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1、改错错 ADear Elli, Im a senior student. I like make friends with 1 people but I do my best to get on well with everyone. 2 But in last week I found that one of my friends 3 wrote in her English diary that she disliked me and 4 that he didnt want to be my friend any more. Now 5 she has started to make f

2、un of me because of Im 6 fat. Im kind to her, but why cant she be friend 7 of mine? Other problem is about my weight. Should 8 I do less exercise or use pills? And do you know 9 any other way? Please give me some advices. 10 Yours, MaryBDear Sir,I am now a college student at Peking University. Im 1

3、quite interested in the position offering by your website 2 for part-time English reporters. I think Im fit the job. 3 As a student, Ive read a lot and have many knowledge 4 in different field. Im fond of English and do well in 5 both speaking and writing. Besides, Im easily to get 6 along with and

4、I enjoy working together with another. 7 Above all, I once work as a reporter for my college 8 broadcast station. So Im sure I can do the job well if I will get 9 the chance to work for a website. Im looking forward toyour reply. 10 Yours faithfully,Li HuaCPeople have different tastes in food. Somef

5、eel they havent a meal unless they have had 1 pork or other meat; some prefer chickens 2 or fish, and eats one or the other at every meal. 3 Others prefer vegetables and fruit or grains but would enjoy a meal of potatoes, 4 noodles and carrots and some another fruit. 5 Others could live on the foods

6、 are called 6 fast foods, for example, a hamburger or 7 hot dog, French fries and a soft drinks. 8 Food can be prepared by so many ways.9 Every is satisfactory to different persons.10 DSome students dont like talking about their parents 1 often as if their parents love them very much. Are you 2 gett

7、ing on well with your parents? You and your parents 3 will be very happy if you can be friends. Here are some 4 way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to 5 talk, like when youre eating dinner, going out for walk 6 and watching TV. Tell them something youre interested 7 in, or ask them a

8、bout their life when they are young. 8 They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and 9 listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parentswill trust you more. 10 短文改错 EOur school invited a foreign teacher whom is working in 1 a college in our city give a class to the students of Se

9、nior 2 Three. The class was very interested. I have learned a 3 lot of from him. The teacher had a free talk with us using simple 4 English. He spoke slowly so that we could understandhim 5 well. Sometimes he repeated what we dont understand. 6 My classmates were all active in the class. To his joy,

10、 I 7 understood almost everything the teacher said. But I was 8 able to ask question in English. This class encouraged me 9 greatly. Im sure we keep on practicing, it will be easyfor us to learn spoken English well. 10 FYesterday we went to plant trees on the hill near to 1 our school. The boys were

11、 made dig pits(坑). The 2 girls were told to plant the young trees into the pits. 3 All of us worked very hardly. Soon we were all wet 4 with sweat. After the young trees planted, we 5 began to water it. The water was at the foot of 6 the hill. But we stood in line to pass pails(桶) 7 of water from on

12、e to other up to the hill. 8 We did not finish water the trees until it 9 was dark. Though we were tired, we feel very happy. 10 GI was really exciting when I was offered the opportunity 1 to go to Guangzhou in China for my work. I had never 2 been to China but I had never been outside Europe. 3 I d

13、idnt know what to exciting. We flew to Hong Kong, 4 then took the train from Hong Kong to Guangzhou. 5 I was impressed a lot of by the modern, comfortable 6 train and the workers in their smart clothes. Since we got 7 to Guangzhou, the first thing I saw as we went out of a 8 station wasMcDonalds! Th

14、at is a bit disappointing, 9 I have to say, but it was the only disappointments on the trip. 10 HDuring the weekend I traveled by air the first time 1 in my life. I generally travel by train and bus. It is 2 both cheaper and safe. But this was a short journey 3 In the beginning I did not feel very h

15、appily, but this 4 feeling did not last longer. The journey was very exciting. 5 I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The views 6 of mountains, fields and rivers were interested.7 I enjoyed my short and comfortable journey very much. 8 This experience has shown that traveling in air is 9 a

16、ctually the safest way of make journeys. 10 短文改错 IDear John,Id like to tell you anything that happened several days 1 before. One morning it was raining cats and dogs. I saw an old 2 man walking in the rain who had nothing but a stick with her. 3 Fortunate, a Chinese boy went over and opened his umb

17、rella 4 for him. So the little boy was not tall enough and he couldnt 5 hold it high enough to cover him. The old man doesnt notice 6 that. Then the boy thought of wonderful idea. He stopped the 7 old man, tied his umbrella with the old mans stick, and held 8 it for him. Then the boy helped the old

18、man to his home. 9 Dont you think if the little boy is really smart and nice? 10 JDear Kang Li, I havent heard you for a long time. How are 1 you? I had just finished the exams. Now Im 2 glad that I have time to write for you. Our teacher 3 tells us that China is a big country that have the 4 most p

19、opulation in the world. Its on the other 5 sides of the world. Now the sun is shining brightly 6 here, and perhaps youre sleeping in the dark 7 night. I wish to know anything more about the 8 Chinese way of living. I wonder at if you can 9 tell me about it in your letter. Please write soon. 10 Yours

20、, JohnKRecently a survey has conducted to find out how many 1 hours of sleep we Senior Three students get or how much time 2 we spend on physical exercise. The survey showed that 3 50% of the students get about 7 hours sleeps and 10% sleep 4 for even fewer than 6 hours. Meanwhile, 80% of them take 5

21、 physical exercise for below an hour. It can be easily seen 6 that the most of the students dont have enough sleep or 7 exercise, that is of great harm to their health. In my opinion, 8 They should have enough sleep and exercise. They can 9 help us to be more energetic and learn more effective. 10 L

22、The Internet is playing a important part in1 our daily life. On the net, we can learn about 2 news both home and abroad and some other3 informations as well. We can also make phone calls, 4 send messages by e-mails, go to net schools, and 5 learn foreign languages by ourselves. Beside, we6 can enjoy

23、 music, watch sports matches, and play the 7 chess or cards. The net even help us do shopping, 8 make a chat with others and make friends with them. 9 In a word, the Internet has made our life more easier. 10 短文改错 MLife in the twenty-one century will be very 1 different with life today. There will b

24、e many2 changes. What can the changes be? The population 3 is growing fast. That will be many more people in 4 the world and most of them will live in longer 5 than people live now. Computers will be much 6 more smaller and more useful, and there will 7 be one in every home. People will work few8 ho

25、urs than they now and they will have much 9 free time for reading books, watch TV and traveling. 10 NA persons age no longer tells you something about 1 his social position, marriage or healthy. Theres no longer 2 a particular year which one goes to school or goes to 3 work or gets married or start

26、a family. The social clock 4 that kept us on time and told us when go to school, get 5 a job, or stop working isnt as strong as it was used to be. 6 It doesnt surprise us to hear a 28-year-old university 7 president or a 35-year-old grandmother, or 70-year-old 8 man who has become a father for the f

27、irst time. What we 9 all know, publics ideas are changing nowadays. 10 OMy hometown is a pretty city, so people there are 1 kind and polite. With coming of spring, grass and 2 trees turn green, and flowers grew in many colors.3 In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more 4 beautiful. After autumn arrives, the city looks as an 5 old man with leaves fallen from the trees. In winter,6 a lot of white birds come to my city for food. I can7 wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long 8 time. While they find fish coming to the surface, they 9 fly down immediate and