英语写作.docx

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英语写作

I.AGoodEnglishComposition（英语作文评价标准）

Language:

correctness,effectiveness

Content:

unity,coherence，

fulldevelopment

1.SentenceCorrectness（句子的准确性）

Ilikereadingnovels,theytellinterestingandmovingstories,moreover,somestoriesareinstructive.Theydescribegoodandevilpeople,theydescribethebrightsideandthedarksideoflife.Theyhelpmedistinguishingbetweenrightandwrong,theyhelpmeunderstandingpeopleandlife.SoIseemtobecomewiser.

MoreExamples:

1）Iwilltrytocometruemydreams.

2）Myhometownhastakenplacemanychangessinceourcountry’sopenpolicy.

3）Aroomoftenlives6-8students.

4）Becausehehadn’tfinishedhisassignment,sohecontinuedworkingintheclassroom.

5）Hecostmuchmoneyforthenewmobilephone.

6）Thepricesoffruitarecheapinthisarea.

7）Withpeople’slifestandardsraise,moreandmorefamiliescanaffordaprivatecar.

8）Lookingfromthetopofthemountain,thecityseemssmall.

9）Surroundedbybeautifulflowersandtalltrees,theyfindthehouseawonderfulplacetospendtheholiday.

10）IlikeEnglish,however,Icannotlearnitwell.

11）Ourearthisfacingalotofproblems.Suchaspollution,trafficjams,etc.

12）Iamstronglyagainstthisopinion.Becauseprinteddictionarieshavesomespecialqualitiesthatelectricaldictionariesdon’t.

2.SentenceVariety（句式的多样化）

Ilikereadingnovelsbecausetheytellinterestingandmovingstories.Moreover,somestoriesareinstructive.Bydescribinggoodandevilpeople,andthebrightsideandthedarksideoflife,suchstorieshelpmetodistinguishbetweenrightandwrong,andunderstandpeopleandlife.Asaresult,readingthemhasperhapsmademewiser.

Moreexamples:

a.IhavewonthefirstprizeinEnglishcontest,thankstoyourhelp.

b.I’vewonthefirstprizeinEnglishcontestandmyachievementsareattributedtoyourhelpgreatly.

c.ItiswithyourhelpthatIhavewonthefirstprizeinEnglishcontest.

d.WithoutyourhelpIwouldnothavewonthefirstprizeinEnglishcontest.

3.ParagraphUnity（段落一致性）

Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandandwifearenowequalinthefamily.Theycopewithproblemsofdailylifetogetherandsharetheresponsibilityofdoinghouseholdchoresandtakingcareofchildren.Butinsomefamilies,youcanstillfindthatwivesarebeingbusywithdinners,whilehusbandsarecomfortablysittinginarmchairsreadingnewspapersorwatchingfootballgamesonTV.

Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandandwifearenowequalinthefamily.Theycopewithproblemsofdailylifetogetherandsharetheresponsibilityofdoinghouseholdchoresandtakingcareofchildren.Today,youcanhardlyfindwivesarebeingbusywithdinners,whilehusbandsarecomfortablysittinginarmchairsreadingnewspapersorwatchingfootballgamesonTV.

Televisionhasmanyharms.Sincethetelevisionwasinvented,ithasplayedanimportantpartinpeople’slife.Ithasturnedthebigworldtoasmallone.Peoplecanseethesameprogramatthesametimearoundtheworld.But,assoonastelevisioncomesintocommonfamilies,italsohasmanyharms,especiallyforthechildren.Forexample,childrenspendtoomuchtimewatchingtelevision.Asaresult,theycannotconcentrateontheirstudies.Whatisworse,theireyesightbecomespoorer.Andtheyareoftenexposedtoviolence,whichisharmfultotheirmentalgrowth.

4.Paragraphcoherence（段落连贯性）

Ilikereadingnovels.Theytellinterestingandmovingstories.Somestoriesareinstructive.Theydescribegoodandevilpeople.Theydescribethebrightsideandthedarksideoflife.Theyhelpmedistinguishbetweenrightandwrong.Theyhelpmeunderstandpeopleandlife.Iseemtobecomewiser.

Ilikereadingnovelsbecausetheytellinterestingandmovingstories.Moreover,somestoriesareinstructive.Bydescribinggoodandevilpeople,andthebrightsideandthedarksideoflife,suchstorieshelpmetodistinguishbetweenrightandwrong,andunderstandpeopleandlife.Asaresult,readingthemhasperhapsmademewiser.

Isithereatthekeyboard.Itrytothinkofthingstosay.Thewordsarenotcomingveryfreely.Ithinkthatisprobablybecauseitistheendofalongday.ItmaybethatIamtired.Icannotcontinuemywriting.Freewritingmayhelpmebreakthroughthewriter’sblock.

Isithereatthekeyboard,tryingtothinkofthingstosay,butthewordsarenotcomingveryfreely.Probably,theyaren’tcomingbecauseitistheendofalongday,andI’mtired.Whateverthereason,Icannotcontinuemywriting.Perhapsfreewritingwillhelpmebreakthroughthewriter’sblock.

5.Fulldevelopment（内容的丰富性）

PositiveandNegativeAspectsofSports

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