywillbevery

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differentwithlifetoday.Therewillbemany

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changes.Whatcanthechangesbe?

Thepopulation

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isgrowingfast.Thatwillbemanymorepeoplein

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theworldandmostofthemwillliveinlonger

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thanpeoplelivenow.Computerswillbemuch

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moresmallerandmoreuseful,andtherewill

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beoneineveryhome.Peoplewillworkfew

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hoursthantheynowandtheywillhavemuch

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freetimeforreadingbooks,watchTVandtraveling.

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N

Aperson’sagenolongertellsyousomethingabout

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hissocialposition,marriageorhealthy.There’snolonger

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aparticularyearwhichonegoestoschoolorgoesto

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workorgetsmarriedorstartafamily.Thesocialclock

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thatkeptusontimeandtolduswhengotoschool,get

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ajob,orstopworkingisn’tasstrongasitwasusedtobe.

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Itdoesn’tsurpriseustoheara28-year-olduniversity

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presidentora35-year-oldgrandmother,or70-year-old

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manwhohasbecomeafatherforthefirsttime.Whatwe

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allknow,public’sideasarechangingnowadays.

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O

Myhometownisaprettycity,sopeoplethereare

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kindandpolite.Withcomingofspring,grassand

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treesturngreen,andflowersgrewinmanycolors.

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Insummer,theseaundertheblueskiesisevenmore

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beautiful.Afterautumnarrives,thecitylooksasan

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oldmanwithleavesfallenfromthetrees.Inwinter,

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alotofwhitebirdscometomycityforfood.Ican

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waitmorepatientlyabovetheseaforquitealong

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time.Whiletheyfindfishcomingtothesurface,they

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flydownimmediateand