新高考全国1卷读后续写解题思路详析.docx

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新高考全国1卷读后续写解题思路详析

新高考全国1卷读后续写解题思路详析

读后续写【2020届山东省淄博市高三下学期一模】

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

TherewasarichcouplewhowasthrowingabigNewYearpartyattheirhouse.Sotheywentshoppingatthemarketwhereeverythingwasofhighcostandfixedprice.Theywantedtomaintaintheirlevelofstandardsotheydidn’tmindpayingforit.Afterpurchasingalltheyneeded,theycalledaportertocarryeverythinganddropitattheirhome.Theporterwhocamewasofanoldage,andlookedveryunhealthy,andhisclothesweretorn,andhelookedasifhewasn’tevenabletomeethisdailyneeds.

Theyaskedtheporteraboutthechargesfordeliveringtheirgoodstotheirhome.Theoldporterquotedjust$20,wellbelowthemarketprice.Yet,thecouplearguedandbargainedwiththeporterandfinallysettledfor$15.Theporterwasstrugglingtomakeevenonetime’smealsoheneededanythinghecouldearn.

Thecouplewasveryhappythinkinghowwelltheybargainedwiththepoorporterandpaidhim$15inadvanceandleftaftergivingtheportertheiraddressfordelivery.Theyreachedtheirhomeandonehourpassed,andtwohourspassed,buttheporterstilldidn’tdelivertheirstuff.

Thewifestartedtogetangryatherhusband,“Ialwaystellyounottotrustsuchperson,butyouneverlistentome.Iamsureinsteadofdeliveringthegoodstoourhome,hemusthavedisappearedwitheverything.Wemustimmediatelygobacktothemarkettoinquireandthentothepolicestationtofilethecomplaintagainsthim.”

Theybothlefttowardsthemarket.Ontheirwaynearthemarket,theysawanotherporter.Theystoppedhimtoinquireabouttheoldporterandnoticedthathewascarryingtheirgoodsinhiscart!

Theangrywifeaskedhim,“Whereisthatoldthief?

Thisisourgoodsandhewassupposedtodeliverthem.Itseemsyoupoorthievesarestealingourgoodsandgoingtosellthem.”

Paragraph1:

Whentheporterheardtheangrywifeasking.

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Paragraph2:

Uponhearingthis,thehusbandhadtearsinhiseyes,

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【答案】Paragraph1:

Whentheporterheardtheangrywifeasking,heturnedback.Theporterreplied,“Madam,pleasecalmdown.I’mnotathief.Thatpooroldmanwassicksincelastmonth.Hecouldn’tearnenoughtoevenhaveasinglemealoftheday.Therefore,hefelldownandhandedme$15,saying,‘Ihavetakenanadvanceforthisdelivery,andyoudeliverthegoodstothecouple’shome.’Madam,hewaspoorandhungry,buthewasanhonestman.Iwasjustonthewaytocompletingtheoldman’slastdeliverytoyourhome.”

Paragraph2:

Uponhearingthis,thehusbandhadtearsinhiseyes,andthewifefeltsoashamedthatshehadnocouragetolookherhusbandintheeyes.Suddenlysherushedtothemarket.Halfanhourlater,thewifecamebackwithsomefoodinherhand.Shepassedthefoodontotheporter,andsaidsorrytotheporter,sayingthatsheshouldn’tsuspectthem,andtookthemasthieves.Atlast,theportertookthegoodstotheirhouse,andtherichcouplechangedtheirattitudetothemanliketheporter.

【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。

通过阅读所给文章可知，一对富人夫妇为了准备新年聚会去市场不惜高价买了许多物品，然后雇佣了一个搬运工把这些物品运回家。

搬运工是一个年老体弱生活拮据的人，他要价$20低于市场价，而富人夫妇讨价还价后只给$15。

富人夫妇高兴地回家等着老人把物品送来，却迟迟不见老人的身影。

妻子认为上了老人的当，一定老人把他们的物品卖掉了。

回去找老人时却发现他们的物品在另外一个搬运工的车上。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：

当搬运工听到生气的妻子问题时……，所以应该写他讲述的实情，老人病了又吃不上饭，这次摔倒了，他把$15给了这个搬运工，请求他把物品送到富人家。

第二段开头是：

丈夫听了，眼里含着泪水，……。

下文应该写富人夫妇被老人感动，行动和态度都发生了改变。

最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。

按要求完成写作任务。

本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。

如：

calmdown,takenanadvance,Uponhearing,feltashamed,changedtheirattitude等高级词汇；Therefore,hefelldownandhandedme$15,saying,‘Ihavetakenanadvanceforthisdelivery,andyoudeliverthegoodstothecouple’shome.’和Shepassedthefoodontotheporter,andsaidsorrytotheporter,sayingthatsheshouldn’tsuspectthem,andtookthemasthieves.运用了非谓语动词；thewifefeltsoashamedthatshehadnocouragetolookherhusbandintheeyes.运用了so……that句型。

等高级句式。

读后续写【2020届山东省济南市山东师范大学附属中学高三3月份在线检测】

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

Themostdeliciousmemoriesseemtohappenduringtheholidays.Andlikeasquirrelpreparingforwinter,Iputthemawaytoenjoyslowlyduringthelongwintermonths.Sometimes,Ienjoythemforyears.

Amongthemaresweetestrecollections:

mylittlegirlsatthechurchplaya