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四级真题议论文作文范文和点评
2008年6月份四级作文真题
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteALetterofApologyaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.
1.娱乐活动多种多样
2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益,也可能有危害性
3.作为大学生,我的看法。
范文一:
恩波版
Recreationalactivitiesandstudydonotcontradicteachother,infact,theycomplementeachonter.Asthesayinggoes,"AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy."Alifeburdenedwithstudyandworkleadsyounowhere,foryouwouldgettiredandboredwithyourdailyroutinework.Ontheotherhand,properrecreationwillrelievethetensionanddiscomfortofourmonotonouslifebecauseitoffersyouvariouswaystoletoutyourpent-upemotion.
WhatIusuallydotorelaxafterschoolisjoggingandseeingmovies.UauallyIdon’tsparetimeforexercise,butIvaluethephysicaleducationclassatschool.Joggingseveralroundsinfieldcertainlyrelievesthedayspressure.Onweekends,.I’llcatchthemorningmovieformyvisualenjoyment.Ifeelavivedandenergeticforanotherweek’swork-load.
Tosumup,Istronglyvoicealltheevidencejustifiesanunshakableviewthatourtrans-centurycollegestudentsshouldchooserecreationalactivitiesappropriately.Therefore,inasense,onlywhenwepaycloseattentiontoitcanweseeameaningfulextraordinaryandharmoniousfuturesoonerorlater.
范文二:
昂立版
Recreationalactivity
Inpeople’sdailylife,therearevariousrecreationalactivitiesapartfromstudyingorworkingrangingfromKaraokeordancingtocomputergamesorsportsgames.
Suchactivitiesarebeneficialaswellasharmfultousifundertakeninappropriately.Ononehand,recreationalactivitiescanhelpustonotonlybuildourbodyandmindbutalsoimproveourcommunicationandunderstandingwithfriendsbecausemostoftheseactivitiesaredonewithothers.Ontheotherhand,ifwespendtoomuchtimeonsinging,dancingorothergames,wemightfailtoconcentrateonourdutiessuchasstudyingourworking,whichinturnmayleadtofurtherconsequences.
AsfarasI’mconcerned,recreationalactivitiesshouldbedonewithinacertainlimitsothatwecankeepaproperbalancebetweenrecreationandstudyingorworkinglife.
范文三:
江涛版
RecreationalActivities
Intheeraofinformationandtechnology,thereareallkindsofrecreationalactivities.Somepeoplethinkthoserecreationalactivitiesaregreatandnecessary,becausetheycanhelppeoplerelaxfromthehardworkandstudy.Someoftheactivities,suchashiking,jogging,canhelppeoplerelaxphysically;whilesomeofthem,suchassurfingtheInternet,canhelppeoplerelaxmentally.
However,somepeoplethinkthatsomanykindsofrecreationalactivitiesmayhaveabadeffectonourlives.Somepeoplemaynotresistsometemptationsfromthoseactivities,andindulgethemselvesinthoseactivities.Atlasttheyareluredawayfromtheirstudyortheirwork.
Inmyopinion,weshouldpaymoreattentiontotheadvantagesofvariousrecreationalactivitiesandmakethemostofthem.Meanwhile,weshouldlearnhowtousethoseactivitiespositively,andmakethemahelpfultoolforourdevelopment.
范文四:
交大外院版
RecreationalActivities
21stcenturyhasbroughtwithitanunprecedentedvarietyofrecreationalactivitiesrangingfromtraditionaloutdooractivitiessuchasplayingballgamestoallkindsofonlineones,thelatterofwhichisagreatappealtotheyounggeneration.SoI’dliketonarrowmytopicdowntoonlinerecreationalactivities.
Itgoeswithoutsayingthatvariousactivitiesbroughtbymoderntechnologyhavegreatlybroadenedourhorizonandbroughtmuchexcitementtous.WithaccesstotheInternet,youcangettoknowpeoplefromanycountryintheworldandyoucantalkwiththem,playgameswiththem---atemptationveryhardtoresist,andevenseethemviawebcam.Thedisadvantage,however,isthatanyonewholacksself-controlwouldveryeasilygetlostandbecomeaddictedtotheonlineworld,whichinturnmightseriouslyaffecttheirlife,workandinterpersonalrelationships.
Asacollegestudent,Ithinkwhatreallymattersistomakebetterchoiceandexertmorediscipline.We’dbettertakeadvantageofgoodonlinerecreationalactivitiestoenrichourlivesandbroadenthescopeofknowledge.Whenitcomestothoseaddictive,time-consumingandlessmeaningfulactivities,Ithinktostayawayfromthemisawisedecision.
RecreationalActivities
Withthedevelopmentoflivingstandard,peoplespendmoretimeonvariousformsofrecreationalactivities.Peoplecandosports,singingkaraoke,godancing,gotothemovies,playvideogamesoronlinegames,orsurftheInternet.
Recreationalactivitiesaregoodtopeople’shealth,bothphysicallyandmentally.Sportsanddancingcankeeppeoplefit.Singingkaraoke,playingvideogamesoronlinegamescansatisfypeople’simagination.SurfingtheInternetcanbringpeoplealotofinformationandknowledge.
However,recreationalactivitiesmightbeharmfulifpeopleareaddicted.Spendingtoomuchtimeonrecreationalactivitieswillseriouslyinfluencepeople’snormallives,especiallyworkandstudy.Therefore,peoplewillbenefitfromrecreationalactivitiesonlyiftheytakepartinthemproperly.
范文五:
新东方版
Amongvariousrecipesoneenjoysinhisorhercollegelife,recreationalactivitiescanbynomeansbeignored.Itisnumerousactivities,suchasspokenEnglishcompetitions,sportsevents,andclubsandsocietiesofdifferentinterests,thathelptomakecampuslifecolorfulanddiversified.
Facingsomanyinterestingextracurricularactivities,wecollegestudentshavetroubletochoosetheproperones.Asfreshmen,weareconfusedbyallkindsofpostersforstudents’clubstorecruitnewmembers.Therearetwooppositeviewsaboutrecreationalactivities.Onesaystheyexertpositiveinfluenceonastudent’sphysicalandmentaldevelopment,fortheycanexploreastudent’stalent,developastudent'sabilityincommunication,andteachthemtobemoreindependent.While,oppositevoicescanalsobeheardbyassertingthatrecreationalactivitieswastetoomuchtime,andthereforemayhinderstudentfromfocusingonhisorherstudy.
Asforme,Iholdabeliefthatrecreationalactivitiesdomoregoodthanharm,becauseIhavealwaysbeenoftheimpressionthatasacollegestudent,heorshe,besidestheacademicinformation,shouldpickupmorepracticalskillstobebetterpreparedforthecareerdevelopment.Recreationalactivitiesdogiveusagoodchance.And,solongasonecanarrangethetimebyreason,activitiesbesidesstudywilldefinitelyprovidemorebenefitforus.
作文考试类型
在具体分析此次四级作文题目之前,笔者先对历年四级作文考题的类型做个共性的研究。
从类型上讲,历年考题大致可以分成四大类:
1.正反对比论证
2.现象原因,问题解决
3.图表
4.应用文(书信、演讲、海报等)
在上述四类题型中,最后一类是最近几年才出现在四、六级考试中的文体,主要考查考生的英语表达基本功和写作实力,很难有固定模式可言。
但是另外三类是四级考试的传统题型,出现频率非常高,可以把握的规律性很强。
这次四级作文题目明显属于第一类,是历次作文中比较简单的一次,即针对某种社会问题,提出两种对立观点,最后要求作者阐述自己的观点。
这类题型最早是从美国的托福作文题型借鉴而来,后来被四、六级考试广泛借鉴。
但是自2005年6月份之后,由于其自身的古老性和模板化,该题型曾一度让位于其他题型,而今它再次活跃于四级作文考试的舞台。
真题评析
2008年6月份四级作文的标题和提纲如下:
RecreationalActivities
1.娱乐活动多种多样
2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益,也可能有危害性
3.作为大学生我的看法
从结构上看,此次四级考试作文提纲还是那种既经典又保守的“三段式”:
第一段是一个非常典型的现象引入段,阐述背景,交代需要分析的一种现象;第二段列举两种对立观点,进行正反对比论证;第三段是传统的“我的看法”段,即表明作者自己的观点和态度。
就此次作文题目而言,我们可以在第一段中大致地介绍一下如今的信息社会。
第一句可以用一个标准的现象引入句,第二句开始说明如今娱乐活动的多种多样。
在文章第二段,先阐释正面的观点,列举娱乐活动带来的好处。
这其中考生们要注意自己的立场,同时要注意各个理由之间的逻辑关系,适当地运用表示层次关系的词语。
正面观点阐述完毕后,对娱乐活动可能带来的危害性,可以用一两句话略写,同时附以一两条理由作为理论支持。
最后,在结尾段中,用简单明了的语言表明作者的态度即可。
对于正反对比论证结构的作文,笔者建议写的时候把握好以下三个要点(以本次四级考试作文题目为例):
第一,在作为引言的第一段中,我们一般要通过各种方法为第二段的主体讨论作铺垫。
这些方法主要包括:
背景介绍法、大意总结法、引用名言法、场景描写法、设问法等。
其中最通用也最好用的方法就是背景介绍法。
切忌在文章一开始就进行深入分析,要先简单地引入介绍,然后循序渐进地转入分析。
简言之,首句引出话题,如:
娱乐活动在社会上引起了热烈讨论(Theissueofrecreationalactivitieshastriggeredaheateddiscussioninthesociety);第二句具体说明现状,如:
越来越多的人热衷于参加娱乐活动(Increasingnumbersofpeoplearefondoftakingpartinvariousrecreationalactivities)。
常见问题:
用词匮乏。
如:
moreandmore,join等。
基本对策:
改词换词。
如:
anincreasingnumberof,takepartin等。
第二,在第二段进行正反两方面论述的时候,考生要注意保持客观的态度,把两方面的观点表达清楚。
论述的侧重点可以落在多数群体的观点上。
在展开论证的时候,提倡具体形象地论证说明,反对笼统抽象地论述观点,所以可以通过说原因或举例子的方式使文章显得生动。
常见问题:
结构不清,缺乏层次感。
基本对策:
利用“总—分”结构,分如下三个层次进行论证。
层次1:
将中文提纲句“娱乐活动可能使人们受益,也可能有危害性”翻译成英文放在第二段段首作为总起句,做到开门见山:
Noonecouldfailtonoticeboththefavorableandunfavorableinfluencethatrecreationalactivitiesbringtopeople.
层次2:
接下来说明“娱乐活动的益处”,然后用一到两条理由去支持该观点:
Recreationalactivitiesaregoodtopeople'shealth,bothphysicallyandmentally.这其中考生要注意自己所站的立场,以及各理由之间的逻辑关系,在必要的地方添加表示层次关系的连接词。
层次3:
接着考生要大胆地推翻前面所述的一些人的观点,用转折性的词语引出另一些人的观点,即“娱乐活动的危害性”。
在这个层次中我们同样遵循前文的标准,给出一到两条理由作为理论支持,如:
Spendingtoomuchtimeonrecreationalactivitieswillseriouslyaffectpeople'snormallives,especiallyworkandstudy.
第三,第三段要求考生表明个人看法,这里考生可以围绕“取其精华,去其糟粕”的论点,表明针对多样的娱乐活动,可以利用其好处,对不好的地方避而远之:
Wemightaswelllearnhowtoavoidsomenegativeeffectsofrecreationalactivities,whenmakingthemostofthem.
常见问题:
用语过于直白或极端。
如:
Wemust...
基本对策:
要站在中庸的立场上,客观地评价。
如:
Frommyperspective,weshouldpaymoreattentiontotheadvantagesofvariousrecreationalactivities.
“Romewasnotbuiltinaday.”要写出好的英语作文不是一朝一夕能够做到的,需要循序渐进和长期的训练。
相信只要各位考生扎实训练基本功,必能在四级写作考试中取得好成绩。
最后,附上四级写作范文一篇,供大家参考。
范文
RecreationalActivities
Itisastrikingfactthattheissueofrecreationalactivitieshastriggeredaheateddiscussion.Intheeraofinformationandtechnology,increasingnumbersofpeoplearefondoftakingpartinvariousrecreationalactivities(rangingfromwatchingTV,playingcardstosurfingtheInternetandsoon).
Yet,noonecouldfailtonoticeboththefavorableandunfavorableinfluencethatrecreationalactivitiesbringtopeople,becauseevenAchilleshashisweakness.Ontheonehand,recreationalactivitiesaregoodtopeople'sh